Deblina's OS gallery UPDATED PAGE 12..!!!

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Hello ppl -this is me-Deblina-or Debs..............as u all know me........!!!🤗🤗


I have decided to open my own OS gallery....of course on my favorites-Mayur and ArTi....



I will be updating it from time to time though...as soon as some ideas come to me........but then-how good or bad it will b-woh padjke batanaa.....😆 and well-out of excitement i wrote one OS today itself.it was long pending though-i had decided to write it for Hina(Sunshine girl)'s birthday.........😃


The page numbers of the OS are-.......


1.-Mayur-gifts of love(Page 1)

2.ArTi Os-waiting for the miracle...(Page 7)

3.Mayur OS-Whatever happens-i will always b there for you-(Page 12)


So friends-do read and comment.BTW-i m NOT at all a good writer,so read at ur own risk.ok?😃well-i guess enuf of my silly PJs...now-reading time it is....

anyways-HAPPY BIRTHDAY Hinu...once again..............🤗


Mayur OS-Gifts of love....!!!


It was a usual busy Monday morning at the Sharmas with the whole house buzzing wid activity n guess why-Mrs.sharma was downstairs'doing what??

Watching DDLJ for d nth time!!!! Uff..the aalo ka parantha is awesome Ramu kaka'.,aapne banaya naa'??..Shah rukh. .hayee 'kya smile hai BY GOD!!'!!.M. .A. .Y. .N. .K..!!!! niche aao naa'naashtha taiyaar hai'.and d Morena express was on'

And of course , everybody loved it. be it Ramu kaka,their neighbor Mrs.D'costa or even their paani puri wale bhaiya(as Nupur called him) outside their house. .and well, d person who admired it the most was yet to arrive at the scene.

Kya hai Nupur..???achaa..tumne'"his voice trailed off'

Mayank halted at his steps to admire the lady sitting in front of him .Evrytime he saw her,her beauty caught him by surprise. she had retained it, no second thoughts on that.The bubbly, vivacious, almost boisterous college girl he had met almost 5 years back had become a complete woman-intelligent, warm n just d best.
Dunno where did she inherited that beauty from-it was unsurpassed!!! The beautiful black eyes, framed with long black heavy eyelashes .Her skin was soft ,her hair a shiny black n long. Well, he could admire them better now, coz she left them open. In that turquoise blue chiffon sari-she looked every inch a queen-his queen. Mrs.Nupur Mayank Sharma.!!
" Mayank, come naa'the train scene it is.."

"Nupur. did u see my lap'..L A P T O P!!..u r watching dat drab ,old movie on my laptop'I had some of my files in it Nupur!!"I was searching for it upstairs n here it is'

"so what??!!!!Mil gaya naa. .breakfast is ready. come here.

"nupur,we need 2 leave for college.

"ya,yaa..in another..OMG'5 minutes..!!!mera make up thik nahi lag raha ..tum bhi naa Mayank..mujhe tym yaad nahi dila sakte thee kyaa'!!!ab late ho gaye toh..mujhe aur bhi 15 minutes chahiye..!!

"not 15minutes..!!5minutes for make up..got it.??and here u go". .He took away his laptop n disconnected the plug n went off to keep it safe, safe from the prying eyes of his dear wife, unless like yesterday ,she would take the laptop to college to watch the movie !!!That was Nupur.!! Unbelievable u see.'!!

"last scene tha mayank..tum bhi naa'"

"raat ko dekhnaa. .not now. .itz college tym for god's sake..!"

Muttering curses for her husband, Nupur went up to their car to sit. Excel calling them.

"where did u keep the laptop??,raat ko pakka I will see it ok'tumne breakfast khatam kiya naa"???.....d questions rained on Mayank soon after they started driving towards college with Mayank answering some of them at long intervals as compared to his wife's continuous chatter'not that he disapproved of it. it was his daily dose after all'!! This was a regular morning for Mr. n Mrs .sharma u see.

"I'll see you at lunch time at the coffee shop outside ok?? and now. .plzz don't go around giving classes on loveology like yesterday to ur 2 students .i can't stand them at all n I can't stand u with those nautanki girls.
"oh. .Mr.sadu express,don't worry-my classes are on alternative days .not everyday." .she winked at him and was off'


She won't change ..he smiled to himself ..and he loved her for nevr changing..!!


Later that after noon at the college canteen..

M..A..YA..N..K'the voice ranged across the whole canteen, but everybody knew it.it had 2 b professor Nupur Sharma only.

"Nupur,u startled the students here..!

"OK,does it matters kyaa??? Nd yes,I m going to sleep in my master bedroom today, samjhe.. ??i mean ,for 2 two days u kept my favorite room locked !!..may I ask why ??

"Ok, don't worry. sleep in ur room today.no probs.."

"ya..thank u for it."

"Ok..Nupur,I will b a bit late today ok..u take the car n go back home..mujhe thoda kaam hai.."

"Kaha jaoge??"kiske ghar??"

"kisike ghar nahi baba..i need 2 buy books for some students and some for my own purpose too"

"ok..ok..mayank sharma n books..choli-damaan ka sath. .BY god"!! thik hai..i will take the car.."


Nupur parked the car at their garage.Dunno when wud b Mayank back??? books my husband.!!!

Smiling to herself,she entered the house .uff. .deathly tired she was today. 5 lectures non-stop n on top of that, shopping done as always. .Mayank wud b well...no he won't b angry ..he never said her anything. "Good boy.".hahaa' .laughing to herself ,she entered her room .Thank god her bedroom was open. God knows what Mayank had been doing in it.!! .room locked !! for whole two days'.just imagine..!!

She fumbled for the switch board and switched on the lights. It took time for her eyes to get adjusted to the lights n the room was'. '.Beautifully decorated!!!

On the wall near the huge master bed,was a huge photo frame having their wedding picture. the big one. when did he get that done???!! On the opposite wall, another of her picture, single. .a large one..and the adjacent wall, another ..thankfully not so huge.. again of hers.

"Surprise!! Liked it"????!!!!!

Nupur turned around.it was Mayank standing behind her, beaming at her..the most handsome guy she had ever seen.!! She knew it though, but now it looked so obvious. she didn't knew why'

She ran into his arms.

"Nupur"..'' it was a caress. Mayank was saying something, but it didn't matter 2 Nupur now' she was in his arms and it was a blessed feeling of peace..!!

"Mayank, u did this for me??why, when did u do this??why ddin't u tell me???OMG..itz beautiful'..!!!"

"One at a time Mrs.Sharma."Mayank laughed.. "yes,I did this for u. why?coz I love u n thought 2 tell it 2 u in a different way this time.

"Whtzz wid all these pictures haa..???? and . .wait.!!!. baby's pictures.!!! Mayank..??? surely. ...u'. do u'.??"Nupur cudn't go on. she was blushing and hard'

"u guessed it right Nupur'.u too want this naa'.and I have heard that if u look at cute baby's photos,then ur child also turns out to b cute n since I want my child 2 b a combo of their mother's beauty n this cuteness. .hence,ur pics n all these..khush??

"Ok,if that's d case,then I don't think we need all these pictures'!!"

"And why do u think so"Mayank asked looking confused.

"Kuynki,if I look at only that picture ,I know Li'l Pranav will grow up to b very cute n good-looking too.!!!" Nupur teasingly replied pointing towards Mayank's photo.

"what do u mean by that" !!!??i look like a child or what?"!!

"Well ,I don't know bout that, but I want that if we have a son, then I want it 2 b just like u!!"

"ok,then,there will b a huge problem u know.

"What"???

"girls will b defo after Pranav,but Pranav wud b crazy for his Mom naa,coz after all,there's no one more beautiful than his mom naa"Mayank replied with his cutest smile ever, something which was 2 die for..!!and Nupur loved it!!!

"I love u Mayank"

"Uff..i had been waiting to listen to these words for nearly'wait..lemme..count'for the past 10 minutes."

He took her in his arms. "Did I ever tell u I m mad bout u???"

She looked up at him and smiled "Tell me again!!"

"I m mad about you Nupur."

"BTW-Mr.Mad, lemme tell u something ,I got 2 more students for my love logy classes today..classes start from tomorrow.. evryday.. no more alternate days..!!ok. .wanna attend them kyaa???!!!

They both laughed..

They held each other close and they knew it was their world'.Mr. n Mrs.Sharma'n well,yaa, not to forget !!,..Li'l Pranav joining soon!!!😍




So-thats it friends..do comment if u like it n don't u all dare to press d like button..........whether u like it or not.........😎🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res 😡

finally unres it 😛

OMG DEBZ 😲
IT was soooooooo beautiful.I so wat to see this in MJHT.
I luved the way Nupur behaved.U wrote it beautifully...so Nupurish...
and Mayank was Mayank.Silent,loving husband.Surprised her and made her speachless 😳
i so wanna see this in the show 😍

was awesome Debz 👏
Edited by afshanafreen - 15 years ago
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res..
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debz...OMG..u are such an awesome writer ...congo jaana...🤗🤗🤗🤗
loved loved loved the part......waiting for more and more OS....i also demand ArTi OS from ya....😳
nupur watching DDLJ ...subah subah...😆 i know she is nupur!!! 😳 missing her .....😭
girls will b defo after Pranav,but Pranav wud b crazy for his Mom naa,coz after all,there's no one more beautiful than his mom naa😳😳(i agree)"Mayank replied with his cutest smile ever, something which was 2 die for..!!and Nupur loved it!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 u made me go crazy over him more and more with this line....
thanks alot for awesome part jaanu ...waiting for ur next OS...😃
Edited by arti4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear congratulations for own os gallery 🥳 and nice os loved it and thanks for pm
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DEBO!!!

this was such a MAYURISH OS...I loved it! I coould literally picture every expression and scene...
this was very cutee and simple...
Loved it😳
Edited by ArtiMayur.Meeno - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kya kahoon Debz. WONDERFUL🤗
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debo this is for u dear and a big for ur os its awesome i loved the laptop wala part nupur makeup and last but not least a surprise for u




Edited by hemaaiyer - 15 years ago
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OMG tjhe abi b yaad tha.........abi to mujhe b bhool gaya tha.......🤣...........thnx soooooooooooo muccccccccchhhh meri jan..........abi keliye RES baad mai parh k comment karti hun.........😉😉😉

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Debzzzzzzzzz............🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗..........thz was xactly wat i wanted to c in S2.......but that never happened..........😭.........but u made up 4 dat..........it was super beautiful nd amazing.......i love my nautanki nupur nd sadu mayank........😍😍...............awsm OS jan........marvellous work.............once again........thank you..........🤗🤗😳
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Edited by Sunshine Girl - 15 years ago
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congrats for ur os gallery....aww the os was so sweet..wanna ee something like this in mjht too.......
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wowowowo debz first fo all congo on ur first OS gallery and wat a start .......amazing loved the OS but u have to promise me that u will update it regularly ok😊 and thx alot for the pm love u for that

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