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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome! Really very cute! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
just read the remaining parts!!!....
superb!...
really love maneet scenes!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey this one is very cute the song seqence is wow pls update soon want to see there Romance
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi... read ur ff...
awesome.. just loved all the parts...
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Posted: 15 years ago

hiiiiiiiiiii

only maan could have handled geet's blabber.....
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sach much paagal kar degi kisiko..........
loved geet's blabber...............
too cute
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Part 23 - The Last Part of the Party Sequence..........

Maan all the while he is driving is looking at geet who is sleeping soundly.......he looks at geet and talks to himself........

Maan: geet........tum na jane kahan se aayi aur meri zindagi badal kar rakhdi.......sach bataun toh duniya bhar me itni ladkiyon se mila hoon me par tumhari jaisi kabhi bhi nahin.......mujhe lagta tha sirf mere life me problems he par nahin tumhare life me bhi kafi problems he par phir bhi tum zindagi jeena janti ho geet........jab se tum mere zindagi me aayi ho tabse mere har ek din kuch naya kiya....aaj bhi shayad aisa kuch hua jo kahi na kahi mujhe achcha laga........

Maan while driving looks at geet.......mahii playing...........d moonlight falls on geet's face.......maan notices dat and says..........

Maan: geet......tumpar chand ki parchai parrahi he...........par aaj jab maine tumhe pehli baar sari me dekha toh abhi aisa lagraha he ki tumne aaj chand se bhi tez roshni kardi.......ki tumme aur chand me koi farq nazar nahin aaya mujhe..........

Thruout d journey maaa keeps on looking at geet and makes sure dat she is comfortable...maan reaches geet's home wid geet.........he tries to wake up geet.....maan tries to tap her shoulder and wake her up.............seeing her asleep he dsnt like to but he needs to as its too late...he decides to gve a try......

Maan: geet...utho...ghar aagaya...geet........

Geet dsnt wake up...seeing her nt responding maan is in a fix as to wake her up or not........he decides to try again........

Maan: geet...geet.........utho....tumhara ghar aagaya.........

Maan again gets lost in geet sleeping like an innocent kid.he gets mesmerised by geet's beauty at the first place and then realises how sweet she looks and hw pure hearted she is.........maan realises dat he needs to wake up geet somehow in order to make her reach home....

Maan is abt to call up geet but by the tym he goes to wake geet up ...geet opens her eyes and wakes up on her own....she is still in slight sleep....................she wakes up and says.......

Geet: sir.....hum kahan he sir??...

Maan: haan...kahan he....

Geet: arey woh toh main aapse poochrahi hoon na....

Maan: lagta hai abhi tak utri nahin he.......abhi tak chadi hui he......geet....hum obviously paris me toh he nahin.........hum tumhare ghar pohochgaye he aur hum tumhare ghar ke bahar khade he abhi.......

Geet: sir.......khade kahan he..hum toh baithe hue he na woh bhi gari me......

Maan: theek he geet ji..hum gari me aapke ghar ke bahar baithe he........agar aapki ijazat ho toh gari ke bahar se nikalke ghar ke andar jaogi.........

Geet: haan....lekin main akeli...aap kyun aayenge........aapka ghar thodei na he.........aap jab bhhi mere saath hote he tab mere saath koi na koi problem hota hai......

Maan: arey wah!...problem ko bhi problem hota hai............???

Geet: jii??..

Maan: kuch nahin...ab chalo.......

Maan gets down of the car and rushes to tke geet out of the car........he opens geet's door.......

Maan: aao geet.chalo aao........

Geet: kyun...main aapke saath kyun aaun?........kya main khud gari se bahar nahin aasakti.....main punjabi kudi hoon...mujh me bara dum he haan..........mujhe aapke madat ki koi zaroorat nahin he.samjhe aap?

Maan: theek he.......toh khud niklo.........

Geet cums out of the car.......she starts walking...fumbles a lil while walking wen maan offers his help..............

Maan: geet sambhalke........dhyan se.......

Geet: arey aapko seedhi hindi samajh me nahin aati he kya?.......maine kaha na main khud chal sakti hoon........khud........mujhe nahin chahiye aapka sahara...

Maan: achcha......??....toh theek he........

Sayin dis maan stands and rests on his car bonnet and watches geet walking..seeing geet strugglin to walk maan smiles and says.....

Maan: ms.geet bakshi ko sirf bari bari baatein karna aata hai ...aur asli me........

Geet is walking on her own......wearing big stilletoes....obviously unable to walk.......she is abt to tripple and fall into a ditch wen maan notices dat she might fall into the ditch and hurt herself.....Maan sees dat and shouts.........

Maan: GEET.........!!!

Maan becomes extremely worried and rushes to save geet..........Maan catches her by her hand and shoulders and in extremely worried eyes..........says.......

Maan: sambhalke geet......sambhalke........abhi girjaati tum........

Geet looks into maan's worried eyes...she inspite of being drunk sees extreme worry and care for her.....she smiles at dis gesture of maan...maan too looks at geet closely.......they both have a close eyelock(mahii plays).........in drunken voice she says.........very sweetly........

Geet: sir aapko meri kitni fiqar he na???????...........

Maan: uppp...geet........tum aise aise situation me parti ho ki karna parta hai.ab mera haath pakdo aur chalo............

while geet starts to walk maan notices dat geet has actually got hurt by a minor sprain in her leg.......she is haing trouble in walking........maan left with no option, lifts up geet and starts walking till her door step..........while they are walking maan feels sumthng strong and special towards geet and looks deep into her eyes .....geet too for the first time...though being drunk, looks at maan slightly romantically...........(mahii defintely plays).........

While walking they reach geet's doorstep..they are so lost into each odr that they dnt realise wen they reached.......maan realises they have reached....he puts geet down..geet is still looking at maan for sum tym..........maan says.......

Maan: geet...ghar agaya.........bell bajao aur darwaza khulvao..........

Geet cums bk to reality...

Geet: hmmmmmm......

Geet goes to ring the bell wen she starts laughing......loudly.......Maan sees dis and finds dis extremely weird.......

Maan: hey Bhagwan...yeh ladki ab pagalpan ke sare levels cross karchuki he.....aise pagalo ke jaise kyun hasrahi he..........

Geet......geet...aise pagalo ke jaise kyun hasrahi ho tum??

Geet: arey main toh bhul hi gayi ki yeh darwaza nahin khulega....

Maan: aur yeh kyun nahin khulega madam??........kya yeh darwaza tumhare khulja sim sim kehne se khulta hai... ??...bell bajao toh koi kholega na..........
Geet: arey nahin sir aisa nahin he sir.....yeh darwaza andar se nahin khul paega.........
Maan: kyun??...kyun nahin khulsakta?
Geet: kyunki ghar me koi he hi nahin............toh kaise khulega......
Maan: kya??...ghar me koi nahin he.........??...tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya geet?
Geet: isme batane wali kaunsi baat he sir........kya aapko mere ghar chori karni thi?
Maan: kya?...geet yeh tum kya kehrahi ho?
Geet: arey aap sawaal hi aise karte he ki aisi baatein kehni parti he!
Maan: geet woh sab chodo aur yeh batao ki ab tum ghar ke andar kaise jaogi..........
Geet: sir mere paas ek bohot hi achcha idea he........
Maan: kya?
Geet: sir mere ghar ke peeche ek peeche ka raasta he jisse hum andar ja sakte he..........
Maan: oh wow...gud.........toh kahan he yeh peeche ka darwaza?
Geet: arey koi darwaza nahin he peeche ke raaste me........
Maan: par abhi toh tumne kaha ki peeche ke raate se hum jaa sakte he.......toh agar darwaza nahin he toh hum andar kaise jayenge.........
Geet: pipe pe chadke.........
Maan: wat?...pipe pe chadke..............geet hum insaan he bandar nahin he jo jaldi se upar chadjayenge........
Geet: par mujhe toh lagta tha ki aap he.............
Maan: kya?
Geet: bandar............hahahaha!!!!!!
Maan: geet..just shut up..........hum pipe pe kaise.........??...ek minute ek minute...........mujhe tum ek baat batao tum pipe se chadke ghar ke andar jaati ho............
Geet: haan sir...hamesha nahin....jab kabhi kabhi main bohot late hojati hoon yah phir dm ko bina bataye kahin chali jaati hoon toh main mere banaye hue peeche ke raaste se yani pipe se chadke andar jaati hoon.......
Maan: geet...tum kya ek baat janti ho?
Geet: kya sir?
Maan: ki tum bilkul pagal ho.............
Geet: haan sir janti hoon........lekin aapse thoda kum............sir aapko pata hai main pipe se chadke kyun jaati hoon?
Maan: kyun?
Geet: kyunki sir pipe chadne me mujhe bara mazaa aata hai........bohot filmy he sir.........bohot hi romantic lagta he mujhe.jab hero heroine se pehli baar milne jaata hai na toh woh pipe se hi chadke jaata hai.........in short pipe do dilo ko milane ka ek zariya he........
Maan: uff ho geet...mujhe tumhari romeo -juliet wali kahani nahin sunni.....ab yeh batao hum andar kaise jayenge......kya tumhe pata nahin tha ki ghar me koi nahin hoga.......
Geet: pata tha...........
Maan: toh phir tumhare paas ghar ki chabi nahin he........??
Geet: haan dm ne toh di thi....aur woh mere purse me he.....
Maan: kyaaa??...tumhare paas chabi pehle se thi andar jaane ki toh itna tym kyun waste kiya.........aur bewaja bahar rehkar pipe se chadne ke ghatiya idea deti rahi tum......grrrr......geet...........tum sach me......ufff...........
Geet: arey aapne hi toh poocha ki andar jaane ka koi aur raasta he yah nahin toh maine batadiya......mujhe kya pata tha ki aap chabi ke liye poochrahe he?.haan bataiyye..jawab dijiye.........
Maan: geet...ab tum chup raho......
Maan takes geet's purse and tkes out d house keys frm dere....maan opens d door.while geet stares at maan and smiles in a funny manner...........geet still cant stand properly.......maan sees dat and picks up geet again....they enter the house...maan looks at geet again and geet too looks at him ...(mahii again in d bg)..........maan cums to geet's living room carrying her and realises dat he dsnt know her room............he asks..........
Maan: geet tumhara room kahan he?
Geet point out her room in d straight direction......maan takes her straight to her room......opens d door........swithces on d light.............maan all dis while is just staring at geet......once d light is on maan looks at geet's room for the frst tym..........no less than a princess's room wi deverythng pink all arnd..........filled wid soft toys........a room wid funky and extraordinary decorations all arnd her room..........geet's room is fullof innocence and vibrance......seeing dis maan smiles..........he says in his mind...
Maan: yeh geet ka hi kamra hosakta hai........(smiles)
Maan who is carrying geet in his arms puts down geet on his bed......he sees dat geet has already gne to sleep...........she has closed her eys and is looking absolutely beautiful...........maan adores her innocence and her beauty..........maan sees geet closely............geet's hair is disturbing her sleep............as lil bit wind is blowing..maan slowly wid his hands removes d hair frm geet's face.......smiles and says........
Maan: main aaj ka din kabhi nahin bhulunga geet.........bye geet.......gud nyt..........
Saying dis maan is abt to leave wen geet suddenly catches maan's hand frm d bk.............maan stops.....geet says......
Geet: rukjaiyye na please..mat jaiyye mujhe chodke..............
Dese words echoe into maan's ears ........as if d tym has stopped dere........he turns bk to his surprise and says......
Maan: geet.........
Geet pulls maan's hand and makes him sit on d bed.......gets up frm her sleep...sits up........and says.......
Geet: sir...please aap mujhe chodke mat jaiyye na please........
Maan: par geet mujhe ghar jaana hai........main kaise yahan pe.........
Geet: main kuch nahi janti...aap yahan mere saath rahoge bas........please sir mujhe akele chodke mat jaiyye mujhe dar lagta hai sir...........
Maan: par geet darne ki koi baat.........
Geet: main kuch nahin janti aap mujhe chodke nahin jayenge............main akele pooori raat....sir mjhe bohot darr lagta hai.........andhere se.........sir please......
Maan: par geet main yahan...........
Geet: sir kya kharabi he isme?........please sir........please.......ab mujhe neend aarahi he sir.gud nyt bye.....sweet dreams sir............
Maan: uppp...par geet...geet.......main yahan..kaise ...raat bhar..............
Maan decides to stay dere for the night.......he goes beside geet and tries to sleep on geet's bed's handle............wen he is just abt to sleep geet catches maan's hand and puts it under her head...gves a slight smile and goes off to sleep....maan seeing geet sleep soundly smiles (mahii plays......slowly)......he sees her and says.........
Maan: gud nyt geet......sweet dreams.......!..(smiles again slightly).........
Saying dis maan rests his head on geet's bed handle ...jus lil above geet's head....while he is fast asleep maan's head slips and falls right on geet's head....his head now rests over geet's head.........they both go off too sleep................!
Edited by swthrtdevisha - 15 years ago
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That was such a cutely romantic update! Lolz at Geet's filmy fundas and her bak-bak.....but Maan was enjoying it all......and he was adoring Geet's innocence.....awww....he is so caring......they slept like that only.......subah hogi toh Maan toh gaya kaam se......hope bechare ko explain karne ka chance mile......though with Geet around I doubt that.....lolz.....do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW WHAT A ROMANTIC UPDATE......LOVED IT....I LIKED THE INNOCENCE OF GEET...ANYWAYS I HOPE SHE DOESN'T SHOUT TOMORROW AT MAAN...

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too good,awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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