MAYUR OS!.....New OS Pg 6 updated 26/7/10!! - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ak12

Ah! Firstly thank you so much for the Pm!

And secondly and most importantly..that was an amazing piece of writing!

loved every bit of it! The way you wrote it gave it a wonderful meaning altogether!

Write more hun! You are wonderful!

Best wishes,
Akansha!



hey akansha,

thnx a lot dear...fr reading my os
and liking it too :)

yeah if a concept strikes me...i defo write it !!
and pm u fr sure...

tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

fatima it was amazing OS hun

</div>loved it 2 core it was meaningful OS
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thnx 4 d pm



hey thnx samira

fr reading ths one too...!!..
its a compliment u found it meaningful !!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Awesum OS</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Loved it</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Nups really loved Mayu a lot n same goes wit Mayu</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Liked the way he didnt hide anythg frm her n Nups decision was fab</font>



thnx afsha

fr liking the os !!
yeah u must actually nevr hide thngs...complicates matters further...
be it a story or real life....ain't i ryt ??

tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayurg2010

hey fatima that was marvellous
you told that this is your first os right?
and first this much perfection???
i haven't seen such os till now
the confession from bottom of your heart.............
that was really wonderful
and thanks a ton for ur pm and do more and more os on mayur and do not forget to pm me
once again that was an awesome shot.



thnx a lot !!
yeah it is my first os !!
i personally dunno whtr it's perfect or not...cz i still feel
there a lot of scope fr improvment in my writing..!!...
it's betr i remain grounded n nt fly in air... 😉

but seriously thnx fr loving it !
d os itself was frm d bottom of my heart...
i imagined myself in their place...
and wrote nly tht wat i wud hv dne !!

well if i write more i'll defo pm u !!

tc
fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi fatima....superb os

very nicely written

loved it

thanks for the pm dear

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!! Its so sweet... The emotions have been portrayed beautifully!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the pm!!

It was awesome..

Really I loved it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
amazin' !!
u hammer the nail everytym u update !!
-Ruchi-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

res😳

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I finally read it fatima 🤗
it was really really touching....

u plotted the whole sequence so aptly.
and nupur's confusion so visible and feel-able 😊
but it was quite indigestible that mayank had a relationship 😔
still i loved everything about it

keep writting more os dear,.... and i m not talking abt mayur 😳 anything :)

love ya 🤗

deepika



thnx a ton deepika
fr reading n commenting too 😳

hmm....yeah i tried my best to show nupur's confusion...

and hey mayank din have a relationship thy were jz best frnds....
but wat u say....drunk and a moment of passion... unknowingly...
tht's wat happened !! 😳

inshallah i'll rite more.....if i get tym...first i've to complete ALM
usko adhura rakhe...i went on to write ths os..

ek baat bato....ths os was originally writtn fr sajan...zeejay k liye 😊
then i thot....y nt post it n mayur version too....fr my dear mayur fans... 😉

tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Wow! That was so nicely written! I really liked it! :)

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