MAYUR OS!.....New OS Pg 6 updated 26/7/10!!

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

hey Fatimaa amazing OS na !!!

I really really enjoyed reading it !!!
just loved it to the core!!
so Nupur waiting for Mayank

n then he comezz with a 2 yr old baby

n then he tellzz her about Dia

n then Nupur left

she need something alone

then later she realize it waz wrong so she came back to Mayank !!!
awwww I really loved it !!!
keep writing loadzz more na !!!
n congratzzz on ur first OS sis !!!
-Lina-

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Awwwwwwwww Fatimaaaaaaaa
It was so sweet so sweet so sweetttttttttttttt

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
simplyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee

i loved nups decision
she has such a sweet heart.
Hats off to her.

Though i didnt like myanks past but still i loved this OS

Brilliant job dear
keep it up
thanx 4 ur pm
ab tou tum gussa nehi ho na

do write more

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Edited my post on pg 1.........

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

hey fatima that was wonderful man! Thanks for sharing.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Fatima.. Beautifully written dear.. do write more....

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abb01

@abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

hi fatima,

thanks to you for introducing a wonderful writter to us

it was touching story

where mayan didn't know the truth of his past but accepted it

and dia dudn.t come in middle

Nupur was right her place as it is tough for anyone to accept it

but end was too beautifully plotted

do write more soon

take care

aruna

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Tehmina

@ArtiMayur.Meeno

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Amaizng OS Fatima...u really do write very well...
continue writing..
Love,
Meeno

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

awesome n amazing os!!!
loved it...
do write more
thanks 4 the pm

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Sindhu92

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*Edited*
Hey Fatima! 🤗
I'm so sorry for the delay. I was a little busy with other things.
It was awesome. I could actually imagine the whole scene. The way you described it was too good.
You had written it so beautifully that by the end of the OS I had tears in my eyes.
The inner meaning to it was very nice.
I love the last lines. They are true in every sense.
Do write more and thanks for the PM.😊
Sindhu!

hey sindhu,

thnx a lot fr ur wonderful comment !!
i'm truly touched by it ..
awwe i can't believe u were in tears...i mean u cld actually feel the emotions !! 😊
wow really wow !!
no words !!

tc
fatima