Like a River - Mayur FF part 4 - page 13

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PureBliss

@PureBliss

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

amazing update. Needless to say that u describe Arjun's feelings so well here. Makes me really wonder if u are Arjun in disguise 🤣 Okay jokes apart, I can't wait for the next update..LOL They will finally meet at shooting.

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

You are Arjun aren't you? Stop fooling us! We are your real fans and we know it all! 😎

Awesome update JUN!

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Hey plz add me to ur pm list........nd plz do update regularly........

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

heyy

awesom update.......

plzz add me in your pm list

update soon

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

hey just love this part !!!

really ejoyed reading it !!
seemzzz like ArTi a lot

ur feelingzzz soundzz a lot like Arjun

wish it waz real

-Lina-

Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Oh my god....................this was simply amazing..............

Ok i must say u wrote well abt guy's POV.....................it was just 2 good...............but then i hardly feel Mayank is Mayank..................u knw he sounds similar to a certain mad guy, we all knw............LOL

but awesome update, esp loved Varsh...................😆

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

just read the whole 3 parts n its awesome yaar👏........just luvd it,luvd it ......plzplzplz...........continue n update soon.......plzplzplz ...............add me 2 ur PM list.....plzplzplz.........once again gr8 job 👍🏼
Continue Soon....its a request!!!
Annu😉

Edited by annushehzadi24 - 15 years ago

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Marium

@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

wonderful part

you made me think again that is it real or fiction

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wind453

@wind453

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

fantastic update
the emotions were potrayed beautifully

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PD_forums

@PD_forums

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#80

I simply want to say.....

Wonderful 👏 and awesome 👏

I felt they are the real feeling of some one 😉

Plz update it soon and if possible plz PM me once you update... 😊

Edited by preethi_m18 - 15 years ago