UPDATED 1/2 p56-FF SR:History repeats itself

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Part 2:

My favourite part was when you described the light at the end of the tunnel... Life will throw challenges at us and sometimes those hurdles consume our senses and intellect, but when you lose your head, you lose everything... just like when you lose your heart. Its important to be hopeful, because without hope, our world is dust...

I'm curious, who did you have in mind when you created Dr. Rishab? I'm really enjoying his relationship with Siddhant - reminds me of Adi and Parvati from KGGK, very unique.

The way you handled the volcanoe errupting inside Siddhant, was superb.

One line that stuck out to me:

To fight for a life, to live life.

👏👏
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Cheers,
dc

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sun29

@sun29

Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

arpie🤗 after days i finally managed to read your OS that too from chapter one to hte latest update in one go...............😳😆

i want to cry,laugh,dream all together now.....my love for sid goes overboard even outside the show and in ur OS😭😳...........the way you have handled siddanth is worth an applaud my dear...........the gamult of emotions in him he is going through ........simply amazing and the whole showering of love for riddhima both emotionally and materialistically😆😆 takes you backdreaming again😳and am soo happy to finally get to know what riddhima thinks😲😆and no more guessworks😆......

waitng and really waiting for the next part now........

and loving this Dr.rishab and his rapport with sid........

Edited by sun29 - 15 years ago

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sun29

@sun29

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

and a special mention of promoting riddhima from 2 to 1 🤣🤣🤣.......the phone copmany saved sid🤣

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Sudha

@ssdtvgojan

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Hi Arps,

Loved it.............Waiting for the continuation.

Loved the Mobile company part and the mango tree............Loved the way u express, it so fantastic.

Keep going..............

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JATIN THAKKAR

@JATINTHAKKAR

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Arp,😃

This is Brilliance.👏👏👏

I'm really loving the whole story but i hate Cliff-Hangers yaar.

The way you have shown Sid is the exact replica of Sid who is always Cool,Calm & Composed & he does'nt lose his head in Anger.😊

Oh......the phone company,Mango Tree or Riddhima waiting outside the door was nice too.😉

Riddhima lastly Saying "How can i go inside when keys are with you?",that too was nice.😆

All in all,

The story is going superbly & your writing skills are just like Sone pe Suhaga.👍🏼

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Ann

@celestae

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Arps, sheer brilliance in writing...... Loved the mobile company part a lot.... Poor Sid after all that trouble not even an appreciation..... Also loved the mango and swing part.....Eagerly waiting for the next update....
Ann.

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rapunzel84

@rapunzel84

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

One word - MAGICAL! 👏

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shamil

@shamil

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

arps, can u update fast...pleeeease😍

am lovin it😳

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MagicalKash

@MagicalKash

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

I love this ff!! It's so good!! It's like whenever it reaches it's ending I am like why heck did it end?? And crave for the next part ryt at that moment...
Plz continue soon.

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mysterieux

@mysterieux

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Appppppppppppppsssssssssssssssssssssssssss......aye yai yaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..are you planning to kill me with suspense....update it....dont make come and whack you no more good comments till you updateeeeeeeeeee....* biting my nails* what happens next .........what happens next!!!!!!!

The above bit was after I read the 3rd part...😃😃😆😆😳

Edited by moviebuff05 - 15 years ago