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Posted: 14 years ago
The Next Update Is Coming Up In Just Five Minutes!!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey people.. lijiye jaise maine aap sab se waada kiya tha kii main is barr jaldi se apne ff ke next part ko lekar haazir ho jaaungi, tho bas main ab wapas aagayi hoon… I know kii I'am late by three or four days.. but the thing was that there was a lot of thought process for this particular part of 'HumraahI', this part would surely change many aspects in this fanfic… yes these aspects will have it's on positive effects & also have some negative effects. Guys I would like to tell of you that, while you are reading this part of the fanfic in the starting you will surely love the characters agni & seher, you will also see the depth of love agni, seher have for each other, yes they will be having a good time as the story moves forward, but by the enmd of the 12th part of 'HumraahI', I'am kinda sure that many of my readers will start disliking what agni has done… & for this I can just tell all of you that please do not dislike agni, though he does some things which are unacceptable & unexpected you still have to keep in mind that agni is hurting deep inside his heart.. so please do not dislike our hero… & guys I promise all of you if today you hate agni after reading this part, then surely in the parts to come you will totally love agni & you guys just cannot stop yourselves from going gaga, gaga about agni…. I'am sorry if this part by the time it ends leaves you on a sad note. having my readers sad is not my intention, it is just that what I'am going to write is the need of the hour, need of the fanfic.. & if I have to move the story towards the point where agni & seher will come back together, then this part is really very essential…. So I hope you guys will tolerate the part… waise guys I know many of you are wondering kii aakhir kab agni ko sach patah chalegi, I know you are all waiting for this moment eagerly… & guys believe me when I say it, jitna aap logon ko us pal ka intezaar hai jab agni ko sach patah chalegi, utna hii main bhii utsukh hoon to write that particular part & to tell you guys the truth I'am eager to give you quicker updates because I want to reach the part soon where I can express agni's emotions once he gets to know the truth… & guys I also know that you are eagerly waiting for agni & seher to get back together, well don't worry agni, seher coming back together is some where round the corner… yes you heard it right, their coming back together is some where down the corner in another three or four parts they will be together… though there will be differences but still they will come together, slowly & steadily… & let me warn you guys in advance this particular part may have some adult content.. waise people thank you all so very much for the comments you have given me on the 11th part of the fanfic… after reading your comments it seriously made me too happy… hmmm… but still there are some comments missing, so this is a message to all my missing readers, please come back soon, waiting for your comments eagerly….. guys I thought I would inform you that 'HumraahI' is a small fanfic compared to my first three fanfics… 'HumraahI' is going to be maximum 20 parts long.. I do not want to drag it beyond the 20 parts….. I seriously want to finish this ff on a high & a very memorable note…. So I hope all of you are ok with it but guys I promise you that I will surely start a new ff soon after I complete this one…. So now that you know that 'HumraahI' finishes in 20 parts you all must have got a hint that the time for things to get clearer is coming closer….. tho bas ab dhekthe hai how well the story goes from here… I know that most of you are worried about the precap I have given for the 12th part of 'HumraahI', but don't worry everything will be fine soon the story is slowly progressing & going towards a stage where everything will fall into place & set right… & guys why fear when I'am here.. so just do not worry, sit back on your seats & enjoy this part of the fanfic…. This part is dedicated to all my readers & friends who have been so supportive & encouraging each & every single time…. Thank you all so much once again for the comments you have given me till date.. now I think meri baatein kuch zyada hii hogayi hai so I should just stop talking & do the work for which I have sat in front of my laptop, that is typing the 12th part of the fanfic 'HumraahI'… so let me just start doing that…. Lekin guys aap ko nahii lagtha agge badhne se pehle, first we have to see a glimpse of what exactly happened in the previous part of the fanfic…. Tho bas issi liye story agge badhane se pehle yeh lihiye aap sabke liye el jhalak recap par…. So here is the recap…

Recap:- hmmm… well since the previous part, that is the 11th part of 'HumraahI' was posted very recently just a week & half before, I'am sure none of you will forget what actually happened in the last part of the ff… sach bolun tho is barr tho main bhii nahii bhooli hoon kii aakhir pichle part mein kya hua tha… everytime since I used to post after long gaps of time I used to forget it, hehehe, but this time this surely is not the case.. kyunke is barr tho I have come back early with the update na…. tho pichle part mein humne yeh dekha kii agni aur seher dono hii ek dusare ke khayalon mein hai… there seems to be a lot of battle happening between their heart & mind…. Agni is he** confused, usse tho maano jaise samaj mein hii nahii aa raha hotha hai kii woh aakhir kya kare aur kya na kare… & seher's attitude was not helping him even a bit.. all the more seher's attitude, behavior, was leaving him in a confused state.. agni harr woh koshish karr raha tha jisse he can understand what seher really wants, lekin agni jitna is baat par zor detha hai, utna hii woh apne soch ke dall-dall mein phastha jaa raha tha… he was trying to make sense of what seher was doing, but in reality he was nmot really able to understand anything that was happening around him… on one side agni feels pain, betrayal from seher, he feels he should never give seher a chance to hurt him once again… agni just does not want to show seher his vulnerable side.. agni ko aise lagne laga hi kii he fell in love with seher all those years ago because he was vulnerable for her love & he allowed himself to fall in love but now he really does not want himself to get attached to seher & once again be heart broken in the end…. So agni thinks the best way to keep away from seher was to avoid seher & her antics…. Though agni's mind was telling this, his heart knew a all together different language, agni'a heart was feeling that he saw pain in seher's eyes…. His heart makes him feel that may be seher has under gone the same pain, which he has faced in his life…. But agni is just not ready to accept these thoughts… he feels that seher never really love him & that is the reason why they both are apart from each other on this day…. & that was the end of the matter for him, he just did not brood more over the subject…. On the other hand seher is worried as to where agni has gone… seher ko maano aise bhii lag raha tha kii kahiin usne kuch zyada nahii bol diya agni ko.. but still seher has the confidence in her that she will make everything right.. she has the utmost belief that one day she will win her love back.. she knows that one day she & agni will be together forever till eternity & after… she knew it very well that it was a matter of time & than everything will be perfect for both of them… though seher hurts agni each time with her words, but only she knows to what extent she hurts herself to utter the rude snide remarks to agni…. Seher feels that soon she will have agni with her, with whom she can share her happiness, sadness, anger… seher is happy with the way things are progressing & she just cannot wait for the time when everything will become normal again.. when agni comes back to his cabin he sees seher sleeping & though he wants to ignore, to avoid seher but that seems next to impossible for agni to do.. once seher gets up, agni, seher start brickering again & again.. though agni does not want to, seher just keeps irritating him…. Then we also saw that agni, seher have lunch together… the conversation during the lunch is swindling from a formal one to a informal one… then soon seher reminds agni that he has to move on in his life…. Then seher also reminds agni of their pending date… agni is just not interested… then we also saw some close moments between the two of them in the cabin…. But still agni was not accepting seher's offer for the date, he says that he does not care if seher forgive him or not, he just broke her cell & now he has replaced it with a new one & that was the end of the matter according to agni… but even seher was his wife & why would she back off… seher ne tho jaise than liya hai that she would never back off, face all the problems head on…. So thus while returning home with agni, seher once again tries to convince agni for the date, agni still does not budge… seher warns agni that if he does not take her out on a date then she would go & tell his friends the truth about their relationship.. agni does not seem to be affected by that too so finally seher uses the final assault where she tells him that if he does not take care on a date then she would tells his friends he is gay…. Agni challenges her saying that his friends would not really believe her, but seher informs him that his friends already have this doubt about him being gay because he runs away from girls… so thus agni agrees reluctantly & hesitantly … agni tells seher that they both will be going on a date the next day… he says he would pick her up at 7 for their date…. Agni though not up for the idea just gives up because he really does not have any other option, seher has put him in a complete fix…. While seher is happy that she will be going on a date with her vaashu, her love, her husband….. even agni is happy somewhere in his heart because he will be spending some time with seher… but still he is doubtful about the way the things are going…. so this was it, now this was the recap… now let us move the story forward & let us see what exactly is in store for our hero agni, our heroine seher & let us also see what is store for the readers too… so here is the next part of the fanfic…. I hope all of you like what you are going to read…..



****HumraahI – Part 12****

Agni soon reaches home & he heaves a sigh of relief, because all through the car journey from the time he has actually agreed to take seher on a date, from the corner of his eyes he was observing seher to really understand what exactly was going on in her head… agni ko yeh samaj mein tho nahii aaya kii aakhir seher ke dil mein, seher ke dimaak mein kya chal raha hai but one thing was for sure & that was from the time he actually told yes for the date, seher had a very huge smile on her face… there was a permanent grin plastered on her face… & the smile, the grin just did not seem to go away… & this was confusing agni all the more… agni just keeps thinking to himself, about seher… he keeps on thinking about what exactly would be going on in seher's mind… but for agni to understand seher seemed next to impossible.. he just could not comprehend what was going on with seher, what was going on in her brain, what was going on in her heart…. Though things around him were confusing him to no man's extent, but still seeing the smile on seher's face, his heart flutters… his heart seems to skip a beat whenever he sees the smile on seher's face widening with every passing by second… he really does not know what was the reason for seher's smile, her grin, but still he was happy seeing seher smile…. He was thinking to himself that, though he does not know why seher is happy, but still wishes that her happiness stays forever.. agni also thinks that may be seher is happy that he is going to take her on a date, but agni's brain rejects this point, saying that in seher's life he is not so important that, just because he agrees to take her on a date she would be so happy… he thinks that may be she is so happy thinking about her so called 'BF', even thinking about seher 'BF' burns agni's soul.. it was like someone has set his heart on fire, agni just decides to ignore it.. he keeps telling himself that seher & he have parted ways a long time back.. now they are just professionals who have come together for their work & business… he starts feeling that he should seriously stop bothering about seher & also to think about seher, at every given chance.. but there was one thing which agni was failing to realize & that was, what ever seher was doing, she was doing it wontedly because she just wants her talks, her jibes, her rude comments, her kisses, her spiteful words, all leave a affect on her husband, who was acting indifferent to everything that was related to her… just that agni did not realize that his wife knows him too well & may be she knew him more than himself too & she very well knew how to get reaction from her hubby dearest…. Agni though does not seem keen to take seher on a date, though not interested, starts thinking to himself, about where he would take seher, what surprise he would give her…. Yes agni kept on telling himself that, the date he is taking seher on is more a professional date, a date between two business associates or rather perfect strangers, but still agni did not really know why he wanted to make it special for seher & also for himself…. Agni ke mann mein reh, rehhkarr yeh baat aa rahii thi kii may be this date was the last time he can be with seher & agni seriously wanted to seek a day of happiness with seher… thus he wanted to make it special for her…. Though they have reached home agni was still lost in his thoughts…. He was not getting down from the car… on the other hand seher did not even realize that they have actually reached home… she was having so many thoughts running in her mind, body, soul & heart that she thought her head would burst open with all sorts of thoughts… seher started thinking on various aspects, she starts thinking about what she has to wear, how she has to look… & her heart is beating all the more faster thinking about where exactly agni will take her on a date… seher knows it too well that she should not really expect too much from her love, because her love, her husband was doing only one thing at his best & that was too stay away from her… seher's thoughts also run in the direction that agni ka tho koi bharosa hii nahii, he may surely ditch her & throw her date plans deep in the gutter & still act nonchalant & indifferent towards everything & seher did not want that too happrn at any cost… while thinking seher also thinks that, may be in the date seher should make agni realize that she loves him & always loved him… she thought she would surely give agni a indirect hint about her love for him during the date…. Seher was really way too excited.. her date was supposed to be the next day, there were still about twenty two hours for the date to start but still her heart was beating at a very fast rate & it just did not seem to stop… on the other hand agni's thoughts are also about the date…. Though he feels he has to keep the dinner date on a professional note, his heart seems to have it's own ideas for the date…. His brain was telling him that the date was just dinner between two people who are working with each other on a professional level, but his heart seemed to differ in it's opinion… & agni knew it very well that the dinner, the date or whatever it was he had with seher is just not pertaining to the professional level relationship… he knows it way too well that, jab baat seher kii aathi hai, it automatically becomes personal… he knows when it comes to seher, then the professional relationship, the perfect strangers relationship are all damned to rot in he**… & he is just happy with the personal relationship… agni yeh baat bhii jaantha tha kii if he does not stop himself, thenm it would be too late & once again he would give the girl who does not love him a chance to hurt him… yes it was true that even today agni loved seher, yes it was true that he just could not forget seher from the time they have parted ways, yes it was true that he has not moved on neither does he want to move on in life, but because of his ego, he just does not want to express his vulnerability in front of the girl who broke his heart so badly in the past, that he never really had the courage to fall in love once again… he never had the courage to give love another chance…. He believed that if his life was destined to be like that then he cannot do much about it, but he would not let seher come close to him once again… so agni was thinking how to make the dinner date like a formal one, like that of between two business people, thorough professionals….. agni bas inhi sab khayalon mein apne dimaak ka dahii bana raha hotha hai…. Agni was also in the verge of breaking his head, because his heart & brain had two different opinions & he was really not sure, which one was correct, nor was he sure about which one exactly he has to be picking…. Bas yahii sab chal raha hotha hai agni ke dilo-dimaak mein… ek tarah ke kashmakash mein hothe hai uske dil aur dimaak bhi… on the other hand, seher keeps thinking ways of how exactly she can express her love for agni indirectly… different ideas pop out in her head, some silly, some wild, everytime she thinks something sill she hits her head & each time she thinks of something wild, she gets a shy coy smile on her face…. Bas yahii baaton ko sochthe hue, seher comes out of her thoughts, that is when she realizes that they have reached home… she sees that agni has parked the car in the porch, she suddenly thinks that kahiin agni usse gaadi mein hii chodkarr tho nahii chala gaya, that is when seher looks at the driving seat & she sees that agni is still sitting there, holding the steering wheel in his hand…. Seher realizes that just like her even agni is lost in his thoughts.. for few minutes seher admires agni's face.. & then she has a thought which crosses her mind that, what exactly is agni thinking…. She also thinks that may be agni is thinking of ways for chickening out of their dinner date, as this thought crosses seher's mind, seher tells herself that, whatever agni does to chicken out of their dinner date situation, she would just not allow it…. She would not really give agni any chance to back out from their date…. Seher keeps thinking this, when she is suddenly disturbed by the constant ringing of the phone… seher takes her mobile & checks who is calling her, but she sees that her cell is not ringing, that is when seher realizes that it is agni's cell phone which is ringing… seher looks at agni, but agni is still lost in his thoughts… he just does not seem to come out of his thoughts…. The call gets cut & again agni cell rings, lekin agni ko tho in sab baaton se koii bhii farq hii nahii padd raha hotha hai… seher looks at agni keenly to see if he is alright…. She starts to wonder kii aakhir agni itna kya soch raha hai that he does not even realize that his cell phone has been ringing… finally after ten minutes of continuous calls, agni's cell stops ringing & that is when seher's phone rings, seher sees that it is damini who is calling her…. Seher answers the call, & informs a worried damini that they have reached home & just coming inside…. Damini asks her about why agni is not picking up her call seher tackles the question telling her that agni has actually forgotten his cell phone back in the office… this answer seems to convince damini, she then asks seher & agni to come inside soon, so that they all can have dinner together… seher says ok & cuts the call.. she then again looks at agni & this time she gets irritated because agni still does not seem to react.. seher than calls agni thrice to get him out of his thoughts of revive…. But even this seems to have no use, no affect… seher then thinks about something…. She gets a cheeky grin on her face & decides to proceed with the idea which she has thought to get agni out of his world of thoughts… seher moves in her seat, she goes close to agni's face & very carefully she goes near agni's ear, & instead of blowing air in it she bites the top edge of the ear in a very seductive way….. this does the trick agni comes out of his world of thoughts, he looks at seher with a look which says what was that…. Seher moves back in her seat, she still has that cheeky grin on her face, agni rubs his ears & looks at seher with a irritated look & says:- yeh kya tha…. & are you a puppy, tumne mujhe kaataa kyun…. Seher in a very cool manner says:- woh tum tab se patah nahii kya soch rahe the, tumhara phone tab se bajj raha that um utta nahii rahe the… aur phir maine bhii tumhe bulaya bhi lekin tum tho jaise apni soch kii duniyaan mein doobh hii gaye the… is liye bas maine socha kii tumhare kaan mein phoonk marrke uttaun, baaki ka tho tum par koi asar hothe mujhe dikh hii nahii raha tha…. Agni:- phoonk marrna chahthi thi mere kaan mein tho kaata kyun woh bhii itni zor se, dekho ab mere kaan ek dum laal hogaye hai…. Seher:- well main tho phookh hii marrne waali thi, lekin aain (correct) waqt par tumne thodi si karwat lii tho bas ghalthi se mere daant tumhare kaan mein lag gaye.. sorry about that…. Agni looks at seher's face, he knows that seher is outrightly lying, he knows kii seher ne joh kiya woh jaan bhoochkarr hii kiya… he looks at seher & says:- you just don't try & act smart with me… alright… I know you way too well…. Ghalthi se hogaya… my foot…… ab agar tumhari yeh baatein hogayi ho tho kya hum log andar jaa sakthe hai…. Seher makes a face at agni & says:- haan, haan andar chalo na, maine kab tumhe roka hai.. tabse tho tum hii apne khayalon kii duniyaan mein khoye hue ho aur na jaane kya soch rahe ho… ab waise bhii jaldi chalo, damini ne abhi mujhe phone kiya, woh pooch rahii thi kii hum dono kahaan hai… so chalo…. Agni:- pehle nahii bata sakthi thi tum mujhe…. Ab chalo uthro gaadi se.. seher:- common Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal, be a man & open the door for the lady…. Tum mere liye itna bhii nahii karr sakthe ho kya… agni:- lady, I do not see any lady here.. I just see a devil disguised as a lady here & I really do not open car doors for devils.. even I have a standard you see…. Seher:- ohhh…. Hello… I'am not a devil, I'am indeed a lady… & think about it your weak point is in my hands until we actually go out on a date.. so what do you want me to use your weak point against you…. I can use it if you want me too… agni understands which weak point seher is referring too, so he says:- so now you will tell everyone that I'am gay, just because I do not open the passenger seat door, for a lady looking devil… well go ahead do it… I'am so sure you would not let the date slip out of your hands, if you want to say that too everyone go be my guest aur issi tarah mujhe is forcible dinner date se bhii chutkaara mil jaayega…. Seher very sweetly smiles at agni & says:- hmmm… you have too many weak points mister….. well let me tell you you are right, at any cost I'am seriously not letting you off the hook without the dinner date…. & so this time I would not use the gay thing.. this time I will use something different… agni:- & can I ask you what would that be… seher:- so that will be that if you don't open the cars door for me then I would just sit here… & you will go inside your friends will ask you where am'I then you can answer them that I'am still sitting in the car & when they ask you a reason for it, thenm you can be my guest & answer your friends…. If you think you can answer your friends then you can just go… I really do not care… but I seriously feel you have to care, otherwisw you will have a lot of answering to do…. So now you make your decision… I can just tell you be wise & make a choice wisely… you think about it, do you want to answer all the questions put forth by your friends or you just would want to open the passenger seat door & end the matter here itself… think about it & let me know…. [saying this seher leans back on her seat & closes her eyes, humming a sweet tone with her melodious voice…] agni looks at seher he is just not able to make out what is happening, he is just unable to understand why is everything going wrong with him, without any other option, agni sighs in frustration, he gets off the car, slams the door & then in a very quick pace walks to seher's side… he opens the passenger seats door with a jerk, seher who is leaning back on the seat opens her eyes & shows a total winning smile…. Seher comes out of the car, agni closes the door with a thud… seher very carefully pats on agni's cheeks & in a very naughty manner adds:- that's like a good boy, or should say a good gentleman, Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal…. Agni makes a frustrated face at seher & says:- whatever.. ab tum chalogi, ya phir you expect that I will carry His highness queen seher in my arms…. Want me to do it, do you legs hurt… agni says this sarcastically… seher understands the sarcasm in agni's words very well, she just does not let it affect her & she again in a naughty tone says:- that is after all not a very bad idea mister… actually I should be saying it is a very good idea Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal…. But I'am extremely sorry to tell you that we can use this style of going inside the house some other time…. I know you may be disappointed that you are not able to carry His Highness Seher Ag (seher stops & then says)…. His Highness Sags in your arms…. I would seriously love to give you this opportunity, but may be some other time later…. I hope you don't Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal…… seeing seher smile cheekily agni says:- yaa… yaa.. whatever… suit yourself for all I care…. Now can we please go in…. seher controls the smile on her face & says:- yup sure…. Now seher, agni start walking to the front door… what they both do not see is that a four people were looking at them with keen interest from inside of the 'Utpal Villa'.. & they were prachi, milind, damini & prithvi, they were looking at agni, seher from the window… actually the point was that damini even after calling seher, starts to wonder why agni, seher have not come inside yet, that is when she crosses the window & from there at that time she sees agni opening the passenger seats door for seher, damini calls the other three who are just going around there to see what's going on…. They then see seher patting agni's cheek, they are more amused thinking that agni is not trying to distance himself from seher… there was only one thought running in their heads & it was that Agni Vashist Garewal who always runs far away from girls, is opening the cars door for a woman & he is just not moving away even when the girl is patting his cheeks… this was a surprise for the four of them, because the agni they have known for the past six years never in his wildest dreams would really do something like that, neither would he really allow someone to come close to him….. prithvi, milind, damini, prachi look at each other with a small smile creeping on their faces… all their faces just show one expression & that was whatever has caused this change in agni, they want that change to remain forever, because even they want agni to fall in love, to live life happily… they know it very well that they would always be there for agni as a friend but still they wished that agni has the special companion in his life, who will share his life with him…. For whom agni will be her companion & for agni she will be his companion… they could see their wishes coming true with seher around….. damini, prachi, milind, prithvi still keep looking at both of them… they see that from time to time seher is looking at agni from the corner of her eyes, they are not least surprised with this, because they surely know that their friend Agni Vashist Garewal leaves such impact & impression on woman, girls, aunties… they know that he just make heads turn wherever he goes… but they are surprised because they also see that their friend who generally runs away from girls is also looking at seher from the corner of his eyes, when he feels that seher is not looking…. Now they are surprised because they never really knew that one day they would see their best friend Agni Vashist Garewal looking at a girl, walking beside him from the corner of his eyes…. By this time seher, agni reach the door, before agni could ring the bell or knock, seher whispers in agni's ear:- I will be looking forward for our dinner date…. Agni looks at seher, he opens his mouth a bit in surprise, he keeps looking at seher with wide eyes.. seher just smiles at him & then rings the bell… seher is standing in front of agni, while agni who is standing behind seher understand what seher has told, seher's words 'I will be looking forward for our dinner date' keeps ringing in his ears & he gets a smile on his face….. & seeing this his friends are totally knocked out with shock, surprise or whatever you call it, they wonder what has seher told agni in his ear… they come out of their happy shock, when seher rings the bell once again… prachi rushes to open the door, while damini, prithvi, milind start keeping themselves occupied in some or the other work, just so that seher & agni do not get to know that they have been seeing them.. prachi opens the door with a sweet smile & the first thing she does is to take seher in a big hug…. & then she separates herself from seher, greets her very warmly & then with the same enthusiasm welcomes agni too… though agni, seher find it a bit odd, they just take it in the stride thinking that prachi must be happy about something that is why they are being welcomed with such zest… once agni, seher are welcomed in a very happy mood by the others… agni takes a not of their behavior & thinks about asking them about their utmost happy behavior later…. Soon agni, seher are asked to join everyone for dinner, agni, seher leave the hall telling them that they would join them just in a bit after freshening up… agni, seher leave to their respective rooms… while here in the hall damini, prithvi, prachi & milind look at the retreating figures of agni & seher, once they are out of the sight… the first thing that seher mumbles is that:- what on earth was that… kya aap log bhii wahii dekh rahe hai jisee main dekh rahii hoon… are you guys really understanding what exactly is going on….. the next one to open the mouth is damini she too adds with equal amount of surprise:- prachu I know what you mean… I understand what you are trying to say, but then I feel that I'am dreaming & in another five minutes I will wake up from my sleep & all this will not be real…. Prithvi:- damy tum bhii na… hum chaar log hai, aur hum chaaron milke, ek saath, ek hii sapna kaise dekh sakthe hai…. Yeh koi sapna, vapna nahii hai hum joh dekh rahe hai that's real…. Milind:- absolutely though I know this reality is very, very hard to believe but still we have to believe it…. From the time we have known our friend Agni Vashist Garewal, from the past so many, many years we have known him, this is the first time, I mean 'The First Time' when Agni Vashist Garewalm does not seem to run away from woman…. Woaahhh…. Mannn.. this is totally unbelievable… prithvi says:- now that's exactly my point, common yaar how can this happen… yeh chamatkaar kaise hogaya… theek hai main yeh baat maan saktha hoon kii agni, is not running away from seher may be because she is a business associate, may be because humein agge chalkarr seher ke saath kaam ke silsile mein deal karna pade.. lekin jahaan thak maine abhi agni ko seher ke saath dekha tho mujhe na jaane aise kyun lagaa kii agni is putting up with seher's antics…. I mean jab koi ladki start advancing towards agni, agni puts a stop it it by putting his leg forward… but today he ws just quiet when seher was trying to get close to him… ab yeh kya hai mere tho kuch samaj mein hii nahii aa raha hai… damini smiles & says:- prithvi tumhe tho kuch bhi kabhi samaj mein hii nahii aatha, kyunke tum romantic nahii ho…. Tho yeh agni, seher ke beech yeh kya ho raha hai, yeh baat main aur prachu soch lenge… waise socha jaaye mujhe lagtha hai kii I think I know what is cooking between the two of them…. Prithvi makes a face a being called not romantic & he says:- tho aap hii bata dijiye kii aapko kya lagtha hai, seher aur agni ke beech chal kya raha hai…. Milind:- haan damy tum hii batao aakhir majraa kya hai…. Damini:- well mujhe aisa lagtha hai kii agni aur seher ke beech, love is in the air…. Milind, prithvi together say:- what…. Damini smiles & says:- bilkul sahii suna tum logon ne love is in the air… kyat um logon ko seher aur agni kii chemistry nahii dikhthi hai.. come to think of it, it is very obvious kii they like each other… prithvi:- damy tumhe nahii lagtha we are assuming things a bit too quickly… don't you think before reaching a conclusion we must have a word with agni…. Milind:- haan damy prithvi is right, itni jaldi pyaar…. Yeh kuch impossible sa nahii lagtha… damini:- arre kabhi tum logon ne love at first sight ke bare mein nahii sunaa hai kya… you guys are so boring…. Prithvi:- damy we understand what you are saying, but we are just discussing the pro's & con's of this particular situation… milind:- yes exactly.. because this situation seems so odd…. Agni Vashist Garewal in love, this is hard to believe… next to impossible yaa… damini sighs in frustration & she says:- prithvi, milind tum dono se mujhe yahii umeed thi…. Prachu tu bata yaar tujhe kya lagtha hai…. Prachi in a dazed state says:- damy please mujhe pinch karo, I want to make sure I'am not asleep… I need to make sure that I really saw Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal sneaking glances at a girl.. [damini pinches prachi's arm… & prachi says] prachi:- owww…. Thank you damy.. now I know what I'am seeing is the truth…. Damy kya tumhe bhii wohii lagtha hai joh mujhe lagtha hai, did you also feel the same thing that I felt, agni, humara dost agni joh kii ladkiyon se durr bhaagtha tha, he seriously seemed interested in a girl…. This is amazing….. saying this prachi gives damini a hi-fy… while damini says:- Thank God prachu, ek tu atleast meri baat se sehmati rakhthi hai.. yeh dono tho mujhse keh rahe hai kii I'am jumping onto a conclusion without analyzing the situation…. Prachi:- damy dekho yeh dono tho aise hii hai… bas inhe thoda waqt lagega…. Though agni ladkiyon se itne waqt se durr bhaagtha tha, we always knew that some where in his heart, he has a romantic streak attached to him… bas abhi it is coming out…. Well it is good that now we can see the love boy, joh humare dost mein chupa hua hai… milind:- I think tum dono ko apni speed kum karni chahiye.. common guys give them a break, what agar ek ladka ek ladki look at each other, does not mean they love each other…. I think you guys really need to grow up… prachi:- mills will you look at a girl whom you don't like, will you steal glances at a girl whom you are not interested in… okk even if you don't like the girl, if you are not interested in the girl, then explain why would a guy look at a girl whom he does not like neither does he have any kind off interest in…. milind:- see there is a point in what you guys are telling, we are not denying the like quotient, we are just telling you guys that, let us just not rush into things.. let things go on as they are… let agni, seher realize what is going on between them.. let the two of them come out about what they feel then we being agni's closest friends, his family can take it from there…. Now don't you think i have a point in what I'am trying to say…. Damini:- in a sense though I hate to accept it, but there is a point in what you are saying…. It is a valid point…. & I think you are right we have to let them decide.. but still if there is like, we can indirectly make sure that they come closer… prach seems excited & she says:- awesome…. This is a great idea… aur haan hum unhe koi relationship ke liye force thodi na karr rahe hai, we are just trying to give them hints about what exists between them… waise bhii after knowing agni, hum yeh bhii achche se jaanthe hai kii even if he has a liking for seher, he will make sure to just brush away the liking & walk off… aur hum bas itni hii koshish karenge kii agni apne aur seher ke beech panapthe hue rishthe ko deny na karr sake…. & mujhe nahii lagtha hum ismein kuch bhii ghalat kmarr rahe hai… kyun mills, prithvi… milind:- well when you guys have explained your defense perfectlt to the 'T' tho phir meri itni jurrat kahaan kii main aap logon kii baat se sehmat na houn… kyun prithvi kya kehtha tu, hum saath de inka, is barr ke matchmaking mein… patah nahii mujhe aise kyun lag raha hai kii this time our matchmaking efforts will surely be fruitful… prithvi who looks in a deep thought says:- haan milsi you are right… lekin haan ek baat hai mujhe seher aur agni ke beech ek alag hii rishtha dikhtha hai… I do not know what is it between agni & seher, but there is something which tells me that, there is more than what actually meets the eye in agni, seher's relationship… patah nahii kabhi aisa bhii lagtha hai kii kahiin agni aur seher ka koi past tho nahii hai… hum sab seher ko bas theen dino se jaanthe hai, par patah nahii kyun some where in the corner of my heart, there is a small voice which is saying that agni, seher know each other from before… you know jaise us din jab seher agni ke saamne aagayi, tho agni ke mooh se pehle shabd nikla, golu molu chashmish…. Then though he changed the topic he acted like a stranger to her, but I don't know why I feel like this…. Dekho guys we do not know what has agni's life been like before six years, we always respected his privacy & never asked him about it.. we know he has a family back abroad, but the relations there seem to have gone cold…. I feel that there is something agni is trying to keep away from us…. I don't know what…. This may sound stupid, God whatever I'am talking may sound stupid, but patah nahii aisa lagtha hai kii kahiin yeh rishton ke beech coldness kii wajah agni ka past tho nahii… aur kahiin is past se seher tho related nahii hai…. I know what I'am talking makes no sense, but see seher is very warm with all of us.. but when agni, seher deal with each other, though they seem to have taken a liking towards each other, still there is a sense of coldness, which hovers the relationship that is between them… professional or personal relationship does not matter, there is a coldness between the two of them when they actually are with each other… the same coldness I feel that exist between agni & his family…. I know how hurt agni feels for the coldness he has faced from his family, par na jaane kyun when I see the coldness between agni, seher I feel the same hurt in agni's eyes, which he receives when his family is cold towards him… & the point is it is just not agni alone who feels hurt, I feel even seher goes through the same… [prithvi takes a pause, he looks at damini, prachi, milind & says..] ab tum theeno mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho…. I just told you guys what I felt… now I know this makes no bloo** sense, I don't even know why I mentioned it…actually you guys just forget it….. now damini says:- I don't know what you guys would say, lekin prithvi agar main tumse yeh kahoon kii mujhe bhii aisa hii lagtha hai.. mujhe bhii aisa lagtha hai kii seher agni ke ateet se koi na koi connection tho rakhthi hai tho… now prachi says:- I don't know whether it is a good connection or a bad connection on the negative side, but there is surely something between them… milind:- guys you may be right.. kyunke sochne waali baat tho yeh hai kii we have never seen agni giving a girl a freehand in his life… & this time agni is doing it, though he sulks about it, he still let's seher have her say.. & can you believe that our friend who stay 100 mts away from woman, was so calls to a woman & he also smiled after that…. Though he seemed disturbed but still he just did not want to push seher away, he let seher have her say…. This is surely a point to think about… & I feel we have to really know whether agni, seher have had a past.. we should try to get some facts…. & then we can decide what exactly we should be doing, or rather if we should be doing something at all…. I hope you guys are understanding what I'am trying to say… prachi:- lekin mills hum sab jaanthe hai kii agni will not share his past with us… we know him very well, if he feels that we will be hurt after knowing his part than he would never ever utter a word, even if he is hurting deep inside his heart… & because agni accepted us the way we were we all had decided that we would never really probe into what exactly went wrong in his past…. We just let him be…. Tho phir ab hum agni ke ateet ke bare mein kaise jaan paayenge… don't you guys think it would be wrong on our part to dig about agni's past, just because we want to know if agni, seher have had a past or not…. [this talk from pachi leaves damini, prithvi & milind thinking..] & then damini says:- prachu sahii kehh rahii hai…. Hum jaanthe hai kii agni ke ateet mein kuch aisa hua tha, jisse usne kudhko apne apno se durr karrdiya tha…. Bas is wajah se kii hum jaanna chahthe hai kii kya seher aur agni ka ek ateet tha ya nahii, is baat ke liye humein agni ke poorane zakhm kuraid nahii sakthe hai…. There should be some other way out… koi tho raastha hoga jisse humein yeh patah chal sake kii kya agni, seher ka koi ateet tha, aur hum aise karne se agni ko hurt bhii na kare… there should be a way out… & all we have to do is figure that way out, warna aise na ho jaaye kii humare seher, agni ke utsukhtha mein, hum kahiin agni ko jaane anjaane mein chot na pohancha de…. All others seem to agree to what damini has said…. & the four of them also start thinking on various ways how they can find out the truth, without hurting agni or seher's sentiments… un sabko ek aur bhii baat sataa rahii thi & that was kii agni may be was their friend… but as far as seher was concerned for them though she was a nice person, though she was warm & friendly towards them, still she was just a new acquaintance… they did not really want to do anything rash & fast jiske wajah se both agni, seher would be confined in a awkward situation…. Bas yahii baatein un chaaron ke dimaak mein chalthi rehthi hai & for every two minutes, each one of the four come with different way of how to learn the truth.. but their ideas do not seem to work at all…. There main point was to determine if agni, seher had a past together, they wanted to know if agni, seher knew each other from earlier… &they also wanted to know that if agni, seher knew each other from before then why are they behaving like strangers on the present day… the four of them, damini, prithvi, milind & prachni were seeking & trying to find some answers just so that they can give their best friend the happiness, the away, the love he deserves… prithvi, milind, damini, prachi also think that even if the truth comes out that agni, seher have no past related to each other, still they will know more about seher… & try, & hook up agni, seher, that is only if they are interested in each other… while thinking of ways to approach agni's past, prachi suddenly gets a idea… & she says:- agar hum yeh baat seher se pooche kii aakhir uske aur agni ke beech kya chal raha hai, tho kya hum jin sawaalon ke jawaab dhoond rahe hai, woh mil jaye humein…. Now damini says:- prachu, hum aisa kaise karr sakthe hai…. Dekho I don't think yeh sahii lagega…. Prachi:- damy main samaj rahii hoon tum kya kehne kii koshish karr rahii ho, lekin damy socho hum joh bhii pooch rahe hai woh saaf dil aur saaf neeyath se pooch rahe hai.. humare dil mein koi khot nahii hai… we just want agni to get his share of happiness, & we have to do it before he decides that he has to move away from the happiness that is knocking on his door step… main bas itna hii kehh rahe hoon kii agar hum saaf dil se, bina koi matlab ke seher se yeh pooch le kii kya uske aur agni ke beech kuch chal raha hai… ya phir yeh pooch le kii kya uska aur agni ka ek past tha…. It is simpler asking things directly than too complicate it with our assumptions…. Damini:- right prachu… theek hai we will ask seher if she is related to agni's past.. aur agar seher agni ke past se koi talukk na bhi ho, tho agar woh agni ko pasand karthi hai tho hum dekhthe hai humein kya karna hai… we will see both sides of interest… & we will put in our best foot forward just to make them realize that, may be some where in the corner of their hearts they have developed a liking for each other… all the four joun hands saying that now, no one can really stop them from what they really want to achieve…. & this time they were cooking up a plan, though they know it may not be fair in their part to interfere way too much in agni & seher's life, but still after knowing agni for so many years, they know that for their friends happiness they have to do some meddling…. As they know their friend, agni vashist garewal, is such a character who will move away from happiness, for God knows what reason… so this time they decided to take the matters in their hands.. yes many times earlier too damini & prachi tried to hook up agni with many girls, varied different types of girls, but somewhere even they knew it very well that their hooking up agni each time would not work.. but this time there was a sort of confidence oozing out of the four of them which told them that seher would be the perfect match for their best friend.. they knew it that this time when they try to get agni, seher closer to each other then nothing really can go wrong… patah nahii kyun par unhe is baat ka yakeen ho chala tha kii is barr koi gadbad, koi ghalthi nahii hogi.. may be it was the sense of happiness they were feeling for the first time seeing their friend sneaking glances at a woman, or may be it was the hope that their friend seemed interested in a woman, for the very first time… whatever it was they has a belief that nothing can go wrong this time…. Bas issi yakeen ke saath they wanted to move about the things & uncomplicate every mystery which is hovering, agni & seher… then milind, prithvi suggest that they can go for a picnic on the Friday night & come back on the Sunday night.. issi bahane damini, prachi will get time to ask seher the question which is hovering their heads & they can also have some amount of fun after a long time.. prachi, damini seem to like the idea… & they also think that if agni gets suspicious of their sudden picnic plan than they can clearly tell him that they just want to show seher around, before she leaves back to her home.. the four of them sit & think about where exactly should they go…. On the other hand let us see what agni, seher are doing.. no agni, seher were not together…. Agni was in his room, while seher was in her room… though seher longed to be with agni in his room, sharing agni's private time with herself, but right now she did not want to go to agni, irritate him with her antics & give agni a chance to say no to their most awaited date… tho bas seher apne kamre mein inhi khayalon mein hothi hai kii aakhir what was the next day going to bring for her… will it bring her happiness or will it leave her empty handed as always… but thinking about being empty handed, seher just pushes those thoughts away from her mind, because woh yeh baat bohat achche se jaanthi thi aur samajthi thi bhii thi, kii joh bura hona tha woh pehle hii ho chukka.. now it was just time for happiness.. in a matter of some time it will be the time when agni, seher will rejoice their happiness, together without any hesitation & without any hindrance…. Seher starts thinking of ways of how she can make her dinner date with agni a memorable occasion for her & agni… seher through the dinner date wants to give some momets to cherish.. she wants to see the real smile on agni's face… with the date as a medium, seher wants to spend some quality time with agni & give him a feeling of togetherness…. This was her main aim… her reason to force agni for a date was not because she wants to go on a date with agni… the actual reason is seher wants to give agni some reasons to smile… she knows life has been unkind to both of them & she just with the medium of a dinner date, atleast for sometime wants to free agni of his pain & worry… & she felt they both deserved this peace atleast for a while…. She thinks that baaki ka baad mein dekhenge but for now her top most priority was only her dinner date which she had with agni.. & she was so very much looking forward for it…. On the otherside agni was in his room, he seriously was not in a very good mood at the moment & thbat is why he was delaying going down to have his dinner… he just did not want to face seher so soon… he just could not believe that he let seher talk himself into taking her for a date.. upar se seher kii harkatein usse behad pareshaan karr rahii thi… he was feeling like he just needs a break from all that is happening in his life… he starts feeling that he really needs to get off & get away from seher & all the other things that is going on… agni knew it very well that agar bas woh seher se durr rahe tho most of his problems will disappear… agni knew this face very well that he is been caught in the problems only & only because of the presense of seher…. Aur is baat se bhii agni ko aur ghussa aa rahii thi kii he is just not able to avoid seher, bhale hii woh kitni hii koshish kyun na kar le to avoid seher, to ignore seher all his tactics were in vain… & this was the reason agni was feeling all the more irritated… ek taraf he was feeling irritated with seher's presense & with the control she was having on him & his life… doosri araf he was even getting irritated because reh, rehkarr agni ko yeh baat yaad aa rahii hothi hai that he & seher are going to go out on a date…. He just wants to get over with the date as soon as he can…. He also had a thought kii kyun na uske aur seher ke date ko ek family date bana de, & make I look like a coincidence in front of seher.. but agni knew seher way too well he knew that seher would not abide to any of his tricks… he knew it very well that seher itni bhii bewakoof nahii hai kii woh yeh samaj nahii paaye what is a real a coincidence & what is a pre arranged coincidence, which is made to seem real… & more over agni just does not want to take any chances of seher troubling him again regarding the date… he some how had a feeling running in his heart & brain that may be, once he takes seher on their so called date, then she would stop troubling him & annoying him at every give chance… lekin agni yeh baat nahii jaantha tha kii seher joh bhii karr rahii hai, jaisa bhii karr rahii hai her only aim is to annoy the life out of him… irrespective of whether he takes her on a date or no, irrespective of whatever he does, seher is just going to irritate him like no man's business…. Agni just failed to realize that was her only aim for now… soon agni realizes that he has to go down for dinner, he really did not want his friends to get suspicious…. Agni then starts going down, while he is going down he reaches the second floor & as luck would permit it at the same time seher is also about to go down… seher who is walking in the second floors corridor, looks at agni… even agni is looking at her, seher starts walking towards agni, they both are now standing by the stairs… seher is looking at agni, while agni was to look away…. He then asks seher:- tum abhi thak yahaan kyun ho… seher:- bas aise hii… woh actually kal ke humare dinner date ke liye kuch kaam karr rahii thi… aur tum… [seher stops saying this.. while agni says..] agni:- main kya…. Seher:- main poochna chahthi thi kii tum ab thak dinner karne ke liye kyun nahii gaye… don't tell me tum bhii humare kal ke date ko lekar plans bana rahe the aur isliye nahii gaye neeche… kyun Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal, making plans to make our date beautiful & memorable…. Agni:- you know what, all I can say is that you have a little too high expectations…. & yes any talk, any dinner date with you can never be beautiful, can never leave me with happy memories… I just want to get over this dinner date as soon as possible & then I can sigh in relief because you would not trouble me anymore…. Seher:- well you never know, may be even after you take me on our dinner date, I might just not stop troubling you…. Agni:- & can you tell me why the he** do you keep troubling me & why on earth are you bent upon annoying me…. Seher:- because it is fun…. Agni:- whattt….. seher:-what ek hii baat ko kitni barr dauharaun…. Theek hai ek barr phir bata dethi hoon I trouble you, annoy you, because it is fun…. Now I hope I have answered your question, can you please move, I'am very hungry…. [seher agni ko ishara karthi hai to move so that she can go down the stairs…] seher starts going down the stairs, agni keeps walking behind her & he keeps mumbling in a loud voice & asking seher:- what do you mean by it is fun…. Seher coolly says:- Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal, I really did not know that, you don't understand things in the first attempt… it just does not mean anything, it just clear cut fun to irritate you.. & it is as simple as that… & now I hope I don't have to do more of this explaination business, because I'am seriously not up for it…. Agni keeps grumbling & walking behind seher, agni grmbles:- fun… what fun… mujhe irritate karne mein isko fun miltha hai.. God…. This is disgusting…. [saying this agni makes a face..] seher can hear agni grumbling, she just does not reply to him & smile to herself… once they are going down from the first floor, seher tells agni:- can you please switch off your mobile, for the time you are with your friends…. Agni:- what… why should I switch off my mobile when I'am with my friends.. I think you are out of your mind seriously… seher:- well if you don't switch off your mobile, then you will have to do a lot of answering to your friends… agni:- & can I ask you why is that… seher:- well because earlier in the car, when you were lost in your thoughts & not answering your call continuously, then damini called me, she asked me where were we.. & why weren't you answering your call… I told her that we have reached & heading inside & as far as your cell is concerned it seems that you have forgotten it back in your office.. so thus if you take your mobile down while it is on for tonight, then your friends are ought to question me, asking me why did I tell them you have forgotten your phone & they will question you why you were not answeing their call… & for your information, if they question me I already have a ready answer for it… so I don't mind, you can do whatever you want… you will have to answer a volley of questions from your friends, while I'am sure they would not ask me any questions, once I give them my answer…. Agni:- agar aisi baat hai thi seher, I will give the same answer which you are going to give… & this way I will be saved from the volley of questions… what say…. Seher:- well that is really not possible… kyunke mera jawaab sunne ke baad tho your friends are bound to ask you, thousands of questions… so better luck in your next attempt…. Agni:- & can you tell what answer are you going to give them… I really want to know….. seher with a mischevious grin, a naughty smile, but with a straight face in a very casual tone says:- I will tell your friends that you did not pick up the call, because you were busy making out with me… agni in a loud voice screams:- whatttttttt…. Have you lost your mind…. Has your mind gone bonkers….. seher moves her head in a no & says:- nope, I have not gone bonkers, it is just the answer I'am going to give your friends & then I'am sure they will ask you loads & loads of questions & you can be prepared to answer them…. & by the way if you want to give the same reason which I just told you, fine you can, I do not mind at all, but again the situation is the same where you have to answer loads & loads of questions…. Now I think you are wise enough to choose the right decision….. Saying this seher winks at him… & then she says:- now I'am off from here…. Seher runs the last four steps leading to the hall & before going towards the dining area, seher turns around give agni a huge bhatisi smile, then shows him her toungue just to tease him & then she walks away to the dining area… while here agni is still standing on the stairs & he tells himself:- this girl has surel gone mad & now she is driving me nuts…. What is she thinking… she will tell my friends we were making out…. Ewwww… God…. [agni takes his cell phone & switches it off. & then he says..] it is better the cell remains off, warna kya patah us pagal ko kya soojhe aur jaan-bhoochkarr wahii mujhe call karde dinner ke waqt… patah nahii is ladki ke chakkar mein aur kya kya karna padega mujhe… I really don't understand this woman, she is literally one heck of a mad woman & she is just bent upon driving me insane… & I do not really know what I'am doing too.. God help me…. Ufff….. agni makes his way down the stairs he goes to the dining area… once he goes there he sees prithvi, milind sitting near the dining table, while prachi, damini & seher are not to be seen there…. Agni greets milind, prithvi & then he starts looking around the place for seher… he was actually wondering kii seher kahaan hai…. Prithvi, milind observe it, they know agni's eyes are searching for seher who has come in the dining area just before he came, but they just try to act ignorant of the fact.. milind, prithvi ek doosre ko ishare karr rahe hothe hai to talk to agni…. Soon prithvi, milind start engaging agni in a conversation… they also tell him about their weekend trip plan… they ask agni for places to go, agni thinks that this weekend will be a good get away from seher, so he suggest a place called 'Shoghi' which is about 18 kms before Shimla, Himachal Pradesh… he suggest a resork named Parkwood resort, which is a adventure camp resort in Shoghi & which is nearly 352 kms from Delhi… prithvi, milind like the idea very much…they decide to ask damini, prachi for their final approval & then decide if that is the place…. While prithvi, agni, milind are talking about this, suddenly they hear giggling sounds & all the three look towards the kitchen area, they see that prachi, damini & seher are coming out together laughing about something which seher was telling them… seeing them like this milind, prithvi get a smile on their faces & they get back to what they were doing earlier that is talking, but agni is still looking at the three of the intently, he feels seher's laugh tinkling in his heart…. Looking at seher with prachi & damini a sudden thought crosses his mind… the thought in agni's mind:- kaash yeh humara sach hotha…. I wish if seher would have really been a part of our house one among us… I wish she was the lady of this house, lady of my life, my wife… agni then scolds himself for thinking like that…. He comes out of his thoughts when prachi tells them that seher was telling them a very funny story about how her best friend & her sister…. [seher was talking about maan & muskaan… while agni thinks seher is talking about her sister rewa & her some random best friend….] soon the dinner starts, it is just a normal affair with all the talking going on in the table… they discuss about their weekend get away trip, at this seher tries to keep out & she tells them that she will stay back at home…. Once seher tells this damini, prithvi, prachi & milind start to object it…. While seher does not listen.. she keeps on trying to explain to them that she will be good at home & she really does not want to intrude between the family & be a extra fitting with them, ruining their personal time… but damini, prachi, milind, prithvi do not listen to her….. while finally milind says:- agni tu hii keh na seher se kii woh bhii humare saath chale.. dekh achcha lagega kya agar hum humare ghar pea aye mehmaan ko chodkarr picnic trip par chale jaye…. Bol na agni… agni chokes on his food & then he says:- haan aapko bhii humare saath chalna chahiye seher.. waise bhii issi bahane aap bhii thoda ghoom phirlengi before you go back….. [agni does not want to show it to anyone that, by a get away trip he thought it would only be the five of them, minus the annoying mad woman, who was driving him totally mad…. On the other hand seher knew this would go like this, she wanted agni to ask her ro accompany them, she knew that seeing agni quiet, his friends will ask him to convince her & seher was just waiting for that…. Because as soon as agni finishes what he has to say, seher says….] seher with a innocent face says:- ok, if you all insist I will surely accompany you guys…. Then it is decided that they would leave the day after tomorrow, which is a Friday, they decide that they will leave at around 7 in the evening & cover the 350 kms distance in about 6 hours & then rest through the night & be ready for the sightseeing the next day… & they also decide that they would return back late Sunday night, so that they need not rush & just leave at peace later in the night on Sunday… all this while agni thinks of ways to backout of the situation, he thinks that he can give everyone a reason that he has loads of work to do & tha he cannot accompany them… but agni knew it very well that logically now it would not be possible because, he was the one who was excited about the getaway trip, he was the one who suggested the place, he knew now his friends will surely see through his act, if he gives any lame excuses…. & he also knew that he really needed this getaway trip to cool off his mind from various issues… though seher was coming along, he knew it very well that he will have some sense of peace in the trip, because he can be alone & find his calm & relax…. Soon agni finishes his dinner, while having his dinner from the corner of his eyes, he sees seher fiddling with her cell & calling someone…. While seher is calling, agni looks at her & gives her a knowing smile which says I know you are trying to call me… thanks but no thanks…. No luck… agni once finishing his dinner leaves the table, telling them that he is tired & is going to sleep… soon one by one all clear off the table, now it was only seher, prachi, damini sitting at the table… soon enough even they decide to call it a night… but before prachi, damini leave seher asks them if she can make black coffee for herself… damini, prachi tell her that they would make it for her but seher just ushers them to go & rest while she will make her coffee… so seher goes to the kitchen, she soon figures where is everything & then make coffee for herself…. But seher just does not make one but two cups of coffee, she takes the coffee mug in her hand, smiles to herself & leaves the place… we see that see is very carefully holding the cups of coffee & going up the stairs, she does not go to the second floor, but once again wanders off to the third floor…. We can see that seher is standing in front of agni's room, the door is open, she sees agni is sitting by the edge of his bed… seher clears her throat, this catches agni's attention, he looks at seher & asks:- tum yahaan kya karr rahii ho… now why are you here.. seher walks to the table, places the two mugs of coffee there, she then goes to agni desk takes a paper, writes something on it & then takes the paper & places it underneath one of the coffe mugs… agni is wondering what seher is doing so he again says:- kya main tumse pooch saktha hoon kii tum yahaan mere kamre mein kya karr rahii ho… what ae you really upto… seher now goes near agni & in a very sweet voice says:- main kuch bhii nahii karr rahii hoon.. bas tho bas tumse yeh kehne aayi thi kii you are a good boy tumne meri baat joh maan li aur apna cell phone kar diya… so you just keep it up & shayad I stop annoying you…. Saying this seher pats on agni's cheeks… then she very coolly walks off to the table where the coffee is kept, he picks up a glass of coffee & then she looks at agni & says:- I'am off from here to my room, which is rather the guest room… but anyway I have placed black coffee for your taste on the table you can have it.. it is just my appreciation because you were a goodboy down there… seher itna kehkarr agni ko ek teasing smile dethi hai & she walks off from agni's room & then starts going down the stairs… yahaan agni ko yeh yakeen nahii ho raha hotha hai kii seher called him a goodboy & brought him a cup of coffee & that too the way he likes it…. Agni sitting on the bed stares at the coffee cup, he first thinks he would not drink it… but seeing the cup of coffee he has a urge to drink it & he just cannot stop himself from having it…. So thus he walks to the table, sits on the sofa, picks the coffee glass & also picks the paper placed under it & he reads it aloud:- Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal, I hope atleast now after so many years I have learnt to make a cup of proper coffee… if the coffee is not to your taste, you can come & blast me & I think you know where to find me…😉 Enjoy your coffee…😃 agni after reading the note keeps it back on the table & taste the coffee… as he taste the coffee he mumbles to himself:- nice coffee… agni smiles to himself & he enjoys his coffee…. While having his coffee agni thinks about keeping his dinner date with seher on a personal note, because he finally wants to give seher the divorce papers & set themselves of the relationship which is restricting him from living his life… he thinks that the divorce papers will be seher's gift for the date… & agni also thinks that before giving seher her gift, he will surely make some good memories for himself with seher jinke saath he can live happily forever.. he knows that even if he gives seher the divorce papers she still will be the love of his life, lekin agni uske aur seher ke relation se woh rishthe ka bojh hatana chahtha tha…. Thus agni was planning everything for the date accordingly…. He also decides that the next day he will go & submit the divorce papers in court so that, the court can finalize it soon… agni is lost in all these thoughts & he enjoys his cup of coffee as seher asked him too… soon after chalking out a plan for the next day, agni decides to hit the bed & get some sleep, before the big day begins.. while sleeping agni's heart also keeps anticipating of what was going to happen the next day…. Seher who is in her room, is also feeling the same amount of anticipation in her heart, she finishes off her coffee with in a matter of minutes & then she goes about searching her clothes to decide what exactly she should be wearing for her most awaited date with agni.. seher is super excited & is doing her things with a great amount of zest, qhile sleep seems to be miles & miles apart from her expectant eyes.. seher after a long while of thinking whjat to wear finally picks out on what she wants to wear, she absolutely wants to look perfect for her love….. & once she does this, seher decides to go to sleep, as even she was anticipating what the next days sun & the next days evening were going to bring her… soon seher falls asleep….. dekhthe hii dekhthe agle din ka suraj bhii nikal jaatha hai, seher gets up a bit late at around 8.30 & from the time she has woken up she just cannot stop smiling to herself, she keeps carrying on with her work but all the time there was a smile plastered on her face… it was like kisine seher ke chehre par woh muskaan chaap diya ho.. & the smile just did not seem to go away, with every passing by second, with every passing by minute, the smile was just getting wider… seher gets ready & makes her way downstairs, once she is down she walks to the dining area to meet others as she hears voices from there, once she is there, she is greeted by prachi, milind, prithvi & damini who are having their breakfast they tell seher to join them… seher does as she is told but from time to time she keeps looking towards the entrance of the dining area, the other four on the table know kii seher kii nazrein kisse dhoond rahii hai, but they just keep it… finally seher's restlessness takes over her & she asks:- Mr. Garewal, humare saath breakfast nahii karr rahe hai kya… now prithvi answers:- nahii seher… agni tho aath (8) baje hii kissi kaam se bahar chala gaya… keh raha tha kii he has to meet someone for breakfast… seher just hmms a reply saying ok… & then seher tells everyone that in the evening she will be going to a far off relative's home in Delhi for dinner… prachi, damini ask her about where & how will she go, she tells them that she has given the address to agni & agni would take her there.. & join her for dinner… & when prachi, damini ask seher about who is the relative, seher just brushes off the matter telling them that the person is a very distant cousin, who lives in Delhi along with her family… prithvi, prachi, damini, milind all buy to this story.. they do not suspect anything… she lies to the four of them because seher really did not want them to question agni & her about their intentions & why they were going on a date…. She just did not want to answer their questions, give them the truth atleast as of now for a while…. Seher & everyone finish their breakfast & then they leave to the office… seher accompanies damini & prachi to the office…. Now this is what seher was doing.. now let us see what iks agni upto… we see that agni is sitting at a restaurant having his breakfast… along with him there is another person in a black coat sitting with him.. we hear agni talking:- so Mr. khanna what do you think, can you help me with the proceedings of the case.. the guy in a very professional yet cheerful tone says:- Mr. Garewal you have come to me with a lot of hope & there is no case which Suresh Khanna cannot handle… I can surely help you with this case… but Mr. Garewal I would like to advice you on one aspect, see Mr. Garewal, these divorce papers were made & signed six years back… but they have not been submitted till date, since you have not submitted it till date I'am sure there must be a very strong binding factor to the heart with this, so I would just tell you that do not take any harsh decision, joh kaam aapne che saal mein nahii kiya now do you think doing it is worth it.. lekin ab agar aap tab bhii chahthe hai kii I submit these papers then main kar doonga, lekin mujhe ek signed statement chahiye aapse aur aapki wife se kii aap kuch wajahon ke karan ke papers pehle nahii submit karr paaye aur ab submit karr rahe hai… aur haan main aaj yeh papers submit kar doonga lekin with in a weeks time I need either you or your wife to come in front of the judge & submit the signed paper for the delay in submitting the divorce papers. & yes because you & your wife have been living apart for more than six years now, both the parties seeking the divorce need not be present in the court… the court will grant the divorce even if one party is present… so tell me Mr. Garewal what should I do… agni:- well Mr. Khanna, I would say you get to work…. & submit the divorce papers at the earliest today & you tell me the time when I should get the signed statement I will get it & submit it… Suresh:- ok fine Mr. Garewal, as soon as the court gives time for our case I will inform you.. anyway it was a pleasure meeting you & thanks for the breakfast… Agni shakes hand with suresh & then tells him:- Mr. Khanna I hope the things we have spoken today will remain only between the two of us… Suresh:- yes Mr. Garewal, you have my word on it… you have a good day, I will keep you informed about the proceedings of the case… Agni just nods at him & then suresh leaves from the place…
[This Is The Person Who Is Playing Suresh Khanna:- Suresh Oberoi
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agni also walks out of the restaurant & he walks towards his car & tells himself:- humare beech kii aakhri rishthe kii kadi ko bhii maine aaj thod diya seher… rishtha na sahii lekin tum hamesha se mere dil mein thi, mere dil mein ho aur mere dil mein hamesha basi rahogi…. Agni then sits in the car & zooms out of the place, driving towards the office.. once agni reaches the office, he sees seher, but seher aur agni ke beech koi aisi baat nahii hothi…. Expect for the professional talk they do not talk regarding their date, but the growing anticipation can be clearly seen in both their eyes… agni also drafts the letter Suresh has asked him to get… agni thinks that he will tell seher to sign it after their dinner & then tell her that now she is assured of being free from him…. While working seher also tells agni that he really need not give any explanations to his friends about where they are going, she informs him about the lie which she has told his friends…. Though agni does not like it one bit that seher has lied to his friends, but he knows that the lie seher has told was the best way out.. soon it is 4 in the evening, seher asks agni to drop her home as she has to get ready to go on a date… agni knows that there is no use to argue with seher so he just decides to drop seher home & then come back & do some productive work at office in peace & quiet… agni then drops seher home, seher walks away very sweetly not troubling agni even once when they reach home… agni is left wondering that the previous day she had so much of natak but today she seems to have mellowed down… whatever it was, it was good riddance for agni.. seher goes into the Utpal villa, while agni who had decided to go back to the office is unable to do so.. so he just walks inside the house & sits in the living room thinking of way to spend his time till 7… here in seher's room seher starts getting ready, because she wants to look her best on the date.. [so we will just leave seher alone & see what agni is upto…] agni is looking at the clock for every 15 minutes & waiting for the time to pass quickly… he wants the date time also to come & go away as quickly as possible… soon the time is 6.15 in the evening… agni decides that it is time for him to go & get ready… soon agni come down in half an hour… he is looking at his best.. he is wearing a jet black dinner jacket, with a black shirt & a black formal pants.. he has gelled his hair & his black boots are literally shimmering because of the polish.. the jacket had a small white half triangle on one side… he was looking very nice…. Yes it was after a long time that he put even so much time in getting ready, but he just wanted to match upto his date's expectations… agni comes down & he is waiting in the hall, he keeps checking his watch for every two minutes wondering why seher is not yet there… the clock strikes 7, agni looks at the time, he sighs that seher is still not there & then he goes towards the stairs to see why is seher taking so long…. As agni is about to go up, he stops dead in his tracks because in front of him he feels as if a angel is descending the flight of stairs… seher has not yet seen agni…. She is wearing beautiful white & black netted saree with gorgeous pattern of design on it… she is just adjusting the pallu of the saree properly on her hand & is getting down the stairs… her neck was bare of any jewellery, the only jwellery she was wearing a pair of delicate diamond earnings, adorning her ears.. she had left her her open & put it in the front on the either side & she had curled her hairs towards the end… agni was just not able to move his eyes away from the beauty who was in front of soon… soon enough seher comes down the stairs & bumps straight into agni's chest, agni holds seher's waist, while both feel a unknown current passing their bodies, seher looks up at agni, agni leaves seher's waist, he runs a hand on his head & in a very low tone says:- careful seher…. Seher just hummes a reply… then agni in a very casual tone says:- shall we leave…. Seher nods her head in a eyes & then to agni's surprise she comes & hooks her arm with agni… agni does not voice his surprise, he just did not want to spoil the moment….. soon agni, seher reach agni's car, agni behaving like the perfect gentleman on a date opens the door for seher to sit.. & then agni drives to their date destination…. Though both agni, seher were quiet all through but they both seemed to enjoy the silence…. The silence in the air was cooling their nerves to a great extent….
[this is what agni is wearing…
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[this is what seher is wearing…
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Soon enough after a drive of about one hour, we see that agni is driving into the huge gates, of a place which looks like a farmhouse…. Seher is busy observing the greenery surrounding the place…. By that time again agni opens the door for seher to get out … seher gets a huge smile on her face seeing the place…. She has a bhatisi smile on her face while she is exploring the place… agni looks at seher… & he goes & stands by seher who was standing close to the swimming pool…. Seher looks at agni & says:- this place is so beautiful…. Agni smiles & says:- yes I know it is beautiful…. This place is located on the highway about 70 kms away from Delhi……. This is my farmhouse…. I had purchased it because as you said I felt it was beautiful… & I have brought you here because I knew you would like it here… because I'am very well aware of the fact how much you like places close to the nature…. Now if you are done admiring the outside beauty shall we go in…. seher:- offcourse… sure let's go…. Seher, agni walk inside near the door, agni then opens the door wide & tells seher:- after you… seher smiles at agni & then walks inside… once she is inside she is over whelmed with the lush & intricate beauty of the interiors… the farmhouse inside had a huge hall with chairs at either ends complimenting each other…. In between there was a coffee table, while when you walk inside there was the small dining area, with work done in white, light golden & other sober colors…. Leading from the dining area was the small kitchen, which was beautiful done in wooden work & it had a small conuter…. It had a table with casters on it which was very elegantly convered…. On the other side of the main hall there was a bar area done with teak wood, with black interiors covering it… the place was also perfect for a dance…. The place also had a small small & a coffee table…. Seher was exploring all of this by her own, while agni was walking behind her & taking note of the expressionswhich were forming on seher's face…. He was feeling happy that seher was happy being there… he just wants to live this day to the fullest which was the last day for him with seher being in a relationship, though in his heart but it still mattered a lot to him…… & he surely wants to have some happy memories before asking seher to sign the paper to be submitted in the court… so agni was indeed happy…. Soon enough seher makes her way on the wooden stairs, she starts going up towards the place where there was only one room located….. the other rooms were a little away from this one particular room…… [actually this farmhouse, was a place for agni to relax… it just had one bedroom…. Generally it was only agni who used to come there alone in search of his solitude, his friends rarely accompanied him here..] seher walks into the bedroom & she is awestuck with the surroundings, the room had beautiful lighting… it had elegant sofa, a huge bed in between & in front of the bed there was a huge lcd screen placed & there was a table which had lamps emitting lights…. Agni who was behind seher sees her & says:- so I presume that you like the place…. Seher:- I like the place, you really got to be kidding, I love it, it is just so beautiful out here…. When I saw your house I had thought nothing could be more beautiful than that, but this is just breathtaking… & look at this view here behind the curtain.. it's totally amazing…. Wowwww Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal, I did not know you had such exquisite, sophisticated, polished style & choice... I must say, I'am really impressed…. Agni bows his head down & says:- thank you seher, I'am honoured… but seher can you please stop calling me by my full name…. you see we have come out for a date & it does not seem good if you keep referring to me as Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal, Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal, this does seem fine…. Seher looks back at agni & says:- well I can't help it because you have told me i should not be calling you vaashu, so I'am forced to call you by your full name, Mr. Agni Vashist Garewal… agni:- but you can call me agni right…. Seher:- yes I can, but I don't want too… calling you agni is not my style… agni sighs & says:- ok fine, you can call me vaashu but only for tonight… is that ok…. Seher smiles & says:- I'am ok with it…. Agni:- now shall we do that what we have come here for… seher looks at agni with a expression like what then she looks at agni & then looks at the bed… agni immediately understands what is going on in seher's head so he clarifies…. Agni:- I meant can we go & have our dinner.. because after all we have come here for a dinner date right…. Seher gives agni a embarrassed smile for the way her thoughts have gone, she is further more embarrassed that agni understood what she was thinking… seher in a very meek voice says:- haan chalo… waise bhii mere pait mein choohe daudne lage hai…. Isse pehle ki yeh choohe haathi ho jaaye humein dinner karr lena chahiye…. Seher cracks this joke just to get out of her embarrassing situation… agni chuckles a little bit & says:- theek hai chalo…. Agni then leads seher down the stairs, he then directs seher towards the dining area… he pulls out a chair for seher, asks her to be seated & he would arrive back in dew minutes with their dinner…. Before going, agni removes his jacket & places it behind the chair where he was going to sit…. Soon agni disappear inside the kitchen, while seher keeps waiting for agni to come out.. soon enough agni come out wearing a chef's hat… he is pushing the food wooden trolley to the dining area, seher starts to get up in order to help agni, but agni just tells seher to stay put where ever she is sitting… agni comes near seher with the food… & then he says:- madam aap bhii kya yaad rakhengi, banda aapki kidmath main haazir hai… i present you with your lavish dinner for tonight for our dinner date.... agni then takes a glass keeps it on the table, this is your favorite glass of mango juice… & then you have your favorite chatpata panipuri, then you can have this naan with your favorite spicy Punjabi kofta & palak paneer.. then you have this chilli garlic soft noodles with the wet Manchurian sauce & before I forget here is your favorite babycorn cheese dumplings for starters… & finally for desert I have something for you but I will get that later once we finish dinner… while agni is saying all this he places the dishes one by one on the table… once he is done with that he rubs his hands together, takes his seat adjacent to seher & then says:- let's eat… while seher is looking at agni in awe… seeing seher staring at him agni says:- seher common khaana khaate hai, warna yeh sab thanda pad jaayega.. waise agar tum yeh soch rahii ho kii yeh sab maine banaya hai tho let me tell you maine yahaan kuch bhii nahii banaya hai… yeh sab tho maine Delhi ke best restaurant se mangwaya hai… seher smiles & slowly starts eating & says:- waise how did you collect all the food… agni:- well maine un restaurant waalon ko keh diya tha kii woh khaana yahaan 7.30 thak deliver kar de.. aur phir maine yahaan ke watchman se keh diya tha kii jab khaana aajaye tho khaane ko achche se cover karke yahaan kitchen mein rakh de… waise bhii main jaantha tha kii hum log yahaan 8 thak tho pohanch hii jaathe tho maine watchman se kaha kii woh 7.55 ko yahaan se katle… you see main nahii chahtha tha kii koi humein yahaan dekhe aur baatein banaye…. Bas… ab tumhe aur kuch jaanna hai… seher shakes her head in a no & says:- waise vaashu, tum kaisi, kaisi baasha use karthe ho, katle & all haan…. Tum India aake patah nahii kuch aur seekhe ho ya nahii lekin baasha achcha seekhe ho… katle…. Seher keeps giving at that, while agni gives seher a sheepish grin…. They continue to eat their food.. dono mein se koi bhii kuch nahii keh raha hotha hai… they were just having the food with a sense of happiness surrounding the air.. there was a sense of tranquility which was present between them… sometimes seher, agni used to look at each other, other times one would look at the other while the other was eating… aise hii chori, chori, nazrein milana, nazrein churana ho raha hotha hai un dono ke beech… both have a huge smile which is plastered on their faces… the glow in their eyes is clearly visible.. kabhi agni serves seher's plate with the food, kabhi seher does the same with agni… if anyone would see the two of them, unke dimaak mein bas ek hii khayaal aayega kii agni, seher are a perfect couple, who are made for each other… & who are in so much love… unke aankhon kii chamak unke dil ke haal ko bayaan karr rahii thi…. Sometimes while reaching out for a dish on the table, their fingers brush over with eachother, while agni used to pull back his hand with embarrassment, seher used to take her hand back with a coy smile erupting on her face…. Soon enough agni, seher finish the dinner agni tells seher, he will get their desert… agni is about to get up, when seher stops him & in a very delicate motion she uses her fingers & rubs the curry which was there at the corner of agni's mouth, agni feels like a volley of current is gushing through him, he has a look of desire in his eyes, while seher moves her hand away & in a low tone whispers:- woh tumhare mooh ke pass curry reh gayi thi… agni takes a deep breath, stifles his feelings deep inside his throat & says:- thank you… soon agni mumbles he will get the desert & he walks away from the table to the kitchen, where there was a small size fridge placed by one end of the corner… agni then comes back with two plates of the desert with a cup of extra chocolate sauce, he places it before seher & says:- madam here is your desert for the evening… hot chocolate brownie, with vanilla ice cream & extra chocolate sauce… seher gets a huge smile on her face seeing her desert & she says:- thanks vaashu… agni takes his seat back on the chair & says:- yeh thank you, whank you tum apne pass hii rakho.. & now let us just attack our desert, dekho agar tum nahii khaaogi tho main tumhara bhii khaa loonga, this really looks so delicious….. seher makes a face at agni & says:- no way I'am not going to share my desert with you…. You enjoy your's I will enjoy mine… & soon agni, seher start digging into their respective deserts…. & relishing it with each spoon they were having.. beech beech mein while having the desert agni, seher ke beech chedkhaani bhii khoob chal rahii hothi hai… kabhi agni tries to take a bite from seher's deserts, kabhi seher tries to take a bite from agni's deserts…. Everything was in fun & a happy mood…

Song In The Background:- [For Agni Seher During The Dinner & Desert Time…. Imagine As If This Song Is Playing In The Background All Through The Dinner & The Desert Time…]

"Hmmm ummmmmm hmmmmm….
Hmmm ummmmmm hmmmmm….
La ra la lee….
Kitne dafe dil ne kaha….
Dil ki suni kitne dafe….
Vaise to teri na mein bhi…
Mene dhondh le apni khushi…
Tu jo gar haan kahe to baat hogi aur hi…
Vase to teri na mein bhi…
Mene dhondh le apni khushi…
Tu jo gar haan kahe to baat hogi aur hi…
Dil hi rakhe ko kabhi….
Upper upper se sahi….
Keh dena haan….
Keh dena haan yun hi….
Kitne dafe dil ne kaha….
Dil ki suni kitne dafe….
Kitne dafe hairan hua….
Mein yeh socha ke…
Uth ti hai ibadat ki khusbunien…
Kyun mere ishq se….
Jaise hi mere honth yeh..
Choo le te hain tere naam ko…
Lage ki sajda kiya….
Keh ke tujhe sabad bol dun….
Yeh khudai chor ke….
Phir aaja tu zameen pe….
Aur ja na kahi….
Tu saath reh ja mere….
Kitne dafe dil ne kaha….
Dil ki suni kitne dafe….
La la la la la la...
Pa pa para pa pa pa…
Kitne dafe mujhko laga…
Tere saath udte hue…
Aasmani dukano se dhundhke….
Pighla du mein chaand yeh…
Tumhare in kaano mein….
Phena bhi du bonndein bana….
Phir yeh na soch lun…
Samjhegi ki tu…..
Jo mein na keh saaka…
Per darta hoon abhi….
Na yeh tu pooche kabhi…
Kyun laye ho yeh…
Kyun laye ho yeh yun hi….
Kitne dafe mujhko laga…
Tere saath udte hue....."

[Courtesy Movie: Tanu Weds Manu]

(Continued In The Below Post)
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 14 years ago
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(Continued From The Above Post)

Soon the dinner is done…. This time when agni starts to clear off the dishes, sehers offers to help him & again agni refuses… lekin is barr seher uski ek bhii nahii sunnthi… she just asks agni to keep quiet & to let her help…aur is barr agni ke pass doosra au koi chaara bhii nahii hotha, he just nods his head giving permission to help him… soon enough agni, seher kaam mein jhut jaathe hai…. They share the work & keep doing everything… though agni tries in all means to gives seher lesser amount of work, lekin seher tho agni kii baat kii nahii sunn rahii thi, joh kaam agni karr raha tha woh kaam bhi seher agni ke haath se cheenke karr rahii hothi hai… soon with both of them working they both finish off the work of clearing off the dishes, cleaning the table & once again everything is kept in the tip top condition it was earlier in… after agni, seher finish their work…. They both come & stand by the table, they are looking at each other rather awkwardly, giving each other half smiles… to break the ice between them seher asks:- care for a cup of coffee… agni nods his head & says:- ok… I'am sure kitchen mein atleast coffe ke ingredients tho honge hii, you just check, agar nahii mile tho mujhe batana…. I will be in the bar area, wahaan par mera ek guitar rakha hua hai, dekhtha hoon chal raha hai ya nahi… seher gives agni a smile & says ok… agni walks away from the dining area & then seher walks back into the kitchen… she soon finds ingredients for the coffee & start preparing it… once the coffee is done seher takes the coffee mugs & walks towards the bar area… she enters the bar area, smiles at agni, places the coffee on the table & looks at agni who is sitting on the bar stool & who is trying to tune his guitar… agni looks at seher & says:- ohhh… the coffee is here…. Good… agni is about to place the guitar near the side, when seher says:- vaashu, tumhe nahii lagtha coffee ka mazaa aur bhi dugna ho jaatha agar tum ek gaana hojaye tho….. dekho gitar bhii hai, singer bhii hai tum, ek bhara maholtho nahii main hoon tum mere liye gaa sakthe ho… tho kya tum mujhe ek gaana sunaoge…. Agni looks at seher nods his head in yes, he starts striking the chords of the guitar… he looks & seher & starts singing…

The Song:-

"Dil ibadat kar raha hai…
Dhadkanen meri sunn..
Tujhko main kar loon haasil….
Lagi hai yahi dhun….
[agni places the guitar near the bar area, he starts walking towards seher, who is sitting on the sofa & watching him with keen interest…. Agni even for once does not remove his eyes away from seher….]
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun….
Kuch haseen pal main chun….
[agni goes to seher, places his hand before, seher ishare se usse poochthi hai kii what does he want, agni seher ko ishara kartha hai kii he wants to dance…. Seher smiles at him & places her hand in agni's palm.. agni grips the hand tightly & pulls seher up into his strong arms….]
Tujhko main kar loon haasil….
Lagi hai yahi dhun…
[agni walks with seher to the center & starts dancing with her… along with that he continues singing…. With each word he is singing the depth of his emotions could be understood to a great extent…. Even seher's eyes were revealing the same emotions…]
Oh seyo leyo sama leyo….
Seyo leyo aa…
Oh seyo leyo sama leyo….
Seyo leyo aa…
[agni twirls & turns seher, in & out of his arms continuously… agni is dancing at a quick pace, kinda of showing his anger with his fate in the dance… seher takes it in the stride & continues dancing with agni….]
Dil ibadat kar raha hai…..
Dhadkanen meri sunn….
Tujhko main kar loon haasil….
Lagi hai yahi dhun….
[agni twirls seher into his arms this time at a very greater speed, seher bangs into his chest wih a great force…. The force makes both of them jerk a little bit, soon enough agni, seher look at each another, agni, seher feel a unknown pull towards one another.]
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun…
Kuch haseen pal main chun…
Tujhko main kar loon haasil….
Lagi hai yahi dhun…
[agni tightens his hold on seher's waist, he pulls her rather too close to himself, he eyes show the desire he has in his heart for seher & seher's eyes have the same desire she has for agni… their eyes clearly show how much they crave for each others love…. Agni slowly bends his head toseher's neck, & he starts placing his lips very lightly across her neck.. he places wet kisses on seher's neck, in a very delicate motion..]
Jo bhi jitne pal jeeyun…
Unhe tere sang jeeyun…
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera….
Usse tere sang jeeyun…
[seher shudders with each kiss agni places on her neck…. Both agni, seher feel the shivers of their proximity & closeness in each blood carrying vein of their body….. the proximity was like tremors rushing through both their bodies….]
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon…
Unhe tere sang bahroon….
Chaahe jo ho raasta…
Usse tere sang chaloon….
Dil ibadat kar raha hai…
Dhadkanen meri sunn…
Tujhko main kar loon haasil…
Lagi hai yahi dhun….
[agni is a very careful way moves seher's saree away from her shoulder & starts exploring the new area, with the way of his wet kisses….. while kissing seher in a urge to belong to seher, he very lightly bites on seher's shoulder.. seher winches at this…..]
Mujhko de tu mit jaane….
Ab khud se de mil jaane….
Kyun hai yeh itna faasla….
[agni looks at seher's face & realizes that he has given seher pain, soon he starts licking the area where he just had given seher a love bite…. He starts caressing first with his toungue then with his kisses….]
Lamhe yeh phir na aane….
Inko tu na de jaane…..
Tu mujhpe khud ko de luta….
Tujhe tujhse tod loon….
Kahin khud se jod loon…
Mere jismojaan pe aa….
Teri khushboo odh loon…
[agni slowly takes seher to the small couch which is present there… he makes seher sit in the sofa & leans on her & this time seher's saree is hanging down…. Seher is in no sense to stop agni, nor agni is in any sense to stop himself… they both are just drowned in their undeniable passion & love which they have for each other…]
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon…
Unhe tere sang bharoon….
Chaahe jo ho raasta….
Use tere sang chaloon….
Dil ibadat kar raha hai….
Dhadkanen meri sun..
Tujhko main kar loon haasil….
Lagi hai yahi dhun….
[agni hand, lips start exploring different areas & every single time agni touches seher, seher squirms with the pleasure agni is giving her… & agni shudders every time he touches seher…. He slowly starts playing with seher belly-button… he continues teasing seher, with his hands, toungue & lips….]
Baahon mein de bas jaane….
Seene mein de chup jaane….
Tujh bhin main jaaoon toh kahaan…..
Tujhse hai mujhko paane….
Yaadon ke woh nazraane….
Ik jinpe hak ho bas mera…
[seher unable to take the tickling sensation, forcibly pulls agni up & hugs agni rather too tightly…. Even agni is happy to be lost in seher's arms, while he was in his arms, his hands keep doing the work of opening the single string will was holding seher's blouse… while his mouth give seher's ears the pleasure of kisses & love bites…..]
Teri yaadein mein rahoon….
Tere khwaabon mein jagoon….
Mujhe dhoonde jab koi….
Teri aankhon mein miloon….
[agni is just about to open the dori, when once he looks at seher seeking her permission, seher just nods her head in a eyes, she then archs her back, giving agni more access to her skin & silently giving agni the permission to go on complete what he started…]
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon…
Unhe tere sang bharoon….
Chaahe jo ho raasta…
Usse tere sang chaloon…
[agni looks at seher who has closed her eyes, he very gently places his forehead against seher's forehead & in a places a very feather type light kiss on seher's forehead…. Both agni, seher sigh, in pleasure…]
Dil ibadat kar raha hai….
Dhadkanen meri sunn….
Tujhko main kar loon haasil…..
Lagi hai yahi dhun.."

[Courtesy Movie: Tum Mile]

[agni gets up from the couch, he looks at seher who has opened her eyes & was looking at him with expectant eyes…. Agni does not keep seher waiting for more than few seconds, in one perfect movement, agni picks seher in his arms & starts walking with seher out of the bar area & then he climbs the flight of stairs, reaches the room… once he takes seher in his arms to the room, he kicks the door with his leg… all the while seher, agni just do not look away from each other… finally agni places seher very gently on the bed & he positions himself above seher… & soon lost in each others eyes, lost in their love, lost in their passion they get lost in a nightly rendezvous filled only & only with the extravaganza of pure love & desire which they have for each other.. in no time the two souls become one once again…. & both don't care for anything but the love for each other at that moment… soon enough we see the rooms light dim, the curtains flying high & down in the bar area we can see two mugs of untouched coffee, which are placed next to each other…… back in the room we see agni, seher covered in one sheet of blanket & sehers head lying on agni's chest, while agni has a tight hold around her…. Both are having a serenr calm smile on their faces….. [now let us just give them some privacy & move away from there….. hehehehe….. 😉]

The sun rises showing the world that a new day has come…. We see agni, seher are still wrapped in eachothers arms.. & both are not awake till now… after a while agni stirs in his sleep, once he gets up he feels weight on his chest & that is when agni looks at his chest & he sees seher wrapped in his arms…. Agni par tho bijliyaan girthi hai, he is unable to understand anything… he in a very swift movement makes seher sleep on the pillow, he takes his clothes, walks to the washroom & comes out after washing his face & wearing his pants… he stands near the window, looking out in the empty space, looking at the emptiness & mess he has landed himself into… from time to time he looks back at seher & then looks outside…. He has a cigarette in his hand, he keeps smoking & has a worried expression on his face…. After a while of being lost in his thoughts, we see that seher has woken up & she looks agni's direction & gets a smile on his face, a coy smile.. seher gets up from the bed, she wraps the blanket around herself, & then she walks behind agni, slowly hugs agni from behind & puts her hand on agni's bare chest… she has a smile on her face, she says in a dreamy tone:- good morning….. I want to tell you something…. Agni jerks away from seher, he takes the puff of the cigarette, pushes seher away & says:- it was a mistake…… last night was a mistake….. seher is left speechless with agni's confession.. she is left stunned… while here agni is not able to understand the kind off mess he has landed in… now the screen is divided into two, on one side we see seher's stunned shattered face while on their other side we see agni's face filled with tons & tons of worry……

So well guys on this note ends the 12th part of 'HumraahI'… …….. I hope all of you liked the part… please do tell me what you think of the part… please do write in your comments… even criticism is welcome…. & members who are unable to comment just like the post, that much will do……. Thank you very much..

Preview For The Next Part:- A Big Showdown Between Agni & Seher…. Some New Entries.. Jealousy….The Getaway Weekend Trip…. Damini, Prachi Questioning Seher If Agni Seher Have Had A Past…

[These Are The Images Of Agni's Farmhouse..
The Farmhouse View:



The Entrance:


The Main Hall Area:


The Dining Area:


The Wooden Trolley Agni Bought The Food In:


The Bar Area:


The Bedroom:
]

Please send in your comments soon..Waiting for them eagerly.. Thank you all ver much once again.. I have written about 19, 250 words for this part, I hope it was worth it….. do comment soon….

Take Care…
Byeee…..

Love
Surya….😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Note: Guys I Have Posted The 12th Part Of 'HumraahI' In Two Different Posts, One After The Other, Because IF Was Not Allowing Me To Post The Whole Part In One, As The Size Of Part Was Huge.....So Do Check Both The Posts...Thank You....😊
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooohhh..!! wooohh..!! wat a long part..!! its was soo awesum reading it..!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

n yeaah kyaa just 8 parts more n den bye bye to dis ff..!!😕😲😲 but app new FF apni jaldi start karoge na..pakkaa??

Update soon di :)
Edited by Inu-13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats for 100 page dear....
Great log and awesome , superb part thank you for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi 😊
so this time u have up the fic on time and thank u for that😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
ok now without much adu lets talk about the up😊😉
so seher tells agni to take her for a dinner date😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
agni who had mixed feeling in his heart was finding really hard to face and take this invitation
he was going through a tough situation 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭while seher had a great expectation from this dinner date 😊😊😊😳😳EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
she wanted to make this date a perfect one by removing all the misunderstanding all the worries from agani's heart 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
so they finally goes to their much awaited dinner dateEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
agni took sher to his farmhouse which really beautifully decorated 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
seher was really surprised and pleased with the atmosphere there😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
agni had arranged and ordered all the fav food of seher from a restuarent EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
he made the date perfect 😉😉EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed😊
the song was really perfect for the duoEmbarrassed
now with the excentry of the situation and atmosphere they finally became one removing all the worries and all the bitterness from their heart and mind EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
it was really a perfect date 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
but yaar the next morning why agni is regretting for his action 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
he should have thought about sher's feeling😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
anyways plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update.. luved the pics.. omg agni calling it a mistake.. cant wait for seher's reaction... liked the dinner date...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
loved it
cant w8 for the next part..
contd soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblowing part
i really liked the way u showed how agni and seher were in their own little world once they went on their date.The date was beautifully potrayed each moment between agni and seher was amazingly described.The songs used within the part were really good they really went with the scenes.I hope seher is able to overcome the shock when agni tells her about the divorce papers,even though agni enjoyed all his moments with seher i feel he only said to her that everything was a mistake because he feels that she doesnt love him.The starting of the part was intresting i liked the way u showed agni and seher lost in their thoughts.The scene were seher irratates agni by asking him to open the door 4 her and biting his ear was really good.I liked the reaction of prachi,milind,prithvi, and damani after seeing agni and seher together.i hope seher shares her past with the four of them so that they can help her get agni back.cant wait 2 read da next part.
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Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 14 years ago

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