HumraahI-Rajeev-Aamna FF-Triple Update-Page-147!! - Page 71

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

Amazing part

I really liked the way u potrayed seher and agni's emotions,even though agni wants to stay away from seher he cant make him self to go away from her.Agni cant forget his past memories so easily i hope seher is able to get agni to open up to her and release his pain.Seher's approach towards agni is really good the way she irratates him is really intresting.The scene were agni decides to take the stairs in order to avoid seher was really good and the scene were he sees seher sleeping was amazingly described.

Agni easily noticed the lipstick mark on the picture i hope he realises soon how much seher loves him and the way he shows his concern towards seher was amazingly potrayed.

I really liked the songs that u added in the part they really went well with the scenes.I enjoyed the whole convo between seher and agni regarding their date.cant wait 4 their special date and i hope seher and agni are able to spend some nice moments together.

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Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

kya part tha yaar...awesome.... no thankooo jiii...

agni ka charac baht hi alag hai yaar...!!!par tune agni aur seher ke soch bade hi achhe se likha hai...!!! matlab...dono ki soch se hi pata chal raha hai ke ke voh kaise hain... yaar sahii hai agni, seher kuch alag characters hii hai..item piece hai dono bhi....but i'am glad you could understand them well with my explanation...😊

agni ka voh mazak udanewala scene bhi baht achha tha...!!! kabhi kabhi aise scene se us inshan ki soch bhi bahar aa jati hai...!!! agni ka yeh scene sach me baht achha tha...!!! jitna alag voh khud hai...us ka mazak udane ka andaz bhi alag hi tha.. sach keh rahii hai tu... woh kudh ka mazaak udaa raha tha, it showed what he felt...well jab baat humare hero kii aathi hai tho usse tho alag hona hii hai na...😉😉😉

aur seher...ne use kya kya naam se nawaza hai yaar...!!! vaise seher ki bhi galati nahi thi...agni kuch jyada hi karr raha tha toh seher kab tak chup rahti...ha ha ha... haan i know..seher bhii after all uski better/bitter half hai tho eent ka jawaab tho pathar se dena lazmi hai na uske liye..😆😆😆

aur voh scene toh awesome-blwsome tha...jab agni aata hai n seher ko sote hue dekhta hai...aur voh lipstic ka scene bhi...!!! aur seher ke uthne ke baad agni ka reaction...mast tha ek dam...maza aa gaya...yeh is pure ud ka best scene tha... i'am glad you likedf the scenes & my representation of the scenes....even i love that bit of the scenes....😳😳😳

ab jaldi se ud karr...!!! aisa nahi ke phir se tujhe ek ud ke liye 4 mahine lag jaye... nahii, is barr 4 mahine nahii lagenge..pukka...lekin kya patah, 3, ya phir 2, ya ek mahina lag jaye....hehe...just kidding....😆😆😆 will surely try & update soon..😊

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

It was a wow!!! 👏👏 Aur aise hi wowest parts ke liye hum w8 karte hai Dii....samjha karo!! 😳😉 shukriya sumi yaar....dekho main itna wait karathi hoon aap sabko but still you guys are so sweet.....😳😳😳

Anyways....coming to the beginning....Agni n Seher's thoughts were very well depicted. Mujhe Agni ka uss quote ka mazak urana achha laga...😆 and his thoughts actually help me a lot in understanding and justifying his character....😉 thoda tedha hai na.....😆 so usse samajhne me ye thoughts bade helpful hote hai. i'am glad you understood what i was trying to show with the help of their self thoughts....mujhe bhii achcha laga when agni makes fun of that quote..but tumhe nahii lagtha kii he is right in a way... haan yeh agni thoda nahii balki kuch hadh se zyada hii redha hai...aur ab seher usse seedha karke hii chodegi..hehehe....😆😆😆

And here Seher's thoughts were also nice....the way she kept saying Mr. Arrogant Mr. Bhav Khau...😆😆😆......that was really sweet!! hehehe....even i like the names seher has kept for agni..& he deserves it..itna attitude joh dikhatha hai....😆😆😆

Next Agni ka stair lene wala idea achha hai....smart guy!! 😆😉 But cabin me aake dekha Seher was asleep. That was a very sweet scene....😳😳 and frame pe lipstick notice karna....that was gud!! 😃 I am glad he is observing enough....yaha tak ki Seher ki restlessness ko bhi dekha....😃😳
Agni is very smart even i agree with you....mujhe bhii woh cabin mein agni, seher ke scenes mast lage when i actually wrote them....arre hum baat agni vashist garewal kii karr rahe hai, humare hero kii karr rahe hai, aisa ho saktha hai bhala kii hero kii nazron se heroine kii restlessness chup sake....hahaha.....😉😉😉

Seher ke uthne ke baad Agni ka sarcastic tone....was fun!! 😆 And the convo that followed to the 'date' was awesum!! Seher is correctly Mrs. Seher Agni Vashisht Garewal....😉😳😳 haan seher is agni wife...woh apni baat ko achche se nikalwaana jaanthi thi....it's good thing... agni will be under her control...😆😆😆

Waise I love the song 'Adha Ishq'....thanks for including that...😆😳...and now of course....w8ing for the 'date' part.....and new entries!! Hmm....we have to watch out for that!! 😉 even i love the song aadha hai ishq & i love the movie BBB too...the next part will surely have the date....😃

Hope u can continue soon dii...and thanks for the lovely part!! 😳 thanku once again.....i will surely continue soon..😊

Originally posted by: Inu-13

Phewww Finalllyyy apne UD kiyaa..!! 😊 and yu knw wat dii.. iss part ko padhne ke liye mereko peechle part ka thoda ja go thru karna padha😆😆😆hehehe..haan re finally update kar hii diya..& to tell you the truth, even i had to go through the previous parts to understand what to write in the 11th part....😆😆😆

wooohhhh this part toh was full of agni n seher😳😳 juss loved it too the coree..!! the way yu expressed agni's feelings n state he's going thru was just mindblowing..!!👏👏👏 main jaan bhoochkar yeh par totally agni, seher ko dedicate kiya... waise bhi itne waqt baad update karring, aur agar ismein bhi little doses of agni seher dethi tho mere readers mereko marrthe....😆😆😆 waise no thankooo....🤗

and i always wonder abt ur song selection.!! dey are like "bang on " just too perefct for the situation n feels like dey are written for ur ff only.!!😳😉 hehehe....well while selecting the songs i do a lot of thinking.... hear to a lot of songs then decide on which suits perfectly & use it..😊

Just superb part dii..!! i knw apko likhne mein jitna time lga usse kum time hume padhne mein lagta hai..!!😆😆 hehehe...well i enjoy writing for my readers..my readers have given me so much love, so bas by giving long updates it's my way of thanking them..😃

and yeaaah thankoooooooooo 🤗🤗 for the special PM.!!😉 yu gave me abt dis UD hehe n i won't say update soon as i knw wen u Ud nxt part so i wil see pleej time pe UD dena.!!😆 hehe...is barr bhi when i update i will give you that special pm...& update thodu sa late hogaya from the time i promised you, but remember this week still has a day to do...😉😉😉

Veryy awesumly full of emotions wala part.!!👏👏 no thankuuu sweetyyy......🤗

Originally posted by: monikaseth

great precap

Originally posted by: swetha10

scary precap.. cant wait for the update.. continue soon

Originally posted by: golu_1677

pls update soon .... Just cant wait

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi the precap is sounds nice

waiting to see the actual story

plz cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by: Inu-13

:( :( :( :( new week started n only precap.!! :(

gud one n too short one.. n its enough to create more excitement for part n ab toh part dedo hume..!!

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

great precap suryaa!!👏....continuee soon!👏