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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#731

congrats for 100 pages dear.................
correct the part number dear..........its 12 not 11......................
glad that u warned before itself not to hate Agni coz am so mad at him for saying those at the last.....................and he SMOKES?????????? ewwwwwwwww................how could he?????????? this is for both...............feel sorry for Seher..................if only she could tell everything that has conspired....................wonder what the showdown u mean will be.................and jealousy?????????? want Agni to be jealous and not the other way round......................knock some sense into him dear...............all the scenes were nice.................cont soon dear................

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#732

Update was very good.

Both Seher and Agni are lost in their thoughts. Seher is trying to irritate Agni by asking him to open the car door for him. Where as Prithvi, Milind, Prachi and damini are shocked to see Adil and Seher so close. They want Adil and Seher to spend more time with each other and so they paln the weekend trip. Adil had no choice but to invite seher even though he wanted to spend some time alone.

Seher wants to make their date special...she wants to give Adil all her love and take away all his pains. While Adil plans to give Seher their divorce papers. Hope that Seher will bear this shock and still stick to her plan to win back Adil's love.

their date was indeed very romantic. Adil made sure that sab kuch Seher ki pasand ka ho.

Both of them give into their desires and share each others love. Par adil ne subah hote hi sab kharab kar diya. When will he understand that this is what Seher wants.

waiting eagerly for the next part...continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#733

Comment From A Friend....😊

hii... first of all as u say i m reallly very very sorry...i couldnt comment on earlier part...so many thins happenin in life...didnt get time 2 comment....
so.. hw r u?... i read the part 2 day... well wat do i tell u.. it is awesome... u knw how 2 make twist nd turns in a story at the right time... fantastic......
last part of part 12 was good i will say... because frm agni's point of view that was bound 2 happen... he doesnt knw nythin...i really loved the two parts...
waitin for the nxt part...eagerly...plzzz.. nw dont take this looooooong breaks....
tc
bye

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#734

nice ff

just came across it

do pm me th next time u update

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#735

firstly 😛😛......congrats on completing 100 pages of this FF 🥳 🥳hope u have many moe to go 😃😃 ........... & we see new thread for this FF soon 😃😃😃

secondly thanx 4 long part 😳😳.............. how long it was .... IF proved it by not letting u post it in single post 😆😆😆😆

beginning of part was gud 👏👏👏............. sehar's way of bringing out from agni from his thots was nice 😉😉😉............ poor guy 😆 😆..... doesn't know what he has got into 😆 😆......... & sehar is quite smart & intelligent in blackmailing 😆😆😆.....she knows. how to make agni do what she wants him to do 😆😆😆...........

awww agni's frnds hope their wish turns true sooner 😛😛😛.......... must say agni got a perfect smarty friends 😃😃😃

🤣............. sehar lietrally gave heart attack to agni with her reason of not picking calls in the car 😆😆😆😆😆

coffee idea was gud 1 sehar 👏👏👏............. but not liking agni's date gift 😭😭 sehar was too excited during Breakfast ....... but agni is seriously working for the gift 😒..........

seems Mr. Agni loved first look of his bful date 😉😉........... & his date found his farm house awesome... 😆😆😆..........

so "vashu" doesn't mind sehar calling him vashu 😆😆😆..............& seroiusly.... the dishes & date was tempting 4 me too 😆😆😆........... i also want 1 date with agni 😆😆😆😆😆

lovely song by agni 😍....... thank god it was not a lullaby 😆😆😆............ waise i thot u wud make him sing pyaar ki kahani suno 😉😉😉

date progressed wondefully ☺️ ☺️,........initially i thot it was a dream sequence 😆😆😆😆😆 but the shocking end 😲 😲..........confirmed it was not a dream 😳😳 ....... awww agni thinks it was a mistake 😭😭........

wishing evrything gets well soon 😛😛........ & as u said showdown in next part hope it doesnot turn too serious ............. expecting both agni sehar to sort out everything at the getway weekend trip 😉 😉
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seems a very long comment to me 🥱🥱............. u must be sleepy 😆😆😆............... so....as agni said 😛😛😛 main bhi kat leti hoon 😆😆😆😆........... oh yes continue soon 😃😃😃 like this time 😛😛😛

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#736

I loved it.The date was so beautiful.It brought them closer.Loved their description of appearance.pics added more charm

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#737

This was truly a beautiful and well....unexpected part for me!! But hey.....I dont still hate Agni....Agni ko mujhse hate karwane ke liye aapko bahut mehnat karni hogi Dii....this was nothing that he did.....from my point of view...hehe.😆😉😳 I mean.....he is in a vulnerable state of mind....where Seher is constantly attracting him to her....and of course he wants her in his lyf....but at the same tym he has his inhibitions which dont let him think that way!! He wants to give her those divorce papers....becoz he thinks she is gonna move on....so I wud say he is very much ryt on his part!!😉😆

Ab rahi baat ye sochne ki....that why wud Seher give herself away if she didnt love him back.....umm....I'll give that much consideration to Agni....bechara kitna sochega!! Waise bhi he is already very much occupied wid many confusions.....so its ok!!😳

But I truly hope things go better for them in the coming parts....and well this part was wonderfully written. Unn chaaro ka dimag bhi zoro shoro se chal raha hai...gud!! And well...the romantic scene were very very nicely written....just the perfect amount of romance and privacy....hehe. 😉😆😳 And yes the pictures are very beautiful....and the bar area is perfecccct....!!!😳

Hope to get the next part soon...and well Dii....my boards start from 5th April....so my comments are gonna be delayed!! However will surely reply whenever I can....pls bear wid that!! Take care and thanks for such a lovely part....I take it as a progress in the story!!😳

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#738

suri amazing set of part cant wait 4 the showdown cont soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#739

sorry yaar...3 papers baki the...isiliye late ho gayi...

sab se pahle ek baat bata...tu is ud me sabit kya karna chahti thi ke...main Raj ko kuch alag hi samjhun na...??? toh maine samajh liya...yaar yeh sach me lakhon me ek hai...ha ha ha...!!! tu chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le suri...raj ko kabhi bhi nafrat nahi kar sakti main...ooppsss...i mean to say agani...

tune hi us ka dimag kharab kiya hua hai...tabhi divorce paper ki baat aayi...!!! varna dono me toh kabhi kabhi achhe achhe scenes bhi hote the...!!! main kaise bhul sakti hun ke kuch hi ud pahle tune dono me kitne romantic scenes rakhe the...aur ab divorce...yeh sab teri hi karashthani hai...Agni ka is me koi bhi dosh nahi hai...

bichare ke dimag me tune itne sare confusions dal rakhe hain ke...us ka mind block ho gaya hai...isiliye sab kuch ulta soch raha hai...!!! toh is me Agni ka kya kasoor...sare kasoor toh tere hain na...

okkk...okk...baht ho gayi tujhe galiyan...ab thoda sa tarif kar deti hun...!!! baht hi khubshurti ke sath tune sab kuch likha hai...!!! matlab...Agni ka state of mind...us ka confusion...voh sare romantic scene...sab kuch baht badhiya tha...love it...!!! dekh Seher ke bare me kuch mat puch...!!! kyoun ke mera toh main attraction AGNI par hai na...aur vaise bhi main ladkiyon par jyada dhayan nahi deti...jab samne Raj ho toh...ha ha ha

ab main yeh hope karti hun ke...aage tu aur kuch jyada bura nahi karegi...kyoun ke yeh fic 100 pages par pahunch chuka hai...toh tera bhi toh kuch farz banta hai na is ke liye ...ha ha ha...

chal ab jaldi se next part post kar...

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#740

Wow!!...that's a very lovely part dear!...I absolutely love it!!...and have noooo words!!...you're just tooooo good!:-)....I loved the song selection,the pictures of the farmhouse,the bar also what agni-seher was wearing for the date!...it just add the charm to the whole fan-fiction!...and yes..I loved all of the description of the date ...and the date made them even moree closer!...Keep it up the good work!....continue soon!..👍🏼