HumraahI-Rajeev-Aamna FF-Triple Update-Page-147!!

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ayesha

@AdorableAyesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

nice ud...but thoda emotional tha...

abhi kuch hi din hue hain...jab main Geet serial dekh rahi hun...!!! first k kuch parts dekhne k baad mujhe laga ki sayad 'PARDESH' film ki story hogi...par abhi story me change hua hai toh achha lagg raha hai...!!! n RAMCHANDRA JEE (maan) ki acting toh ek damm perfect hai...wid Geet...

pata hai is part me BEST kya tha...??? jis tarah se tumne har ek charc toh ko describe kiya hai aur un k bare me sab kuch itna clearly aur itne achhe se likha hai ki...kya batayun...just AWESOME

lekin yeh kya...??? agni toh bachpan se hi aisa hai...!!! vaise sach kahun toh Raj ko Agni ka yeh chach kafi suit kar raha hai...

love u ayesha

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Priya

@pinky901

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

awesome part dear

well its true that u delayed the update but it is also true dat u gave a grt update so i can let u go for this time..hehehe jokes apart i understand u must be busy in ur life so don't worry abt ur long breaks as we all r satisfy dat u will not leave ur fic in middle n will post the story sooner or later

well part is really gud.feeling very nice after knowing that agni loves seher to this extend but on the same time feeling sad for him as he is living in his own notion dat seher is not in love wit him but some one else .i really do want to knw what happened six yrs ago which lead him to live like this.n here seher belive dat agni don't love her n not want this relationship for his sake.hope that somehow she is able to knw that how much he loves her n need her badly in his life.ye log bhi itna simple sa issue hai use itna complicate kar diya hai ek bar puch nahi sakta ki seher kaha ha kaisi hai.hmm pata nahi ki ab kya hoga aur sabse badi baat kaise hoga

well ye bhi sure hai ki jo bhi ho aakhir mein sab acha hi hoga kyunki iski writer,director aur producer aap hi hai one n only so pls cont soon with the flashback .pls cont soon

waise i really like thier small but cute, innocent ,full of emotion first kiss.

pls cont soon wit grt part

bye tc

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

AWESOME...sweety...😃

tere bare me nahi ...ud k bare me bol rahi hun...!!! ab maine tujhe dekha nahi toh kaise bolungi tu kaisi hai...ha ha ha...😆!!! jokes apart...par personal thot batayun...😃??? jo dil se khubshurat hote hain na...voh apni khubshurti har jagah chod jate hain...😃!!! ab maine yeh sentence...tere liye nahi balki is ud k liye aur meri frnd Suri k liye kaha hai..😃.!!! vaise tera naam kya hai...😆???

ab nautanki bandh...kaam chalu...😃

pata hai tujhe tune Agni n seher k pain ko kitne achhe se likha hai...👏!!! dono hi ek dushre se be-inteha pyar karte hain...par kishmat ne un ko milne nahi diya...!!! sach me yaar...kabhi kabhi kishmat...pata nahi kyoun...par har achhi chiz ko alag kar deti hai hum se...😭

agni yeh kyoun sochta hai ki seher kisi aur se pyar kar sakti hai...??? use tune bola nahi ki voh is fic ka hero. hai...isiliye heroine sirf usi se pyar kar sakti hai...aur kisi se nahi... us ka dimag kahan hai...!!! okay...okay...marna mat...main mazak karr rahi thi..😃!!! vaise na mujhe lagta hai ki seher n agni k is separation k piche seher k family ka hath hai...!!! matlab...pata nahi...mujhe aisa lagta hai...par sach toh sirf tujhe hi pata hoga na...??? 😉

yaar...seher k parents...itne gaye gujre kyoun hain...??? unhe mere parent k tution ki jarurat hai...😆!!! ek toh unhone kabhi bhi seher ki care nahi ki...use agni se alag kar diya...upar se us ki shadi phir se karwana chahte hain...apne business ko badane k liye...!!! un k business ki aisi ki taisi...!!! jinhe apne bachho ki khishi se jyada apne business ki padi rahti hai...😡

par FB scenes baht hi khubshurat the yaar...!!! agni aur seher ka ek dushre se pyar...baht gehra tha...!!! aur sab se khubshurat secene tha ...batayun....??? naa...tu toh samajh hi gayi hogi...ki main kiss scene ki baat karr rahi hun...ha ha ha...😆

ab agar mera yeh lamba comment padh k so na gayi ho toh...uth kar ud kar de...!!! aur haan...comment k bich me maine jo bhi bakwas kiye hain na...use ignore kar dena...!!! main na aadat se majbur hun...😆

love ya...😃

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Deby

@Crazy_4_RA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Hey Sorry for late reply....actually m on IF after a long time.
Nice update..thanx for ur PM. 😊

Love
Deby.

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

surya where r u ??????? Wen will u update.... Pls cont soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: muskanp
musch awaited...thanxs for the PM
very nice

👏

thanku...😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: swetha10
wow amazing... loved it.. thanx a lot for the pm... do continue soon...

thanku very much..i'll surely continue soon..😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Great , Awesome, Mind Blowing Part Thank You For Pm.

thanku very much..😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Crazy_4_RA
Hey Sorry for late reply....actually m on IF after a long time.
Nice update..thanx for ur PM. 😊

Love
Deby.

thanku very much deby.. i'am glad you like the update...😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: togepe30
Hey Nice part !!
Confused that if they were both in love then what made them think that the other wanted to break away from the Rishta?

I hope they meet soon !!

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

thanku very much.. i'am glad you like the update...you will get answer to some of your questions in the next part....i'll surely continue soon...😊