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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi 😊

the up is really very nice😊
agni aur seher dono he bohot akele haai aapne zindage mein
agni feeling,ehsaas are just so well described really he is lonely in his life aur seher she too but yaar agar yeh dono kitna he pyaar karte the ek dusre se then why did they got separated 😕
plz clear it up in the coming ups 😊
plz cont soon and do pm me



thanks a ton ria.. even i feel very bad for agni & seher.. both are sad na isliye.... but don't worry things will surely change for the better... you will soon know the mystery....i'll continue as soon as i can..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Fizzylicious


nice ud...but thoda emotional tha...

abhi kuch hi din hue hain...jab main Geet serial dekh rahi hun...!!! first k kuch parts dekhne k baad mujhe laga ki sayad 'PARDESH' film ki story hogi...par abhi story me change hua hai toh achha lagg raha hai...!!! n RAMCHANDRA JEE (maan) ki acting toh ek damm perfect hai...wid Geet...
pata hai is part me BEST kya tha...??? jis tarah se tumne har ek charc toh ko describe kiya hai aur un k bare me sab kuch itna clearly aur itne achhe se likha hai ki...kya batayun...just AWESOME
lekin yeh kya...??? agni toh bachpan se hi aisa hai...!!! vaise sach kahun toh Raj ko Agni ka yeh chach kafi suit kar raha hai...


love u ayesha


ayesha..it is so nice to see your comments..thank you so very much....don't worrr agni character will have a lovable side too....even i feel Rajeev ko Agni ka character suits very much...hehehe.. i'll surely update soon...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear belated Eid Mubarak and Ganesh Chathurthi to u too................and of course havent forgotten our dearest agni and seher..............how can we????????
anyways very touching part dear................but i was shocked..........they are married and divorced..................and agni's part really was very emotional..................they both are in love with each other but still unawares..................wonder what led to this separation...............now cant wait to read further about their flashbacks.................so u better post the next parts very quickly dear.............don't delay much..................cont soon..................



deepu you are absolutely right.. we just cannot forget pr dear agni & seher..hehehe....yup they are married..& have signed the divorce papers too..but i think you missed the bit in the third part where agni says he never submitted the papers..ahem..ahem....there is a hint there..hehehe..... you will soon know the cruel game that destiny has played with agni & seher..... the flashbacks will come in the 5h part....i'll surely continue soon....😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

long waited 4 the part 😆😆😆....... its been quite a long time read humrahi 😊😊............
it felt so good reading it after long time 😃😃.......... specially more coz........... there was more of agni 😳😳😳..............

aawww but agni is so sad 😭..........wanna give him tightest hug ... missing seher 😭😭.......... hope they meet soon ............ 😃😃😃............

good to know seher also still loves agni 😳😳😳.. ...........

& FB scenes were cute 😊😊😊............ aaaw vashu .........oops sorry.... agni such a bully...... 😆😆😆........ & 😲😲............first kiss at 17 😳😳😳.............. so sweet ....... 😊😊😊
overall its been a wonderful part .... njoyed reading it 😃😃........... so now continue soon.........😊😊😊ASAP ............ wud wait 4 next part as wanna see if my guess of agni seher meeting soon turns true 😊😊😊


thanku so much puri...even i feel bad for agni & seher.. let me see how i can put their love story back on track..hehehe.. even i find the fb cute... esp the kiss part.... yup both agni & seher still love each other.... thanku so much once again.... the next part will be posted soon...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

mindblowing part

I really liked the way u described agni and sehers emotions,both of them are lonely and need each other cant wait till they meet.The flashback scenes were beautifully potrayed especially the scenes were seher consoles agni and tells him that she will never leave him and their first kiss.Both of them wished each other for their seperation day in order to celebrate each others happieness but they dont realise that their happieness is with each other.The scene in utpal villa was amazingly described i liked the relationship between all the members of the villa.The scene between seher and her mom was good i really liked the way seher told her mom wat agni ment to her and i feel realy bad 4 seher even know her parents are trying to use her as a business deal. cant wait 2 read da next part.


thanku so much dear.. your comments are always too good... i'am glad you liked the emotions which were shown..i just did not want to over do it, but still convey agni & seher's heart felt feelings.... even i find the flashback too touching... & i thought first kiss would be like a promise to keep so i wrote that bit....yes agni seher have certain misunderunderstandings... don't you worry.. it will start to clear off with the passage of time... even i like the bond between the people of utpal villa...yes seher's parents never really care for her. but Thank God she has the garewals to take care of her..... i'll surely post the next part soon...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ohh...this was a beautiful one....but it was actually painful to see the irony of fate....Agni and Seher both love each other sooooo much...yet they r not together...destiny can be really cruel sumtyms!! However I'm sure sum1 is behind this....I mean Agni does hav a misconception of Seher loving sum1 else....and pata nahi kyun....my doubts r on Seher's parents....huh. Wat kind of parents they r!!! Ek to unhone kabhi uski parwa nahi kii...and now they want her to get married AGAIN....coz of sum dam business deal....so disgusting!!!

But it was still nice to see their never ending love for each other....Agni's flashbaks were really cool....specially the kiss one....hehe....but its funny to knw how Agni used to tease her and was so rude.....then....whereas now he loves her so much that he separated himself from his own family!!
Again....Seher has always been in love wid him only....awweeee....I love these lovers Suri Dii....awesum!!
Oh yes....Agni n Milind's convo was nice as well....cute!!
Pls continue soon......hope u can be regular now.


thanku so much sumi dear....yes sometimes destiny & fate play their cruel games & separate people who want to be together...agni & seher ke saath bas yahii hua hai...yes they love each other immensely, but never had the guts to express it...yup there are certain misunderstanding surrounding seher & as well as agni.... your guess is nice. your guess will be cleared in the next part....seher's parents are really heartless, even i feel that....yes see it is again destiny when agni detested seher, she was in his life...now he loves her she is away from him.. that is the game of fate... thankuu so muchhh once again.......i'll try to be as regular as possible..& the next update willbe posted soon...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky901

awesome part dear

well its true that u delayed the update but it is also true dat u gave a grt update so i can let u go for this time..hehehe jokes apart i understand u must be busy in ur life so don't worry abt ur long breaks as we all r satisfy dat u will not leave ur fic in middle n will post the story sooner or later
well part is really gud.feeling very nice after knowing that agni loves seher to this extend but on the same time feeling sad for him as he is living in his own notion dat seher is not in love wit him but some one else .i really do want to knw what happened six yrs ago which lead him to live like this.n here seher belive dat agni don't love her n not want this relationship for his sake.hope that somehow she is able to knw that how much he loves her n need her badly in his life.ye log bhi itna simple sa issue hai use itna complicate kar diya hai ek bar puch nahi sakta ki seher kaha ha kaisi hai.hmm pata nahi ki ab kya hoga aur sabse badi baat kaise hoga
well ye bhi sure hai ki jo bhi ho aakhir mein sab acha hi hoga kyunki iski writer,director aur producer aap hi hai one n only so pls cont soon with the flashback .pls cont soon
waise i really like thier small but cute, innocent ,full of emotion first kiss.
pls cont soon wit grt part
bye tc


hey pinky thanku so much for your comments....don't worry i will never abandon the fanfic.. because writing is something which i enjoy to the fullest... so just be rest assured kii bhale hii main kitna time kyun na gayab rahun but i will never leave my fanfics unfinished....you will soon get to know the mystery of six years back...with time i think seher aur agni ke beech theek ho jaayega.. lekin kitna time.. you never know..hehehe...thanku for the compliments dear..it is really over-whelming..i'll surely continue soon...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

AWESOME...sweety...😃 No Thankooo....😆😆😆

tere bare me nahi ...ud k bare me bol rahi hun...!!! ab maine tujhe dekha nahi toh kaise bolungi tu kaisi hai...ha ha ha...😆!!! chalo mujhe khushi hai kii tujhe update pasand aaya... aur aasha karthi hoon kii jis din mujhe dekhegi us din mere baare mein bhi aise hii bolegi....hehaha.....😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 jokes apart...par personal thot batayun...😃??? jo dil se khubshurat hote hain na...voh apni khubshurti har jagah chod jate hain...😃!!! awwwww soooo sweet yaarrr..... me blushing....😳😳😳😳 ab maine yeh sentence...tere liye nahi balki is ud k liye aur meri frnd Suri k liye kaha hai..😃.!!! is baat ke liye yeh le tere liye meri taraf se badaaa se bhi badaaaaaaaaaaa waalaaaaaaaaaa huggggggggggggg...🤗🤗 🤗 vaise tera naam kya hai...😆??? oye teri besharm tujhe mera naam nahii patah....😆😆😆😆😆
ab nautanki bandh...kaam chalu...😃 what an idea madam jii....😃
pata hai tujhe tune Agni n seher k pain ko kitne achhe se likha hai...👏!!! dono hi ek dushre se be-inteha pyar karte hain...par kishmat ne un ko milne nahi diya...!!! sach me yaar...kabhi kabhi kishmat...pata nahi kyoun...par har achhi chiz ko alag kar deti hai hum se...😭 yes absolutely right destiny has it's own games to play in one's life.. & sometimes it is very cruel... lekin yahaan cruel tho me hoying na as i have written their destiny..hehahahaha..😆😆😆😆😆
agni yeh kyoun sochta hai ki seher kisi aur se pyar kar sakti hai...??? use tune bola nahi ki voh is fic ka hero. hai...isiliye heroine sirf usi se pyar kar sakti hai...aur kisi se nahi... us ka dimag kahan hai...!!! okay...okay...marna mat...main mazak karr rahi thi..😃!!! vaise na mujhe lagta hai ki seher n agni k is separation k piche seher k family ka hath hai...!!! matlab...pata nahi...mujhe aisa lagta hai...par sach toh sirf tujhe hi pata hoga na...??? 😉 don't worry yaar hero heroine ka dimaag jaldi track par aa jaayega.... waise guess bada hii achcha hai...aur fikar not joh hoga sahii hoga....why fear why I'am here.....😉😉😉
yaar...seher k parents...itne gaye gujre kyoun hain...??? unhe mere parent k tution ki jarurat hai...😆!!! chalo main unhe tere ghar bhejthi hoon... tu mujhe batana uncle aunty free kab honge... lekin haan free tutions honge......😆😆😆😆😆 ek toh unhone kabhi bhi seher ki care nahi ki...use agni se alag kar diya...upar se us ki shadi phir se karwana chahte hain...apne business ko badane k liye...!!! un k business ki aisi ki taisi...!!! jinhe apne bachho ki khishi se jyada apne business ki padi rahti hai...😡 arre dear apne ghusse ko un seher ke parents ke liye waste na kariyo... main unka jald koi na koi intazaam karr doongi....😉😉😉
par FB scenes baht hi khubshurat the yaar...!!! agni aur seher ka ek dushre se pyar...baht gehra tha...!!! aur sab se khubshurat secene tha ...batayun....??? naa...tu toh samajh hi gayi hogi...ki main kiss scene ki baat karr rahi hun...ha ha ha...😆 haan haan main samaj gayi tu kaunse scene ke baare mein baat karri hai.... waise teri dost hoon tho itna tho mujhko bhi samaj mein aatha hai na kii tu Kiss scene ke baare mein bol rahii hai..ahem..ahem....😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
ab agar mera yeh lamba comment padh k so na gayi ho toh...uth kar ud kar de...!!! aur haan...comment k bich me maine jo bhi bakwas kiye hain na...use ignore kar dena...!!! main na aadat se majbur hun...😆 oyee tera comment padhkarr tho mazaa aagaya.. aur khabardaar joh is jaise mast comment ko bakwaas bola tho... main jaldiiii se update karthi hoon...pukka se haan....😉😉😉😉
love ya...😃
love you too priiii..🤗🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank You To All The Readers Who Have Liked The 3rd Part Of 'HumraahI' ..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Note:- If Anyone Is Not Receiving My 'PM' About The Updates Then Please Do Let Me Know So That I Can PM You As & When I Update..😊
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 14 years ago

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