BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#731

gr8 update

n answer to quest

its nt abt mayank or rv...here its a new charcter a new mayank...nt the mjht one for me......here its abt a women who suffered a loot....way too loot...i dnt know everytime i read mayank pov my heart melts but NO...it just hit my mind....

realization is big thing but than not so easily no i cant forgive him just because he realize his mistake he needs to suffer more.....mayb a chance but.... thr r loads of ifs n buts

i dnt know mayb iam to harsh at this matter....

but i belive its ur story n i really belive whtevr ur gonna give us will b bst

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#732

It's a difficult question to answer as I'm in two minds. Mayank regrets what he's done so he should be forgiven. He has suffered, but Nupur has suffered more than Mayank. Nupur can never forget what happened and it's very difficult for her to forgive Mayank. Mayank commited a crime which cannot be easily forgiven. I'm still in two minds, but I'll accept whichever way you take this story forward.

Amazing update Ruchi. Waiting for the next part.

Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#733

awwwwww Rachii sachi mein !!

this part is just superBBB

I love it to the core!!!

frm starting to ending

awwwww Ryan woke up in the night with fever+vomiting

n Nupur woke up

n awww just love when Nupur waz not angry to see Mayu na
n then Sammy+mom comezz n they call the doctor

n awww Nupur didnt want Ryan to get ejection

n Mayu realizes how she cant live without him

sachi mein

I j wait for thateting

n Mayurzzz tooo

ufff cant wait for that scene na sis

do continue soon

but me wondering why Sammy n Shilpa aunty fighting about in precape !!!

-Lina-

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#734

i sreriously dont know yaar..i dont think i will be able to 4give me...but when it comes to mayank and nupur...my answer will be neither yes or no..may be i am sooo selfish.........now coming to the update..it was so good......love nupur a lot....

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#735

Ruchi 4 me i'm not sure if i ever 4give some1 like this mayank but wen it comes 4 mayur i can't say no or yes as Runa said coz i want them 2ther at any cost
n now mayu is regrating 4 everything he's done

so i wish nups 4give him

but if was a RV i would say automatically NO
back to d update i was awesome as usual thanks 4 d pm

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#736

The point you brought up was really good before you published your part. To be honest, I don't look at the characters. I just look solely at the story. Also, how many times have you gotten just saying to have the Mayur reunion quicky or that "oh Mayank was soo cute!" and all? I comment on writing. ;) But really, I found no flaw in the part other than some few spelling or grammar mistakes, which were barely noticable. Great job!! =)

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#737

nice updt

its nt abt mayank or rv I never forgive such person in my life

but loved the way mayank behaving now

so take time to reunion mayur don't rush

thanks for the pm

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#738

Mind blowing part ruchi and the answer to ur question is that wht mayank did was very wrong a CRIME for which he has punished himself and i think nupur shld give him a secnd chance evry one deserves a second chance

thx alot for the pm

Edited by zarfishan1983 - 14 years ago