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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii... !!
Here is the next part..wel yeah ! Took loads to time ...but here it is .
N wel , i know most of u are waiting for MayUr re-union but just question urself once,.,Wil u be able to forgive anyone who committed such a hideous crime ???.... !!!
If instead of Mayank , there was RV .. Would you have expected the same???... !!
PART-14
It was near to midnight, when Agastya's cry made me awake. For a second or two , it was hard to anticipate anything but then his cries grew louder and i sprang sat on bed taking him in my arms., His fragile little body was unusally hot and in no time, vomited out milk he had in evening. Totally confused..and terrified , i took him to washroom to clean him .
Mayank's POV
Today was a great day...i saw my shona with Nupur. The time when she entered this house for first time zoomed in front of me. That day and today marked so much of a difference...That time , i smiled coz i won and now i had tears coz i lost the most valuable person in my life...While Nupur lost the biggest deal in her life that time , while today she is mother of my child, satisfied and happy .Soon the trance was broken when Samrat asked Nupur to move to my room while she flatly refused...but still Samrat managed to convince her. As she headed up , i swiftly moved to adjacent room ...not letting her take my view and spoil her day.
I was trying to catch some sleep in the room next to Nupur's , when Ryan's cry made me worry..I rushed to Nupur's room but soon came to a hault ...Nupur wil never accept me invading her privacy but my son was crying uncontrollably for past 10mins. Brushing off ol the thoughts i moved in and saw Nupur trying to calm him down but al in vain . As i entered she turned to face me..ut not with anger or any grudges but with helplessness...
''What happened?' i said moving towards them
''He has fever and evn vomitted out few minutes ago'' she said in concern . I could see tears glistening in her eyes as she kissed ryan's little hands
Nothing seemed working at that moment and evn Samrat-Mom came to her room . And finally , Samrat gave a call to doctor, ignoring the fact that it was past midnight
Soon Doctor arrived ..
''Dont worry Nupur , lil baby couldnt take exertion of day's travel'' he said smiling to fill some confidence in Nupur who seemed completely broken down.
Nupur looked at Ryan who was still not slept while rolled around in his lil place.
''I think , i need to give him an injection..'' but before anyone could interrupt Nupur spoke
''No ways.!! He is just a kid ''
''Nupur ...he wont take anything tablet and without any medicine he wont recover''
''Nupur..doctor uncle is right..'' Samrat and mom said while i was too pre-occupied with the fact of injection to give her any piece of advice. After sometime she nodded but seemed it was the most difficult decision of hers.
I held Ryan because Nupur was not in a condition to take this ..As Doctor gave him an injection , he let out a loud cry making my sour to tremble while some more tears rolled down Nupur's face.
She instantly took Ryan from me and hugged him tight
''aww...nahin mera baccha..!!'' ''Mera strong baccha hai na'' I saw her repeating these lines again and again till Ryan slept.
Samrat and Mom left while I was still standing there , looking at Ryan with moist eyes...
''Thanx for ur help Mayank'' Nupur spoke , breaking my chain of thoughts. I looked at her confused
''Nupur he is my child too''
''No he isnt ! And please, i dont want to argue at this moment '' she said moving to Ryan..or may I say Agastya..while i moved out and closed my family behind
Nupur's POV
''I am sorry baccha...'' I slighltly kissed on his forehead. I was cursing my decision to come to Mumbai after he fell sick...Agastya finally slept while i was still stroking his chest .
I didnt evn realise when sunrays peeped into my room..My fingers were still stroking chest and eyes glued to tiny image of his which seemed to weaken after yesterday's cry and vomit. My fingers carressed his lil cheecks which still marked dried tears
I opened the door at knock and found Dia standing with my morning tea
''aww..thank you so much''
;''Ohh shutup..its ok ! But how is my champ ?.'' she said moving to Agastya and planting a kiss on them...and he opened his eyes. Within no time , he cried and i took him in my arms...and he calmed down and gave a appealing smile with twinkle in his eyes.
''Nupur u didnt sleep at night na ?'' she looked at me suspiciously...
''Nahin..umm..woh'' i fumbled with words while Dia looked at me , while playing with shona
''Nupur are you mad !..Champ aa[ki mumma ko samjhao..she is gonna ruin her health and tumhara khayal kaise rakhegi ?''
Without evn listening a single word , she forced me to sleep after feeding Agastya , while she took him with her.
Mayank's POV
I was standing out in garden still thinking about Ryan and previous night. Nupur cant live without Ryan and yesterday it confirmed me to core. But soon Ryan's voice made me come out of trance.
Dia was playing with him while he seemed to enjoying it .
Thats it guys . !!
Precap - Mayank-Ryan moment , MayUr scnes and Sam-Mom fight...
PS- Do hit the like tab ! :))
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi ruchi,

Answer to your question
not so straight
yeah i agree we are so lost in Mayank and Nupur but if it is RV i would have said no
some where even i try to take out what image created about mayank ,and later what he did was totally wrong and forgiving is not a way but nupur is there with the family He is paying for his deed all alone.
I am somehow too much attached to this character ,i hated him most when he did what he suppose not to
then he punished himself ,which is again less than what nupur suffered,
As of now i dont have a straight forward answer ,neither yes nor no
Aru di
Edited by arunabehere - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

res

edited

awesome update

i can understand nupur

waiting for mayank and ryan's moments

Edited by dua_adil - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well i agree i wuldnt forgive RV
But RV wuldnt also curse himself or feel bad or feel worst for doing anythg lik this
While Mayu is sorry took punishment n all thgs also
Cuming to update
It was good
Nups for 1st tim wasnt angry after seeing Mayu
Nups loved Ryan to the core
Loved Dia's concern n evn Mayu's
It was fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really amazing update Ruchi! Very well written! And aww, the moment between the three was sweet!
And about your question, well I have way too many differing opinions that is why i'm your puppet. Take me whichever way you want with this story and I'll keep giving my honest opinions! =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Ruchi,

Awww one of the best parts about this story actually all your stories hehe is the connection to reality. I loved everything about the update and especially Mayank and his reactions to Nupur and Ryan. I like the name Ryan more and for no reasons just like that, no actually its easier to spell, write and say hehe. Wonderful wonderful update, I land here right in time! Keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesom update.....very well written
i loved itttt
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
answer to ur question:never ever in my life ill forget such a person!!!!!!
cumin to the upd8
first it was very short
i know u r busy but next time a bit longer upd8 plzzzzzz
i was jumping when i saw ur pm
loved the upd8
too cool
loved it to the core
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update ruchi
i feel that nupur should forgive mayank
he regrets his actions
it in no ways makes nupurs sufferings less but mayank is also suffering n repenting
forgiveness is the highest deed a person can do
n had it been rv he would never have repented his actions n feel guilty
to the contrary he would try to snatch the baby from nupur n trouble her even more

also i think nupur does realise that coz this was the first time she wasnt angryon seeing mayank n even let him hold agastya/ryan when the doctor came

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear!
answer to ur question
it doesn't matters if it is rv or mayank
if a person accepts his mistake nd appologizes then i'll forgive him/her
waiting 4 the next part
continue soon
nd thnx 4 the pm

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