BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 76

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Ruchi,
nice part
luv the care and concern of a mother to her child it ws really nice
plzz continue soon
thxs for the pm😊



Krushi
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Posted: 14 years ago
res to answer your question mainly..
Ruchi - If I remember correctly , I had asked the same question to you and your readers long back.. and Aki & Fama supported me then.. I had asked everyone to read your updates replacing the names Mayank with RV and Samrat with Mayank .. Didn't I?
You know my answer clearly - and I dont want to repeat it again..
But now the issue is different. I don't understand what you as a writer and Nupur as a character is upto?? What is she going to do? What are YOU going to do? I dont want to say anything that will put you under pressure again.
Ruchi - from the day when I asked that question and to this day when you are asking the same question back to me - something has changed. You and Nupur allowed Mayank to come closer - may be unknowingly you both were forgiving him ,if not suddenly ,gradually... Atleast thats what I thought.. I was against it - thats why I hesitated to comment for some parts. and in one update - I decided to let it go.. I decided to forgive the criminal ,still hating the crime. YOU MADE ME DO THAT -Ruchi ,the way you wrote the emotions of every character made me do so.. Your lines would have melt even a stone - after all ,mine was a human heart...
Now - I am empty.... With no answer at all... Entirely leaving the answer to you , but promising to be with you on whichever decision you take.
Edited by Nirvrithi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

I too didnt comment!

If i was on Nupur's place , i wouldnt have forgiven Mayank so easily.

But now.. I dntwant to think..

I want MayUr to be together

Dowhatever u want....

M ready

But not Samrat nd Nupur...pleaseee...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ruchi ...
r u going to update today ????????????????????????
if yes plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make it longggggggggggggggggg plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
You're right Ruchi...

I guess all of us are ready to forgive Mayank only because of the existence of this jaan in our heart... The heart throb, the heart stealer, Mr. MAYANK SHARMA

Though the circumstances have drastically changed, we, at heart, still think that MAYANK HAS to be good. I understand what point you are trying to put across. But you know what, that's the normal human mentality...

Well, as for the update, it was SUPERB!! Thanks for such a wonderful update!!! Do PM me next time as well.

With love,
Aishwarya

<3 <3 <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
ruchiiiiiiii!!
loved the update..
but it was short yaar..
but next time a longer update ok..
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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful update

loved it
pl continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanx Friends. Sorry couldnt reply to ur comments but they mean a lot to me

Thanx for pressing the like tab
Ok , wel this update ..Its ol coz of Akansha ! I was super-confused ..but thanx to her, she actualy helped me with it . N supported and backed me up to post this idea ! .. Thanx a tonn honey ! Thanxx
Edited by ruchimayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-14 PAGE-97
PART-15
Dia was standing there holding my son.
''Ryan..'' i mumbled. My eyes longed to see him ..I met the other night but that time i was so tensed about him and most importantly his mother...
''Maybe Agastya needs a day out with u Sharma!''
I was shocked but then she smiled in assurance
''Its not that i support you Mayank but maybe after this week you wont be able to meet him'' she handed ryan carefully to me and went away.
This wont be the last time ..i am gonna make things work out between me and Nupur. But right now i wanted to enjoy the time with my son ! My blood !
Samrat's POV
I was sitting in my room, correcting some errors in one of our project deals ..but how to correct errors in my life ? Sometimes, tough memories of life never allow to move on in life...I know Nupur wants me to move on but how can someone move on so easily ? Knowingly and Unknowingly my thoughts drifted to the day which changed my life.. wel, still dont know , for better or worse
''hii..where are u both? Dia almost forgot me..! Huh'' Nupur started speaking as soon as she pressed answer tab
''Nupurr..relax! Dia is busy wih her training and i am here, calling you ''
''Ohk..i just forgot ! Anyways , howz u ?''
''I am good .. so made new friends? But miss you here yr''
i said , bit low
''yeah..miss you guys too..but you know na! I cant help it'' she said and i found myself to be foolish of taking her back to not-so-good time
''aacha..chodh ! I want to tel you soemthing'' i said , trying to sound normal
''u need my permission to speak now? Its just two months i left Mumbai''
''I love you Nupur...''
i froze and wel, i think nupur was numb at that time
''i know, you are shocked but i really do''
''ahmm..ahh..''
she managed to speak soemthing but she was confused herself
''Samrat, i dont know how to react right now..''
''Nupur even if you dont ffeel the same for me , it wont effect our friendship ! Trust me ..i just wanted to tel you because i dont want any hidden feelings in our relationship''
I will be hurt , if she says no..but trust me , her friendship was more than this world for me
''Samrat, you are a gem of a person and anyone will be happy to have a companion like you but i am not ready for such things in my life . I have many goals to achieve, i know u'll wait forever for me but i dont want a hault in your life. I dont feel the same for you...i am really sorry samrat'' i could feel her voice cracking ..
''Nupur..stop being a bimbo! Its not important that anyoen should feel the same for the other person..n i am perfectly well''
''When you cant lie to me..dont try also'
' she said and few more tears leaked from my eyes
''I'll be fine.. aur batta , hows ur project work going'' i changed the topic but the entire convo Nupur was guilty about whatever she did
N even today she feels like a culprit. I so wish, i could move on and erase some burden off her shoulders, but cant !

Suddenly, Mom came and broke my chain of thoughts

''Samrat i need you to invite these people for tomorrow's party'' she said handing over me the list of guest
''party ? What for ?'' i said shocked
''Cum'on ! i am gonna celebrate the entry on my grandson's entry in our life.''
''Mom ! why are you trying to complicate Nupur's life more and more ?''
i almost shouted
''what do you mean? i am not doing anything to Nupur's life!''
''yeah exactly..U are inviting Mayank forcefully to nupur;s life. How will Nupur react in front of ur guest? What will she say about her relation with Mayank!''
''I am not doing anything wrong. Nupur is mayank's wife and Agastya is his son''
''But nupur dont consider any of this relation. U are trying to force her into a relation...''
''Mayank repents his decision !''
''I agree but wat did you do? U changed the charge case on Mayank and just because of your power and money, Mayank was bailed in 6months. No one even knew about what Mayank did ! and now.,.just on lame reason you brought Nupur back when there are no rituals talking place in this hell !''
I screamed
''dont you want Nupur to be with Mayank ?''
''It hardly matters what i want..what matters is Nupur's decision and for heaven's sake STOP PLAYING WITH HER LIFE '' I blasted on mom and crumbled that stupid list of guests
Mayank's POV
Ryan slept in my arms and i had time of my lifetime ...playing with him..with his fingers digging my cheeks..ol was a dream! Everything was smooth and finally he slept.
I realised he was not comfortable in my arms, guess i didnt have the same comfort as Nupur has. I thought of keeping him in his room with Nupur...guess, they complete each other.

I went in Nupur's room , expecting her to be sleeping but she was seen no where. I sighed in relief and delicately placed him on bed. He was actually a lil angel..filling everyone's life with happiness,..Most importantly completing Nupur's life which i left incomplete.
I thought of placing pillow next to him , so that he doesnt slip off this bed, incase he have the habbit of rolling while sleeping.... I didnt even know his habbits! *sigh*..but atleast i can see him and that is more than enough for me.

I moved to other side of bed..and before i could reach to pillows...i heard bathroom room knob click. My eyes directly went to the image standing on the door of the bathroom, literally standing in shocked state. Nupur was in knee lenght bathrobe with her wet hairs placed on one side..dripping water drops and wetting the robe and even few tracing her wheatish legs.

Before i could move or react, she took a step and coz of wet floor, she slipped. I dont know how my reflexes became so fast that i am blink of eye, Nupur was in my arms...
Thats it guyz..
Hop u like it guyz !
Love
-Ruchi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Ruchi,

Mayank had good time after a long
i am ok with it not so happy and sad kind of neutral
update is showing gradual increament and
I am really not with shilpa for having thr party
she is unnecessary creating the issue [from Nupur pov]
Thanks to Samrat who really is not in her decision
Thanks for making those 6 months clear -
till now i was not confessed with it that how he was freed in 6 months
Mayank and nupur in front no idea what is going to happen
Good work and what evr end you fell i am in
i dont want to change the one writers view 😛😛
take care,
Di
Edited by arunabehere - 14 years ago

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