BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 71

fantastic update
mind blowing
as usual vry well written
cont soon
n tnx fr pm

It was really nicely put! Mayank is doing so much for her...hope it settles soon! and I actually had realised before tat Samrat must be loving Nupur..hmmm!

really nicely written
😊

Nice update Ruchi

I know if you rush things, update won't be good

So this is better

Update asap

Love,
Shreyu

Prt 12

Amazing update Ruchi. Waiting for the next part.

superb update ruchi!

i just luv this ff yaar

heyyy ruchi
nice update yaar
do continue soon
n thanx for pm

Originally posted by: ak12

My nocturnal sis n my partner in crime 🤗

Ah! Finally getting to read this. Its nt like you made me wait too long but well this ff just leaves me with some acidity down in my stomach. I dunno how else to explain the feeling i get after i read this! Lol! Lame joke but well, its nite time...pardon me...

Ah! Yes, nothing much substantial happened in the update. It was a filler though. And an important one for it showed feelings all so clearly.

Sam's pov...ha! Feelings hurt. N life's difficult.

Nupur. I cant relate to her but i can understand her. For a simple fact that Nupur in this ff brings my feminist feelings out. Its natural for a mother to feel so much for her son. N to want to protect her from the shadows of a 'deathly' man who killed a soul.

Its also natural for me to sympathise with the deathly man for repentence isnt easy. Redemption is tougher. wish there could be some way he could redeem his deeds. I wish. But some deeds so cant be undone.

I am still pondering over whats cooking up in that brain of yours. I still dont have the slightest idea. N strangely enough, i want to have some idea. Because this ff makes me think. A lot.

Okay, i just logged in before sleeping to check whether you'd updated. You indeed had n i thot i'd comment here only.

Honestly if you ask me to choose between forgiving or not, its as difficult as asking me to choose between chocolate cake n dairy milk silk. Oh freak, i want to hau sumthing sweet. OKay i m going crazy.

Chuck that.

Wat do i say? Confused as always.
I m going to follow you like the sheep in the herd ruchi.

But not everyone has the guts to live thru after confessing the wrong doing. I wish i could read more of what Mayank's going through. Not just the pain n feeling of hopelessness. But maybe more of resentment towards his existence. Sumthing that doesnt allow him to go near her, or his family. Sumthing like shutting himself out to punish himself. Oky just a viewpoint. Dont hau to consider it. N i usually dont make sense in the night!

Anyway, it was written well girl. When you write in view points it becomes very very difficult to move the story ahead. Ive gone thru this too. But you take the story forward gracefully. Theres a lot to learn from you! 😊

Good Night!

-Ak!

P.s. N yes, i am still inactive. 😆