BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago
@Aruna di...thanx a tonn :) :)..i was so waitin for ur comments :D :D
i'll try to change him asap...but some time more ..
@Lina : darling thanx for ur wonderful comments.. Glad u liked the update sis :) :)
@Zarfishan n Shreya : Thanx :)
will continue soon ...probably on Monday
@Kanky : i second u on ur thoughts abt men ...they are dogs ..lol
Glad u liked it
@Mehak - i am soo sorry dear ...i dont know..how i missed it
But glad u liked it :) :)
Thanks
-Ruchi-
Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous update dear! i hate this mayank 😔
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice ff
plzzzzzzzz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 5-
so sorry for the late comment
i loved sam, dia and shilpa aunty in the update
nupur was amazing
wonder watz wrong with mayank???
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi Ruchi, i loved this FF...........its diffrent................really hatke............i like negative Mayank................n poor Nupur.

awesome writing.............awesome concept..................really nice.

plz pm me when ever u update.

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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome update......very very interesting

cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanku guyz !! Thanx a tonn...
I am updating almost daily so it becums bit difficult to reply to ur comments ..
but they surely means a lot to me ...
THANKU FRIENDS
-Ruchi

Part--5

I hugged Dia instantly and tears started flowing down my eyes . ''Nupur clam down ..please '' dia said consoling me . After i relaxed a bit , i pulled out of hug and looked at Dia
''why did it happen with me Dia ?..'' She said with lump in my voice..
''Sammy told me everything ...'' Dia said rejected ''but why didnt u inform me ? i am not evn worth sharing ur feelings'' She said bit annoyed
''please dia ..atleast u dont say this , I lost many things and now not u '' I said between my sobs
''i am sorry nupur..but evn i dont know , how to help u out ! i am feeling helpless ''
''Maybe somethings are meant to happen '' i said
My cell buzzed and it was my mom calling
''Hello '' i said trying to sound cheerful
After my convo , i looked at Dia with fresh tears in my eyes ''papa-mamma are shifting to Delhi tomorrow '' I said all blank
''what !!'' Dia said shocked
First i got married to the person i hate and evn who hates me too and now my mom-dad are shifting to Delhi ..is my fate soo unlucky that i cant evn have a single happiness in my life !!
Dia and I went to my place . I ran inside hugged Mom
''please ma..dont go ..!'' i cried like a kid
''nupur...kya hua beta !'' mom was shocked to see in this condition .
''mjhe nahin pata ...bas aap mat jao..please '' i didnt realise that i was letting my miserable condition getting visible to my parents
Mom broke the hug and looked at me
''tu khush hai na ?'' mom asked worried . I wiped my tears
'' Haan ma '' i said not meeting her eyes
''u are telling a lie'' papa stated
''nahin papa..nothing like that , i just cant stay away from u '' i said, trying to find out some words but luckily Dia interrupted
''cum'on uncle , aap jaante ho nupur ko , she easily gets emotional '' Dia said trying to divert the topic
''but still beta ..u never behaved like that'' papa again said ..
''aap woh chodiye..first tel me why are u shifting to delhi '' i said with my hands on my hips
''because , i am being transferred to Delhi ''
''but ..it never happened in past 15years , then why now ? '' i objected
''Delhi branch manager left , so i have goo there to handle things and my boss culdnt trust anyone else '' Papa explained
''papa ..''
''nupur , i always told u that work cums first and now evn u are settled ..so i dont have any tension '' papa said but i felt miserable
''hmm..okk , then i am gonna stay tonight here only '' before mom could object '' papa..please tel mom not to object '' i added
''obviously , today my daughter is gonna stay with me '' papa said hugging me
''love u papa '' i said
''arre ..Dia , come here '' papa said and Dia hugged her too . Dia was more than my friend to me , jus like an elder sister .
''ok , but inform Mayank atleast '' mom said and my face fell
''surely'' i said , trying to put up a smile
I tried samrat and Shilpa mom's number but they picked up .
Finally i tried at home ..
''Hello '' the same horrible voice came
''samrat ghar par hai ? '' i asked directly
''why ?'' i culd imagine that dirty look on his face
''i dont wish to talk to ..so please hand over phone to samrat '' i tried controlling my volume
''fine ..inform ma that i am staying at my place today '' i moved to keep down the reciever
''yeah..u must stay , ur Dad is leaving for Delhi '' he mocked
''i knew...it was u ! '' i said
''if u culd take away my family , then i have to take the revenge''
''u are wrong and always will be Mr. Sharma . And wel , i need to thank you atleast now i dont have to lie them on their face but on phone about my so-called happy married life. Thanx for making it easy for me'' i said and banged the phone down
I , Dia and mom-dad had great time ..it was after so long that i was enjoying myself !..And later , i evn had talk with Samrat .
They day passed on quickly and now mamma-papa were leaving for Delhi
Samrat too came to bid them adieu
''beta , where is mayank ? '' papa asked samrat
''ah..woh , actually bhaiya had some meetings lined up so he culdnt make here''
''its ok ! ''
Later they both left ..and i cried but somewhere i was happy that my parents are away to witness my terrible life
Weeks passed and now i was used to Sharmas. I and Mayank hardly talked and whenever we did , it was fight ! Samrat , Dia were always with me . Maybe i didnt show but it was affecting me . Lie-ing to papa-mamma everytim i talked to them , not having en a tinge of married life , i hated my husband and vice-versa . Unwanted thoughts passed throu my mind but always stopped myself coz of mom-dad . Samrat-Dia tried hard to change my mood and somethings are diifficult to change
Nothings lasts forever...wel , someone said this correctly ..coz nothing left in my life after something terrible
Shilpa mom was in Singapore to attend conference and samrat went for a business meeting . As usual , i was sitting in my room doing practially nothing when i saw my door bang open . I looked to see Mayank standing with his eyes blood-red and aggression on his face.
''What the hell is this ?'' i said getting up and going towards him
I was choked by liquor smell cuming from him .
''Get out from my room'' i shouted and instead he pulled me and placed his mouth on me . He was mad ..i culd feel it . When i refused to part my lips i felt his cannines scratching my skin off from lips
''ouch..'' i pushed him ... '' leave me ''
''i wont '' he moved closer . I was being dragged by him , when he pushed me on bed
''Mayank u are not in ur senses ...leave me '' I shouted and tried to get up but in impulse his body was on mine
I tried pushing him but all in vain and felt his lips on my body and his hands ripping my night gown off . Tears welled up and i was choking for air , wanted to scream but voice betrayed me .. Later i was lying numb with my every inch being explored by his dirty hands. My soul ,the moment i felt his body on mine left and now...i was dead..! i was dead...i was d-e-a-d !
Ok..thats it guys . Please no chappals on me !!!...
I know , u all wil hate this part ..
-Ruchi
Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
res šŸ˜Ž
usi post pe edit kar dena... šŸ˜†

I want to hate mayank
I felt terribly bad for Nupur, 😭
But I guess after seeing Nupur numb, mayank will change....
You will change him, hain na?

I love Dia and samrat!

I hope mayank sudhar jaaye....

Just make him feel too guilty.....
Actually Nupur shouldnt forgive him easily...

Thank you ji, meri baat maane ke liye...

Love yaa..
Dnt worry you'll get excellent marks!😃
Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lol...twinee as u say ji :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
This Mayank is a nutcase! šŸ˜† And I love Samrat . . I love repeating this! 🤣

Awesomely written, gal. Continue soon!

-Kanky

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