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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#301

Hey Ruchi,

At last we got a taste of the past, even though its not the complete story but man I am already scared as to what happened with our Nups. But as always brilliantly written. Am so looking forward to read ahead, let your mind rule your story, this is yours and we love it.

God bless!

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#302

nice part
really felt bad for nupur
loving this ff
😊

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abb01

@abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#303

Hey bhagwan Ruchi,

I hate mayank chiiiiiiii

i am feeling pitty for poor nupur

par pata hai i started count down .... how many to go for good Mayank please tell me

Just keeping hope all izz well sweety

update was really touching

i hate such kind of raging and that too mayank

who tried what not ,

and the end he really deserve the slap

infect even b4 she would have done that

Anyways der aaye durust aaye

i just pray he understands that he is wrong

take care and Love you toooooooooooo muccccccccccccc

Ruchi dear

Aru Di

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#304

i m feeling so bad for nupur....
but update was really great..!!!
continue it sooooon.........

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#305

OMG OMG

how did I miss part 4????!!!!!!!!!!😲😭

sachi mein I love this partttttt!!!
have no wordzzz for it Ruchi !!!
U are such an amazing writer !!!!!

the bestest ever !!!!
so Nupur in Mayankzz room

n then he came n she said stay away from me

n then his mom came n said sorry to Nupur

n she slapped Mayank

n then she took Nupur with her

n told her that she could divorce Mayank

ut she said no, becuz she dunn want her parentzz finding out about that, n then

Shilpa aunty went to get water for her

n then Mayu comezzz mad
n asked why Nupur is not with him

awwwww just love Sammy protecting Nupur

n then Shilpa aunty comezz n said that Nupur will sleep with her, not Mayank.....

sachi mein sis u wrote everything sooo beautifully

luvvv u loadzzz

can't wait to read the next part

n haan sachi mein I didn't know about this part

warna I would of run n read it😆

luvvv ya🤗

-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#306

Part 5

hey sis I just love this part !!!
have no wordzz for it !!!
MayUrzzz sorty sooo touching

feel sad for Nupur

Mayank soo batamise😭

just want him to change soon !!!!
paata nahi kab change ho ga !!!
but love this part

Sammy sooo different from his brother na !!!

n that stupid RV didn't even stop Mayank instead the played the song !!!
anywayzzz in the end wowowowowoow

Nupur slapzz him !!!
thatzz why he soo mad at her !!!
n wantzz to hurt her !!
do continue soon na !!
can't wait to read more !!
this FF my fav one !!
just love it sis!!

n haan Dia there

in the end

can't wait anymore

plezz plezzz plezz cont ASAP na

luvv ya

-Lina-

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#307

awesome part ruchi amazing plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#308

Hey Ruchi
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Nice update

now confusions abt past are clear

Update asap

Love,
Shreyu

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#309

U didn't pmed me! 😔

I so dislike this mayank.....but still i love the way u portray him.....

He only wants her and not loves her! chee!

mujhe naa jaane aisa kyun lagta hai that mayank wants revenge from nupur due to something.....i mean he really loves her...

and what is the past?

Oh man! so mayank got really close to her without her wish even!

and he kissed her!

and she slapped him....well he deserved that!

Beautiful update!

i loved it completely....

now i think the entire thing is clear....

Do continue soon....

Love,
Mahak

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#310

Hi ! 😳

You are an awesome writer, Ruchi! Keep up the good work! 👍🏼

Aww . . I feel bad for Nupur! Such things happen at colleges, I've heard. Men are dogs, undoubtedly! 😆

Update soon.

-Kanky

Edited by -Kanky- - 15 years ago