FF: Geet and Maan Love story...pt 16, pg 18

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kiran naryani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

very nice plz bring geet maan together

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Durga1191

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PART 13

G and M enter the room and feel very awkward... they look at each other and again have a eye lock

The pandit enters and tells them that the room was closed for years and there isnt much in the room... He gives them blankets, and a match box to lite fire in the fire place.

G looks around the house... there is no bed and the place isn't clean/dusty... there is a lot of other stuff in the room ....there is only a little place in front of the fire place that is gud enough to sit....

M walks towards the Fire place and lights it .... as the fire lights he looks at G who's face is glowing ....
G comes to the fire place and starts to warm her hands.... M just looks at her (the two of them are sitting opposite of each other)G then notices M starting at her ... they have another eye lock

Jaane Kya chahe man bawara from pyar ke side effects plays in the back ground

G: sir ... kya hua
M: (is brought back to reality... he gets angry and talks to G in a frustrated tone) Yeh sab tumhari galti hain... kisne kaha tha mujhe dhoond ne ke liye...
G: eh le ... jiska bhala karne jao woh hi ghoossa karta hain aur upar se kehte hain kyun bhala kar rahi ho ... babaji kya karoo mein inka

M: (looking at her with a crazy face) tum pagal ho gayee ho kya ... jab dekho apne aap se baat karti rehti ho ... i think tumhe ek psychiatrist ki zaroorat hain ...
G: ahhhhhhh aap ko mujh se jhagad na accha lagta hain kya ...jab dekho mujhe ya toh dante rehte hain ya phir soona te reh te hain ya mera mazak udate reh te hain ... aap se accha toh woh Pr hain jo har roz mujhe phool de ta hain aur mujh se muskura kar baat karta hain ...

M gets sad after hearing Pr's taarif from G's mouth

M: ( in a sad voice) aisa nahi hain G... lekin tumhari iss harkat ki waje se tum bhi toh problem mein pad gayee na... dekho G mein apne aap ko sambhal sakta hoon... lekin tum iss shehar mein nayee ho aur agar tum gum ho jati toh aur kuch ho jata toh ... soch samajh kar phaisle liya karo G ...
G: (looking all sad) sorry sir .... lekin ..(paused)
M: thik hain ... lekin aage se apna jo thoda sa dimag hain woh use kiya karo
G: ahhh ... aap phir shuru ho gaye
M: oh sorry .. woh kya hain na kuch aadat si pad gayee hain ... jab bhi tum mere samne aati ho na toh yeh sab nikal jata hain
G: (thinking) Dusht Danav... lekin accha hain woh sahi salamat hain mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...

They both sit in front of the fire... and warm themselves...
M is seen thinking about something , and G notices that

G: sir aap kuch soch rahe hain
M: kyun ab mein soch bhi nahi sakta
G: le meine aisa kab kaha ... mein toh sirf pooch rahi thi....lekin aap hain ki ..
M: G tum aise sawal poocho gi toh aise hi jawab milenge ...

Again there is silence for a while... none of them talk .... G goes and brings the blankets and gives one of them to M...
Both of them wrap the blanket around themselves ....

M: ummm im sorry ...
G: ji kis baat ke liye
M: woh meine tumhari aur Pr ki baate sun li thi ... iss liye
G: ohh.. koi baat nahi ... woh zidh kar raha tha issi liye waha par hi usne...(interrupted)
M : its ok i dont want to know .... (keeps quite for a while, trying to hide his feelings and sadness) ... toh tum dono kab shaadi kar rahe ho ...
G: haan woh ... ek minute kya ... shaadi kis ki ...
M: (confused) tumhari aur Pr ki ...
G: (shocked) kya ... meri aur Pr ki shaadi ... sir yeh aap kya keh rahe hain ... mein Pr se shaadi kyun karoongi
M: ussne aaj propose kiya aur tumne yes kaha ...
G: nahi sir, usne mujhe propose nahi kiya... nahi kiya lekin woh mere liye nahi tha....
M: G tum mujhe pagal samajh rahi ho kya... meine jo dekha woh dhoka nahi tha.
G: nahi sir joh aapne dekha woh sahi hain lekin woh toh sirf practice kar raha tha... actual mein Pr pragati ko propose karne wala hain ....
M: ab yeh pragati kaun hain
G: Pragati uski GF hain, woh bombay mein rehti hain aur kuch dino mein yaha aa rahi hain aur Pr usse propose karne wala hain... lekin usse dar lag raha tha, aur usse practice karni thi phir usne mujh se practice karne ke liye madat mangi aur meine haa kar diya...
M: (relieved to hear that) ohhh... sorry again ...
G: (happy to see him happy) koi baat nahi ...

The night is slowly passing by ...the two of them are beside each other and are leaning against two chairs (one for each) ...G starts to fall asleep ...but her head tilts to the side every time she falls asleep ... (u know like the office scene) ... M notices this and places her head on his shoulder and they both fall asleep...
the two are shown sleeping in front of a burning fire ...

Sorry getting very late ... i gotta go get some sleep ...
I shall post tomorrow...
THANX FOR READING

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

nice...hope she tells maan bout her pregnancy soon and please add me to the pm list
i hope maan finds out like maybe after this geet faints and he brings her to hospital and then he finds out and she explains...but i guess it can't be all smiles

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Sireesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Thats so Lovely Dear👏👏👏

pls update soon

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sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

hey jst read both parts

nd it was amazing

plzzzzzzzzzz continue

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

wow wonderful updates... really cute.. hope geet tells him abt her pregnancy.. do continue soon n plzz pm me..

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Sarita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

gr8 updates, thnk god u hv bcom sort of more regular in updating ur posts:)

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Both the parts were nice

Atlast all confusion is cleared

Hop Maan expresses his feelings soon

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Aleena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

great update

maneet cute fight is

toh tum dono kab shaadi kar rahe ho ...

M: G tum mujhe pagal samajh rahi ho kya... meine jo dekha woh dhoka nahi tha.

M notices this and places her head on his shoulder and they both fall asleep...

plzzz conti soon

Edited by cute-aly - 14 years ago