FF: Geet and Maan Love story...pt 16, pg 18 - Page 10

awesome update!! hope she will tell him about her pregnancy soon...cant wait for the next part. pls cont.soon

nicee, update soon x
i hope maan will find out abouts geets preg haha she coulf faint or fall.... :)
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naina x

Part 14

Recap: M and G spend the night in a room behind the mandir... G falls asleep on M's shoulder

The next morning (its about 5:30 am)... G wakes up and sees that she had fallen asleep on M's shoulder ... She stares at a sleeping M for a while and snaps out .... G quickly gets up... M feels that G's head is not on his shoulder and wakes up, he sees her standing near a window... He goes close to her and stands behind her.... both of them feel the fresh air... then M speaks up

M : hume nikalna chahiye.... toofan bhi shant ho gaya hain
G: haan

Now the scene shifts to M and G in the car ... its a silent ride; the two of them don't say a word.... M turns the radio on and the song " Tera mera pyar sanam (falguni pathak song)" (here is the link if u never heard this song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mrg2l_qaZP0 ) ..... the two of them get uncomfortable listening to it.... M reaches to turn it off but G stops him
As the song goes on they give looks to each other and remember things that happened between them.

M drops G at home....
G very quitely enters her room through the window.... when she enters she sees P sleeping in her bed with the letter in her hand.
G wakes P up ...

P: G tu aa gayee
G: tu yaha kya kar rahi hain
P: tera intazar kar rahi hoon ....shukar kar meine papa ko kuch nahi kaha.... mujhe pata tha ke tu DD ko dhoondne zaroor jayegi ....
G: thank you P, sorry mujhe aise nahi jana chahiye tha...
P: mujhe aadat ho gayee hain G, tu jab dekho apne aap ko problem mein dalti rehti hain ... woh chod yeh bata DD mile
G: haan... woh mandir mein the
P: thik hain chal thodi der so ja aur phir nashte ke liye aa jana..... aur iss bar plz bhag mat jana ....

on the other hand M reaches home... goes to his room in the outhouse...
He thinks about the night and G

M: yeh ehsaas jisse main apne aap se door rakh raha tha, woh wapas aa rahe hain aur yeh G .... yeh mujhe badal rahi hain, uski waja se yeh ehsaas (pauses ).... (straitens up) nahi mujhe apne aap par kaboo karna hoga... aur uss G se door rehna hoga ...

After a few hours ... (the scene moves to office) ....Maan avoids G and G is left confused but she doesn't say anything.....

Pr comes to G's office with flowers and asks if she took her medicine.....
G looks at Pr who seems a bit disturbed .....

G: Pr kya hua tum kuch pareshan lag rahe ho
Pr: G ummmm ... pata nahi mein tumhe kaise bataoon ... (he waits for a while) uhhhhhh Pragati ka transfer ruk gaya ... woh ab yaha nahi aa rahi hain ...
G: what? par tum toh usse propose karne wale the.... ab?
Pr: pragati ne kaha ki mein waha aa jaoon
G: (looks tensed) aur tumne kya kaha ..
Pr: mein sidha tumhare paas aagaya ....
G: kya... Pr tum bhi ek dum paagal ho ....
Pr: lo jiss se salah lene aaya woh mujhe pagal keh rahi hain...
G: sorry ... tumhe usske paas jana chahiye .... uss se pyar karte ho toh jao... pragati ke saath tumhe aage chal kar poori zindagi bitani hain ....ek kam karo sir ke paas jao aur unhe kaho ke woh tumhe unki bombay wali company mein transfer karde ....ek minute mein hi unse baat kar leti hoon
Pr: usski koi zaroorat nahi hain .....
G: kyun?
Pr: woh meine un se pehle hi baat kar li thi
G: 😲.... par ...
Pr: (talking very slowly and scared) woh kya hain na... mujhe pata tha ke tum kuch aisa hi kahogi toh meine pehle hi sir se pooch liya tha
G: aur pragati
Pr: usse toh mein surprise doonga.... lekin G ek baat hain; tumhara khayal kaun rahkega ... tumhe toh hamesha force karke dawaee deni padti hain .... lekin aab toh mein nahi rahoonga toh yeh sab kaun karega....
G: Pr meri chinta mat karo ... aur rahi baat dawai ki woh mein time par loongi ... tum sirf pragati ka khayal rakho.....

Pr: thanx G ….

A few days pass by … M still tries hard to avoid G … Pr leaves Delhi, G becomes sad seeing him leave…..

Then as per the actual Geet show…. From M telling G to organize the launch party for Mr. Chopra's project …. (same thing that we saw on TV, but there are no Sasha or Tasha) to Pari showing up… (that means today's episode)

Sorry guys i had to do some improvisation... couldn't think of anything.... but that's it for now... i know im disappointing u all, but that's all i could think of for now... hopefully i will get some idea of how to continue the story.... So plz let me know how i did and don't kill me

okay...nice part...

u need suggestions right? Muhahahahahahaha....okaies...
Maybe now it is time for Maan to find out that she is pregnant....

So maybe during the party,Maan is trying to make Geet jealous as per the show and she ignores her medication while preparing for the party and also during the party so she faints and Maan gets so worried brings her to hospital and finds out that she is preggers......just my suggestion but this can only happen after he accpets that he loves her and pari appears in ur story right?

please update soon though

nice part!!!!

although short but sumtning is better than nuthing!!!

update sooN!!!!

Veryyy sweetttt part.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima

suggestions, see some ongoing FFs on maneet n others, m sure u ll get loads of ideas

Thats awesome Dear

Originally posted by: desigurl953

okay...nice part...

u need suggestions right? Muhahahahahahaha....okaies...
Maybe now it is time for Maan to find out that she is pregnant....

So maybe during the party,Maan is trying to make Geet jealous as per the show and she ignores her medication while preparing for the party and also during the party so she faints and Maan gets so worried brings her to hospital and finds out that she is preggers......just my suggestion but this can only happen after he accpets that he loves her and pari appears in ur story right?

please update soon though

yeahhh i agree with you
maybe she should faint or something to do with her preg
thx plz update soon x

nice update...sad tht prem left...do continue soon..