FF: Geet and Maan Love story...pt 16, pg 18

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hi your really too good please add me in pm list

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Hi,

Nice part keep updateing & add me in pm

update soon yaarrrr

now MK is hurt

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hi really gud and beautiful update
i like this story very much
update the next part asap
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Posted: 14 years ago

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amazing update...awww maan is jealous...hope this misunderstanding will be finished soon...prem is really sweet...cant wait for the next part. do cont.soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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plzzzzzzzzzzzz update the next part soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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pm me he next parts they are awsome i lie your writtting style

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Posted: 14 years ago

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That was so good update soon. Xx

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Superb update... ⭐️
Bechara Maan 😭
The poor guy is feeling tortured thinking that Geet has accepted Prem's proposal!

Please update asap and relieve his misery 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PART 11

Recap: Pr tells G about Pragati.... Pr practices proposing with G .... M sees it and misunderstands ....M gets heart broken

M leaves the office in anger and depression.... he is driving (isnt focusing on the speed) and remembering his moments with G... then he remembers all the moments of G with Pr....
M is driving at a high speed and suddenly when he comes out of his trance his car crashes into a tree....
M cant figure out what is wrong with him and why he is acting this way? just then the temple bell rings... M decides to go in...

M climbs the temple steps....(its night time, and its a Durga mandir) ...there is no one at the temple
The weather has become severe; windy, thunder and is about to rain..

M comes towards Maa Durga...M prays and sees G when he closes his eyes. M opens his eyes quickly ...

M: (thinking) yeh kya ho raha hain mere saath ... kyun mujhe yeh ladki har jaga dikhayi deh rahi hain .... mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha hain ... jis emotion se mein itne dino se door bhag raha tha woh emotion wapas aa rahe hain aur yeh sab uss G ke waja se ho raha hain ....woh mujhe badal rahi hain aur yeh sare ehsaas sab wapas aa rahe hain.....

M starts thinking about G and Pr.... he thinks about G being with Pr today and then he thinks of G being married to Pr.....

M gets sad again ... he sits down and leans against a pillar....

On the other side G gets a call from M's home ...a servant calls her because dadi tells him to. G finds out that M hasnt come home yet ...

G: sir abhi tak ghar nahi pohoche.... par kyun ....

Sorry ppl getting very late ... i will update this post tomorrow for sure...

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