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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
hey guys i just wanted to let u guys know a few things:

1) my username has changed; u guys probably noticed
2) im a bit busy so i wont have that much time to post my stories but ill always try..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys sorry for being so late.... i was confused at what i should write but ne ways here we go...

PART 5
Recap: Maan has called Geet at the office to finish the project.

Ok so everything that was showed on TV that happened in the office at night b/w maan and geet happenes. An the thing that happens in the morning without Sasha and Tasha...also someone else from the office circulates their picture.... then everything that happened in todays episode (7th july 2010) except for Tasha and Sasha ... No precap as well...

Prem: Pr
Adi: A
Pinky: P
Maan: M
Geet: G

Prem Malhotra

Starts with a normal day. Today is an interview day for Sasha's post.
G goes inside a room with A and M to take everyones interview....almost everyones interview was done only two ppl were left.
Thats when Pr enters the screen with the song "I hate luv storys" from the movie I hate luv storys... then he enters the office
All the girls heart goes "double dhak dhak" 😆especially P's

Pr opens the door and goes inside ... the first person he sees is G. Pr comes near the table where everyone was and introduces himself.

Pr: (shakes A, M, and G's hand) hi my name is Prem... Prem Malhotra
M: have a seat
Pr: thank you

M and A ask most of the questions to Pr; G is silent which makes Pr look at her more ... this makes M very uncomfortable 😳

after about 20-30 min Pr comes out of the room. Then the other 3 come out...
When G comes outside P pulls her to the side...

P: G woh kaun tha
G: 😕kaun
P: woh jo abhi bahar aya
G: A, aur sir hi toh bahar aaye
P: arre yaar ... tu sach mein paagal hain ... mein toh uss ki baat kar rahi hoon jo tumhare pehle bahar aaya
G: kaun Prem
P: Prem ... haye uska naam prem hain
G: han toh
P: toh 😳!!!!!! arre tune dekha nahi lekin meine dekha ... kya hot chiz hain yaar ... agar woh samosa ya kachori hota toh mein usse ek hi bite mein kha leti
G: P tuh yeh kya keh rahi hain
P: G teri ankhe thik hain na ... arre yaar kitna handsome ladka hain yaar...mera dil toh Dhak Dhak hua woh bhi double bar.... agar woh hire hota hain na toh mein usse DDD bulaoongi
G: yeh DDD kya hain ??????
P: Dhak Dhak Dil
G: 😆 tuh sach mein pagal hain P... pehle tu sar ko DD bula ti thi aur ab isse
P: arre Pr ke samne DD toh kuch bhi nahi hain ..... I think I'm in LOVE👍🏼
G: Chal chod ...ghar chalte hain
P: kya yaar G....

The next day:-
A comes to M's office to discuss who gets Sasha's position...

M: haan A toh kya lagta hain tumhe, kaun hain jise tumne choose kiya hain
A: ssssirrrr ...uummm Prem Malhotra

M gets a bit angry

M: kyun
A: uummm sssiirrr uuussseee zzzzyyyyaaaaaddddaa eeeexxxxxppeerience hain aur woh tttrrained bhi hhhain
M: ok toh tum usse appoint kar lo
A: oooook sir

A goes to G's office

A: G ek appointment letter type karo Mr.Prem Malhotra ke naam par ...unhe Sasha ki position mil gayee hain
G: unhe mili hain yeh job
A: haan MK ne unhe hi choose kiya hain
G: thik hain A sir main abhi kar deti hoon
A: aur unhe phone kar ke bata de na ... aur unhe kal se job par aane ke liye keh dena
G: ok sir

G calls Pr.... he picks up the phone

Pr: hello
G: ji kya mein Prem Malhotra se baat kar sakti hoon
Pr: yes speaking
G: mein Khurana's ke office se baat kar rahi hoon ...
Pr: Khurana's jaha meine kal interview diya tha
G: ji mein MK ki secretary Geet baat kar rahi hoon.... apko yeh job gayee hain aur aap kal se join kar sakte hain..
Pr: ohhh great thank you ...waise aap wohi hain na joh kal interview le rahi thi
G: ji
Pr: ahhhh ...nice talking to you again
G: (smiles) thank you ... hum apko kal milenge... aath baje
Pr: ji ... mein time par pohoch jaaoonga

Both hang up and smile very cutely ....


Ok sorry guys gotta go ... too much work .... ill post very soon ... also let me know what you think PLZ.... and tell me if u like the guy i chose ....Sorry guys if u read this FF before all i did was change the guy. the first one didnt seem right


Edited by Durga1191 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Ok so, ill continue
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PART 6

Recap: A new entry in the show, Prem Malhotra for Sasha's position. Maan offers him the position and Geet calls him to let him know that he got the job.

Next day Pr comes to the office before time.... P sees him coming and her heart goes DD...
A comes to Pr...

A: hello Mr.Malhotra
Pr: please sir aap mujhe sirf prem hi bulaiye
A: ok Pr... yeh raha tumhara appointment letter.

Then A takes him to his office... they both then come to the reception to give him some more information about the office and MK.
Just then G enters ....Pr keeps looking at her...G notices him looking at her.

G: hello... aap sach mein time par agaye
Pr: well mein time ka puntual hoon
G: yeh acchi baat hain... aur iss office mein time ka puntual hona bohot zaroori hain warna MK apko bohaut sunayenge.
Pr: wow... aisa lagta hain ke aap bohot experienced hain.
G: haan
P: aur ek baat yaha MK ko ek aur naam se bula te hain ...DD
Pr: DD ...matlab
P: Dhak Dhak

Everyone laughs ....

P: waise Pr agar mein tumhe DDD bulaoon toh koi problem toh nahi hain na
Pr: let me guess DDD matlab Dhak Dhak Dhak
P: 😆 nahi Dhak dhak dil
Pr: ok..... mujhe koi bhi problem nahi hain ...


just then M enters and sees all of them laughing...also sees that Pr is near G.

P: 😲 G....DD aa gaye
G: ohh ok mein chalti hoon
Pr: yeah mein bhi chalta hoon ... kaam ke taraf bhi toh dekhna hoga

Pr and G walk away and are walking in a hallway kind of place when Pr stops....

G: kya hua
Pr: ummm..... yeh shayad jaldi hain lekin... mujhse dosti karogee 😆
G: hmmmm dekhenge...... thode din ruk jayiye phir soch ke bata doongi
Pr: ok , mein wait karoonga... well mein chalta hoon

G watches him walk away and smiles ...in the background kal ho na ho: heartbeat instrument is playing (link for that tune http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4N_UxqHuJYY)
M sees all this from a corner and looks jealous but he doesnt know its jealousy yet

(Sorry guys i wanted to make this a bit interesting but i couldnt think of anything)

Later that day.... during lunch time Pr comes to G's office.

Pr: G ... ummm aap khana khaya
G: nahi ... kyun
Pr: mein A aur P ko lunch par bahar le ja rahe hoon , aap chalengi
G: ummmm
Pr: please😳

Pr comes near her chair and gives her that puppy dog look with his lovely eyes

G: thik hain lekin ek shart par ... aap mujhe "aap" nahi kehenge ...aisa lagta hain ke main koi pachas sath sal ki koi boodhi hoon
Pr: hmmmm manzoor hain

They leave for lunch and as usual M sees this from his office, and doesnt seem that pleased.

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ok sorry again way too late for me gotta go to bed... bye.... i shall post the next part tomorrow

let me know what u guys think? what i should add? adn if it met all the standards?

Edited by Durga1191 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
luved both parts....

continue soon!!!👍🏼

can u plz ad me in ur pm list!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
hiiii thanx 4 the link
loved this ff too
from 1st to last!!
u hav written maneet scenes amazingly
loved all of them!!
so now maan is geetting jealous
mmm...interesting..lol
i think he will keep irritating by geet n prem friendship..lol
n that DDD dhak dhak dil wooowww
pinky is really creative..lol
ok conts soon
see yaaa
muuaahhh
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
hey great ff, its interesting, lol and i see that you made a new entry...is it to make Maan jealous? and realise his love for Geet? lol
anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon
btw, can you please add me to your pm list? thanks
Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok guys its been long ...sorry ...

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PART 7

Recap: Prem asks geet to join him, Adi and pinky for lunch. Geet agrees...

Pr: prem
P:pinky
A: adi
M: maan
G: geet
D: dev


It starts off with everyone having lunch, they talk for a while and then decide to leave because they dont want to get yelled at by MK. They are walking back to the office (this is on the side of the road); G sees a couple with their child and after seeing them she dosses off to her past and starts walking ahead of everyone😲. G starts walking like close to the middle of the road thinking about Dev and her child, she doesnt see a car coming towards her😲. She was about to get hit when Pr pulls her out of the way👏.

Pr: (all scared holding onto G's waist) G, tumhara dhyan kaha hain.

G comes out of her past and looks at Pr who is holding her waist 😃and then remembers how she was about to get hit by a car and how Pr saved her. she pulls his hand away from her waist.

G: woh mein kuch soch rahi thi .. aur mera dhyan nahi gaya... (she pauses for a while, looks around) waise thank you tumne meri jaan bachayee
Pr: koi baat nahi ... umm ek baat poochu
G: haan😕
Pr: kya tum apne past ke bare mein soch rahi thi
G: (with a shocked look) ummmm woh... haan
Pr: dont worry mein tumhare past ke bare mein nahi poochonga😳 ... jab tumhe lage ke hum acche dost bagaye hain tab tum chaho toh bata sakti ho.

A and P come to Pr and G

A: G tuuuuummm thik ho
G: haan mein thik hoon
P: G tujhe road par chalne ki bimari toh nahi ho gayee na ... woh jo serial mein sare actors karte hain waisi bimari😆
G: yeh sab chodo hume office jana chahiye warna tumhre DD ghussa karenge 😡
P: haan 😲

they get back to the office and back to work....
The day ends and G is about to go home. Pr was passing by G's office when he stops and goes to G.

G: arre Pr, tum abhi tak ghar nahi gaye
Pr: woh mein abhi ja raha tha phir meine dekha ke tum abhi tak ghar nahi gayee
G: mein bhi abhi nikal rahi thi
Pr: umm aao mein tumhe drop kar deta hoon
G: nahi nahi mein chali jaoongi , roz toh jati hoon ...
Pr: haan roz toh jati ho lekin aaj mere saath chalo ... agar tum yeh soch rahi ho ke mein aisa waisa ladka hoon toh tum galat zamajh rahi ho.. phir bhi agar chaho toh koi knife lekar aa sakti ho, u know just in case.
G: (smiles) nahi aisi baat nahi hain , mein kisi pe bojh nahi banna chahti
Pr: dont worry koi bhi problem nahi hain.
G: lekin mein toh P ke saath ghar jati hoon
Pr: thik hain usse bhi saath lete hain

Pr and G come to P

G: P chal chalte hain Pr hume ghar lekar ja raha hain
P: haye DDD kya baat hain.. thank you
Pr: (smiles) no problem

So the three of them leave together and are going towards Pr's car when P remembers that she forgot her phone at the reception. P goes inside to get her phone; Pr and G wait for her near his car. MK comes out and the sees the two of them together talking and laughing, and gets maha jealous.

M: yeh Pr G ke saath itna kyun hota hain. Aur G iss waqt Pr ke saath kyun hain aur abb tak ghar kyun nahi gayee. Lekin mein yeh kyun soch raha hoon, mujhe itna bura kayun ag raha hain ke G Pr ke saath hain. Yeh kya ho raha hain.

P comes running towards Pr and G. They get into his car; G sits in the front beside Pr and P in the back, and they drive off. M sees this and starts to wonder.

M: yeh G Pr ke saath kaha ja rahi hain, woh bhi itni raat ko. (starts thinking but then gets his angry man expression back) Mujhe kya , woh kuch bhi kare; mujhe kuch pharak nahi padata.

M gets home and the entire time thinks about what G was doing with Pr? Why she went in his car? He tries to avoid thinking about it but then ends up wondering.
M then goes into the shirtless state where he is fighting in the spotlight and thinks about G and wonders if she is ok.
M gets frustrated. He picks up his cellphone and calls G's home. The first time he calls P picks, he quickly cuts the phone; the second time he calls P's dad picks, he again cuts the phone. He waits for a while and then calls, this time G picks up. M doesnt say anything just keeps litening to her talk... G starts to get annoyed and...

G: Hello kaun bol raha hain... (after a few seconds) agar baat nahi karni thi toh phone kyun kiya... Khotte,oolloo...
Pr: arre tum kisko galiya de rahi ho .. chalo phone rakho

G bangs the phone. M on the other hand is shocked to hear Pr's voice and wonders what he was doing at G's place. He gets angry and throws the phone across the room. Just then D comes and sees the broken phone..

D: kya hua bro, aap itne ghusse mein kyun hain
M: (angrily) kuch nahi...
D: kuch toh baat hain, aap ne apna phone todh diya .. matlab kuch toh baat hain
M: (looks at him angrily) tumhe samjh mein nahi aata.. koi baat nahi hain...

M leaves in anger, leaving D wondering about his behaviour.

On the other hand, in G's house

Pr: ( is near the door and is about to leave) Thanx P, G . Mujhe khane par invite kiya.
G: koi baat nahi, tumne aaj mujhe bachaya aur hume ghar tak choda toh humra bhi toh koi farz banta hain na.
P: haan G bilkul sahi keh rahi hain ...
Pr: waise ab kya hum dost ban gaye hain ya nahi
G: (smiles and waits for a few seconds , thinks; brings forth her hand) Kya mujhse dosti karoge
Pr: (smiles and shakes her hand) haan

Pr leaves.

P: (to G) kitna cute aur accha hain Pr...
G: haan. Ab tu puri raat uski baat kare gi ya sone bhi jayegi. Chal ja so ja , baad mein uski baat karna
P: (agrees and goes to sleep)

The next day, G comes to the office and is wearing white.
M comes to his office and through the glass wall see's G in the white dress. He is amazed at how beautiful she looks in White .. he stares at her for gud 5 min. Just then Pr enters G's office and gives G 4 different flowers ( a lilly, rose, tulip and an orchid).

G: (takes the flowers) yeh kisliye
Pr: humari nayi dosti ke liye ...
G: lekin iski koi zaroorat nahi thi
Pr: lekin mujhe laga iski zaroorat thi.... meine P ko bhi diya hain.
G: tum kya apne sare dosto ko phool dete ho
Pr: (sweet smile) haan... woh kya hain na meri koi family nahi hain aur usually mein akela hi khata hoon. Aur kal P, Uncle aur tumhare saath khana kha kar mujhe bohot accha laga issi liye mein yeh phool lekar agaya.

G gets up and places the flowers in a vase.

G: yeh bohot acche hain... (turns around to look at him) thank you
Pr: tum mujhe har baat ke liye thank you bola band karo... accha mein chalta hoon warna boss naraz ho jayenge.
G: ek aur baat kabhi boss ko flowers mat dena
Pr: (confused) kyun?
G: woh unhe phool pasand nahi hain
Pr: what? phool pasand anhi hain ... kaisa aadmi...

Pr comes close to her.... they are like a few inches away from each other. M is watching it all from his office and is fuming, its like he is going to kill Pr at that instant.

Pr: ek baat batao MK ko kuch pasand bhi hain ya nahi? jab dekho ghusse mein dikhte hain, sabse angrily baat karte hain, kaam ke siwa unhe kuch dikhta hain.. pata nahi aur kya kya.
G: aisa nahi hain (she didnt feel gud that Pr was criticising him), woh bohot acche hain. Sabki madat karte hain, sahi salha dete hain. Bas unhe sirf kuch chize pasand nahi, aisa toh nahi hain ke har insan ko sab kuch pasand ho na chahiye. Mein manti hoon ke woh todhe se rukhe hain aur sab par ghussa karte lekin woh andar se bohot acche hain.

Pr is amazed at all the things she was saying about M.

Pr: accha baba thik hain , woh bohot acche hain ... mein chalta hoon

G is left alone to think about what she just said to Pr. She kept on wondering ehy she was defending M.
M on the other hand was going to blow up seeing G and Pr so close together but then thought why he was gettign so angry? M got back to his work and kept on sneaking looks at G and the same for G.
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Ok so far its gud for me ... ill write later ... plz do comment guys 🤗. Thank you

🤗


Edited by Durga1191 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hey mionblowing update
really like it
keep writting
do continue it soon
sanu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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jealous maan....😎

but i want more of maan n geet!!!!

update sooN!!👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely update, do add me in ur pm list.😊

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