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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
superb update
n tnx fr conting
Edited by love.mayurarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
I know main late se comment kar rahi hun... but abhi padha maine ( lazy me...😛)

Fanatastic mou... now i am really curious to see how the strory goes... write soon... will be waiting...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Thanks a ton for ur encouragement guys!!!!!! i really loved reading all ur comments...u guys still remebered this story😲 ..that's amazing!😃...coz i myself forgot abt it.😆
anyways her is another part- i had to write this ,though it may be a little bit boring for u coz u know all this already..but the story can't move without this part.INSHALLAH in next part u will get to read something new.😳

Part-6

"Sit" Dr. Rao instructed Mayank as they both entered her cabin. Mayank didn't bother to sit, he eagerly asked, " do u know her doctor?" "Is she here? I wanna meet her" "calm down first" Dr. Rao said in a firm voice, " first u need to answer some questions" I need to answer? Mayank exclaimed. " well I don't hv time for ur question answer session doctor, just tell me whether my wife is here or not, I wanna meet her right now""oh so eager to meet ur wife rn't u? teen saal baad yad ayi apne wife ki? Doctor rao's voice was still firm with bit of sarcasm in it. Mayank looked at her astonished'"What do u mean?" well what I mean is that , if u wanna meet this gal of the pic, u will hv to answers my questions first . i won't let any xy z to meet her who claim to be her husband." "Excuse me'u r crossing ur limit doctor." Mayank shouted. "no u r crossing ur limit'" dr.rao said .." what do u think? Is it so simple?'.After three years , u will just come one fine morning & claim that u r her husband & I will allow u to meet her.? No way, what's the prove that u r her husband? U can be fake, a fraud anything...i won't let anyone to hurt her'.ever." so if u want to meet her.u will hv to tell me in details where the hell were u all this years & never even tried to look for her?" " ok," mayank gave up'" I can understand what u r trying to say'..& trust me doctor..i hv all the proof u want at my home in Mumbai, I hv our wedding albums our marriage certificate.& most importantly her family, her sister Gunjan, her friends, relatives, everyone is there''..but right now I hv nothing with me'just let me meet her once please'I m sure she herself will tell u that I m her husband". Mayank pleaded. Somewhere in her heart Dr. rao believed him. But she sadly replied. " I wish she cud tell that Mayank, but she can't." "what?why?" Mayank looked confused. But dr. rao decided to not to tell anymore & asked him." I will tell u everything, once i get to c the proofs, but for now, at least tell me ur part of the story'what happened? How did u lost her?"'Mayank realized he has no option to meet Nupur right now, so gathering all the his patience he murmured to himself "fine, I hv waited for three years, I can wait for some more hours too'." & decided to tell Dr. rao the story of his life.The story of Mayank & Nupur.

" Nupur & me,we had to get married at an early age. both of us were in college then''..but her dad wanted her to get married to someone else &when he found out about us, he decided to get us married & then right after our marriage he disowned her." A shadow appears in Mayank's face remembering those moments. Dr. rao couldn't help but to think " her father disown her? how cud he?" but he she didn't ask Mayank anything & let him continue'.

" we started our new life together'.u know we had to spend our first few days at an abandoned classroom arranged for us by our friends as we didn't hv enough money to pay for house rent. I had no job & both of us were students back then, managing home along with study was not easy, but we decided to face all the hurdles together. She had her believe in me, she always used to say.i m the perfect person for her & she was sure one day her dad will realize that. & me, I promised myself to keep her happy always & yes even though we never got a lavish life & had to struggle to make our lives better, we were very happy. Because all we wanted is to be with each other for the rest of our lives & we had that." Mayank stopped as his eyes went moist with tears & his voice was shaking remembering beautiful days of their lives. He tried to control his emotions, he is never the person who let the world know what is happening inside his heart, but the pain was evident in his eyes. Dr Rao's heart melted seeing him like that; she didn't speak a word & let Mayank take his time to compose himself.

Mayank started again, "Things started looking better for us. I finally managed a part time job at college library & we shifted from the classroom to our friend sam's outhouse. Our very first home- home of Mayank & Nupurs.With her magic touch Nupur managed to give that lifeless out house a make over & turned it into into a home, A home full of our memories.' Mayak paused. " The rooms used to fill up with her giggles & my frowns every day, the walls were filled up with her posters of srk & shelfs were spilling over with my piles of books. Kitchen used to be a mess every morning with her burning toasts & tables & chairs used to be her talking partners whenever she used to get angry at me & stopped talking with me." Mayank smiled. "that house saw our pillow fights, our ruthna manana, our worries & anxieties, our smiles & our tears the house witnessed it all." Mayank paused for a moment then he started again, "Life started going a bit smoother for us & finally at the end of the year we had a contest at college that was offering job & scholarship." Mayank smiled remembering the event-"Can u believe it? We both participated there against each other without letting each other know abt it. Nupur was never into studies much yet she decided to participate because she wanted to do something for both of us. & I thought if I get this job our life will be a bit easier. We both wanted to win it for each others sake.& at the end of the day I couldn't manage to go for final interview & she got the scholar ship. When I came to know abt it, donno what happened to me I got angry on her & we fought. She left the house & I let her go. Only I know how I spend those few days when she was not there with me. I missed her every moment, wanted to her to come back .little did I knew, this was just the beginning-i will hv to spend lot more nights & days without her beside me." Mayank sighed. " as always after the fight we patched up, finally I managed to bring her back at home. I got a job at US & she got a job at Delhi. So for our better future, both of us mutually decided to stay separate for two years. We even planned to hv kids after three years! Everything was going good, we were happy with our decisions. But actually we both knew in our hearts that staying separate for two years is impossible for us. We need to fight with each other in every two hours & then we need to patch up with each other in every three hours, my days can never be complete without listening to her non-stop chatter & her nights will left incomplete without scolding my books! So when time of my departure heading nearer, she herself decided to leave the job at Delhi & come to US with me & though i was feeling a bit guilty that she has to leave such promising career opportunity here for me yet I was extremely happy that I don't hv to stay there without her & then when her visa & passport was done'.& I gave her the news at her sister's engagement party, my guilt vanished as I saw how happy she was! She wanted this as much as I do'." A broad smile appeared in Mayank's face & Dr. rao also smiled seeing that. She asked, "So what happened after that?" Mayank, who was lost in his happy memories get back to the present & then answered in a low tone," Then came that day - the day that snatched away my life from me'''even if I try I can never erase that horrifying memory of it'" he begin "we were leaving for airport..Nupur was happy & enthusiastic as always, waiting eagerly to welcome her new life in Us & I was happy to c her happy. Gunjan & Samrat were with us too, we all were in Samrat's car & he was driving. Suddenly he started driving faster & all of a sudden he lost control..the brakes failed & our car crashed ,i donno what happened after that as I lost my sense." Mayank paused. "two days after the accident when i get back my sense'Gunjan came to me'.with Nupur's dupatta & her broken mangalsutra.." his voice break.." they told me she is no more'.& I 'I 'he fumbled." I had no reason not to believe them though my heart screamed it can't be true'& then police confirmed that they found her burned body & I didn't even went for body identification. Someone else did that & I believed them." Mayank was shaking." Now I m realizing, it is my fault, I should hv checked, but at that time I didn't hv the courage'..how could I c her like that doctor u tell me? She was my life. How could I possibly c her lifeless? I couldn't, i just couldn't do that. I wanted to keep her happily smiling face alive in my memory forever. Not her lifeless burned body." Mayank broke into tears." I wish I could forget abt that day'i wish that day never came in to my life...i try hard to forget everything abt it , but i can't." he said in his tears, looking at dr. rao .who was also in tears but she didn't try to say anything to console Mayank coz smoe greifs r such u can never lessen them with ur words!. After some moment of silence,she wiped the tears off from her glass & finally speak up" u wish u could erase that memory Mayank, but u can't''''& ur Nupur'I wish she could get back this memory ..." she paused & Mayank looked at her all shocked. "but sadly she can't". She said looking at him.

"let me tell u the other part of this story now'" Dr. Rao begin''..


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Edited by Mou. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Mou it was so touching😭
you made me revisit MJHT...
but u stopped at such a crucial point yaar😳
plzz continue soon... ab wait nahi hota😳

~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Whoa Whoa!

Finally caught up with the chappie. Noiice! Moi izz liking the story, di. I was kinda feeling down...but i read this...n i feel better now. Thank you. *hugs

I m kinda excited to know how nupur will behave with mayank when she remembers nothing about him...Update soon.

Love,
Akki. :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Omg next chappie when i post the comment to previous chappie? :-D Reserved!

*Edit*

OMG, cliffie? 😳 You know i hate cliffhangers di...

But coming back to the MN lovestory revisited 😍 Kya din the woh. 😍 Thank you for reminding me of those days again. :)))

And lovely lovely chapter. I could see the scene in front of my eyes...:)

Haha, can i say, update sooon? 😕 Ofcourse i can.😎 Update soon.

Love,
Akki
Edited by You-Know-Who - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Mou...wow, wonderfully written. I could feel all those moments along with Mayank when he was describing it and it felt gr8...

U are a fab writer, and i m glad u decided to restart this FF... :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mou. this is wonderful and your making us all relive the moments mn all through your writing and its defintely saddening to read the this point of their live but its MN and i should know their love would overbear everything. so i'm waiting for the next part, i'm sure it'll be amazing, because i can already see from your words you have understood mn much better than any CVs.
and Mayanks description of everything was so wonderful, it felt like i was there, with him while he talked about the past days...gosh it was defintely a tear jerking moment.😳
amazing part. continue soon.
Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
This reminded me of all those times in MJHT Mou...those MayUr times and sweet moments..and that accident...

And now this doc is saying Nupur cant gain her memory back...no man...that would be so bad...



Anyways, the part was very nice...the way Mayank describes everything...plz do continue soon...want to know what happens next😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mou- it was wonderful update😃
it reminded me d old memories of MJHT
the way u explain d whole things in mayanks word and portrayed his feelings ---- just amazing👏👏
loved each n every bit of it...
Gosh i m missing them badly
fantastic update
plz do cot it.

take care

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