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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
Hey just read all 4 parts and wow.. im lovin' the way this is going šŸ‘ update soon and add me to your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Awesome ,fantastic,mindblowing update .My heart skipped a beat when Mayank finally sees Nupur. But why r u stop writing this FF. Plz continue .It's going very well...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Read half part - šŸ˜†

I loved the detail description of the mela....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
completed!!!!

that was mindblowing, totally loved it Dii,
oops its carnival na, I loved it..

The emotions, the feelings, was just amazing..

Pleaseeee continue soon..
and thanks for the pm...

-Samidha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Mou............1stly sorry, dil se sorry for not commenting earlier....................but nevertheless, u knw i loved it................

more than anything...................it was so simple and yet gripping.............

The whole carnival part and later in the rain...................oh i could picturise it all..............and i m sure with perfect expressions...............this would be the scene..........

You have a lovely flair of writing Mou, it just holds on the reader...........

Keep updating...............love u for this
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
MOUUUUUUšŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤— Am a fool for not having read this earlier! *hits self multiple times*
Back to position!

I simply LOVED this update! Hayyeee CVs stole your idea 🤣 🤣

I want MORE MORE MORE! *looks like a hungry kid*

And update soon!

Thanks and sorry once again šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤—

--Nidz

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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
plzzzzzzz continue this story


nd pm me whenever u'll update
Edited by Favouriteofall - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Hello friends!😃
When i started writing this story , Nupur was killed off in MJHT & i stopped watching the show, But i was missing Mayank -Nupur so much that i started writing my own story to show their reunion. Then we all successfully bring Rati back in the show & i stopped continuing this .
My Mayank & Nupur finally had a Happy ending in the show..šŸ˜..but yes i still miss them šŸ˜”.so when i got some free time after my exam, i thought of writing something abt them , &suddenly i remembered this story , i read it all again & thought may be i can try to continue this...so i wrote an update...i m not a writer, so there will be many many mistakes & loopholes in this story,so apologizing in advance for that😳.but well i m writing this just as an experiment for my self...So i guess u will hv to bear it with mešŸ˜† Here is the update-do tell me whether u liked it or not.or suggest me whether to continue this is a good idea.😳

PS:Those who r new , can go through the first page for the story to know what happened before,the page numbers r given in the first page.😳
Small Precap: Nupur lost her memory in that accident & end up in Sanjivani hospital of Ahmadabad , where she is working right now & living with her friend Jia. Mayank came to Ahmadabad with his students for academic mid & he saw Nupur at the carnival. After some hit & miss finally they met at the bus stop in the rainy night.
Now the next part- 😳
Part-5

"Ouch" something hit Mayank from behind & he shouted. "dur reho meri dost se".Jia screamed hitting Mayank's back with her umbrella. " I m gonna kill u if u try to harm her" she again shouted holding her umbrella like a gun . For some moment Mayank couldn't understand anything. This was all too much for him to handle. But when he saw Jia is about to hit him again with her umbrella, on a natural reaction he hold the umbrella of his hand like a sword for self defense & tried to speak up" dekhiye .mai to bas ye lautane aya tha'..ap kiu '..".the whole scene was looking like a sword fight between Mayank & Jia is about happen at the middle of the road, it is just that both of them having umbrella in their hand instead of sword , Isha couldn't help herself but giggle in the situation.Hearing her smile,both the umbrella fighters look up to her & she tried to talk in the middle of her laugh 'jia'.ye shayed meri chata lautane aye the'.kya tu inko marne lag geyi?" Jia noticed the umbrella in Mayank's hand & was shocked & embarrassed at the same time. . "oh.i m so sorry''.mujhe laga'''.i donno what to say'''"she tried to apologize. Mayank was not even listening to her, he was constantly looking at Isha. " Nupur"'.that same smile, that same voice & that same face ,she was his Nupur'..standing in front of him after three long years & was not showing any sign of recognizing him. He was stunned & when his trance broke Jia already has taken the umbrella from his hand, they hv finished saying their sorrys & thank you's to him & were going away in an auto. Not again this time'he will not lose her this time at any cost'.he thought running towards the auto'..but before he could reach near ,the auto started off & the last thing he heard was Nupur saying to the auto driver "bhaia, Sanjivani Hospital chaliye".

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When Mayank reached to the gate of Sanjivani hospital next day it is 8'o clock in the morning. Last night when he came there the visiting hour of the hospital was over & the administration office also got closed. So, in spite of trying hard he couldn't enter inside & of course he couldn't even say whom he wanna meet as the gate keeper said he know no one name Nupur here.& Mayank know no one else to name. So, last night he went back to the hotel & made arrangement so that he can stay here for some more days & his students go back to Mumbai safely. The bus for Mumbai left at 7.30 & bidding the students a good bye Mayank finally reach to Sanjivani hospital. He didn't tell anyone the real reason of his staying back. At first he himself needs to understand all this clearly. What is Nupur doing in Ahmadabad? What was she doing here in this 3 years? Why didn't ever she try to contact him? Why didn't she talk to him last night? Forget talking she didn't even recognized him. So many questions popping up in his head but there is no one to answer. "Wrong-Nupur is here," She is here in Ahmadabad & he is gonna find her at any cost & once he find her, she will hv to answer all his questions-Mayank said to himself with a strong determination.

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"Hello, I hv came from Mumbai, I m Mayank Sharma" Mayank introduced himself to the woman sitting in the reception desk of the hospital. 'yes , how may I help u sir?" the receptionist ask him. "I m looking for a patient name Nupur,Nupur Shrama. I forgot the cabin number, can u please help me out?" He asked. "nupur ? well lemme check" the receptionist look through the register list of the computer & finally said "there is one Nupur pandey here sir..8year old gal''..but no Nupur Sharma .sorry" hearing the answer Mayank's mind stared to think rapidly; definitely she is not a patient here. She was looking all healthy last night''may be she came to visit someone here? How to find out? Ok what was the other gal's name she was with last night'''''.he tried hard to remember. 'jiya'right.. can u look for jiya please? it is her other name," He requested again. The receptionist looked at the list again & nod her head "no sir, I m sorry, No patient name jia is here". Mayank was not ready to give up so easily, but the other ppl in the queue was getting disturbed by him. He step aside from the queue & started to think what to do now. There must be some way to find out, she came here last night'from a carnival'ppl usually went their home at that time, but this is a hospital not anyone's home. Why will she be here at night? May be she works here, may be ' he was thinking hard & then it strikes to him. "Oh this is easy". He wondered why he didn't think of it before. He run again towards the reception desk & tried to talk to the woman again, without noticing that he has broken the line. He bring out his wallet from the pocket to show Nupur's photo to the receptionist. "Please tell me whether u know this gal ort not" he almost begged. The woman get irritated "sir, if u wanna ask something please be on the line, I will help u when ur turn will come" she said. "Please just look at it once." He tried to speak up but was cut in the middle by other ppl from the queue "hey u r breaking the line.' "wait for ur turn dude" & etc etc . Mayank lost his cool & screamed "please guys this is just a matter of a sec.i m looking for my wife here" A role of laughter spread around the room."haha, pagal hai kya?" some guy laughed. " arre lucky ho bhai , ki wife khogeyi hai,kash mere wife bhi kabhi kho jati' another guy commented. Another shouted" wife kho geya toh yaha kiu , police station me report likhao" Suddenly the whole place became full of noise like a mad house , everyone was looking at Mayank as if he is a clown in a circus & they were all laughing at him , taunting him ,calling him mad, making stupid jokes about his lost wife. It was a cruel world out there where no one seems to have any sympathy for him. Mayank was about burst out in anger when a firm female voice came from behind "what is happening here? Do I hv to remind u all that this is a hospital & u need to keep quiet here?" He looked behind & saw a graceful lady age abt 50years standing there. Her commanding tone & her personality was telling that she is a no nonsense person & she has some authority on the happenings of this hospital. The receptionist jump out from her desk."Anita maam, I m sorry .all this happened because of this guy" she pointed to Mayank. "He broke the line & was saying that he is searching for his wife''" She was stopped in the middle as the lady rise her hand signing her to shut up. "go back to ur desk & .." she look around the room towards all the ppl "& I want pin drop silence here'there are patients here fighting for their life, this is not a fish market", She finished & turned back to Mayank who was still standing there holding his wallet in one hand. "u'" she said to him, " u look like an educated person, try to behave like one & stand in the queue, Sarah will help u when ur turn will come" She ordered. Mayank nodded his head in agreement & apologize ' I m sorry , I know it was my fault," saying this he he was abt to move forward towards the queue when he fumbled a bit & the wallet dropped from his hand. Dr. Anita Rao bent down to pick it up for him & saw the pic in the wallet. She stared at the pic for some moment & then give it back to Mayank ,by then her facial expression has changed completely. She looked at him curiously & asked, " u came here to search for this gal?" she pointed to the wallet. "yes" Mayank replied. "She is my wife, i lost her three years back " he said. Anita Rao looked surprised but she maintained her calm & move forward her hand to him, "I m dr.Anita rao & this is my hospital" She introduced herself to him. Mayank shake hands with her saying" nice to meet u doctor, I m'.' she cut him in the middle" Mayank ' I m guessing ur name is Mayank .m I right?" For a moment Mayank was shocked & then he replied "yes I m Mayank." "well, I f u r Mayank & u hv come here to look for this gal in the picture, then I believe we need a lot of things to discuss, so please come with me at my office." She ordered him signing him to follow her towards her cabin & Mayank followed her with a lot of questions roaming around in his mind, but this time with a ray of hope to get all the answers.

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@Favouriteofall& arti_4ever! wow guys.thank u so much.i just saw ur request to continue this story...thanks a ton for the encouragement!!!!!!😃


Edited by Mou. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
reserved!!

*edited*

i don wanna say a lot... but KINDLY😈 continue this FF
I never knew you wrote so well
otherwise you would have been flooded with my pms to continue dis😳

thank you very much

~jiya~šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awesome update dear...pls continue soon...

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