Baatein (MayUr) Last Part:Kahaani | Pg99 (08.8.10) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
gosh di...beautiful!!! loved it..🤗it may sound cliched but its true..a very beautifully written update..also liked d CS n d 1st part...👏

m sorry m late in commenting coz of my busy schedule..😒..dnt mind di..n tk cr of urself..god bless..n yes update soon..👍🏼

luv mayur always!!!🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
awesome update Sonam di!
the idea of getting Mayank n Nupur married seems 2 have firmly sat in Shilpa's mind....
wonder how wud Mayank react when he comes 2 know abt thow stubbornly does Shilpa want them 2 get married....
do cont. soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Sonam..... nice update... MN were destined to meet... will be interesting to see if they will live upto the promise they made to Shilpa Aunty...
update soon...
@Akki - 8-6 for you... yeh kay ho raha hai mere saath...😔
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
Cute! 😳

Mayank and Nupur have a mighty age difference, anyway, it would be fun to see how they both get along! 😃

-Kanky
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
nice updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Awwwwwww sonam
i read ur update just now
it was fantastic update.
loved it to the core.
u wrote it beautifully.
great job dear
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
Mm was jus sho shwwet here
Love her a lottttttttt
Hop her wish came true
Liked the way Mayur Cared for MM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Hey Sonam...
Sorry for the late comments dear....
The concept and the updates are amazing!!!!
Pls add me to ur pm list and do continue soon....
Love
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Lamha


Mayank and maa entered the hospital .... Dr. Singh came beside them with Dr. Rahul ...
Dr. Singh - Mr. Sharma mujhe aap se kuch zaroori baat karni hai ...
Mayank - Ji doctor, maa ka monthly check-up ...
Dr. Singh - Wo, Dr. Rahul sambhaal lenge ... aap mere saath chaliye ....
Mayank - Ji ... (to maa) Maa aap check-up karalo, main aata hun ...
Maa - Haan theeke ... chalein Rahul?
Dr. Rahul - Ji aunty, chaliye ....

Mayank and Dr. Singh entered the latter's cabin ....
Mayank - Kya hua Dr. Singh? Any problem?
Dr. Singh - I am afraid, Mr. Sharma it's a bad news ....
Mayank (tensed) - What's the problem doc?
Dr. Singh - Mr. Sharma .... aapki mom ko leukemia hai ... she is on it's last stage ....

The world under Mayank shattered and quaked as her received the news ... he held himself ....
Dr. Singh - Unki haalat bahut serious hai ...
Mayank - Kya kuch nahi ho sakta ....
Dr. Singh - Bahut der ho chuki hai ....
Mayank - Nahi ... main mom ko US le jaaunga ... best treatment dilaaunga ....
Dr. Singh (interrupted) - Aap kitni bhi koshish karlein ... 6 mahine baad aapki har koshish nakaamyab hote hue apni aankhon se dekh lena ....
Mayank - Doc, what about chemotherapy?
Dr. Singh - Mr. Sharma, she is on the last stage and the therapy is very painful ... isse behtar ye hoga ki aap unhe khush rakhein aur unke aakhri palon ko khushiyon se bhar dein ....

Mayank heaved a sigh and walked out of the cabin .... he needed sometime for himself .... Maa came out from the check-up laughing with Dr. Rahul ... Mayank kept looking at her ....
Maa - Mayank kya hua? Chalein ...
Mayank - Maa ... aap chalo ... maine aapke liye gaadi mangvaadi hai ... mujhe kuch kaam hai ....
Maa - Theeke, bye .....
Mayank - Bye maa .....

Mayank sat in the car and drove off .......

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Nupur was sitting at the window seal and thinking about her life ....
Nupur - Aaj meri zindagi kitni achi hai ... mujhe akelapan bilkul mehsoos nahi hota .... har pal khushiyon se bara hua hai ... sirf maa ki wajah se ... wo mujhe ek beti ki tarah pyaar karti hai ... jaise main unhi ki beti hun ... bahut lucky hun main, ki meri zindagi maa se judi hai .....

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It was evening, and the sky became cloudy ...... Mayank was sitting on the Marine Drive all alone ... surprisingly no one was there today .... Nupur was lying in the garden all alone ... all the kids were forced to sit inside as they had their exams tomorrow .... Both of them were thinking about the most important person in their lives .... their maa ....

Mayank remembered how she would always giggle when he got irritated with her "Mayu" Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma ... Nupur remembered her filmy and melodramatic dialogs and a smile came on her face Hoo Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma ...

Nupur remembered how maa kissed her wounds and would shower her love on her .... Haatho Ki Lakerien Badal Jayengi Mayank felt helpless and remembered that how she always helped him and always became his strength ... Gum Ki Yeh Zanjeerein Peeghal Jayengi ... Mayank closed his eyes and prayed to God to change their destiny ... Ho Khuda Pe Bhi Aasar, Tu Duaon Ka Hai Ghar ... Nupur remembered how maa always oiled her hair when she was a kid ... Meri Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma Mayank remembered her tactics to make him laugh when in his childhood days, he used to get angry at her and a smile came on his face Hoo Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma ...

Nupur thanked maa for brightening her future and changing her life completely by taking Nupur in her loving embrace .... Beegdi Kismat Bhi Sanwar Jaayegi, Zindagi Taraane Khushi Ke Gaayegi .... Mayank never feared to fall because she was always there to hold him ... Tere Hote Kiska Dar, Tu Duawon Ka Hai Ghar Nupur remembered how she would become a kid while playing with the kids here ... Meri Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma Mayank remembered her childish behavior and he closed his eyes ... Hoo Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma

Mayank was looked up by everyone and he was a respected personality but when she would pull his cheek he felt the best ... Yun Tu Main ... Sab Se Nyara Hoon,
Tera Maaa Mein Dulara Hoon ...
Nupur was always praised for her behavior and the way she carried herself but she always loved it when maa would praise even her clumsiness .... Yun Tu Main ... Sab Se Nyara Hoon, Tera Maaa Mein Dulara Hoon ... Mayank could not understand what to do now ... just 6 months more ... Duniya Mein Jeene Se Jyada Uljhan Hai Maaa Nupur remembered how she would find peace in her maa when she was depressed ... Tu Hai Amar Ka Jahan ....... Mayank remembered how she would get angry when he would always be busy in work and would mumble to herself ... he always found her mumbling adorable .... Tu Gussa Karti Hai, Bada Accha Lagta Hai Nupur remembered how maa would scold her when Nupur would overwork or would not take of herself and her smile widened ... Tu Kaan Pakati Hai, Badi Zor Se Lagta Hai, Meri Maa...

Mayank just opened his eyes and saw the never ending sea and mumbled "Maa" Meri Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma Nupur was not feeling good like something bad was going to happen ... Hoo Maa, Meri Maa, Pyaari Maa... Mumma

Mayank returned home and decided to behave normally with her and even decided that he would not tell her about anything ....
Maa - Mayuu ... main kab se wait kar rahi hun ...
Mayank - Ab aa gaya na ... thoda busy tha ... ab chalein mujhe bhook lagi hai (he kept his hand on her shoulder)
Maa - To maine kab roka khaane se ... chal ...

Precap :
Maa - Happy Birthday beta!!



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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
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10-8 jess di..LOL!


*edited*

Awesome update di..

I love the bond that has been portrayed so beautifully..The mutual connection of mayur with ma..That was awesome...

Loved it completely!

Di, i just had to tell you this..i am still in the Vivaan Nisha mode.. i am missing the story too much i guess!!!

Love,
Akansha


@ JEss di..Di..we are 10-8 now..!!!!!

Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago

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