Love is in the Air- Part 5,page 19

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@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

hi cool_rads
great u started a new ff.
well CS and promo were nice
can u plz pm me next time u update.

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hi di! please do add me to your pm list...this sounds awesome :)

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@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

@naina: sure dear 😃

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@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Part 1
Scene 1
Venue:Bus Stop,Bandra ,Mumbai
Time: 8:55 a.m

A beautiful girl is standing at the bus stop, waiting for her bus, she's simply dressed,yet has an elan in her, wearing a beautiful, self embroidered white suit, there is an evidence of nervousness on her pretty face.
'Today's my 1st Day in Sanjeevani, why did I getup so late? ooh I do hope I havent Missed my Bus, What's the time,by the way, she glances at her watch, only to realize that she forgot to wear it in hurry & to top it all , it starts drizzling,as if yest's heavy rains weren't enough' she thought to herself' calm down Juhi,calm down, today is your luckiest day, your dream's soon gonna turn into reality, You're finally going to Sanjeevani' she nervously told herself.
The road was filled with dirty water, & Juhi immediately realized her mistake, she shouldn't have worn a white suit today
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A dashing Red color sports car is passing by, splashing a lot of water along the road, Juhi who is standing very much near the road becomes the victim of the splash, & stops the car, shouting on the top of her voice, the glasses of the window were immediately rolled down, & for a moment Both Juhi & the guy sitting in the car keep staring at each each, minutely checking each other, ' nice round face, expressive dark brown eyes, perfect chin, a straight, tapering nose, black wavy hair, running haphazardly down his forehead, he was a perfect guy, the kinds she had read in her Mills n Boons & lips.........what m I thinking' Juhi slapped away her thoughts.
' She's Gorgeous, no beautiful, no pretty, no angel, whatever she is, she is breathtaking, her face round, beautiful doe eyes, perfect nose, nice chubby cheeks, perfect pink,tempting lips..........What are u doing Rahul if u don't reach Sanjeevani on time dad's gonna kill u' he thought.
' excuse me Mr., don't u have manners u just ruined my dress, & I was in a hurry & now thanks to ur stupid car I 'll have to go back home'
' who asked to stand so close to the road lady?' he retorted
'Who asked to drive so fast?' she answered
' its my car , I can drive at whatever speed I want' he spoke angrily
'Then these r my feet I can stand anywhere I want' she shot back at him
' why m I wasting my time arguing with u !!! Listen 'Queen of Roads' u might be having a lot of time to spare not me so will u excuse me?' he literary shouted
' I too don't have any time to be arguing with a useless, manner-less creature like u
'Then will u 2 move out so that the traffic jam behind u can be cleared' the man sitting on the driver's seat of the car right behind Rahul's shouted on the top of his voice.
The 2 suddenly felt embarrassed & Rahul started his car
'wait' Juhi shouted' u are responsible for my dress disaster so u'll have to drop me home & that's an order' Rahul Raised his brow but reluctantly opened the door of his passanger seat as lots of people had been blowing their horns from behind, Juhi took her seat n gave him the directions seeing everywhere n anywhere except him.
They reached in abt 10 min., w/o wasting time Juhi got out of the car & before she could close the door Rahul told her rather politely' come fast I m waiting for u'
'I can go on my own Mr.' she quipped w\o thinking.
'As u wish,as if I care' Rahul shrugged
' Juhi ran down & ignoring her bui's questions she ran straight to her room & within secs ran straight back outside . It was only when she reached the door did she realize that she'd shooed away That guy's offer,'Now how will I go? silly me, why did i Refuse it' but to her relief he was standing right there waiting for her' Rahul was amused to see her reaction on seeing him there but he managed to put up a straight face in front of her as if he never noticed.
'So where were u going?' he asked
'Sanjeevani' she answered
'God! today's my lucky day, such a beautiful girl sitting next to me is going exactly where I m what else would have asked, I love you God' He thought
'Great we r going to the same destination 'he answered her
The journey from Juhi's home to Sanjeevani was a silent one , both of them stealing glances from each other,they finally reached there , though 10 minutes later that the reporting time.
Sanjeevani
'you 2 are late, as a result u wont be taking up any patient today ,u will only observe the interns' Dr. Shashank said firmly glancing at his watch.
'It was all ur mistake' a beautiful girl in a pink chudidar suit accuses an extremely handsome guy,in a linen blue color shirt & matching white trousers
'says who?' he retorts
'i" she answers back
'are u a sheep ??' he chuckles
'u are............ooh forget it why m i wasting my time on a brainless, shameless person' she says under her breath

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Scene 2
Venue: Bombay Central Bus Stand, Mumbai
Time:10:00 am

A tall , handsome guy gets down the bus , a bag securely placed in his hand a short smile placed on his handsome face, 'this is it Prithvi , the first step to fulfill ur dream, Mumbai be aware Prithvi's here' Prithvi spoke to his own self' He was both excited as well as nervous , excited because he was going to meet his father after a long time, Nervous as it was a totally new city for him , their werre many dreams of his which he had to fulfill in this very city, which was an unfamiliar place for him, his only solace was that atleast there is Dad here to be with him.

Venue: Gujral Mansion
Time: 10: 15 a.m

Prithvi saw the huge house that stood gracefully in front of him, this was the place where his dad worked & now his own working station suddenly got too excited & reached the gate to open a guard stopped him asking his whereabts & then later letting him pass through.

Prithvi was immediately impressing studying the minutest of the details of the handsome building as well as its surrounding that stood in front of him crossing the garden in aww.........he entered the main building &was almost immediately greeted by an old , graceful woman .'Welcome to Mumbai beta, ur dad & I have been waiting for you since a long time' Ila Gujral spoke politely leading him inside where his eyes met his dad's ,he did not realize when a tear tickled down his cheek afterall it had been a long time since he'd met his dad, the father-son shared a warm hug & then Ila explined Prithvi abt. his duties & showed him the directions for the stable farm
Prithvi reached the stable it was a huge one, bigger than the one he'd expected, a white horse caught his site, it was a beautiful breed & Prithvi was tempted to take a ride,when his eyes another site, the site of a beautiful woman, was there actually a woman standing/ was it his imagination of one of the fairies mother would tell stories abt when they were kids Prithvi couldn't understand so he closed his eyes & reopened them, the girl was very much there, in fact she was approaching him, now he could see her clearer, she had long beautiful hair, long beautiful face, large black expressive eyes, perfect nose , in fact everything in her was just perfect , it seemed God had spent a long time creating this particular species , she was coming closer n closer , unaware of her surroundings as she was busy talking to some1 on phone, before Prithvi could avoid it , they bumped into each other, Damini lost her balance & was sure she'd hit the ground hard when a pair of strong hands held her firmly when gently, she had closed her eyes as soon as she had realized she was going to have a free fall ,now that she felt secure in these unknown strong arms ,she slowly opened her eyes , staring wide eyed at the person in front of her, he was tall, handsome man with a sharp nose, perfect face cut, black wavy hair , combed in a perfect way, this large chocolate brown eyes gazing straight into her's, he slowly helped her stand up
're u out of your mind' a beautiful girl, wearing a skin hugging white shirt,denim jeans & matching w/o sleeves denim jacket asks an extremely handsome, smart lad, wearing a white color shirt, beige color trousers, his front 2 buttons open making him look even more tempting
'I think u r out of ur mind, 1st u run into me & then when I try to help u , u shout on me, I doubt if u have a brain at all!!!!!!!!!!'he says
she narrows down her eye 'how dare u........'

Edited by Cool_Rads - 15 years ago

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

ahh...purane din yad agaeye😆
nice discription n there wild imagination abt eachothers Lips..hah was quite a thing😆

very well written

cant wiat to see what happens next

update soon

Edited by sia88 - 15 years ago

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sia88
ahh...purane din yad agaeye😆
nice discription n there wild imagination abt eachothers Lips..hah was quite a thing😆

very well written

cant wiat to see what happens next

update soon

so fast😆 😆 😆
😆u havent read the whole thing yet
glad i could refresh your memories😃

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antara............

@vikynme

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

hey rads..great chap...rahul-juhi and prida meet is awesum....

n very ncy descriaption of thier faetures...
gud job..continue soon

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Nice update Rads..Juhi Rahul meeting was soo cute n so was Prithvi n Damini's........☺️😍

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aparajhita

@.Aparajhita.

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Hey Rads di,🤗

A very well written descriptive part di...😊
You pen down the characters emotions beautifully....

The Rahul-Juhi part makes me remember the awesome show Sanjeevani. I really love that one.
And how sweet, he was waiting there, great.😃....
And well, they both are really good in rapidly answering each other naa...lovely...😆

The PriDa part...well it's always too good naa...⭐️
Really loved that dialogue, "Mumbai beware Prithvi is here."..😆
And then, PriDa giro-pakdo aandolan started again...wow..🤣
And well, the father-son bonding is the best part...😊

Update son Rads di.

Apsy.

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

wow I had this big smile on my face when I read ur comment Apsy 😃
ya penning down this ff's bringing back a lot of sweet memories of my 2 fav. shows.........its fun revisiting them😆

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