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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Hi Rads
I read ur update just now.
and it was brilliant
wah i loved the first meeting of rahul- juhi
hahahahahaha at the first sight rahul was mesmerized by juhis beauty.
and so does juhi was also impressed .

i loved their fight.
it reminds me their first meeting in the show.
fabulous job.
and i loved prida also.
u wrote the whole thing very beautifully.
loved it to the core.

awesome update dear
keep updating
thanx 4 pm

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Rads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi Rads
I read ur update just now.
and it was brilliant
wah i loved the first meeting of rahul- juhi
hahahahahaha at the first sight rahul was mesmerized by juhis beauty.
and so does juhi was also impressed .

i loved their fight.
it reminds me their first meeting in the show.
fabulous job.
and i loved prida also.
u wrote the whole thing very beautifully.
loved it to the core.

awesome update dear
keep updating
thanx 4 pm

glad u liked it dear😃

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Kanchan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

hi Rads
Great start 👏 👏 👏
there must be something between PriDa 😆 😆 ........ coz their tripping session always starts frm 1st meeting itself 😉
thanks for pm
continue soon

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Rads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

@ kanchan:glad u liked it dear😃

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zain_aliya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

jus loved both d parts dear... waiting 4 more... thanks 4 d pm...

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Rads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

m glad u liked it Cutiepie

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sia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Mumbai.......Prithvi is comin!!!!!! WHISTELS WHISTELS
liked the dad-son bonding....sucha warm welcome by Ella ji...👏

abb prida ki toh baat hee alag hain...the bump.....the trip-fall-catch...just out of this world😍
waitin for more😉

Edited by sia88 - 15 years ago

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totalweirdo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

hay rads di !!

this ff looks really interesting !!

plzz add me in ur pm list !!

---Ifrah

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Rads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

m glad u liked it Ifrah😃

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Rads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Part 2
Scene 1
Sanjeevani

'Oh so I was responsible for the Delay?' Rahul answers back
'who else' Juhi who was now raging like hell answered
'who asked u to come near my car?'
who asked u to drive like crazy?
who asked u to wear white in such an awful weather'
who asked u to wait for me outside my house,atleast I wouldn't have been the reason for ur delay'
'who asked u to look damn beautiful n attractive in that simple salwar Kameez u wore that could attract any damn guy'
The 2 of them suddenly fell silent ,feeling extremely awkward for confessing their inner feelings, Juhi confessing her own mistake & Rahul confessing his attraction towards her
Every1 staring from Juhi- Rahul n vice versa
Juhi's embarrassment was showing on her face which turned into a brilliant pink matching with her suit making her look even more tempting.Unconscious Rahul moved fwd coming closer to Juhi, Juhi backed off but Rahul went on moving fwd so that Juhi reached the dead end, her back hitting the wall,they were just inches apart,Rahul moved his hand towards her,afraid of wqhat might happen next Juhi closed her eyes, pinning her against the wall Rahul now stared at her unblinkingly, inhaling her perfume's smell which was just,just adding to the already created attraction,u r the most beautiful woman I've met,she heard him saying,their closeness umm..........she did not know what it was doing it was a different experience,before she could open her eyes n acknowledge his presence he was gone, she gave a shy smile n ran off,Bumping into Omi who had been both amused n surprised to see the latest development taking place.
Juhi apologized this really cheerful youth she'd bumped into who in turn introduced himself as Dr. Umesh Joshi, Omi ,thats what my frnds call me,he smiled & shook hands with her.
The next day , both Juhi n Rahul came 10 mins. before time & bumped straight into each other outside Dr. Shashank's office, for a moment none of them spoke but Rahul 's constant stare was bothering her ,she couldn't resist it & started shouting on him for no reason ,the depth in his eyes turned into shock he did not say anything but his eyes her that he had a lot of questions in his mind ,before he could say anything,Dr. Shashank came in
'I m sorry sir' both Rahul & Juhi said in unison.
'for what ? coming 10 mins earlier, I glad u 2 understood ur mistake &came on time today so u can resume ur duties, meet me in 5 mins with the other interns' Dr. Shashank replied smiling weakly
' ummmmmmmmmm..........I m So......sor.........sorry' Juhi said to Rahul a bit hesitently,after Dr. Shashank had left
' No I m sorry, Ishouldn't have shouted on u like that, in fact we both were at fault so lets just forget it, Friends?' Rahul asked casually
' No, I take a lot of time in making friends,just that I said sorry doesn't mean that everything is okay between us, u..u ............how did u dare come so close to me yesterday.....' she asked with anger in her eyes,wwhen she was about to leave Rahul asked her'Whats ur name by the way?'
'Mind ur own business' she answered back
'Mind ur own business-what a unique name I like it' Rahul commented sarcastically
Juhi just left the place fuming
When they reached the corridor where Dr. Shashank allotted duty ,to Rahul's amusement n Juhi 's horror............they were to assist together for a surgery that Shashank sir had to carry out...................................................................................................

Scene 2
Stud Farm, Gujral Mansion

'How dare u........do u even realize whom u r talking to?' Damini asked Prithvi
'No' Prithvi answered Casually
' I m Damini Gujral the owner of the very place u r standing' she answered angrily
'& I m Prthvi Saxena, the incharge of the stud farm so technically speaking I m responsible for this part of ur huge Mansion' he retorts back
'If u dont still understand, I m the daughter of Ila Gujral,so "technically speaking" I m ur new boss & I have full rights to FIRE u' she literally shouted
'For what reason may I ask? Let me guess for preventing a Free fall of my "boss" I m Getting Fired,Right?' he shrugs off
'U r just...................................................too much I can't bear u, I m Telling u I'll Fire u' she says irritatedly
'U never Hired me,how can u fire me?' he shoots back
'Then I 'll tell Mom that u misbehaved with me n hence u should be fired immediately' she's now getting restless
'go ahead then, who's stopping u?' he answers casually
All this time Ila had been observing them,she come upto them n formally starts introducing them to each other which further infuriates Damini' Mom this man is...is the most Mannerless,Brainless,Lunatic I've ever met plz Fire him' she went on to say
'I saw everuthing Damini ,he actually prevented u from a free fall u should be thankful to him,not shouting on him,I apologize u for my Daughter's childish behavior' Ila says politely
'What r u doing Aunty, it was Actually my mistake, I should have seen where I m going, Aunty plz dont make me feel ashamed by saying sorry' Prithvi aswered Politely & Respectfully making Damini stare right into his eyes Surprised
As soon as Ila left Damini still gazing into his eyes apologized 'I m sorry' she said almost in a whisper astonishing Prithvi who now looked right back into her eyes 'No I m sorry'
For a moment the 2 kept staring at each other.
Her eyes spoke volume, how expressive they were ,they were saying things this Angry young woman may never Accept, there was fascination,&did he see a bit naughtiness in them or was it his the temptations inhis own eyes which was reflecting into hers,she certainly was .........beautiful'
Those eyes did wonders to her,she did not know why she had these evil thoughts coming in her mind, if only she could, touch him.......hug him..........fall down again so that........so that what Damini , U r going crazy' she thought to herself

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