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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Hi Rajita

How r u???

Update was just so gud...👏👏

I have never been to Akshardham Temple but I have seen it ..It is really beautiful..😊

When will Naina say YES???

I am waiting for that eagerly..There r so many sweet moments dat its difficult to point one..😃

specially the one in Temple where Raj helped Naina with her hair..😳😳

Pooja is teasing both of them but its affecting Naina mostly..😆😆 I think Raj knows dat Naina loves him ..😛

Mr.IIT is studying in Temple too..These people never stop studying na!! 😆😆😆

" If I had one wish.
If one desire could come true.
If I had one wish.
My wish would be you.

If I could choose.
I would stay in your arms forever.
Our hearts would fuse.
And our love would become an endeavor.

I would wish for you to stay with me.
For you to be my love.
You would be my hearts key.
Forever my angel, my dove.

Forever is a long time.
To require in a single command.
I will write our love in a rhyme.
For it would be my demand.

I would ask of this.
Only with your permission.
Lost in a kiss.
Our love is my ambition.

So I wished upon the star.
The star that reminded me most of you.
My actions seemed bizarre.
But this wish I had to pursue.

If I had one wish.
My wish would be you.
And since I made that wish.
My wish has come true...

Pls continue soon(this means day after tomarrow)

Bye

Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Wonderful update Rajita...aunty...😆 😆 😆 ( DON'T call me di....or i'll call u this....😆 😆)

yaar....now even i am waiting for Naina to say yes....

Kab bolegi??? i mean...tum kab bulwaogi???😛

Update soon.,...plzzzz....

I read you'll be completing this fic early as u wud be leavn.... How much sad i am for that...but...studies...you cant avoid them...

All the best dear...and i hope u'll continue visiting IF....😊

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#113

hi rajita 😊 the up is just awesum 😊😊😊😊

naina pooja ke ghar jaate haai😊😊😊😊 par aaj naina ka mann thora ghbbra raha haai raj ko dekh kar 😊😉😉

raj aur pooja toh dono place decide karne ko leekar jaagarne he laag gaye as usuall har bro sis ke tara😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

finally they decides to go to the temple 😊😊😊😊

wind ke baja se naina duppata urr jaata haai par raj is nice to tie it 😉😉😉😉😳😳😳😳😳

i loved it

plz cont soon aur haan do pm me

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

Hi Rajita,...how r u dear?

update is soo lovely...

but naina still hasnt said yes to raj...kab bolegi?? poor raj is waiting desperately...pooja is being cupid....gr888

waiting for the next part....😊

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#115

lovely, nice update. loved it.
continue soon.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Update was tooo good

Naina is both nervous and excited to meet Raj when she goes to Pooja's house. Raj understand naina's feelings and tries to make her feel relaxed.

After a lot of brother sister argument between Pooj and Raj, they both accept naina's suggestion and agree to go to Akshardham temple.

Raj being the perfect IITian is trying to study and read as much as possible about the temple.

Naina is getting restless to tell raj that she loves him very much.

So please continue soon.

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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Hey Rajita cool update

Loved the temple part it was almost a beautiful moment between the two.

gr8 going

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#118

hi rajita😃

vaise yeh naina 'haan' kab bolegi...??? mujhe pata hai...tum sayad kahogi ki 7th July se pahle...ha ha ha...!!! ab yeh toh humain bhi malum hai...😆

is ud me baht sare beautiful scenes the...par mujhe sab se jyada achha laga...naina aur raj ka voh 'zulfon ka ulajhna' wala scene...😳😃

pooja cupid ka role play karr rahi hai...!!! kitna tease karr rahi thi...mujhe lagta hai ki naina par jyada asar pada...ha ha ha...😆

ab toh 'cont soon' kahne ki jarurat hi nahi hai...tum toh vaise hi jaldi ud karnewali ho...😃

best of luck...for ur future👍🏼

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#119

Hi Rajita...

I was waiting for you to update this.... Naina's confession matters a lot...and also I was waiting eagerly as to how she would say it...

The first person she met in Pooja's house was Raj...😆😆😆 Sahi hai yaar... and the way Pooja was teasing them... but now even I am serious..how will naina say it to Raj... There is no ice cream parlour nearby...

Raj was watching Naina in the akshardham temple... obviously Naina se achha nazara aur kya ho sakta hai...😆😉😉 But he came closer and then moved back...and you stopped at that... leaving us all in confusion and suppressed excitement as to what would happen next... this is not done... continue soon dear...

Love
Guglu

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#120

Hiii Rajita…

How r u?

Fabulous part dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ne compliment di naina ko…he is soooo sweet…n pooja ka kya kehna ..she don't leave a single chance to tease RN…Naina is so lucky to have a friend like pooja… Raj pooja ka bhai hain sirf isliye main nahin kehrahi naina lucky hain .. pooja is so concerned about naina ...her concern is so evident when she asked naina is she nervous

Finally they decided to go to Akshar dham …n is update main the most lovely scene kya hain tujhe pata hain ...nainajee ka khojana in a carving aur Raj naina main khojana n then the wind ..and raj coming naina ke pass n tucking her strands behind her ears..and after that he moving backwards.... n nainas longing to say yes to him...it such a wonderful scene..u have written it so beautifully 👏 👏 👏

Ye naina raj se kab kahegi wo teen magical words ..Raj ke saath saath we r also waitng eagerly to hear her confession

Loved the whole part yaar....Chalo ab jaldi se next part post karo

love yogitha