~Perfect Imperfections~RN Fic~Epilogue~PG-22 Upd - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi ranjita hii Ria....how r u doing???

the up was really cool and sweet 😊😊😊😊 Thank u sooo much...i am glad u liked it!!!
raj naina ko pospossed kya kar diya naina toh uske baare mein soch soch ke aapne raato ke need he kho diya haai becchare 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 hehehe....yaar Raj ki personality hi kuch aesi hai...hehehe....i think Naina is perfectly normal...agar main hoti toh sone ke liye sleeping pills leni padti ya toh seedha coma mein chali jati khushi ke maare....hehehehe😆😆😆
naina raj ko subhe ke 8:30 mein phone karte haai 😛😛😛par raj ka voice sunke she forgets all the thing which she decided to tell him but aacha haai raj naina aur pooja ko leekar delhi ghumnne jaa raha haai😊😊😊😉😉 Accha hai bhool gayi...issi bahaane raj se toh mil legi...hehehe
plz cont soon and do pm me yup, i'll continue soon...and i'll pm u for sure....
love,
Rajita...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: rlrl

Hey Rajita...Wots Up Babes...??

Heyyyy Ritzi....sorry yaar thodi out of contact hoon....haal behaal hai madam....ek toh its so hot outside....after that the queues for everything...pehle admission, phir temporary withdrawal of certificates, then re-admission in another college, and finally again need to get a refund....and everything has horrible queues....🤢😆😆😆😆
chalo this was a great one....but...u know....wanna tell u that...the character Of Naina in this fiction of urs...is very much similar to me..actually...I also do the same like..i dun wanna tell any lie to mah parents...but i tell her..wot m gonna do..and....who else r gonna be wid me..😊 😊..and also m very confused..about..this guys..chakkar...😆 😆 Well sorry..that..m telling..sumthn about me..in ur fiction...but just i felt it..so told it..dun mind babes... Cummon Ritz isn't this wat i want....to know u a notch better....its not my fic per say....if u don't comment maybe i'll not post....and who says i want comments just confined to fic....plzzz Ritzi i am no writer....i am just a girl writing merely wid the purpose b'cos firstly she likes thinking abt Rajveer😳😳😳 and secondly....i love it wen i interact wid people....and make friends....thats it....
B/w we share similarities tooo....even i can't lie properly....i don't lie b'cos i feel it gets sooo complicated....yaar, seedi baat karo and no one can ever interject it......😛😛😛😆😆😆....woh baat alag hai aaj tak meri life mein aisa kuch interesting hua bhi nahi jiske liye jhooth bolna pade....😉😉😉😉....wat abt u????😉😉
and..yup the part where...she is telling that how do u knw..that m callin u up..it was awesome....man....👏 👏 LOL....U do write good.......i mean very very good...it was a very nice update.....and..yaa.....About Raj...plzz..increase about Raj's character..u write more about raj na...😉 😉
Yaar, Raj ke bina toh kahani ki nahi hai...😆😆😆😆 in the following updates u'll surely get Raj....I'll write abt him too...first i thought i write it from his perspective....but then think...will Mr IITian have enough time to do all this???😆😆😆😆....And Thank you sooo much....i am soo glad u liked that part....hehehe😆😆😆😆....and thanx for liking it......😛😛😃😃😃
okay baby....Take Good care of ur self..........Do update soon....😃Tongue😃Tongue Same goes for u....take care and as for updating soon, i apologise since i am not able to do that immediately but be sure once i start doing it, it'll actually be in almost no gaps since i don't have much time....i hope u did read the note at pg-11😭😭😭

With Love Ritzi...Tongue
Loads of love...
Rajita...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

lovely, nice update. too good.
continue soon.thanks for the pm dear.......

Thank you soo much....i am glad u liked it....i'll continue soon from now on....hehehe😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: arwa72

Hey Rajita gr8 fic you've got here. Luved both ur parts and interesting story.

sorry I wont be able to keep the long elongated comments like u as im only good at writing stories. hehehehe but seriously good work and hope to read more soon.

Hellooooooooooooo Arrrrrrrrwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaa[ in short Arwa] diiiiiiiiiiii....😛😛😆😆😆....hehehehe
I am soooooooo happpppppppppyyyy to seeeeeeeeeee uuuu here....phew...i think i should start talking like normal human being now....hehehe....
Dii...u r saying sorry for wat...!!...cummon ur footsteps are enough....obviously they can be accompanied by few words...😆😆😆...but its ok, generally also i do most of the talking....hehehe....but yes....u plzz keep on writing stories...😉😉😆😆😆😆....i need my occasional dose of Arwa dii's fictions...😆😆😆...
B/w i am honoured more than enough that u read wat i wrote....and thank you sooo much for ur wonderful comment....its priceless...trust me!!!!
Love,
Rajita....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooome.....
superb......
fantabulous.......
lovely UD........
thanx for the pm........

Hiii .....
Its Great to know that u liked the update.....Thank you soo much.....I hope u Continue enjoying the story!!!...😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hi Rajita Helloo Nisha Dii....How r u doing???

Loved the update...its too good. 👏 ... Thanx....i am soo happy to know that u liked it....
What i love about your writing is that it sounds just like the way my thoughts do in my mind. wish i could also write so easily. Love the ease in your writing. 👏👏 ... thats bcos i write exactly wat enters my mind then and there....hehehe..the ease is bcos i write easily widout any efforts on my mind...😛😛.....B/w i love reading ur comments....i am sure u could write reallly goood....Give it a try naa???😃😃😃😃.....
Coming to the update....Ab naina madam ne bhav toh kha liya😉 but now she is regreting it.😆 She wants to tell Raj aas soon as possible that her answer is a Big YES....how could it be anything else.😳 hehehe....bechari already Raaton ki neend gavaa kar bhugat rahi hai....hehehe....And since its Raj obviously it could not be anything other than Yes......hehehe😳😳😳😆😆😆😆
Khud toh sooyi nahi aur Pooja ko bhi sone nahi diya. Par naina ki reasoning thi bhi sahi yeh sab Pooja ki wajah se hi toh ho raha tha...akhir Raj pooja ka bhai hai😉 So toh hai....waise i think Pooja is more interested in Naina's yes than Raj himself...i am sure she is dying to tease them....😆😆😆😆
But when she calls Raj in the morning all her rehearsals are forgotten and she starts to fumble. Sensing her nervousness Raj changes the topic. He wants to spend time with her.....and how could naina refuse to such a perfect idea.😳 Raj is so perfect naa....how i hope even i find someone sooo cute....hehehe....how amazing would it have been if instead of calling Pooja, Naina would have directly called Raj only....hehehe....seems like a more romantic prospect...😳😳😳
Naina ne accha funda use kiya apni mom ko saari batein batayi bhi nahi aur jooth bhi nahi kaha....she is smart indeed.😉 Perfect Intellect level....matches with Raj....after all Naina is no less...😆😆😆
Waiting to know about Raj and naina's first date with pooja to give them company.😉 As if they need pooja's company....hehehehe....nevertheless, she is a part and parcel of the offer valid...hehehe😆😆😆
please continue soon and thanks for the PM Yup...i'll try to make it soon....
Love and take care...
Rajita....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

hiii dear.....awesome work again😊😊😊

i really love the way you write...sooo simple yet soo beautiful...
Helloooo Miss Rajeev Fann....sorry i don't know ur name....naam toh bataa de yaar...hehe....hey, i am sooo glad u like the way i write.....Thank you soooo much....b/w i have gotta tell u too....i just love ur comments....😃😃😃😃😃
naina sach mein bhut brave hai yaar...i mean raj...i mean RAJ ne usse propose kiya hai yaar.....to usne haan kehne ke liye ek din..poora ek din control kar liya😲😲😲😲 maine hoti to ek second bhi wait nahin kar paati😆😆😆...sach mein bhut bhaav kha rahi hai..... exactly...see, ab neend bhi nahi aa rahi....usi samay haan keh diya hota toh apni dreams mein raj ke saath date par gayi hoti...😆😆😆😆.....she missed out on her 'dream' date...😆😆
and the phone call scene was amazing👏👏👏naina ne sach kaha kabhi bhi pehle se decide mat karo ki kya kehna hai waqt aane par sab pe tsunami fir jaayegi😆😆😆😆just let it flow.... exactly the flow of a river is better than a tsunami...😆😆😆😆....hahaha....yaar, hum kahaan kahaan se metaphors chun kar late hai....😆😆!!!!
but raj is toooooooooooo cute usne naina ke kuch na bol paae par khud bolna shuru kar diya...really he is a sweetheart😳😳😳😳 haina....main bhi toh yahi convince karaane ki koshish kar rahi thi....Raj is such a sugary swt heart...😆😆😆😆EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
haaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kaash mujhe bhi koi aisa padhaane waala milta😉😉😉😉vaise koi bhi nahin chalta sirf raj hi hona chahiye😳😳😳😳uski jagah koi nahin le sakta😳😳😳
Haaye....sahi kaha tumne...kaash Mera bhi koi Handsome sa teacher hota.....Though i hate maths....i am sure uski guidance se main maths mein top karti....only provided i didn't day dream abt him on the exam...
to ab naina saj savar ke raj se milne ja rahi hai😉😉😉i m sure raj bhi usse dekh kr hairaan hoga....kyunki naina ki mom ki baaton se to aisa lagta hai naina pehle zyada sajne savarnemein kanjoos thi to zaahir si baat hai raj ne bhi usse nahin dekha hoga iss tarah se.... U bet!!!....Quick observation...hehehe....woh baat alag hai Raj Naina ko jaise bhi dekhe, she'll always look beautiful to him...how i hope i would have been Naina...woh baat alag hai, in that case Raj would always be wearing sunglasses instead of looking at me....😆😆😆😆😆😆
waiting for the next update..plzzzzz update soooon and thanks for pm😊😊 I'll try to post it quickly....u know the reason for the delay na...
Love,
Rajita....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good
plz continue soon

Thanx....I am glad u liked the update....!!!😃😃😃...I'll try to continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Heyyy Priya....How r U???...But firstly a very very very very And it goes on...hehe...Happy Belated Birthday....so how did u enjoy ur day???? waise kaun sa gift tumhe sabse special lagaa???😉😃😃😃😃
AWESOME....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thank you....i am soo glad!!!😃😃😃😃😃

naina ki raton ki neend haram ho chuki hai...raj k bare me soch soch kar...ha ha ha...!!! ab raj ne propose kiya hai toh naina ki neend toh udegi hi na...😛 😛 😛 Hehe...Raaton ki neend or din ka chain both is no longer available to miss Ahluwalia...afterall not every girl is the lucky one...hehe😳😳😳😆😆

naina subah raj ko fone karti hai...par jo bolna chahti thi vohi bol nahi payi...!!! kambakhat ishq.... ha ha ha😆 😆 😆 Naina ko maar gaya kambakht ishq...hai raaba yeh kyaa ho gaya..😆😆😆😆..jo hua woh toh obvious tha....afterall Rajveer ke saamne toh acche accho ki bolti band ho jati hai....yeh toh bechari sahmi si sharmayi si Naina hai...hehe😆😆😆😆...still she managed quite alot...hahaTongueTongueTongue

ab raj naina ko ghumane le ja raha hai toh sath me pooja bhi hai...!!! ab raj ko is consolation prize ki jarurat toh thi nahi...phir bhi use zabardasti mil gaya...!!! bichara raj...😆 😆 😆 Lets console Rajveer for his unwanted consolation prize....after all he needs our sympathy...hehehe😆😆😆😆.....but ab prize ko koi kaise thukraye...heheheTongueTongueTongueTongue

waiting for d next one...😃 😃 😃 It'll be coming up soon....

Bye...Love
Rajita....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: FULTUSI

pleaseeeeeeeeeee write the next part as soon as possible,,,,,,,we can't wait any more.......😔

Really very very sorry yaar...i am making u wait soooo much....but believe me...i am big time stuck....nevertheless one i start updating, it'll be really frequent since i need to wind the fic up for some reasons....i hope u did read the note on Pg-11...

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