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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
thansk for PM.
continue soon


love
Riddss

spelling mistake...part nahi..PARTS...
you r welcome..
i will
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Amazing parts!!!
Thanks for the Pm..
Continue soon!!

maine badi comment maangi thi naa....😭
any ways ur welcome..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshhhhhhhh

maine bada maangi naaa...😭😭
koi baath nahi...better hain....
three parts ke liye three words hain kya😡😭
yaaayaaaaa...wit and see
ur welcome
bye

sorrry..........next tym bada paka............ab tu gussa chora............

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Wah wah wah
Kya parts hain di!
Amazing!!!!!!!!
Armaan cloud 8 par?
Achcha!
Cloud 9 par tab hoga jab Riddhima uske saath hogi, haina? 😉
Thanks for the PM di
Take care
Love,
Ashu

kya guess hain ashuuuuuuu....exactly...
hahahahha.....
ur welcome...
tc,bye.....
love,
urs...
avi di..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys......kaise hain sab?...thanks for ur lovely comments....par aap log kitne kanjoose hain yaar...maine 3 parts ki update ki aur aap sirf ek line ki comment likhe....kyaa yaar.... thoda kanjusi kam kariye....sehath ke liye acha nahi hai itnaaaaa..kanjusi......
part 20
recap:armaan consoles ridz...
riddhima was in locker room...checking some photos...
armaan came from back...and shouted..
ar:BOW..
riddhima jerked...and all the photos fell down...
riddhima gave an angry look to armaan...😡
armaan smiled cutely😃 and started picking up the photos😃
he picked them all and instead of giving them to riddima...he started seeing all those...
ridzi first dint say a thing but suddenly she remembered that there was one photo in that where all the girls were wearing scarfs...striking diffent poses...
she immediatelt pulled all those from him..and left the room almost running...
armaan was surprised....she was about to go to his locker but when he saw ridzis locker open he went there..and when he was closing the locker...he saw a photo struck...to the door of the locker....he pulled it out and he saw few girls with scarfs..striking funny poses...
he smiled..and kept the photo inside the locker...but again he turned and took the photo out hurriedly...
he was surprised...there was his pari...
he was surprised.......
he thought"pppari...ki photo......matlab pari..un 3 logon mein ek hain...par kaun."
..he looked at the photo....he culd differiate anjali due to her dressing.....
"yeh nahi...yeh anjali hain...so...muskaan....nahi nahi...yeh muskaan nahi hain....iski baal itne lambe nahi hai......soooooo......WAT?"
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riddhima was sitting in the canteen all that day was a half day...actually holiday but they decided to meet because of the tour plan...
she was counting the photos...one photo was missing....which one....
"OH..NOOO....."she stood up and almost ran to the locker room..
her locker was closed...she opened her locker...
there it was...
she sighed .....
ri:thank god....agar usne dekhliya hotha naa....omg
she slowly walked out of the locker room..
she dint notice a person standing...in corner...behind the door...
it was armaan..
ar:tohhhh....isse patha tha...ohhh.... tk ms.basket..main bhi nahi bolunga...dekhthe hain kitne din bhagoge...par...yaar...yeh....vo pariii...
i still cant belive this...."
his mind was confused but his heart was very happy...
nxt day...
an:ridziii...utto....time ho rahi hain......uttoo... ridz?ridz?
she removed the blanket...but ridz was not there...
some body came fron back and shoted..
vo:HAPPY BIRTHDAY..
anjali turned and saw ridz,muski,rahul,abhi,nikki,athul standing in a line...smiling...
anjali smiled...
an;ohh....toh aap sab ko yaad hain...mujhe laga aap sab bhool gaye,,
ab:arey...yeh sab armaan ki vje se....usse uta the utathe...der hogayi...phir bhi vo nahi uta....
an:use kyu utna hain..
all:kyaa...matlab?
an:usne toh mujhe wish kar diyaa...
all:WAT?
an:haan...
ab;saala...ab pitega...
evey body wer cursing armaan under her breath...but ridz was smiling...
ri;hahhahaha.....aap log toh ullu ban gaye...
every body pouted...boys left..and the girls got ready...
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armaan was standing in the bus station...waiting for others...
boys arrived....
ab;saala
ra:kutta...kamina...
at:tu hume bevakhoof banaya...
all started scolding him at one time....
armaan got irritated..
ar:BUSSS....maine kya kiya...
ab:kyaa..kiyaa....tumne anjie ko humare bageir wish kardiya....
ar:haa...kyunki mujhe late utni thi...aap log toh finally wish kiya naa....main toh aap se keh raha tha naa..ki jake wish karo..
at;haan...yaar....yeh bhi sach hain naa?
ra:kya hain be...
and they started quarrelling again...
after 5 min girls arrived...
girls:GUYS...
they all became silent...
an:ab bass....
ab:par...anjie...
an;KYA...
ab:kkkuch..nahi..
ri:ab chalo bhi..bus aagaya...
ra:aap log jao...hum bas abhi aathe hain..
he pulled armaan to aside...
they all got into the bus...
they were sitting like this..
abhi,athul anjali,nikki
muskaan,ridz ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
(for armaan and rahul)
rahul entered...and was smiling at muskaan....
ri;arey...upps...sorry rahul...
she stood up..
ri:baito naa....
she went and sat in his place......
the bus started......armaan was not there...
ab:arey..armaan kaha hain .....
ridz suddenly became over cautious...worried...
ri;haa....
she was looking out of the bus...searching for him...
ra:arey haa...vo....nxt station me board karega...
ri:kyu
ra:usse kuch kaam tha...
ab:ohh.....
but ridz wasnt relaxed...she was stil worried..
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after half an hour:
ridz was sleeping....she adjusted herself in her seat...with head slightly to the left....she felt sumthing strong.....she touched it...her eyes popped out...
ri;TUM
armaan smiled cutely...
ri:uffff.......uta nahi sakthe the...
ar;kyu...
ridz was about to say sumthing wen anjali said
an:ridz,armaan......plzz chup raho ....atleat aaj...
samaj lo ki yeh meri birthday gift hain...plzzz
armaan nodded...ridz sighed...
she was looking out...armaan was stealing glancs at her......he smiled....
ni:kitni boring hain...chalo kuch khelthe hain...
ab;haa haa....10 saal ki ho...jo bus mein khelna chaahthi ho..
an:AB TUM DONO SHURU MATH HO JAO..
ra:isse pehle ki yeh kuch bole....armaan...yeh le guitar....baja kuch...
armaan looked at ridz....she was looking at him with raised eyebrows...he smiled...
he took the guitar...
and started playing it...and humming....he started singing..
aaye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahaar banke..
mere dil mein yuhi rehnaa...haaayee...
mere dil mein yuhi rehnaa. tum pyar..pyaar banke..
ghunghat mein har kaali thii..
rangon mein na dalli thiii
na shokh thii havaan,,na khushbuu man chaali thi
aaya hai ab mausm kaisa khumar banke...
aaye ho meri zindagi mein tumm baahaarr bannkee....
man ka nagar tha khaali suki padi thi daali...
holi ke rang phike,benur thii diwaali,,,
rimjim bara pade ho tum phuhaar ban ke...
aaye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahaar banke...
his eyes were like dreaming looking into the space....
every one claapped...
he came out of his dreams....
mu:kya baath hain hero...pari ke baare mein soch rahe the kya...hmm?
armaan smiled...
an;arey vaah...kya baath hai....
ra:yeh toh sharmaraha hain
every one laughed exept ridz
she was looking at all..with a "ouch"expression
armaan was loooking at her from corner of his eyes...smiling..
ab;arey yaar...kitne din sapne dekhoge...kab miloge....kuch sochaa..
ar:meet toh hona hi padega...usse...jaldi.....
ridz was gulping 'nothing'into her throat..
ab:acha?itna confidence
ar:haa...he took out scarf from his back pocket..yeh haina...
all(exept ridz):toh?
ar:yeh hume milayegi
all(exept ridz):oooooooooooo
mu:yeh toh devdas ki tarah scarf le khar ghum raha hain..haa..devdas toh wine ki bottle le kar ghumtha tha..
ab:agar pari nahi mili naaa...toh iska bhi vahi haal hoga...
mu;haan..aur yeh kahegaa.."usne..paaro ko chaha..maine pari ko chaha...par hume mila..hain...daaru....pyaar nahi...balki pyaas.."
every one burst out laughing..even ridzi smiled
ar;abey...kya dosth hain yaar...aur vaise bhi..yeh toh hoga hi nahi....mujhe apna pari milgayi hai"
all:wat?
ridzi started sweatting...
armaan dint answer them and started humming some song...
mu;matlab
an:bata naa...
ab:abey...tu bata hain ki nahi...
ar;hehehhe.....main mazak kar raha tha....heheheh....phir ullo bangaye...heheheh
ridzi sighed heavily
armaan looked at her and gave his crocked smile...
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they reached shimla...
rahul was awestuck....
ra:yeh kya...yeh toh shimla hain...
all(exept muski):SURPRISE.....
rahul was smiling....he went and hugged armaan...
ra:tera idea tha naa...
armaan smiled...
when they broke apart
ra:thanks guys.....all of u...
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evey one reached rahuls house...
ar:sab log sojao....kal baath karenge...
every one retired to thier rooms...exept ridz...
she was walking throuugh the corridors and roooms.....touching every antiq piece..that came in her way....but she dint know that some body was following her..(we know...armaan)
he was smiling at the way she was looking at the paintings,show pices,wooden made dolls...
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nxt day...
an:ridzzzzzz...utto....humsab yaha ke orphanage jarahe hain....tum jab uttoge toh tum..nikki ke saath aajanaa..
ridz nodded in her sleep
after half an hour...
ridzi woke up...brushed her teeth got ready...but nikkin was not there...
there was anote:
ridz,
maine tumhe uttane ki poori koshish ki..par nahi utti...issiliye im leaving without you....yeh address main aajana jab tum uttoge...
..........................,.......
,,,,,............../////
,,,',,,,
ridz took the address hired an auto...
on her way she saw armaan buying baloons...
she was surprised...
she got down the auto..paid the money and went to him...
seeing ridz he smiled..
ri:yeh kya...
ar;...
r:armaaaannn...
ar:batatha hu...ab batao..ki yeh vaali achi hai yaaah....yeh ....
ri:yeh blue waali achi hain...par?
ar;wait and see...
ar:chalo...
they got into the taxi which armaan hired...
they were more bags inside....
ri:yeh sab kya hain....
ar;arey ..yaar.....wait karo...have patience
thay reached the orphanage...
ar:yeh pakadoge plzzz
ri:haaa
armaan covered his body with balloons....
ridzi laughed....
ri:hehehe...yeh kya kar rahe ho?
armaan dint answer....and started moving towards the children playing there..ridz followed him....
seeing armaan children shouted
ch:YAAAAAY....AMY BHAIYA
ri:amy?
armaan snickered
the children surounded armaan ignoring ridz
armaan sat on his knees..and started distributing baloons...
ar:dekho....agar aapko ballons chahiye toh...aap ko mujhe puppy dena padega....
all children smiled
ar:jitna bada puppy...utna bada ballon...ok?
ch:OKEYYYYYY..
ridzi smiled at his childish behaviour
every one was... kissing armaan on his cheeks...
armaan was giving them baloons..
after few minutes...
two girls brought a girl who was about 5 years..
girl1:ammy bhaiyaa...ooppss...ammy..
every one laughed including ridz
ar;haa...bolo sweety..
gi:yeh mansi hain....
ar;ohh...hello maansi...
he flashed his dimpled smile..the girl dint say anything
sweety gestured that she wont speak to strangers
armaan nodded...pulled the girl near him gently..
ar:aapko patha hain MANSI matlab kya hain..
mansi shaked her head as no....
ar:nahi....maansi matlab dil mein rehne waali...yaa...dilon ko churane waali...yeh naam aapko bilkhul suit kartha hain....
mansi smiled alittle..
ar;patha hain...aapne toh mera bhi dil churaliya...
the little girl smiled more..
ar:aap mujhe ek puppy denge plzz...puleaseee...pleeeesee....
mansi shaked her head..
ar:nahi...agar aap mujhe puppy denge toh main aap ko ballon dunga....
the girl eagerly looked at the baloon...then at armaan...he was smiling cutely....flashing his dimples...
the girl gave smaalll short peck on his dimples...and said
ma:ballooonnn,,,
ar:arey itna chota puppy....tk koi baath nahi...he he pulled her and gave BIG... peck on her cheeks....
ar;asey dethe puppy....
evry one laughed....but ridhima was awe at him...she was impressed by the way he was making convo with that girl
by the time she regained her senses the girl was in armaans arms smiling hugely...pulling his hair...and armaan was making faces to make her smile....
armaan gestured her to take those bags inside..
she npdded ...and went inside..
every one was eating lunch...
ridzi also started eating...
armaan came in after a while....
ab:khana kha lo....
ar;nahi....unlogon ke saath khelkar pet bhar gaya......
every smiled..
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3'o'clock
all kids were sleeping...
all friends exept armaan and rahul were in the lawn chatting..ridz was searching for armaan
she went inside...looking for him...
she saw armaan placing the dolls..near the kids..
rahul was helping him...
she was totaaly awe at him now....ahe sint expect any this kind of thing from him....
her heart was feeling proud....and happy....
precap:
ridzi dream....the man in black...reaveled....
she is shocked..
guysss...no kanjusi plzzzzzzzz.....comment plzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

sorrry..........next tym bada paka............ab tu gussa chora............

teek hain....par nxt time pacca haa?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg_roks_antara

hehehehe........dat was cute thnx fr d pm

thnku....par itna kanjusi...commment karne mein....
thoda kam karo naaa😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey vysh...

awesum part.....

ye..... armaan ko pta lag gya ridhima hi pari hai....

armaan ne sabko ullu banaya....🤣

song is fantastic......

(

."usne..paaro ko chaha..maine pari ko chaha...par hume mila..hain...daaru....pyaar nahi...balki pyaas.."_)🤣

armaan is so cute in orphange.. hoe he make conversation with little girl...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

luv

ryka

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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
awsome part
continue soon
thansk for PM.


love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow awesome part
really liked it
do cont soon thnx
4 the pm dear

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