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vyshu

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Posted: 15 years ago

DIL KA DESTINY

HOW DO WE FEEL WHEN WE FALL IN LOVE... WAT DO WE FEEL WHEN DAT PERSON REJECTS OUR LOVE...WAT DO WE FEEL WEN WE CUM TO KNOW THE REASON BEHIND IT......................................................................

IN ONE LINE HOW OUR HEART FEELS WEN IT FINDS ITS DESTINY....

THIS IS THE STORY OF 5 COUPLES THEIR MEETING,AND THE JOURNEY TOGETHER

INDEX:

PART 1-pg1

PART-2 pg2

PART-3 pg-4

PART-4 pg-5

PART-5pg-6

PART-6pg-7

PART-7 PG-8

PART-8 pg-9

part-....9..pg-10

part....10-pg-11

part.....11-pg..12

part......12-pg...13

part......13-pg....14..

part......14..-pg...16

part.....15-pg......19

part16..to 19...pg-20

part 20...pg.....22

part .....21....pg....26

PART 22...PG...28

PART 23...31

part24....32

part 25...34

PART26..36

PART27...38

PART 28...39

PART30...43

INTRO

the gates of a beautiful building opened..a girl was passing through the lawn.........she entered the the house......she was climbing up the stairs........she entered into a beutiful room....... she passed through the window..she opened the door of the balcony........a person was standing there........she was about to touch him.......

ridzzzzzzzzzzzzyyyyyyyyyyyyy ridzzzzzzzzzzzzzyyyyyyy.........

riddhima got up looked around hit her head she went to the cupboard took the towel out,went near the bath room,knocked the door and said

ri:aaj bhi bhool gayi.....tum bhi naa dii

an:aaj bhi wahi sapna..tum bhi naa ridzyy

riddhima smiled handed the towel to her sister and went out of the room.her father was sitting there.

ri:good morning papa

sh:good after noon beta

ri:kyaaaaaaaa? aaj bhi late uti......(she looked at the clock)dus bhaj gaye,muhe toh laga tha 7 hai

shashank laughedand said

sh:kyu nahi tum toh roj 1 baje uthi hoo.

ridhhima made a puppy face.anji came from behind

an:ridz tumhe yaad hai aaj shaam ko hamari train hai manali ko

ri:isliye toh jaldi uthi(shesaid wid the puppy face)

an:packing karne ke liye uthi toh jakar phir se so jaana

ri:kyu???????????

an:kyunki maine sara packing kar liya hai

ri:okkkkkkkkkk

an:kya? phir se sone jaa rahe hooo:😆

ri:diiiiiiiiiiiiiii

she ran at the back of anjali.

evening time..........

ridhima and anjali were in the taxi,ridhima was searching some thing...

an:kyaa hua ridzzy

ri:meri scarf nahi mil rahi maine isme hi rakha tha

an:achii tara yaad karo kis bag mein rakha hai?

riddhima thought for some time and said......

ri:oh shit.maine use nikhala purse mai rakhne ke liye aur vahi chod kar ayiiiiiiii

an:tch ridz ab kya karoge?

ri:di app chaliye main ghar jaa kar use lekhar directly next station pahuchthi hoo

an:r u sure?

ri: haan di...bhaiyya zara gadi rokhiye ga plz.ok di mei aapko next station mei milthi hoo bye

she hugged her and left

In station

an:hi guysssssssss

muskkan,abhi and amit were standing near the train in fact they were almost blocking the way

all:hiiiiiii

mu:are yaar ridz kaha hai?

an:wo apne scarf bhool gayi thi,to ghar chaligaye,wo hame next station par milegi

muskaan hit her head,abhi and amit rolled thir eyes

they dint notice aperson was standing there. he was dam handsome,blue eyes,muscular body,6feet.

man;excuse me?

all turned around and saw armaan standing there

an,mu:wooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww

they thought in their minds

ar:i said excuse me?

they moved to a side.he entered the train and went in

mu:are yaar kya ladkha hai yaaaaaaar😍.wowwwwwwwww

an:haan yaar.he is just superb

they both laughed and got into the train.

well thats for today guys.plzzzzzzzzz do reply,if u like it please do comment, if u dont criticise but do something

if u like it,i will continue the next part wid character sketch.......

till then alvida,

with lots of luv,

urs vyshhhhh

Edited by vyshu-avi - 14 years ago

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vyshu

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Posted: 15 years ago

armaan was cumng out of wash room, ridhima just entered into the train,and the train began to move,riddhima got slipped.......

ri:ahhhhhhhh armaan caught her by waist,and they had an eye lock........ guys meri fan fic itni buri hai kya???????koi replies nahi hain😭😭

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey

Cool part

I liked it

Add me to your PM list

Take care

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vyshu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Hey

Cool part

I liked it

Add me to your PM list

Take care

thanq dear.

Edited by vyshhhhhhhh - 15 years ago

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Sravanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

it nice.

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Ryka

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice concept..
add me to ur pm list..

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Dhruvika

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy dear

gr8 part

loved it

plzz cont soon

n pm me

thx

dhruvika

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vyshu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
heyy dear
gr8 part

loved it

plzz cont soon

n pm me

thx

dhruvika

tanqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq dear. yes i will update it within 3 days

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vyshu

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Posted: 15 years ago

thanq 4 ur support guys........

NOTE:ar ki jo scene thi waha 1st part pe....wo pre cap thi..... mai precap likna bhoolgayi thi sorryyyyyyyyyy

PART-2

anjali,muskaan,abhi,amit also got into the train.they were sitting on the six seats wala side and adjacent to them,armaan was sitting(two seat wala side).those 4 were playing lie kids,infact shouting like hell.armaan was getting irritated by their voices,he thought"mana ki ye log enjoy kar rahe hai,par iska matlab ye toh nahi ki wo doosronko disturb kare"he switched on his ipod and started listening to songs.and after some time he fell asleep.

30,min later,

bow bow bowbowwwwwwwwwww bow

armaan suddenly woke up and looked around,he saw abhi shouting like a dog,

he looked at him weirdly,but later understood that they were playing a game

tose 4 were playing chits,it was muski's turn,she should act like a heroine,

mu:tk mai karishma ki acting karoongi par mera papa kaun banega?

all:kyaaaaaaaaa?papaa?

mu:haann papa,wo raja hindhustani ki film haina........(she looked at abhi)abhe apna mu bandh kar badboo arahi hai,aur macchar bhi..

ab:meri muh se nahi tere muh se aarahi hai.......aur jaha frog hai waha macchar kaha aayengeeeeee

mu:saale tujhe mai baad mein dekthi hoon,mujhe ab karishma banni hai,tu banja mere baap

ab:tk par mai koi acting vacting nahi karne walaa

mu:tujhe karne ko bhi kaun kehraha hai,bas yaha khade hoja

saying this she also got up,armaan was watching all this,he was actually enjoying

muskaan started

mu:papaaahhhhh mai rajaa se pyaar karthi hoon paapaahhh,aap kyu mahi manrahe hai meri baat

abhi:(to anjali)waise yeh raja kaunhai yaar,mujhe toh nahi pataa........aur ye sunne mai dhuki lagthi hai par dekne mai......aanko mei aasuu bhi nahi hai

muskaan immediately opened the bottle put two drops on her eyes,sniffs and says

mu:(har own dialouge)paapaahhh ap bahut badal gaye hai papaahhhhh aapko raja nahi pata,aapko meri aasu nahi dikrahii(sniffs)

ab:math ro meri bachi math ro mujhe pata tu kisse pyaar karthi hai,aur mai tumhe samajhtha hu bhi...aur lagtha hai ki woh bhi tumse bahut pyaar kartha hai,isiliye toh yaha aaya hai

he pointed on the window,afrog was sitting there.every one started laughing including armaan,muski was fuming with anger

ab:ab jab tum bhi frog ho toh....ek frog ko hi pasand karegi naa😃

he also started laughing,muski's face was all red due to anger

anjali:tu itna kyu shama rahi hai.....dekho zara tera chehra kaisa laal ho gaya

every one started laughing again,muskaan kicked anjali's legwent to abhi and said

mu:saale kaue,mai tujhe frog dikthi hoo,salla,kamina

she was scolding him..

armaan:ab excuse me?

every one looked at him,muskaan was so angry,

mu:ab tumhe kya chahiyeee

armaan was taken a back

ab:tch muskaan shu,chup ho ja ji kahiye

ar:ab vo mai aapko kuch derse dekhraha tha,aap bahut ache khel rahe the...tohh,toh maine socha ki mai bhi aapke saath kelu,vo mai bahut bore ho raha tha toh maine puch liya,aapko agar koi problem nahi hai tohh.....

amit:ab problem toh hogi naa(armaan looked at him) jab koi hame aap aap karke bulate hai toh hum uske saath kaise khel sakthe hai,

armaan smiled and said

ar:ok,ab...kya mai tum logon ke saath join ho saktha hoo

all:yeh hui na baath,of course,y not

ab:aur waise bhi yaha koi tumhari bahuth badi fan ho gayi hai(he looked at muskaan)

muskaan gestured"tere baare mai baad mein dhekthi hu"and said

mu:ab game continue kare?

every one started playing the game again

11'0,clock(half an hr later)

all were sleeping,armaan went to wash room,the train was halted in the second station,armaan came out,he was washing his hands,train started moving...riddhima was trying to get on the train,but was not able to,so just made a big jump and entered it,but lost balence and was about to fall,

ri:ahhhhhhhh

ar:arreee

he caught her by waist,she was wearing scarf,so he could see only her eyes,they(a,r) had an eye lock

another train passed by them,but still they were holding each other😳 😆

ok guys,thts 4 today..mujhe pics lagana nahi aarahi hai

par mai two aur parts complete hone se pehle,pics ke saath,charcter sketch bhi lihdoongi,tab tak thoda wait kariye ga,aur meri ff padthe rahi ye ga😊

tab tak,

keep smiling, take care,

bye....

lots of luv,urs,

Vyshhhhhhh.😊

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey
wow!!!
Superb part 👏
Esp. when Abhi said, Main jaanta hun tum usse bohot pyaar karti ho, dekho wo yahan bhi aa gaya 🤣
That whole sequence was hilarious 🤣
Thanks 4 the PM
Take care n I'm waiting for the pics 😛
Update soon

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago