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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

amazing part.......
but small......
armaan is very naughty n ridz n anji also see it......
waiting for next part,............
thnx for the pm..........

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Antara Mazumdar

@dmg_roks_antara

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

awwwwwwwww choooo chweeeeeeeeet.........hehehe dey r so cute...........well thnx fr d pm n cont soon

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vyshu

@vyshu-avi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

sorry for the delay guys...i was a bit busy...

part-12

It was the last ten minutes of the match...the ball was with athul..none were able to take the ball from him...anjali went and stood before athul..when he looked up he saw her looking at him..with a serious look..he dint know when anjali took the ball and made abasket..he realised it when he heard the girls were shouting out in joy..

he went near armaan and rahul and abhi also came there and stood with them..armaan made an excuse and left the place where rahul was smiling at muskaan..

10 min after the match..

armaanwas in changing room seated...he was thinking about the match and riddhima..

MATCH SCENE...

he was trying to get the ball from riddhima..

riddhima shifted her hair from one side of her shoulder to other..it hit armaan like a breeze...it was so soft..and the memories of pari...reeled back...

he was thinking..."mujhe vo pari ki ehsaas kyu lag rahi thi..do din se vo mujhe yaad bhi nahi aarahi thi aur achanak match ke beech...vo bhi uss baal ki vaje se..kya riddhima aur pari ke beech kuch connection hai...kya ridhima hi pari hain...kyaaa..no way..kaha vo pari..aur kaha yeh jungli basket...baskets aise kar rahi thi..aur almost basket ke paas hi khadi hui thi...BASKET..achi naam hai uss jungli billi ko..par pariii...arre yaar shahid shaid coincidence hai...haa coincidence...yeah...haa...yes..

next day...

rahul was tensed and was roaming in corridor..from here to there and there to here...

ar:arrey yaar rahul..kya hua...itna tensed kyu hai.???????

ra:TUM..TUMCHUP RAHO..sab kuch tere vaje se hua hain ...kisne kaha tha tujhe muskaan ko messege bejne ke liye..ab main kya karu yaar...maine bina soche pooch liya tha ki.."baahar aaogi mere saath.."abbey main kaha le jau...kya kahu ..

ar:arrey..wahi batha jo tere dil main hain..

ra:kya ki main usse pyaar kartha hu..

before armaan could say anything

vo:ohhhhhhh.....

they both looked in that direction..and saw abhi standing there...

abhi was smiling at them..looking suprised..and nodding his head as if he was understanding sumthing...

ra:ab...arey abhi tum...kab aaye...

ab:jab tum keh raha tha ki tum muskaan se pyaar karthe ho..

ra:ho...ho..hahahaha...main mazak..mazak kar raha tha...you know,...

ab:acha...really...issliye tum muskaan ko baar baar dekh rahe the match ke beech main...

ra:(to himself..'shit isne dekh liya..)

ab:(as if he understood)haa...maine dekh liya...ab chupane ki koi zaroorath nahi..batha kab se..

before rahul could say anything..

ar:arey vo kya batha ye gaa main bathaunga...ek minute...he opened his college bag and showed a photo..it was a photo of agirl cutely smiling...she was in her school uniform...

ra:ABBEY..yeh tumhare paas kya kar raha hain...de mujhe...

armaan gave out an evil laugh and siad "arrey main isse sirf dikha raha hu..kha thodi na raha hu...tum aisa chilla the kyu ho...yeh lo baba..tumhari photo...acha abhi...tumhe kya laghtha hai..isse kya karni chahiye..

ab:mmmmmmmmm......haa..koi restraunt pe le jao..aur propose karo.....

ar:hmmm...mujhe laghtha hai..koi..resort acha rahe ga...

ab:restraunt

ar:resort

ab:restraunt

ar:resort

ra:ek minute...na restaurent..na resort...koi aur idea hai toh batao

ab,ar:disco

rahul:disco...muskaan ko...aayegi kya...

ab:kyu nahi...pooch kar toh dekho...

rahul nodded his head

muskaan was standing in front of anjali and ridz..who were giving her serious looks...

mu:kkkya hua...

ridz raised her eye brows...

an:basket ball court main wash room kab construct kiya gaya hain...

muskaan raised her eyes slowly and looked at both of them....

mu:vo..rahul ne msg beja tha..toh

ri:tumne humse jhoot kehne ki kya zaroorath thi...

mu:nahi yaar vo..v o....main..main...

anjali and ridz burst out laughing....muskaan was confused...

mu:kya?

an:tumhe kya laga...hame patha nahi hain tum hare mann main kya chal raha hain...

ri:kyuuu...pyaar hai..

she said hitting her shoulder...

an:aur..

athul came there and said...

at:anjali...main tumse baath karna chahtha hu...

an:kya...(she asked rudely)

at:akele main...

an:kyu...aisi kya baath hain...jo bhi bolna hai yahi bolo nahi toh chle jao...

atul looked at ridz and muskaan..they both nodded and left...

an;ridzy...mukaan...arey...yeh kya bathameesi hai...

at:aakir tumhari problem kya hai anjali...

an:wat

at:tum....mer saath aise kyu baath kar rahe ho...jab se aayi ho tab se notice kar raha hu..tum sab ke saath normal rehthe ho par...mere saath..kyu itna rude,,itna..

an:tumhare jaise logon ke liye yehi sahi hain...

at:what...what do u mean.."mere jaise"matlab..

an:ohh please mere saath naatak math karo..main tumhari baatho mein nahi phasne waali....

at:will u please explain wat u mean...

anjali sighed

an:tk...main tumhe explain karungi...vo bhi practically....tumhe riya yaadh hain...

at:kaun?...

an:i know...you are so much like that...

at:like wat..

an:itna acting math karo...i know ki tum riya ko jaanthe ho..

at;(he thought for a bit)u mean...riya..mehra..

an:ohh finally..u remembered..great..mujhe

laga tha ki tum bhool chuke ho usse...

at;ussee aur tumhe gussa hone ki kya connection?????

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Ab ye kaunsa naya chakkar hai di??
Ye ria mehra kaun hai?
Par cool part tha!
Thanks for the PM
Take care

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

really nice part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon..

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Antara Mazumdar

@dmg_roks_antara

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

cool part n who is riya mehra??????????? thnx fr d pm n cont soon

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

amazing update dear......
ab yeh riya kaun hai.......
thnx for the pm...........

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Riddhi

@Riddss

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon

love
Riddss

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Ryka

@ryka_27

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

hey...

nice part...

armaan ko jab pta lagega ki pari aur jangli billi ek to kya hoga..😆

cont. soon...

thnx for the pm....

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vyshu

@vyshu-avi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#100

hello wonderful guys out there.....sorry...aaj kal main bahuth busy ho gayi thi ki mujhe update karne ke liye waqt hi nahi mill rahi....par ab se koshish karungi ki hafthe mein atleast two updates honge...

PART-12

RECAP:ATUL ANJALI CONVO..

an:ohh please atul...main riya ko bula loongi...tab sab kuch clearse yaad aajayega..aur tum samaj jaoge..

saying this she left...she went to canteen...on the way she called riya..and asked her to come to delhi...

inside the canteen ridz and muskaan were chatting..she went near them and said

an:kya baatein ho rahi hai..

ri:arey di aap...hum toh muski ke unke baare mein baath kar rahe the...

an:ooooohhhhhhh...muski zara mujhe bhi batao..UNKE baare mein..

mu:ab tum logon ko pata chal gaya toh chup raho..aur....

she was about to say sumthing...but became dumb wen she saw rahul,abhi,armaan approaching....

ra:hi riddhima..hi anjali...hi muskaan..

all:hi

ab:acha ridz..armaan,anjali...zara mere saath aana mujhe aapse kuch baath karni hai...

he took the trio out...armaan knew why..but anjali,ridz didnt...

ri:kya baath hai abhi..

ab:kuch nahi..bas un dono ko thodi privacy milljayegi isliye...

ri:tk...par mujhe lovers ke baathe sunna acha lag tha hai...

ab;oho ridz...KYA...lovers...yani ki muskaan bhi...

an;tum kaise dosth ho yaar tumhe yeh bhi nahi patha...

ab:acha acha tk...

an:toh chalo...

ab:kaha?

an:evesdrop karne ke liye..(winked)

they all were hiding behind a wall..

rahul was playing piano (with no piano) on the table...

muskaan was drinking coffe her eyes lowered...

ra:toh........vo........mainpooch raha tha ki...

muskaan raised eyebrows...

ab:jaldi pooch.......

ra:tummmmmm.....mere saath baahar ...bahar chaloge...

mu;par.......kaha........

ra:ammmm........vo.......disco...

mu;WAT??????no............noways..DISCO..no

ri:disco..yeh koi jagah hai legane ki...

ab,ar:kyu....

ridzi straitened her self ...folded her hands..(same with anjali..)

ri,an:toh..yeh aap dono ka idea tha...

ar:ab:haaaaa...acha haina...

ridzi and anjali looked at each other...and started taking together...

an,ri:.............................

ar:chup..ekek karke batao...

an;kya bathana hai..ab muski rahul ke saath kahi nahi jayegi...

ab:(he was listening to the convo of rm)you are wrong anjie...she accepted

an,ri:WAT?

armaan was smiling...a victorious smile..

ar:ab kya kehthe ho..yeh toh ho na hi tha.. afterall yeh mera plan hai...

ridzi gave him a dirty look...

wen rahul left...anjali,ridz went to muskaan...armaan and abhi went to rahul

anjli said rather fiercely to muskaan...

an:muski...tum dis.....(rizi showed her eyes..)

an:haaa...ahaaaaaaaa vooo..kya keh raha tha rahul...sach batha ab

mu:vo...date ke liye pooch raha tha...disco....

an:kya...DISCO..tumne mana kar diya hoga..(acting smart)\

mu;nahi...miane kaha tk...

ri:kya....tumne ok kaha...disco...

mu:haaaaann.......kyu...

an:jab hum poochthe hain toh 'no'..par jab rahul poocha toh 'haa' achi tarah nibha rahe ho dosti..

mu:ab...sorry yaar...usne kaha tha ki vo jagah dico cum restaurant hai..toh...

an,ri:ohhhhhhhhhhhh..........

ri:chal chal...tk...kab...

mu:aaj...shaam ko...

an,ri:ohhhhhhhhhh......toh madam aaj rahul ke saath date par jaa rahi hai...

by then abhi came there...he also started acting..

ab:yeh main kya sun raha hu..muskaan aur dico...muski..vaha...shorrr hogi...lights dim honge..andera hoga shahid...tumhe acha nahi lagtha na...

ri:abhi.....yeh rahul ke saath ja rahi hai...u know..RAHUL..

ab:ohhhhhhh...par..muski raja ka kya hoga...

mu:abey tu na..chup kar...mujhe koi baath nahi karni hai tumse..huh...

saying this she left..

EVENING TIME..

muskaan was wearing

ri:wow muskaan...bahuth achi lag rahi ho..

an:haa....maine kaha tha naa...yeh dress tumhe suit karegi

mu:par..anjie..mujhe uncomfotable kag rahi hai..maina jeans pehnungi...

an:shut up...bahuth achi lag rahi hai bas..

they hear ahorn..

an:laghtha hai vo aagaya...ja..all the best..

ri:all the best muski....

mu:byee...

rahul saw her approaching and was like awe

ra:tum...tum bahuth achi lagrahi ho...

mu:(blushing)thanks...

ra:chale..

mu:haan..

it was atwo seated sports car...small but cute..

raxcy

( i dnt know any names of the disco's in delhi)

rahul opened the car door for her...offered his hand...

muskaan took it got out of the car..

they went inside it...

they enjoyed there for one hour...talked about every thing and nothing...rahul thought.."chal ab bata deta hu.."

he took her out side the discotek..

beside there was a big lawn...decorated with lights...

at the centr..a tble was placed...with two chairs...

rahul made her sit there...he sat opposite to her..a waiter came there and gave him a big wrapper...

rahul gave it to muskaan..and said..

ra:for u...

muskaan smiled and started un wrapping it

(guys the teddy is the same but it dindnt have any thing attched like'i love you')

mu:wowwwwwww.......kitna cute hai..thanks rahul...

ra:my pleasure...ab khana khaye..(he looked at waiter and nodded)

thats 4 today folks.....

coming up:rm confession

atul- anjali- riya...convo

okk guys....main pms two hors ke baadh karungi...ek aur ff likne ko soch rahi hu....kuch titles hai toh batao....aur comment karna math bulna...and silent readers dont 4 get to press like button(if u like this)........bye....

alvida.....keep smiling............catch u soon.........