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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
heyyy dear,
awesome part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

hey...

nice update...
kahi tum sapna aur amith ki shaadi to nahi karva rahi..
coz amith bhi gayab hai..
aur sapna bhi khush hai..
aur wo sab ko surprise dena chahte ho..??
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Great part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
awwwww poor amit...........chalo koi nai atleast all r happyyyyyyy...........thnx for d pm ......cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: ryka_27

hey...

nice update...
kahi tum sapna aur amith ki shaadi to nahi karva rahi..
coz amith bhi gayab hai..
aur sapna bhi khush hai..
aur wo sab ko surprise dena chahte ho..??

i domt think so dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

PART-10

RE-CAP:ridzi,armaan on phone wid amith..
armaan was thinking abt ridzi calling amith as bhai...
he dont know wen he did but he drifted off into sleep......
in his dream....
a girl was walking.....he coulnt under stand exactly wat location was that....it was sum thing like...beach....but the surroundings were green....like a park....she was wearing a white colour chudidaar...from back he could see only her hair....and he could only say that...she was wearing a scarf......he was riding a bicycle.....but the girl was faster than him.......he rode that more fast....and he is now riding it parrell to her...she got hit to sumthing....and was about to fall down...wen he stopped the bicycle..and caught her....infact prevented her from falling down..........
he saw her.....only thing he culd see was her eye's....it was none other than pari....
in sleep he murmered PARIIIIIIIIIII......
and he shot open his eyes.......every one was looking him with eye brows raised.....rahul,athul,nikki....were smiling to them selves.....
when nikki was about to say sum thing....
a girl came...and said...
gi:riddhima....main library jaa rahi hu...tumne kal...bolne ko kaha tha naa....chale...
ri:haa....chalo....
she gave alook to armaan...and left....
armaan was looking down...he thought..."margaya.."
some one cleared his/her troat...he looked up....
anjali:.....aise kya dekh rahe ho.....poochna padega kya...
mu:ary jaldi bata...yeh...pari kaun hai....
an:chakkar kya hai....
mu:kab se jaanthe ho...
an:bata diya usse...
mu:usne kya kaha...
an:uska asli naam hi pari hai...
mu:ab batao bhi....
ab:aap log puchna band karenge tabhi vo batayega naa......bolo armaan...
ni:bolo armaan(teasing)
at,ra:bolo...bolo...
armaan sighed....and said...
ar:tk.......ab kya chupana....maine usse train mai mila tha...(he said the whole story...and continued like this) main iske bina...kuch nahi jaantha....na uska naam..na uska shehar....na uska...
ra:chehra.....
armaan gave him a "i will kill u..."look...
while every one said...
all:WAT?.........
armaan just nodded his head...
mu:chalo...acha hua...aanko ko dekhar hi sub concious hogaya....agar pura chehra dekha hota toh.....
an:unconsious hi hojatha..
and they hi-fived each other.....
armaan shook his head...
ab:toh....ab kya karna chahthe ho....
armaan just shrugged his shoulders...
ab:hmmmmmm.....dont worry hum madad karenge....wat say guys...
all:of course.....
armaan smiled....
few days later....
every one was sitting in the canteen...
rahul came running...
ra:hey armaan....parso basket ball hai...princi ne bataya...
ar:(rolled his eyes)tujhe kya laghtha hai......mujhe bataye bina...basket ball ko organise karega princi....
ri:haa rahul isse sweep jo karna hai....
armaan gave her atough look...every one laughed...
ar;haa....karna toh padega....sweep...opposite team ko...
riddhima rolled her eyes...
ar;but what vs what....
ra:(his face some wat became low)girls vs boys(he eyed muskaan)
ar:(understood his gesture)ohhhhhh......
ra:princi ne tumhe list banane ko kaha hai...
ar:k then....captain main hu....mere team main....tum,champ...abhi?
ab:yup...
ar:k...aur...(he said other few names)..done...
ra:riddhima...tumhe bhi banani hai...princi ne kaha tha ki tum basket ball champ ho...
armaan raised his eyebrows...
ri:yaaa...tk...captain...
an:ofcourse tum...
ridz smiled at her..
ri:k...main,di(she wrote anjali though),muski..
mu:nooo....ab...mera leg main thoda dard ho raha hai..toh...next time..(she looked at rahul who was amiling..)
armaan saw this...he raised his eye brows and chuckeld.😉..
ridz and anjie were smiling to each other...😆..
ri:ok...(and she also told few other names and gave it to rahul)
rahul took that gave alook to muskaan and left...
no body knows but anjali and ridz were pinching muskaan...and she was forced to remain silent(pch...bechari)
two days later....
BASKET BALL MATCH...
riddhima was actually very thin(almost zero size)and that..out fit made her look even more thin...
armaan was teasing her...
ar:aise lag rahi hai jaise ek stick ko cloth bandh diya gaya hai....hehehehe...patli jungli billi...
ridhima however ignored him...
pre cap:
riddhima was having the ball...armaan was trying to take it...due to the heavy wind her hair was blowing on to his face...it was so soft..like satin...and he was stuck by her sent...
scene 2:atul was having the ball...ridzi failed to take it ....and so like every one...anjali took a deep breathe...went near him and gave a serious look...tats it...he dropped it...
ohhkk guys...here goes another part...maine notice kiya ki views jyaada hai par comments kam....agar pasand nahi aaya toh atleast...criticise toh karo...plzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
]heyy dear
gr8 part
loved it
plzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

hey...

lovely update...

aaj phir armaan ko pari ka sapna aaya...😆

kya armaan canteen mein hi so gya tha??

cont. soon...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ryka_27

hey...

lovely update...

aaj phir armaan ko pari ka sapna aaya...😆

kya armaan canteen mein hi so gya tha??

cont. soon...

yup....canteen mein hii
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
Hey!!
really nice part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!

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