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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part.. 😊 so sweet of him to go & meet naina ... I gues he stil does nt know abt his child ., waitng 4 his reaction... Continue asap.,
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part
Raj naina se milne jata hai aur ghar par sab ko lagta hai ki raj bilkul irresponsible hai.
Finally naina aur raj ke beech ki misunderstanding clear ho jati hai.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely, nice update.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice fic. good to see naina n raj together.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update.bt it is too short.shuru karte hi khatm ho gaya.cont soon.sorry for the late reply.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lol Raj and Naina bakkk :DD
great update
Cont.soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

raj and n were still hugging each other when a nurse enter into n's cabin nurse ko yun achanaak dekh kar n aur raj gets realy embrassed the nurse understood their condition so to lighten the situation she tells n"theat the baby is hungry so she came here without saying anything n extends her hand to take the basby into her lap the nurse gave the baby to n and goes from the cabin n aapne baby ko dhoodh pilane ke liye aapne hooks kholne jate haai par she stops herself bcoz she was feeling awkard to breast fed infront of raj raj n ke uljhan ko samajhte hue n se kaheta haai"n woh mujhe dr se tumhare condition ke baare mein kuch baat karne haai main thore der mein aata hu"raj ke jaane ke bad n aaram se aapne baby ko dhoodh pilane laagte haai

dekhte dekhte ek hafte beech jaate haai aaj n hospital se discharge hoke shekhawat house wapis aane baale haai isliye subhe se sab log n aur uske new born baby ke swagat ke taiyari mein jute hue haai
tia-udhay bhaiya mainne aapko dekhe ko kaha tha ke cake ban gaya haai ke nahin aap jaake dekheye naa
udhay tia ke baat sunke aapne voice ko low karte hue kaheta haai"cake toh kab ka baked ho gaya par "
tia-par kya kaha haai cake baataye?
udhay ab aapne voice aur thore low karte hue tia se kaheta haai"par woh cake mainne kha liya "
tia-whattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt?aapne pura cake kha liya ab hum kya n bhabhi ka anne ka waqt ho gaya haai itne jaldi sab kaise hoga (tia starts crying )tia ke rone awaz sunke karthik who was passing from there comes into the room and asked tia about the matter tia tells him everything karthik toh tia ke baat sunke udhay par bohot gussa ho jaata haai
karthik-udhay today i wont spare u tu kya ek chotta sa kaam bhi thik se nahin kar sakta
udhay-bhaiya woh mujhe bhookh laage the isliye
karyhik-plz udhay stop giving me this rubbish excuses u r just really irriatating (karthik aur udhay mein fight suru ho jaate haai raj who by hearing their fight comes to their room)
raj-hey karthik udhay kya hua tum dono lar kun rahe ho
udhay raj ko dekh ke uske pass jaake khara ho jaata haai aur kaheta haai"dekheye na bhaiya yeh karthik bhaiya aur tia mujhe kab se datt rahe haai"
raj-kya yeh main kya sun raha hu karthik tia tum dono udhay ko kun datt rahe ho kya kiya haai isne
tia-bhaiya humne socha tha ke aaj n bhabhi ke liye we will arrange a surprise party isliye mainne udhay bhaiya se kaha tha ke woh jaake ek cake le aaye par udhay bhaiya ne toh pura cake he kha liya ab aap he baataye bhaiya hum ab kya kare humara pura surprise toh bekar ho gaya na
udhay-bhaiya believe me mujhe bhookh laage the isliye mainne kha liya i am sorry
karthik-sorry aaj toh tu gaya(karthik again raise his hand to hit udhay but raj catches karthik's hand "dont u dare hit udhay karthik"
karthik-toh bhaiya aap he baataye ab hum kya kare n bhabhi aate he hoge aur cake ke bina party kaise hoge
raj-karthik tia cake ghar mein nahin ban sakta par dukan mein toh mil sakta haai na
karthik-what ?i cant understand
raj puts his hand over karthik's shoulder and says"mera matlab haai cake chaheye ghar mein bana ho ya dukan mein cake toh cake hota haai na
tia-hmm
raj-isliye we will buty a cake from any cake shop simple isse tum sab ke party bhi kharab nahin hoge aur n ko cake cutne bhi mil jaayege kun raj winks at udhay
udhay gets really touched today by raj's behaviour he goes and hugs raj "bhaiya aap sach mein great ho i love u bhaiya" raj udhay ke baalo ruffle karke usse kaheta haai"ab rona bad kar aur chalo tum log mere saath main hospital jaate waqt tum logo ko cake shop mein drop kar dunga"
karthik tia udhay sab raj ke jaate haai raj unhe ek cake shop ke pass drop kar ke hospital jaata haai n aur aapne new born baby ko ghar wapis laane ke liye
raj jab hospital pahuchta haai tab n raj ko dekhte he usse kahene laagte haai"aa gaye tum lo ab tumhe samalo aapne is bete ko " raj aake aapne bete ko godh mein leta haai aur kaheta haai"kya hua mera baccha mama ko tang kar rahe the aap "the baby makes some noise in his baby voice "
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
everythingz becoming fine finally...
nice ud...
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
The update was very sweet and very nice.
All the scenes were beautiful.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
Luv Preet.
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Posted: 15 years ago
"hi friends today is RATH which is a wellknown festival of bengal and orrisa so on this auspicious day i like to wish all my friends a very very happy rath "
love u all my friends .

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