I love u too much to lose u#2(Rajeev)EpiloguePg-14 - Page 6

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

hiiiiii dear😊😊😊Helloooookya aap guess kar sakti hain ki maine aaj subah ke 9 baje se raat ke 3 baje tak...ahh raat nahin actually subah ke 3 baje tak kya kiya??????nahi?????.lemme tell u...maine ek stretch mein tumhaari fic padhi..[with short breaks ofcourse😉Thank God....warna mujhpe kitneeee saare ilzaam aa jate....like ur neck strain, bad effects on ur eye-sight, boredom....and wat not]....and do i need to say that i loved it completely????????????👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...really i cant believe that i missed such a beautifully written fic...but now i m definately waiting for the next update...u see i cant wait anymore...afterall asmi ke saath saath mujhe bhi ayaan se pyaar jo gaya hai😳😳😳😳😳😳..Truly yaar....I am amazed that Ayaan has turned out this much beautiful that he is loved a lot....and to be honest that was the prime motive of this fic from the beginning....and cuming near the end....I'm glad to see this dream being fulfilled......he's tooooooooooooooooooo "CUTE"😆😆😆 BAS DRAMA BHUT KARTA HAI😆😆😆😆😃😃😉😉....Hehe...itnaaaa cute hai ki usse special consideration milna hi chahiye...hai na???......and yes throughout the fic i could imagine priyanka as asmi...i guess she suits this role more......but maybe bcoz i m RN fan that's why i could imagine her only....but i guess that's fine with u...afterall rajeev to rahega hi😳😳😳😳...

Of course.....and its ok to imagine Priyanka....u knw I always wanted the readers to hav this freedom....coz I dont hav a personal fav of mine in that case....hehe... sooo now update soooooooooooooooooooooooon and yes plzzzzz include me in ur pm list😊

Sure sweetie....my pleasure....

Originally posted by: pinky901

nice part

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

hey Sumi...tumhare Lappy ka kya haal hai...??? us ki tabiyat thik hui ya nahi...Hey Priya.....jab tumne ye comment likha tha tab to tabiyat kharab thi.....aur ab to bilkul hi dead hai....bas ek naya lappy aa gaya hai...😆😉

sab se pahle...aap ko HARDHIK SUBH-KAAMNAYEN...ab aap ka yeh fic apne naye ghar me jo kadam rakh chuka hai...Bahut Bahut Shukriya.....main bas itna kahungi....ki aap sabke begair ye mumkin nahi hota....aaj main jo bhi hu....jahan bhi hu....bas aap logo ki badaulat.....and now I'm horrofied wid this melodramatic line....so wud say a heartfelt THANKS!!😆

ab is ud k bare me baat karte hain...just fantastic yaar...too gud...Thanqqqq😳

sab se pahle Ayaan se suru karte hain...!!! yeh kabhi nahi sudhrega...khud ki tarif hamesha karta rahta hai...!!! aur toh aur ab mahashay ko mehendi se bhi prob hai...Guess....usse apne alawa and kuch 'apno' k alawa.....sabhi se problem hai....😆

chalo pahli baar pata chala ki ayaan ko dance karne se prob hai...ha ha ha...chalo koi chiz toh hai...jis se voh darta hai...par isi bahane us ne kitna achha sa song gaya...!!!Yeah....actually maine realize kiya Ayaan me koi khaami nahi hai....now that wud be too much for him to handle na....isiliye dance se janab ko dur hi rakha....and yeah....the song is one of my most favs...😃

ab nishant k dil me kya tha...yeh toh hum pahle se hi jante the...par voh hamesha asmi ko khush dekh kar khush ho jata hai...sachha dost hai asmi ka...Yup...meri badaulat...lolz!!

phir ayaan aur asmi ka romance scene...baht hi sweet aur cute tha...yaar..Glad u liked it.....😃

mandir ka scene bhi baht cute tha...Thanqqqq

ayaan ne kitne romanticlly asmi ko manaya...aur asmi kya main khud bhi surprised thi us ka surprise dekh kar...It was surprising after all...😆

yeh ayaan bhi na...khud ki kitni tairf karta hai...kuch hamare liye bhi chod deta...ha ha ha...Dont worry...uske liye taarifon ka kabhi over dose nahi hoga....u can continue admiring him as much as u want...😆😳

is baar thoda short comments karr rahi hun...thoda sa BZ hun in dino...

par tum plz BZ mat ho jana...aur humain regularly UD deti rahna...Well....I cant help being bz....we r the next batch for boards....lolz.....waise due to this....I knw wats it like to be busy....so dont worry abt short comments....it was long enough....main to pata nahi kitne puchku comments karke nikal rahi hu....😆....and yeah....at the end....thanks for the BEAUTIFUL comment.😛

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: golu_1677

superb part. pls try n cont soon

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hii sumi...

How r u? aur teri lappy ka kya haal hain?Hey Yogi....I've got a new lappy yaar....purana wala is not showing recovery symptomes....😆

so sorry yaar for commenting so lateOh c'mon....I dont see this as late....not now at least...😆

For the new thread dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏i am so happy for u...your fic is awesome n you r a fabulous writer ...love this fic so muchAnd I love you guys....for taking it to the 2nd thread.....its all bcoz of u...literally....ryt??😉

Now coming to the update hamesha ki tarah its beautiful 👏 👏 👏 👏 lovely 👏 👏 👏 👏

the song u selected for the sangeet cermony is so nice I'm glad u liked the UD....and specially the song...😃..asmi to mehandi ko ghur rahi thi ...jab pass main ayaan hain to ye mehendhi ko kyun ghur rahi thi..paagal ladhkiBilkul sahi....😆

Ayaan singing the song..oh lovely scene...the words of the song n how the way he came closer to her while singing the song..beautifully written n its such a lovely song tooOhh...I am glad I cud describe the situation....coz I was thinking may be I wont be able to do so much clearly...😕

Mauli n nishants scene is also niceThanks...

I loved all the scenes between ayaan n asmi..wo paani pilanewala scene ..its so cute n romantic..n the mandir wala scene..ayaan kitna pyar kartha hain yaar asmi se ..she is soooooo luckyI'm glad u liked both these scenes...😃

Ayaan ka surprise to asmi ...wow ..loved it..ayaan n asmi such s sweet n cute coupleThats true....and am happy u think so...😛

Loved the whole part sumi..plz continue soon Thanks for the amazing comment dear...😛

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Hello...Sumi... Hulollllloooo Sumiiii.... Sumi baat sun na...... Plzzzz.....

Ahemm ahemm....anyone listening to me.....ya mujhe tere paas aakar aasman mein fireworks karne padenge....at 12 in the nite out of sumi's window....Rajita ko fireworks se likhna padega....I AM SORRY!!!!....hehehe....and maybe if sumi is tooooooo angry she would just put a rocket under me and i would be history......😆😆😆😆😆😆😆Yaar....tu kitni badi nautanki hai yaar....kaun kehta hai mera Ayaan dramebaaz hai??? Tu to usse chaaaaar crore kadam aage hai....😆...waise madam sorry kaisa??? Do u see.....on which date I'm replying???😆

Ok Ok...assuming that u are too sweet to be angry😉😉😉😉.....i Rajita go down on my knees with a bouquet of yellow roses with a few white ones signifying peace....hehehehehe😆😆😆😆😆😆.....Ayee.....mujhe bouquet nahi mila....jaldi se bhej....😡😆

Cumin to the wonderful Mehndi loaded update....hehehe....i don't understand how can Asmi stare at the mehndi instead of Ayaan.......never mind i guess there are tooo many people who are already in a queue to stare at him......😳😳....Hmm...baat to sahi kahin hai....but I too donno Asmi Ayaan ko chhorke mehendi me kya dekh rahi thi...😆

yaar....i didnot know yeh Mauli aur Nishant bhi itni intelligent baatein karte hain....hehehehe....ahem ahem....another couple in the making....😉😉😉.For sure....😆....waise so true it was ...we really need to see some destination b4 moving...Yup...thats wat intelligent n sensible ppl do...😆..main bilkul opposite hoon.....bas chalti jati hoon....u knw wid the flow.....jo bhi manzil aati hai usse hi apna maan leti hoon.......but sometimes i feel i was a lil more goal directed....phew....this is wat u do....main teri fic ki saari philosophy apne par hi try karne lag jati hoon....😛😛😛😛😆😆😆Achhi baat hai ye to....mujhe dekh....khud apni hi philosophies se dur bhagti hu....guess intelligent/sensible.....dono me se ek bhi mujhpe apply nahi hota....😆😆😆

Now the most amazingly romantic scene....the kitchen one....yaar, i loved it wen Ayaan said....haan janta hoon yehi dekh rahi ho na ki main kitna handsome hoon....waala dialogue.......the way he tells asmi had her henna is dried and it won't spoil his sherwani....his helplessness....how much he loved her....both willingly and unwillingly....😳😳😳😳Awe....I'm glad u loved that scene....maine wo bahut mushkil se likha tha yaar...u c mujhse romantic scenes likhe nahi jaate....khair mehnat rang to layi...😆

i laughed like a maniac wen asmi said haan tum completely unnoticiable bhi nahi ho....and the one when she says abhi tak to aap jaisa ek hi mila hai.......Are u sure....sirf yehi lines padhke tu 'maniac' bani thi....I thought hum sab aise hi those bahut maniacs hai...😆

He is worried abt his busy working schedules.....i hope i get a husband like him....just wid an added clause....he better mend his ways and give me time....and not just remain worried....😆😆😆😆😆😆...........Tu ruk yaar....main Bhagwan k paas order bhejti hu....wo parcel karke ek spl piece bhejenge tere liye....😆😆

Fireworks made the air romantic...hehehe....sooo this was why he was sooo childhishly irritated on their date.......😆😆😆😆😆.....Yup...itni mehnat ka surprise agar barbaad hoga...to bechara irritate nahi hoga kya???

Waiting for the shaadi.....we are self invited guests....😆😆😆😆.....Arre u guys r the only guests.....tum nahi to aur kaun??😆

love,

rajita......

PS: i am not willing to think that this is soon gonna end........Awe....I wish....but I dont think it wud be gud enough to stretch it more....dont wanna take away the simplicity yaar.....waise main aise hi chhor nahi dungi....will be bak wid a new pakao story....stay tuned till then...😆

And yeah....thanks for the sweet comment Rajita....it was lovely to reply to this...😃

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi Sumi😊

How r u?😃Hey Preet....I'm gud yaar!!!😃

I am sorry again, mein phir late hoon na par me kya karun yaar, mere college walon ne mujke pagal kar ke rakha tha, bahut busy thi. But dekho free hote hi mein tumhe bore karne aa gayi and I know tum bahut achi bachi ho to tum mujhse gussa to nahin hogi'''..Kyn? Sahi kaha na mene'''..😳Bilkul....after all Achhi Bacchi ka tag aise thodi diya....hehe....and yes I understand completely dear....main bhi bahut busy hu these days....so I can completely sympathise n empathise u....😆

Now, coming to updates.

Part 31:-

Ghar me sab wedding preprations me lage hue hain aur hamare ayaan sahab har roz bahane se asmi se milne pohanch jate hain, par kya kare wo apni asmi se pyaar hi itna karte hain ki unhe mile bagair nahin reh sakte. 😃Yes....aakhir apni shaadi me dulhan se nahi milega to kisse milega??😆

I just loved their phone conversation. Its so sweet specially the dialogue when asmisays that ayaan is a unique piece.😉 Ayaan ke pass har question ka jawab hota hai. It seems to be so cute. Sach me ayaan na bahut dramebaaz hai. 😆 😆 😆And I knw....we all love him all the more for that....ryt??

Aur ayaan ki dramebazi ka koi ant nahin hai but what to say, We all just loved it, wo aise dramebazi karta hua kitna cute lagta hoga na'.😳 😳 😳 Undoubtedly...😍Hmm''.coming back to update'..In dono ki baatein to khatam hone ka naam nahin lene wali, mujhe lagta hai in dono ko disturb nahin karna chahiye😉Ye disturb hote hi kab hai jo hum jaake disturb kare....kuch aur cheez ka dhyan to inhe hota nahi hai...😆

Samay was so right yaar, yeh dono bina kisi topic ke ghanto kaise baat kar sakte hain par samay ne mauli ko jaise samjhaya na it was so true😊 👏 👏. He had expressed nervousness of a girl in such a beautiful way. Bechara Samay, itna kaam karne pe bhi usko bekar word sunane ko mila. So sad for him na.😆 😆 😆Hehe....kuch rishto me aise non-equal equations hote hai...😆...sorry maine kya kaha mujhe bhi nahi pata....hope tum samajh gayi...😆

Chalo, Asmi aur ayaan music school bacho se milne chale hi gaye, par yeh bache na bahut naughty hain, aur wo kid 2 to sach me kuch zyada hi naughty hai😉 😆, aur ab to wo asmi ko bhi compete karne ke liye ready hai,Main to isse 'chalu' kehti hu...😆 par piano ki baat par ayaan ko phir se pari ki yaad aa gayi,😭 😭 😭 kyunki wo pari se bahut pyar karta tha aur zindagi ke har pal me pari uske saath hi rahegi chahe jo marjhi ho jaye. And that naughty kid reminds him of her pari also.😭Ab yaadein hoti hi hai yaad karne k liye....bhulane k liye nahi...hai na?? But yeah...wid Asmi by his side....Ayaan is definitely going to be f9...😃

Usne to ayaan ko bhi chup karwa diya, ayaan ke samne wo asmi par line mar raha tha, uff yeh bacha bhi na.😆 😉 😆See.....'chaluuuuu'...😆

Asmi is confused for her new life and ayaan too'as thy r entering a new phase of life, but ayaan tackles her in a beautiful way. 😃 He has the ability to make her smile in every situation. U knows na he is very sweet, cute and caring.😳 Yeah yeah....I knw it all...veryyyyyyyyyy well..😉😉

Par ab yeh ayaan kahan chala gaya yaar? Wo bhi asmi ko bina bataye''..A new mysteryNothing much....will be revealed soon....😉

Are yeh kya function me ayaan jaldi pohanch gaya, yeh kaise ho gaya???😲 😲 😲 Chalo kabhi kabhi shock bhi dena chahiye na'Eggjactly...😆.Between Ayaan's dress is beautiful👏 ⭐️ ⭐️Thanks....blv me...Ayaan k har dress k liye mujhe inke nakhro ka khyal rakhna padhta hai...😆

Nishant ne Ayaan se panga lene ki sochi par koi fyada nahin'.koi bhi ayaan se panga le hi nahin sakta. Wo sabko chup karwa deta hai.😆He is soooo cool na...😆

Asmi neeche aayi aur ayaan unhe dekhte hi reh gaye, kya baat hai,par wo is baat ko manenge nahin😆''..aur na hi apni nautanki se baaz aayenge,😆 is baar bhi asmi ko compliment dene ki jagah kinjal ko compliment de rahe the. Par kya Karen'he is too sweet in this also😳. He was so right ki asmi kabhi use gussa ho hi nahin sakti. 😳Mauli bechari''..yahan bhi ayaan ne usse sidhi tarah se answer nahin diya. 😆Actually ye sab padhke mujhe yaad aa raha hai wo scenes....and guess...U liked them all....thats so sweet yaar....thanks..😃

Usne sahi kaha he is really too sweet.😳Sooooo true....😛

I liked his scene with pratyush and was funny too. U know pratyush is also gud as he admires our ayaan so much vese to wo hai hi admirable par phir bhi its sounds so gud na😉 😆Arre....ye character maine laya hi hai Ayaan ki taarifon k pul bandhne k liye....isliye koi kami nahi hogi...😆

The end was very sweet😃. Asmi was so happy to hear gud thinks about ayaan and yes truly the love is in the air.😳 😳Yup....it surely was...

It was just a superb part dear. I just loved it. It was very sweet. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

Now, I will come to next part Thanks for the lovelyyyyyyyyyyy comment Preet....and am sooooo glad u liked the part so much!!

Luv Preet 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Amazing dear,
They r so much in love and each point of this update showed it really excellently.Hey Vertika....am glad u found the love in each point of this UD.....thats so sweet of u to put it so wonderfully....😛
They both have a different bonding which is beyond love. This is really tough to understand sometime that how much he loves her. He is really unable to express his feelings through words but i know Asmi can very well understand his feelings through his eyes.Guess u understood it all very well....as this bond is surely beyond love....and I cant really express wats this....bcoz there's so much to this....😊
The fire work he used to express his love or the temple scene, after that the kitchen scene all were nice and presented beautifully.Thanks dear....am glad u liked them all... Mehndi ceremony was quite nice and song selection was g8. I love the way Ayaan performed when he didn't want to do that ( i mean dance).hehe....he will never do sumthing he doesnt want to....will he??😆 Asmi knew that but he managed it really well.Yup...
I hope know i am up to date with ur updates and waiting for new part. Yes....li9ke always u caught up dear....and here am the one who is late....however I hope to UD really soon.

Thanks for the lovely comment.😛

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi Sumi 😃Hello...😛

Now comes the reply for next part'''.all the best, bore mat hona.😆Arre tum itne long parts se bore nahi hui...maine kaise houngi???😆

It was superb, very romantic and just fantastic👏 ⭐️. I just loved every scene and each and every dialogue.⭐️Awe....thats my pleasure for sure...😛

Starting is nice with a song,😊 then asmi ayaan scene is so sweet, asmi kabhi ayaan se naraz ho hi nahin sakti.😆 He is to sweet but bechara asmi ki mehndi ko le kar kitna pareshaan ho gaya, asmi ke haath baar bar ayaan ke gallon par ja rahe the aur saath me asmi ka usse cute kehna😆 😆 '''.aur bechara is baat se bhi bahut pareshan hai ki sab usse dance karne ko kahenge to kya hoga, par ayaan jaise marjhi dance kare😆 😆. I know he will look so gud while dancing na, just too sweet and too cute.😳 😳 😳 Guess....maine first portion me Ayaan ko bahuuuut pareshan kiya....but yeah....dance karte hue...bhi....bahut cute n sweet lagta....as always u c!!😉

I just loved the song and the way ayaan dedicated it to her😃. It shows his pure love for her😳.Am glad u liked the song...😛 But he is very smart. He didn't dance just only sings and no one notice that except asmi. He is really too smart naa.😳 😆 😆Yup...and thats the real smartness where nobody actually realizes the smartness...😆

Nishant and Mauli's scene is nice. He is feeling better now and the thing which shocked me that mauli is listening to someone. Isnt it a shock?😲Lolz.....u caught an interesting thing yaar....sahi me...maine ghazab kar diya....by making Mauli listening to sum1 else...😆

Vese muhe to pata hai ki nishant ke liye bhagwan ne kise banaya hai, mene pehle bhi kaha tha na ki mauli aur nishant ki Jodi bhi achi lagegi, aur mujhe lagta hai ki tumne bhi yeh baat yaad rakhi''..😉 😆 😉 😆 😉Yup...maine to yaad rakhi....lekin Nishant tak ye mssg pohuch nahi raha hai...traffic jam me hai shayad....rasta clear hote hi....ye jodi bhi set ho jayegi...no worries...

Their kitchen scene was superb, it was so romantic😳, I was imaging all that. They must have looked so beautiful. 😃The scene was really nice and was well explained too, nothing more and less, as always.👏 ⭐️Awe.....thats so sweet of u to appreciate the scene like this....and am soooo glad to knw that it was done well...😃

This is the thing which I loved in ur ff, that everything is always explained in the best way, and was always upto a mark.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️Arre.....abhi to main aasmaan me hu yaar....tum kitni achhi ho....meri kitni taarif kii....😆....but seriously thanks yaar....am glad u liked it...after all romance is not really my genre...😃

Their phone conversation is really sweet😊. But ayaan ne asmi ko naraz kar hi diya, aura b wo khud soch rahe hain ki wo kabhi kabhi kuch zyada hi bol jate hain, par ab sochne se kya fyada jab naraz kar hi diya. Chalo ab usse manane ka tareka socho.😆 😆 😆 😆Hehe...ab khud naraz kiya hai...to tarike bhi khud hi sochega na....jaisi karni waise bharni....u see...😉

The mandir scene was beautiful⭐️. Ayaan ki shirt par hamesha hi sindoor gir jata hai, but its too sweet na. Asmi ayaan se naraz bhi nahin hai par narazgi bhi jata rahi hai, its really cute😳.Thanks... I loved her scene when she says that ki uske jine ke liye uska aur ayaan ka saath hona zaruri hai par phir bhi wo ayaan se gussa hai. Its an awesome scene yaar.⭐️Thank u Thank u.....I'm grinning from ear to ear....😃

The night scene was the highlight yaar, Its really awesome.👏 Ayaan ke manane ka tarike to bahut hi acha hai yaar, It was superb.⭐️ So, this was his plan that night par barish ne plan kharab kar diya tha. Thank God ki aaj bearish nahin hui. Asmi was overwhelmed by his act. She was really touched.😃 😃 😃Am glad u liked the highlight scene of the fireworks......and haa Ayaan ka manane ka tarika hai....superb hona to banta hai...hai na??😃

The way ayaan made asmi sleep was again superb, uff'..tum bhi sochogi ki mere pass koi aur word nahin tha kya, par kya karun ab scene superb tha to than a, I just loved it yaar.😆 😆 😆hehe....even I'm saying thanks to all this....kya karu...khushi se fule nahi sama rahi hu....😆😆

In whole, The part was awesome, lovely, romantic, superb, fantastic and cute. Just loved it.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️Thanks again sweetheart....😛

Now, m waiting for the marriage, the day when these 2 souls will officially become one(Aisa isliye bola kyunki dil seto wo kab ke ek ho chuke hain)Ahh....so true....😛. So, please continue soon.😃

Luv Preet 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗Thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooo very much for the lovely comment Preet.....Love you for this n everything else....😛😛