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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Sumaiya ๐Ÿ˜ŠHey Naina....๐Ÿ˜ƒ.....firstly welcum to the fic dear....๐Ÿ˜ƒ...and to IF as well....
im new here read ur whole fic its so lovely n beautiful
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i thought words were less to describe ur fic๐Ÿ˜ƒOhh....am glad u liked it soo much....
u have potray all characters beautifully ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ayaan n asmi were so adorable n cute๐Ÿ˜
from starting u have a grip over story perfectly๐Ÿ‘ u really thought so?? Well am more than happy to knw that....coz I used to think....if sum1 reads the fic in one go....she can find many loopholes in it...๐Ÿ˜†
aisa lagta hai jaise yeh tum apne dil se likh rahi ho ๐Ÿ‘Welll....wo to hai....coz mere paas dimag nahi hai na...๐Ÿ˜‰....am a member of DIMAGLESS association...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
i lyk asmi n ayaan baseless arguements n their cute talks
๐Ÿ˜†am glad to knw dat dear...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
u have shown ayaan's dillema n asmi's detemination brilliantly๐Ÿ‘
mouly n nishant also argue on baseless reason๐Ÿ˜†
they love each other so much both willingly n unwillingly โค๏ธYup they do....after all love cant be controlled....can it??
samay n kinjal were wonderfull bhaiya - bhabhi in the world๐Ÿ˜ŠThats true...
ayaan ne asmi k parents ko bhi mana liya apne aur asmi k relationship k liye
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wow unki engagement bhi ho gayi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
wo music school k kids kitne shaitaan hai oh god๐Ÿ˜ฒ
now in last mehndi function is full of fun n romantic
kitchen scene is so romantic โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ณAm glad Naina....u liked all these scenes...and found them well enough....๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ayaan gets worried about his busy schedule
๐Ÿ˜” n asmi again understand him n make him relax๐Ÿ˜Š
in night fireworks made the air romantic thats why ayaan was so irritated on their date๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
waiting for their marriage๐Ÿ˜๐ŸฅณI hope to make that happen soon....๐Ÿ˜›
yeh fic end hone waali hai๐Ÿ’” ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜”i really miss ur writingWell....in that case....if u want....u will be haunted wid my next writing....am not going to leave every1 so soon...๐Ÿ˜†
do cont soon
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plz add me in ur pm list๐Ÿ˜ŠSure dear......and thanks for the sweet comment....its gr8 to hav u here....๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Luv
Naina๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Sumii ๐Ÿ˜Š


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Luv
Naina๐Ÿ˜Š
Hey Naina....thanks for the lovely congo pic....I love the rose in the glass....hehe.....thanks once again....๐Ÿ˜›



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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
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Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

haaiiiii Raaaammmm !!!Helooooooo Mana!!!๐Ÿ˜†

Main toh yaha pe comment karne mein chappar phaadke late hoon yaar !!!
Actually pata hi nahi chala Pm kaha kho gaya...๐Ÿ˜ฒ and then sab PMs padhne ke baad bhi ek unread aa raha tha...tab maine search kiya toh isse paaya !!๐Ÿ˜›Hahaha....phir bhi tum mujhse zyada tez ho yaar....main to kabse bebas lachar baithi thi....ab jaake ayi hu....๐Ÿ˜†
chalo...but Better late, than never !!! haina !!???๐Ÿ˜›Bilkul....and haan....aap fikr mat kijiye....agar ek aur baar comment nahi ata....main khud aapko yaad dila deti....so it will never be "NEVER"....๐Ÿ˜ˆ
First of all CONGGGOOOOO on the SECOND thread !! ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธThanks....and as I hav said to all.....its simply bcoz of u guys...warna ye fic itnaaaaaaaaaaaa dur nahi ata....๐Ÿ˜†
wonderful update yaar!!!
Nice description of the ceremony and then the fight on the phone ๐Ÿ˜› and scene in the temple...Thanks Mana....glad u liked it all...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
But the best was the fire works waala surprise...๐Ÿ˜ƒEven I thought.... may be this scene wud be noticed most...๐Ÿ˜‰
And then Ayaan whispering " I love You " in the phone to make her sleep...chooooo chweeet !! ๐Ÿ˜ƒYup....he is veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy chweeeetttt!!!
tum meri comment ka wait kar rahi thi kya ??๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Abtoh maine bhi comment kardi hai...๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜†
abtoh Update karde yaar...๐Ÿ˜†Well....mujhe to pata bhi nahi chal raha tha kisne comment kiya kisne nahi....but haan achha hua tumne kar di....warna lappy ate hi khabar leni padhti...๐Ÿ˜†...and yeah....I'll try to UD soon dear....thanks for the sweet comment....๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I am sorry guys....maine itnaaa w8 karwaya....but as many of u knw....mera laptop kharab tha....so was unable to do anything....am not at fault this tym....seriously!!

Btw....I hope to UD the next part soon....though mujhe likhke finishing dene me thoda waqt lagega....so am just taking that tym only....however I'll be bak wid the next part.....veryyyyyy soon.

However thanks for being so sweet.......๐Ÿ˜ณ
Luv,
Sumi.๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Part # 33

It's the wedding day!!!

Samay n Kinjal's room'..

Kinjal: Tum abhi tak lete hue ho??? Ye kya hai Samay'..utho!!!!

Samay: Uff'.tum aaj bhi mere saath aisa kar rahi ho??

Kinjal: Kaisa kar rahi hu??

Samay: Yu daantke utha rahi ho'.at least aaj to baksh do'.waise hi mood off hai!!

Kinjal: Mood off hai?? Bhala wo kyun?? Aaj tumhari behen ki shaadi hai'.remember??

Samay: Yeah I remember'.aur mujhe ye bhi yaad hai ki ladkiyan shaadi k baad apna ghar chhorke chali jati hai'..wo bhi chali jayegi na'.Its just'..I'll miss her!!

Kinjal: We'll all miss her Samay'.and I knw tumhe kaisa feel ho raha hoga'..but iska matlab ye bilkul nahi hai ki tum aise bed pe pare raho'..jaldi se utho'..waqt bahut kam hai'.dopahar ko shaadi hai!!

Samay: (getting up) Yaad hai mujhe'.baar baar batane ki zarurat nahi hai'..(and he leaves being a lil irritated'.to which Kinjal just manages to smile'..Samay had just retained his typical brotherly form)

Now Kinjal enters Asmi's room'.but to her utter shock she was asleep.

Kinjal: (to herself) Mujhe to lagta tha shaadi ke pehle dulhano ko nervousness k chakkar me neend hi nahi ati''aur to aur maine khud bhi experience kiya'.but ye itne araam se kaise so rahi hai??

[Waise aapko yaad to hona nahi chahiye'..isiliye bata deti hu'.Asmi had slept only when Ayaan had whispered sum lovely words to her thru the phn'..so she was bound to be asleep'..so peacefully]

Now Kinjal wakes Asmi up.

Asmi: Kya hua Bhabhi?? Main kitna achha sapna dekh rahi thi!!

Kinjal: Really?? Tab to tum phirse so jao'.actually mujhe laga tha tumhara sabse achha sapna aaj haqeeqat banne jaa raha hai'.but guess u hav more imp dreams to cherish'.no problem tum so jao'..shaadi ka kya hai'.hoti rehti hai!!

Asmi: (her eyes hav already gone wide) Ohh'..how stupid of me!!! Actually'.main bas'.

Kinjal: I knw aap kya'.or rather kiska sapna dekh rahi thi'..lekin come on now Asmi'.jaldi utho'.tum dono bhai behen bhi na'.c'mon Asmi be fast'..

Asmi: Yeah yeah'.uth gayi'.

On the other hand we hav Ayaan''speaking to himself'..

"Kya yaar'.they say I'm the groom'.aur mere bare me kisiko fikr hi nahi hai'..wo shaitan bandariya [Mauli] pata nahi kab ayegi'..aur to aur Asmi ne abhi tak call nahi kiya'.dulhe ki to koi aukad hi nahi hai'..huh!! Aur waha sab MERI dulhan ke aage picche mandra rahe honge'.I simply dislike this concept of marriage'.jahan mujhse pehle puri ki puri duniya meri dulhan ko dekh sakti hai''but meri baari me No No'..huh!! Ek ek ko dekh lunga'.."

And so while getting himself ready, he keeps mumbling to himself'.after all there was none but him.

At Shergill Mansion'..Anumesh Shergill (AS-Asmi's Dad)''enters the house'.with two-three men'..He was actually here to attend the wedding on a very special request'.which was granted mostly bcoz he had co-operated wid the IB'.and also becoz Ayaan had taken full responsibility of him. Everyone was just amused to hav him there'..but frankly they were not surprised''by this tym they all had known Ayaan this much'.to knw that he wud not let this wedding go on without Asmi's father'.by her side.

However AS now meets his daughter'.who was shuffling wid her outfits in the room'..

AS: Tayyari bahut achhi hui hai tumhari shaadi ki'.

Asmi: Papa!! (Asmi looks up in amusement and then she rushes to hug him) I knew aap zarur aaoge'..I was missing u Papa!!

AS: Teri iss khushi k mauke par main kaise nahi ata?? Ya yu kahu ki koi [Ayaan] tere iss khwab ko adhura chhor hi nahi sakta tha'.hai na?? (now he cups her face and has a longing look at his daughter who is going to leave him soon) Maine sab kuch gawa diya na?? Kitne pal mujhe guzarna chahiye tha'.apne parivaar k saath'.lekin maine sab gawa diya'.khaas kar tujhe'.kyunki tu to hum sab se bahut dur chali jayegi na??

Asmi: Nahi Papa'.aapne kuch nahi gawaya'.aur rahi baat mere dur rehne ki'.to Papa'.insaan kabhi kabhi saath rehke bhi kareeb nahi hote'..aur kabhi kabhi dur ho ke bhi paas hote hai'..I'm sure the latter one will apply in our case'.right? (she ends wid a smile)

AS: Yeah right'.waise tu jaldi se tayyar ho ja beta'.tujhe iss jode me dekhne ka armaan pata nahi kabse hai iss dil me'.(and he gives an affectionate smile) I'll go n meet others now'..(she nods n he leaves)

Now Asmi turns around to her photo wid Ayaan'.which was kept on the bedside table'.she talks to the photo of Ayaan: "Mujhe pata tha tum kuch na kuch karke Dad ko shaadi attend karwa hi doge'..guess I just cant love u enough for anything n everything u do!!"

After two hours'..Asmi is all ready'..and alone in her room'.actually she has locked it from inside'.and now she calls up Ayaan'.

Ayaan: Abhi fursaat mili tumhe phn karne ki?? Ab jaldi se apni pic bhejo'.I'm w8ing!!

Asmi: Stupid!! Hi'.Hello'.kuch nahi'.bas shuru ho gaye'(and she cuts the phn)

Then she clicks her own photos n sends them to Ayaan'..after seeing her photos a grin cums to his face'.after all he was the first one to see his bride n not just anyone else'..however Asmi was pouting in the pic'..as she was irritated'.and he wud not deny the fact that the pout made her all the more adorable!! He simply Loved her!!

However it was tym to call her bak'.

Ayaan: Hello sweetheart'..tum kaafi achhi lag rahi ho!! (she raises an eye-brow to the word 'kaafi') I mean'.quite matchable to me!!!

Asmi: Really?? Lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai?? Main nacheez tumse match kaise kar sakti hu?? (she was still angry but he giggled at her words) Hasso mat!!! Mujhe manao'.

Ayaan: Itni jaldi kya hai?? Aaj raat ko mujhe kaafi waqt milega aapko manane ka'.hai na?

Asmi goes red to hear this'..but however she composes herself, makes a face at him n hangs up'..and here Ayaan just laughs at her childlike side!! He knew her fake anger and he knew even better how to melt it!!

Now Ayaan arrives at the Shergill Mansion'.and like any other bride Asmi goes to the balcony to hav a look at him'.in all their arguments she had forgotten to tell him to send his pics as well'..however she had already cursed herself for that'.and now she was just enjoying the 'view' from above!! It was just a matter of seconds when Ayaan also looked up'.but Asmi had hid herself swiftly'.she didn't want him to catch her adoring him'she was angry after all!!

After a while'.Ayaan was seen w8ing at the 'mandap''..he was wearing this:

And now the 'pandit' calls for the bride''much to Ayaan's relief'..so Kinjal n Mauli rush up to bring Asmi down'.

Mauli: Chaliye madam'..aapka dulha aapke liye intezaar k pal gin rahe hai!!!

Asmi: Ohh'.waqt ho gaya?? (and they nod'.while she takes a last look at herself thru the mirror)

Kinjal: Arre tum bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho'.dont worry!!!

Asmi: Lekin wo bhi to handsum lag raha hai na?? I hav to match up!!

Mauli: (giggles) Ye baatein tumhare dimag me Ayaan ne ghusai hai na?? Gosh'.Asmi tum bhi na'..uski har baat ko itna seriously leti ho'.and u comply wid anything n everything he says'.

Mauli just shakes her head while Asmi blushes all the more deeply''how cud she ever deny the fact that his slightest words mattered for her'..however she leaves for the 'mandap''..and here Ayaan is keenly looking at the stairs'.this tym not just patient enough to hide his anxiety'.he didn't care wat others were saying after looking at his impatience'..nor did he care abt the giggles that were cuming from nearby''he just cared abt HER!! Well he had seen her pic'.thinking that it wud prove helpful for him to reduce the restlessness but now he thinks'..it proved all the more harmful as it has increased his restlessness all the more'.she was already looking heavenly in the pic'.he wondered how beautiful it wud be to see her in front!!

And then the most awaited moment came when the priest called for the bride''Ayaan silently thanked his stars as some sense was knocked into the priest's head n he (the priest) had finally called HIS bride down to soothe his restless heart!!

And when he was thinking all this'..he suddenly saw HER!! She was getting down the stairs wearing this:

Ayaan was simply awestruck''he knew she was very beautiful, he knew she was looking all the more gorgeous today as he had already seen her pic'..and he also knew the pic was conveying almost nothing of her elegance'..but then too he was dumbfounded'..wasnt he going crazy in her love??

Here Asmi was climbing down the stairs looking at him only'..she was surprised and at the same blused to see the look in his eyes'.she cud see the glint in his eyes'..she cud feel the serenity in his smile'..and she cud also feel her heartbeat going faster n faster each moment'..but wid every beat she was all the more assured how much she wanted this'..how much she wanted HIM!!

Mauli:

Nishant:

Now after exchanging the 'varmaalas' Ayaan n Asmi r seated while the 'mantras' were being chanted by the priest. But Ayaan was looking at Asmi in intervals''which affected his concentration a lil bit''Seeing this Asmi gave him a stare'.but he acted ignorant and mouthed 'what?' As if he had done nothing at all!! Asmi just shook her head in a manner that said "Hamesha drama karta hai!!"

Now it was tym for the 'kanyadan' and Asmi's parents were there to give away their daughter!! Asmi's heart twitched a bit at the thought of being 'away''..and as her hand was placed on Ayaan's a teardrop was formed in her eyes'.but as soon as the sinking feeling was abt to capture her Ayaan had held her hands wid such assurance that a smile was bound to creep up on her face!!

And then Mauli did the honours of tying the knot'..and then both stood up for the 'pheras'''its beyond saying that both were adamant to fulfil the vows at any cost'..after all they cudnt afford to lose the other!!!

Next it was time to put the 'sindoor' on her forehead and then to tie the 'mangalsutra'. As he went closer to tie the 'mangalsutra' he slightly whispered to her "You Are A dream Sweetheart'.Which I'll Never Let Break"'.and then he winked at her cutely while descending away!! Asmi looked at him in awe as she saw him taking the 'sindoor' on his fingertip'..all her so-called anger had just vanished away like it never existed'..donno how but he always managed to do that!!!

And now as he fills her 'mang' wid the vermillon'..she softly closes her eyes to let the feeling sink in'..that finally they belong to each other!!

As the marriage is over'..Asmi was taken bak to her room'.mostly bcoz she had to shed away sum of the make up and jewellery'.after all she was to board the flight'..But as Asmi was all ready wid her bag n baggage'.she felt the sinking feeling again'.it was not really that pleasant to leave her home''she remembered the several times when she had wanted to leave everything n go away'..when she had wanted to live all alone'.far from the day to day depressions or sadness'..but now as she is abt to go away from all these'.she suddenly feels upset'.may be she had cried many a times for not always getting wat she wanted'.for being neglected a bit'.but now even all those things seem ok'..

Asmi knws that its her Ayaan w8ing to take her away'..she had literally dreamt of this day several times'..countless times she had wanted this day to cum when she cud be wid her Ayaan'..and she is truly happy to be "Mrs. Ayaan Rathod"'..yet a sense of sadness remains as ppl always want everything to be perfect'..as ppl always want every1 to be there wid him/her''but that actually never happens.

As Asmi was sitting alone'..thinking all these'.others were making preparations for the farewell'.but Samay'.was w8ing outside the room for his presence to be felt!! However he saw Asmi to be in deep thoughts'.so he was abt to move away'.when Asmi called him.

Asmi: Bhaiya!! (and he turned towards her) Aap chale kyun jaa rahe the?? Mujhse milne aye the na?? (he sumhow managed a positive nod) To bina mile kyun jaa rahe the??

And now Samay quickly cums and hugs his dear sister'.

Samay: U knw Asmi'..mujhe nahi pata tha'.tera saath dunga to ek din tu aise chali jayegi'..warna shayad tera saath kabhi nahi deta'.(and he quickly wipes his tears that had begun to flow)

Asmi: I'll miss u Bhaiya'.shayad sabse zyada aapko hi miss karungi'.

Samay: I knw'.main hu hi itna achha'.hai na? (he manages a smile) Par tu mujhse promise kar'..pehle ki tarah hi mujhe phn karegi'.and u will always be happy'ok?

Kinjal: (just cums in a hurry)'.Hey Asmi'jaldi'.(and she sees Samay so stops there only)'

Asmi: Bhabhi'

Kinjal: Wo bas'.main itna kehne ayi thi ki'.its time to leave'.

And she looks at Samay after saying this line'.but he looks away to hide the tears that had again formed in his eyes'.however he turns bak to Asmi'.places his hand on Asmi's forehead n gestures her to go'.Asmi starts to leave'.but then turns bak again'

Asmi: I promise Bhaiya'.and I love u for everything u hav done for me'..mere liye bahut faydemand raha'..(she says wid a smile which Samay reciprocates gradually)

Samay: But mere liye thoda mehenga padha'.

Asmi: Meri khushiyan itni bhi sasti nahi hogi na??

Samay: Chal'.HE is w8ing'.(and he leaves wid a wink'.while Asmi n Kinjal follow behind)

Now its time for the farewell ceremony'..every1 was sad as well as happy'..it was a mixed feeling'.and none knew which one to give priority to. However Ayaan was keenly observing Asmi'..from the time she had come down. Her eyes were a bit red'..and he knew she had cried or rather forcibly wiped the tears'.which has made her eyes even more swollen. He watched her hugging the family members'..while refraining herself from breaking down''He very well knew this habit of hers that'..she did not like to cry'.in front of just anyone'.Very specific ppl got to console his Asmi.

And now they sit in the car'..and he sees Asmi trying to smile at her dear ones'and that made the unshed tears shine even more.

Samay n Kinjal were accompanying them to the airport'.but the journey to the airport was much quieter than usual'..however Asmi seemed quite lost'.even when she boarded the plane. So after a while'.Ayaan decided to soothe her a bit.

Ayaan: Are u ok??

He asked with sincere concern and Asmi's lips were curved into a small smile'.but she didn't really answer him except nodding in a yes'..and then she slowly put her head on his shoulders'..and tried to get a nap. But she cud only relax herself wid closed eyes'.and then after a while they reached the destination.

Asmi: Hum pohuch gaye?? Itni jaldi??

Ayaan: Asmi sweetheart'hamesha itna hi waqt lagta hai'

At this she just made a face'.and began following him to the car. And next'. in the evening'..she found herself in front of a quite big house'..and she was never more confused.

Asmi: Ye kaunsi jagah hai?? Aur hum yaha kyun aye hai??

Ayaan: (smiles at her question) Ye mera'.I mean ab se hamara ghar hai!!

Asmi: Lekin pehle to ye tumhara ghar nahi tha'.

Ayaan: Asmi'ye hamesha se mera hi ghar tha'.

Asmi: Jhooth mat bolo'.jab main yaha thi'.tab main kabhi bhi iss ghar me nahi ayi'.

Ayaan: Tum yaha kab thi??

Asmi: Arre'do mahine pehle hi to'.

Ayaan: Asmi tum do mahine pehle Mumbai me thi'.and ye mera Delhi wala ghar hai'.

Asmi: To phir tumhara Delhi wala ghar yaha kya kar raha hai?? Isse to Delhi me hona chahiye na??

Ayaan: Asmi'.ye Delhi me hi hai'.coz hum Delhi me hai!! (he was totally amused at the questions she was asking coz they were not making much sense to him)

Asmi: Hum Delhi kab aye??

Ayaan: (hitting his forehead slightly) Asmi'.didnt u actually realize ki humne Delhi k liye plane board kiya tha?? (she shook her head in a no) Tum itna kahan kho gayi thi yaar?? Wo to achha hua main tumhare saath tha'.warna pata nahi tum kahan chali jati'.(and he gives out a lugh while she pouts)

Asmi: (makes a puppy face) Tum saath the isiliye to kucch nahi socha'.aur pichhe pichhe chali ayi'..aur tum hi mera mazak bana rahe ho'.(she gets out of the car and walks towards the entrance while Ayaan catches her steps)

As soon as they reach the entrance'.Mauli opens the door with a big grin on her face'.but seeing her Ayaan was taken a back'..and Asmi was literally shocked.

Ayaan: Iss tarah se door kholne ka kya matlab hua?? Main bhi darr gaya!!

Mauli: Main bhi kya karti?? Kab se dekh rahi hu'.dono car me hi baithe ho'.nikalne ka naam tak nahi le rahe the'.huh!! (now she turns to Asmi'.but finds her shocked) Arre tumhe kya hua??

Asmi: Tum yaha kaise??

Mauli: Apke pati ki wajah se'.isne mujhe previous flight se yaha bhej diya'.taaki main aapki swagat ki tayyari kar saku'.mujhe puri shaadi tak dekhne nahi diya'.but I'm hurt ki tumne notice hi nahi kiya k main anth me missing thi!!

Ayaan: Excuse me'..jis kaam se ayi ho wo kaam karo'.aur jaldi se niklo'.c'mon!!

Mauli makes a face at him but does all the necessary things for the 'grihapravesh''.and takes Asmi to Ayaan's room. As she quickly cums bak she finds Ayaan making his way towards the room'..

Ayaan: Oh thank u very much Mauli'..ab tum jaa sakti ho'.waise bhi tere Mumbai lautne ka waqt ho raha hai'.

Mauli: I knw dat very well'.lekin shayad tum nahi jante mera aur tumhara ek aur kaam baki hai'.tumhe mujhe 'nek' dena hai aur wo mujhe lena hai'.thats it. Ab ye chhota sa kaam jaldi se kar do'.so that I can leave both of u alone.

Ayaan: Tujhe kya lagta hai'..jeb me rupay lekar ghum raha hu main?? Pls ye sab baad me'..abhi mere paas kuch nahi hai'.sacchi!!

Mauli: Don't worry'.main tayyari k saath ayi hu'..ye apka cheque book hai'.10,000 ki amount sign kar do'.

Ayaan takes the cheque book from her wid a fake irritation'..and then signs an amount of 5,000'.

Mauli: Maine 10,000 kaha tha'.

Ayaan: Tere akele liye ye hi bahut zyada hai'.

Mauli: But'.

Ayaan: Arre'plz yaar'.tu jaa na'.(he was a lil desparate coz he wanted to console Asmi)

Mauli: (laughs at his words n desparation) Okay baba'..I'm leaving'.and you don't worry darwaza sahi se lock karke jaungi'..(she winks and leaves)

Here as Asmi is abt to enter Ayaan's room....she notices the adjacent room's door was slightly open....she just peeps in....and sees a big photo of Ayaan's family....then she also notices their wedding card kept by the side......now she knws why Ayaan had wanted an extra card....with a sad smile on her face she just looks bak at Ayaan who was having a conversation wid Mauli....and then she goes inside Ayaan's room.

Ayaan now cautiously enters the room'.and finds Asmi sitting on the bed. He notices that she had not even switched on the AC'..so he does that himself.

Ayaan: Ahem ahem'..(Asmi looks up at him and a small smile cums up to her lips) Garmi nahi lag rahi thi kya?? (she shook her head in a no) Tum kabse mujhse jhooth bolne lagi?? Aur kabse mujhse apni emotions chhupane lagi?? (and while saying all this he slowly cums and sits on the ground near her)

Asmi looks up at him with tear-filled eyes'..and this tym she didn't want to stop the tears from flowing'.after all HE was here'.so she just hugged him tightly abd began to cry her heart out'.while he just soothed her patiently. And then she began to talk still crying and hugging him.

Asmi: Ye sab tumhari wajah se hua hai!!

Ayaan: Meri wajah se?? Maine kya kiya??

Asmi: Tumhi ne mujhse shaadi kii na'.isiliye mujhe sabko chhor kar tumhare saath ana padha'.

Ayaan just smiled at her innocent allegations'.

Ayaan: Well'.I never wanted this'

Asmi: (withdrawing herself from the hug'.and kinda sitting on his lap) U never wanted to marry me?? How dare u say that??

Ayaan: Arre'.maine aisa kab kaha?? Main to bas keh raha hu'.main tumhe tumhare apno se alag nahi karna chahta tha'..but dil k haathon majboor tha'.aur dekha jaye iske liye to tum zimmedar ho'.u didn't hav to be so nice that I fall for you so helplessly'.(and he began to caress her cheeks to wipe away the shed tears)

Asmi: Oh'.to ab ghalti meri ho gayi??

Ayaan: Asmi'.dont u think at least aaj hamein ladna nahi chahiye!!

Asmi: In that case ye sab tumhe socha chahiye tha'..after all aaj subah sabse pehle tumne mujhe naraz kiya'..and then tumhare breathtaking surprises'..hamesha mujhe bina bataye sab kuch karte ho.....aur tumhe kya laga mujhe pata nahi chalega....tum iss beech yaha bhi aye the....apne ghar me hai na?

Ayaan: Wo....I had to arrange everything....tumhe apne asli ghar pe laana chahta tha to bas....
Asmi: Ab safai dene ki zarurat nahi hai''mujhe pata hai hamesha kuch na kuch chalta hi rehta hai tumhare dimag me'..

Ayaan: (getting even closer and almost kissing her eyelids) Ab dil to apne paas raha nahi'..isliye dimag ko hi kaam karna padhta hai'.(and she slowly begins to smile) Waise'..sweetheart'..kya abhi aap zara uthne ka kasht karengi'..guess u hav becum a lil heavier'

As soon as he says this Asmi's eyes get widen whereas Ayaan tries to supress his laughter!! And then Asmi gets up wid a jerk and turns away''

Ayaan: Arre'.biwi....phir se naraz ho gayi??

Asmi: U knw wat Ayaan?? U r hopeless!!! Apni nayi naveli dulhan se kaise aur kya baat karni chahiye'.tumhe to kuch bhi pata nahi hai'.huh!! (and she goes to open the window)

Ayaan: Arre kya kar rahi ho??

Asmi: Mujhe garmi lag rahi hai'.khidki khol rahi hu'.

Ayaan: Maine AC on kiya hai na?? To phir tumhe garmi kaise lag sakti hai??

Asmi: In that case'.AC off kar do'..mujhe natural air zyada raas ati hai'.

Ayaan: Pls yaar'.khidki mat kholo'.

Asmi: Kya problem hai??

Ayaan: Aaj full MOON hai'.(he blurts out to which Asmi just stares at him) Ab aise kya dekh rahi ho?? Ghalti tumhari hai....maine kaha tha amavasya me shaadi karnege....

Asmi: U r impossible'.

And still she goes to open the window'.after all she was a lil angry'..but Ayaan cums from behind and prevents her from doing so'.he holds her wrists, turns her towards himself and traps her within her arms.

Ayaan: I said No'.sweetheart'.I do not want anything between us'..

And he gives her a loving look'.but she acts cross wid him and tries to go away. However this tym he pulls her even closer to him'..so hard that he himself had to take the support of the wall behind while Asmi directly crashes into him.

Being so close to each other had raised the heat between them as they cud feel each other's warm breath. Ayaan slowly moved his hands to open her hair so that they cud caress her shoulders'.and then he touched her neck with the bak of his hands'..while he moved his face closer to cheeks. And then he whispers, "I'm sorry'.actually main subah se bahut tensed n nervous hu'.aur tumse argue karne k alawa meri tension kam karne ka koi aur tarika nahi hai'.I knw I'm behaving stupid'.par kya karu'meri pehli shaadi hai'.and I am dam nervous!!"

Here Asmi's heart was beating faster than ever'.but as soon as he says this'.she lets out a sweet smile'and was abt to turn away'.when his hold gets tighter around her neck. This makes her look up at him'.and so his lips slightly kiss her chin while saying "I didn't say u cud leave jaan."

A slight chill runs down her spine'.He moves down to her neck n cleavage'..while her hands circle around his neck'..He then gets rid of the necklace that was acting as an obstacle for him'.and now, he turns her back towards him'.slowly moves the hair away and places soft tender kisses in a row'..which ingites the desire in her even more. He takes off the ear rings and kisses her slightly'..while she shivers with a pleasant sensation. He then takes her hands and takes the bangles off while kissing her palms'.he also notices the dark henna on them'..and his name written visibly in btwn'.

Ayaan: U knw wat'.mujhe ye mehendi wali fragrance bilkul achhi nahi lagti'.(and she makes a face but'..) lekin haan'.jab baat tumhari ho'.tab sab kuch achha lagta hai'.U can make everything beautiful!!

And she hugs him tightly'.and he reciprocates wid same intensity'.

Asmi: Never be away from me Ayaan'.I love you more than anything!! Pata nahi kyun'.jab baat tumhari ho'.tab tumhare alawa kuch aur achha nahi lagta'.

As he feels her voice breaking in btwn'..he withdraws and cups her face giving her the assurance to be wid her forever'.he then kisses her forehead passionately'.and descends down to her face and throat'.as his hands around her waist start pulling her closer'..the sweet intimacy suddenly grows desirable'.his hands start to wander aimlessly along wid her body'..while she enjoys his touch. He spends sum tym caressing her wid utmost passion'.and then gradually he begins to ascend upwards'.placing patient juicy kisses on her throat, cheeks, eyes and nearby'..he then slowly makes his way towards her lips'.while her hands clutch him fiercely.

Ayaan lays sum soft kisses around the chin and then patiently captures her luscious lips'..at first he was gentle'.and she was simply giving herself away'.but after a while'with each passing second she began to respond in the same vigour'clutching him and running her hands thru his hair. After a while he broke the kiss'.and his lips started tracing down her throat wid sum passionate kisses. She was slowly melting in his arms and as always didn't think of anything but to go wid his flow.

And then Ayaan picked her up in his arms'.and placed her gently on the bed'.But as he moved closser'.

Asmi: Ab tumhe main heavy nahi lagi kya?? (he looks confused) Abhi abhi jab tumne mujhe uthaya tab meri weight zyada nahi lagi??

She keeps looking at him wid an attitude as if w8ing for the ans'..while Ayaan just rolls his eyes'

Ayaan: This discussion will continue later'.abhi mujhe kuch aur continue karna hai'so stop being a nagging wife'.because I love You anyways''

And he begins to shower her wid kisses when she again tries to say sumthing but her mouth was sealed wid a deep kiss'.And the night grows darker while two souls continue to relish their unity.....

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Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Hello everyone....see....am alive...๐Ÿ˜†...finally teen mahino k baad mujhe ek naya laptop mila....and so am bak again......

Am really very sorry for all the inconvenience....but as u all might knw...I simply cudnt do anything abt that!!
Waise...shayad ye ek bahut awaited part tha.....and pata nahi kyun mujhe lagta hai maine band baja diya...๐Ÿ˜†.....but kya karu....main romantic scenes soch to sakti hu....but likhne me thodi dikkat hoti hai....anyways....fic shayad ek aur UD me khatam ho jayega.....so pls apni achhi bacchi k mistakes ko kindly consider karna....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Waise guys....I MISSED U ALL.....A LOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTT!!!! Really happy to be bak here.
P.S. I knw maine bahut se fics k UDs nahi padhe hai....the 130 PMs in my inbox remind me of that everyday....๐Ÿ˜†....but my pre-test will start from 9th Aug....so despite having the laptop....I'm not able to cum OL very often....I wud like u to consider that as well...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....but am trying my best guys....๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks for the patience....and guess I hav got sum new readers at the end.....very pleased to see u all.....bye....and take care.
Luv,
Sumi.๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Hi Sumi

sorry late ho gayi
update was awesome,fantastic, mind-blowing dear
Asmi is able to attend her marriage n all coz of Ayaan
Samay will really miss Asmi
Ayaan missing his family very much
loved Asmi n Ayaan tele convo...... he knows how to turn romantic moment in funny
u described ceremony beautifully
Mouli n Ayaan convo was asusual cute n sweet
and last scene of Asmi n Ayaan is so sweet n romantic

Luv
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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#68
welcome back
update was as usual awesome
superb
great
fabulous
update next part asap

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Finally you updated ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
awesome part๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Asmi's dad was there because of Ayaan, Ayaan is so sweet๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
shaadi ho gayee ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ
Every scene was unique๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Ayaan-Asmi scene in the end was so romantic!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
loved the update.
please post the next part soon..............
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hey sweetheart kaisi ho????????????????? finally u are here...............and for 3 months u were without the lappy......how did u survive?????????????anyways awesome part dear......................mind blowing.................the most awaited part and sigh it went too well.................simply beautiful......................they are married and now one.................loved the teasings and leg pullings..................cant get enough of ayaan and asmi...................and u gonna fininsh the story????????????? damn will miss it like hell....................cont soon dear and all the best for ur exams.....................

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