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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#151

awesome update

loved it

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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maanu

@maanu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

heyya.....

fantastic update..

after so much turmoil a light hearted part...

niki very true to her name.. bubbly is the right word...

liked the interaction between niki and abhi as well as niki and armaan...

the last line has so many meanings..

firstly his house looks like home and secondly when family is near a house becomes home..

but i m sumhow missing armaans and ridzis close interaction apart from knowing their past..

i know both have a very strong past whichs has made theem today the way they r..

but i guess their closeness has not been explored...

u told me earlier hat u r interests in phycology and so the knowledge...

i really feel if u havnt yet selected ur field.. give it a shot...

i really dont know anyhing abt u... so just speaking my heart..

thanks for pm

bye

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sisgeo

@sisgeo

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

as usual loved the update......happy for arman..now he have a life....his ridhiam and a family...nice continue soon..........is arman's problems solved yet?

Edited by sisgeo - 15 years ago

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

that is suchhhhh a great part............

loved the niki and gang decoring his house.......

do update soon!

sheena

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

this is one ff which is going fast

and i love it

great part

its good to see the bonding b/w the frds

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Riddhi

@Riddss

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

heyyy dear,
awesome part
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss

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munnibai

@munnibai

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

Nikki's gesture was so sweet; the possesiveness about her friends showed how much she loves them. The line "It screams' Armaan lives here" cracked me up for some reason...I know its stange, but still...!

On the whole the part was very ligh-hearted and a contrast to the other parts. It reflected the closeness amongst the 8 people and how fond they have grown of each other.
Frankly speaking your the first writer I'v come across who updates this often. So, thank you! 😊

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#158

ok, time for confessions, i have been a silent reader of this ff. Read parts 1-7 in one go and since then have been virtually addicted to this story. And I can't not comment today because in the last part, I felt something missing, I really wanted RIddhima to hug Armaan after he revealed his past but alas not to be! And to my surprise, i was super elated when i read the last line in part 9, yes he was finally home 😍 I want to say much much more but I am terrible at reserving so...I'll come back and edit this post later on..*touchwood** Ling, please continue soon. Your name is very intriguing, what does it mean?

Aria

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This is my second attempt since IF gobbled up my previous edit.

Having got to part 10 now, looking back Riddhima in part 1 felt like a different person to me. Quoting from your fic, "The feeling of being victim of an act in which she had no control in had evaded her senses and her resolute to be the Joan of Arc of all the women who were being cheated on by lying and already married boyfriends had dissolved when she had burst into million tears after retelling the whole story to her sister" and the Riddhima that Armaan helps later on felt like two people. Granted this could happen to anyone but still something about it...may be that's just me.

There are a lot of things in this story that you talk about which hold true in real life, and I applaud you for bringing out all those realities beautifully in this ff. Most notably how a childhood influences what you are today and how the stronger one is perceived stong, applauded and is left to that without a second thought. Most often it can be an overbearing burden that person can't get rid of and weighs him down in ways other people may not be able to see. Like a child that has to grow up well before his time while others his age are still fighting over ice-cream flavors you mentioned somewhere. It's not really fair to them but life is seldom fair...

Normally I prefer to read light hearted sugarcoated romantic ffs where realism often takes a back seat because too much realism tends to leave me depressed for days so I avoid it like a plague...but I've virtually been addicted to your ff -The Apollonian and Dionysian and have found myself regularly checking for updates, and therefore really appreciate the frequency of your updates. A friend of mine once told me, that there is an Apollonian and Dionysian in each of us...may be there is an element of truth in it. anyways as the story has progressed it's becoming more and more clear why you chose that as the title.

My favorite bit from part 10 - "Yes, they were in a relationship for about two years now and neither was in their teens to blush and stammer at words like these, yet she managed to make him speechless with her idiosyncrasies periodically." Thanks for providing a good laugh🤣, but there is a strange solace in that blush and stammer ahh...may be I am just being me😆 I hope I didnt give you a silly impression of me, but I loved your lil' jab there.

Keep writing and welcome to the ff forum.

Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago