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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku28

After all the heavy duty emotional turmoil parts...a very welcomed light part...

Continue soon!

Love,
Khyati

Hello Khyati,
Thank you very much for the comment. Yes, update will be tonight.
Thanks,
L.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey L

light part after some depressing shocks..good change
Its good that they have managed to turn Armaan's dump! :)
Its so nice how Nikki took charge of the situation, taking such a nice initiative. Im sure armaan will find the photos useful
loved the part
Sur

Hello Sur,
Thank you very much for the comment. I have just eased out wrinkles in this chapter which is Armaan finally being accustomed to depend and live with friends.
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L.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: imshveta

Nice, sweet part. A much needed lightness thrown in by Nikki and the gang. Overall, I would say that I enjoyed reading it a lot. So much that I read it twice .

Thanks for the PM
Shveta

Hello Shveta,
Thank you very much for the comment. You read it twice? I am very happy to hear that.
You are welcome for the PM.
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L.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kashfull

hi i've been reading ur ff from starting. I've just joined the forum. And ur ff has a really different concept and u write very well. very intersting to read. Loved the bond between all the friends.

Do write some romantic scenes between armaan and riddhima.

Hello,
Thank you very much for the comment. And thank you for appreciating my writing.
The story is not intended to be a romantic one. But I will see what I can do about it.
Thanks,
L.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: khahani

Hey L
I am amazed with this FF, it is simply brilliant and the regular update is the icing on the cake! Thank you for creating this fiction.
Finally Armaan will be at home, ahh what relief it is! It is very rare to have friends like those Armaan has found.
The last sentence of chapter 8 where Riddhima say's to Armaan 'let's go home' and the last line of chapter 9 where Armaan says to Riddhima 'I am finally home Riddhim', was music to my ears. But why am I apprehensive about the future, everything seems almost perfect at this point of time but will it always be like this? This is a question for myself rather than you!
Now that the foundation and the backdrop of the story have been set, are you planning to disclose the closeness of Armaan Riddhima relationship? Their interaction without the friends is something I would like to see.

Thank you for the PM :)

Nahida

Hello Nahida,
Thank you very much for your comment. I write daily for two hours which allows me to update on a regular basis.
I am glad that you found a connection between ending of chapter 8 and 9. It shows the changes in Armaan which happens in few months. Earlier he saw Riddhima's house as home but finally he finds one on his own. That transition is extremely important for the story to move forward.
If you have noticed, the crux of the story has been set to motion and now things will start falling into place. There are couple of things unanswered which will be answered in coming chapters.
Armaan and Riddhima's closeness is not something I want to write about in depth. Mainly because the intetion of the story is not that. But there will be something between them soon not because of relationship but because of the situation they both face which questions the degree of trust a human can have in another.
Thanks,
L.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow, just caught up with the update.. i love how he's finally found family and the whole gang is helping him... n another thing i love about ur ff is that all the characters have a story n help each other in one way or another..continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desire_20

wow, just caught up with the update.. i love how he's finally found family and the whole gang is helping him... n another thing i love about ur ff is that all the characters have a story n help each other in one way or another..continue soon

Hello,
Thank you very much for the comment.
Yes, the whole ordeal was about finding one another and lend a helping hand whenever the other required.
Thanks,
L.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yepeee......Oh la la.....happy part ....thanx a lot lol........! Trust me i enjoyed the part.....wonderful FF....hope to read more happy parts in future......!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NiksAngel

Yepeee......Oh la la.....happy part ....thanx a lot lol........! Trust me i enjoyed the part.....wonderful FF....hope to read more happy parts in future......!

Hello,
Thank you very much for the comment. I am happy that you enjoyed this chapter.
Thanks,
L.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello L,

I like the portrait of Shashank's family. Yes, all of them being doctors is sure an advantage here. But that is just one of the favourable factors, because even though Armaan's dad was a doctor he couldnt handle the things properly. Riddhima's condition had affected the whole family. And, her family differs from Armaan's in the way the parents could handle their daughters. I guess that's what hit Armaan the most in the later chapters, and that is why he saw a father figure in Shashank.

The youngest person happens to be the strongest in most of the cases. No matter what their characters are, when suddenly something devastating happens, they seem to take the responsibility of being strong n supportive. I have seen that in more than one case.

Armaan's story was much more shocking than Riddhima's. That he is afraid of losing people is understandable. What his friends did was something I never ever expected. :-) The group was really admirable for helping him out so well. I liked the bond that has been created here.

This story explores about family, friends and love and each of it is very unique. And along with this, there is this maintaining balance in one's character that is being explored. I like the way the story is progressing.

Keep updating early like this so that I can read it happily knowing that it's being updated regularly :-D

Anu
Edited by anu.happy4ever - 15 years ago

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