The Apollonian and Dionysian: (AR) - Complete - Page 14

Originally posted by: naureen_aly

awesome part

whtever happend to armaan in his childhood was horriable........ poor child had to go through soo much

Originally posted by: maanu

heyya................

i read all the parts in one go...

to tell u a secreat... i had sipped my work in doing so...

but no probs work will also be taken care off...

amazing work...

actually short of words...

very precise and crisp work...

mysterious also.. but very imaginative...

in terms of its story and for us also ...

all characters are very deeply understood and hene they get ineracted in a very interesting manner....

sumhow i really feel u r a phycology practioner.. coz the depth with which u have understood the charcter to write is truely commentable..

do continue soon...

and hope to see a pm really soon...

bye

Originally posted by: munnibai

The part was absolutely terrific and supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!😃
Armaan's past was not a very pleasant one but in spite of that the type of person he turned out to be was unbelievable. What you said was so true...if someone else had experienced such horrors at such a young age am sure they would have picked up addiction or they might have not lead a life that is termed 'normal'....or maybe even killed themselves. Armaan really had a strong will power.

Anyways thank you for the update and the PM.

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey ling

im actually in awe of you...are u a psychiatrist or something?

this is a very complex and intriguing piece of writing...i could have never imagined armaan's life could have that kind of past...i mean everyone was expecting something really bad, but THIS?

it was put down really well...i mean it was so natural.

its good that armaan has finally talked about this, he needs shubhankar more than ridhima

great work

Sur

Originally posted by: rinku28

WOW....is the only word that comes in my mind right now.

Please continue soon....

Love,
Khyati

Originally posted by: Zaynoo2320

Amazing. That's all I can say. 👏

I'm really proud of Armaan :)

Originally posted by: ammygurl

Hey L...

I was recommended to read your work by a friend of mine.. And seriously, after much cajoling..I decided to give it a try! I am actually not reading Fan fictions these days as I don't have my laptop with me... Considering the title, I was a bit wary as I am not particularly fond of mystery genre.. But this one, this exceptional one.. Hats off!

I did some research on the title Apollonian and Dionysian...Greek mythology eh? Are you interested in History? And the psychological effect how have managed to conjure in this fic is Amazing!!

I have loved every word of this fiction, thoroughly enjoyed it.. Experiences from childhood really do have an impact on the life to come..ask me how! 😊 Apart from that, Sometimes...the words and the incidents felt soo true that it gave me creeps..made my flesh crawl...that's one aspect of it..

But overall....I wish you all the best for this fiction of yours.. Now I will have to arrange for a laptop everyday to read this one regularly...(BTW, Is this a long fiction? or just a few parts left..I have to see how much reckless taunts I will have to bear...from the people I borrow the laptop ofcourse.😊..)

Very nice work..Commendable job! Continue soon.. :)

Ananya

P.s You have aroused my interest in mythologies, I am going to research more! Thanks for that. Take care

Originally posted by: Phatty16

Hun, your words are absolutely amazing, and commendable!

You write so beautifully, and give all the details straight-froward which is really well done! I love the way you've developed Ridhima's character - on the outside she's as soft as a marshmallow, but on the inside she has so much built up - you can never even imagine she's had the past she had. As for Armaan, damn. He's amazing! His support for Ridhima through thick & thin, the way he's given up his time to take care of her- and all the advice and all the care! Wow... I'm seriously speechless!

I've never come across such a mature, and such a brilliant writer like you, ever! You honestly should think about getting published! Your words are so sincere, so deep... I can actually imagine what is happening. It's so graphic!

Armaan's parents death, and his sisters death was really a trauma to overcome, and the way you're showing it through your words its brilliant. I agree with each word you've written. So true and every conversation Ridhima & Armaan, or actually anyone has has so much depth and meaning to it! No pointless conversations! I love that!

I love the way you write! It's amazing. I love the way time goes on, and the wounds are starting to heal too. It's crazy to think that these people would have such a past that has impacted them SO much, that their daily routines are affected.

You're a brilliant writer hun. I give you kudos for that, and a huge hug! Brilliant writing, absolutely brilliant!

xo. Fatima