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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

bechaari ko itni bhi gaaliyan mat dena ki dar ko maare jo bhi update kar rahi hai wo bhi na kare pata nahi kitne mahinon se to wo sirf or sirf gaaliyaan hi khaa rahi hai😆😆😆

sab se jyada toh main hi use galiyan deti hun...jab bhi voh mujhe phone par puchti hai...'kya karr rahi hai'...toh mera jawab hota hai...'update kab karegi...' uss ke baad voh bichari chup ho jati hai...roz yeh silsila chalta rehta hai...n see...ab voh mere sawlon se itni irritate ho chuki hai ke update karegi... aur abhi abhi confirm bhi kiya uss ne...voh kuch scenes likh bhi chuki hai...vaise bhi madam toh achha likhti hi hain...jise ki voh hamesha bura kehti hai...khair badi baat yeh hai ke...hamare plate me kuch toh aa raha hai na aaj...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

sab se jyada toh main hi use galiyan deti hun...jab bhi voh mujhe phone par puchti hai...'kya karr rahi hai'...toh mera jawab hota hai...'update kab karegi...' uss ke baad voh bichari chup ho jati hai...roz yeh silsila chalta rehta hai...n see...ab voh mere sawlon se itni irritate ho chuki hai ke update karegi... aur abhi abhi confirm bhi kiya uss ne...voh kuch scenes likh bhi chuki hai...vaise bhi madam toh achha likhti hi hain...jise ki voh hamesha bura kehti hai...khair badi baat yeh hai ke...hamare plate me kuch toh aa raha hai na aaj...😆

aur nahi to kya kuchch nahi se kuchc toh behtar hi hai na😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

aur nahi to kya kuchch nahi se kuchc toh behtar hi hai na😉😉

satya vachan😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
arrre yaar plzzz daraao mat...kya accha likhti hun acha likhti hun laga rakha hai????????ab jab dimaag mein kuch aa hi nahin raha to update bura nahin ho sakta?????????pehle se hi main nervous hun apne comeback ko lekar🤢🤢[shayad ye mera 4th comeback hai😆]
aur priya tu sab ko ladoo mat dikha😡...kuch scenes nahin hain bass 2 scenes hain bas vahi post karne waali hun...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

arrre yaar plzzz daraao mat...kya accha likhti hun acha likhti hun laga rakha hai????????ab jab dimaag mein kuch aa hi nahin raha to update bura nahin ho sakta?????????pehle se hi main nervous hun apne comeback ko lekar🤢🤢[shayad ye mera 4th comeback hai😆]

aur priya tu sab ko ladoo mat dikha😡...kuch scenes nahin hain bass 2 scenes hain bas vahi post karne waali hun...😭

thik hai tu un 2 ladooyon ko bhej de...hum sab achhe wale bachhe hain...isi liye hum sab mil-baant kar kha lenge...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

thik hai tu un 2 ladooyon ko bhej de...hum sab achhe wale bachhe hain...isi liye hum sab mil-baant kar kha lenge...😆

satya vachan maharaj😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

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hellooo all my dear friends...finally i managed to write atleast something...sooo here's that "something" for all of u...i don't how many of you are still reading this fic but those who are reading
i just hope that i dnt disappoint you much😭


AND YAA THERE IS ONE MORE THING...27th JUNE...HMMM WELL TODAY MY FIC COMPLETES 2 YEARS...I REALLYYY WANT TO THANK ALL OF YOU FOR LOVING THE FIC SOOO MUCH😊...[i wont be saying "for loving me" coz i knw u all want to throw jootis and chapals at me for being sooo late everytime😆]

part 35

naina couldn't believe her eyes...here she was all set to leave for nainital to meet her parents...

but now they were standing in front of her...

naina rushed towards the door and hugged her baba and then maa with a constant attempt to stop her tears which now shone in her eyes...

naina[now crying]-maa baba aap yahan kaise?????????

NM{naina's maa}-beta humein rajveer ne yahan bulaya hai..

At this naina looked at rajveer who smiled at her'.he then came forward and touched their feet'both naina's maa and baba were touched by his gesture'they blessed their son-in-law with all their heart'.

Raj's Maa-namaste'main raj ki maa hun'.aap andar aayiye na'

After that samdhi samdhans got introduced to each other [sorry I m

Not writing this part'.i feel its really boring to write as well as read all this]

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After sometime in the guest room-[naina and her maa baba]

Naina-maa baba aap fresh ho jaao main aapke liye chai lekar aati hun'

Baba-nahin beta'abhi kuch nahin chahiye'tu aa thodi der hamare saath baith'itne dino se teri chinta ho rahi thi'

Naina-baba main bilkul theek hun'aap please meri fikar mat kijiye'.aap bataao aap kaise ho??????

Baba-tujhe yahan khush dekh kar ab meri saari chinta door ho gayi hai'.main jaanta hun maine teri shaadi ke waqt tujhe sochne ka waqt nahin diya tha'tu mujhse naraaz to nahin hai na???????

Naina[hugging her father]-nahin baba'bilkul nahin'.aapke uss faisle ne mujhe bhut khushiyaan di hain'main sach mein bhut khush hun'.

Baba- thankyou beta'mujhe galat nahin samjhne ke liye'.

Naina's mom was silently crying watching them but felt at peace seeing her daughter so well settled at this new place'

Just then raj's maa entered'[god!!!!!!!!!!! 2-2 maa ho gayi hain'main bhi confuse ho rahi hun'.so from now on NM is naina's mom and RM is raj's mom...]

RM[cheerfully]-sorry ji itne pyaare family scene ke beech mein aane ke liye'par aap pehle aake khaana kha lo baad mein hum sab milke isse scene ko aage badhaayenge'

All laughed at this'by now they know that raj's maa is serial queen'they were really happy to see that raj's mom adores naina so much'

RM-naina main khaana lagaati hun tu jaake raj ko uski coffee de aa'.kitchen mein rakhi hai'

naina-jee maa

saying this naina almost ran away to the kitchen'.she couldn't wait to hug her dear hubby'she couldn't even imagine that he would do something like this'.he didn't want her to go anywhere leaving him soo he planned this????? That too without even telling her'oh she loved him sooo much'.

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In raj- naina room-

Raj was sitting on the couch immersed in his laptop finshing the report he had to submit..he couldn't complete it in headquarters as he wanted to reach home early before maa baba's arrival..

Naina came practically running to her room but slowed down seeing him lost in his work'she kept the coffee at side table of the bed tiptoed behind him and hugged him tight from behind'

Naina-I love u I love u I love u I love u''''.

Raj[smiled]-accha?????? Ye kab hua?????

Naina[now moved in front and sat on his lap]-bas abhi thodi der pehle'

Raj[removing the strand of hair from her face]-par jahan tak mujhe yaad hai thodi der pehle tak to aap mujhse bhut naraaz thi ki main bhut der se aaya and all that'

Naina[childishly]- ya I still hate you for that'mera saara Sunday kharaab kar diya'kitna kuch plan kiya tha maine'aur sab paani mein'

Raj[kissing her nose]-plan to aapne ghar jaane ka bhi kiya tha'to kya maine uspe bhi paani daal diya????????

Naina[hugged him tight again and started all over again]-I love u I love u I love u I love u'.

Raj[laughed]-bas bas naina'.saara pyaar abhi dikhaaogi???thoda raat ke liye bhi bacha kar rakho'[saying this he winked at her]-

Naina[slapping him on his chest]-dhat'..

Raj[in romantic tone]-kya dhat???ab tum mujhse itni khush ho'mujhse itna pyaar karti ho'to itna to banta hi hai'.nahin?????

Naina[smiled hiding her face his chest]-aap bilkul besharam hote jaa rahe ho'

Raj[kissing her hair]-aur tum zaroorat se zyada sharmaane lagi ho'.

They sat on the couch like that for sometime enjoying the feeling of togetherness'.

After sometime-

Naina-aapne ye sab kaise kiya?????

Raj[smiled]-sabse pehle poochne waala sawaal sabse end mein pooch rahi ho'

Naina-rajjj''phir se mera mazaak???

Raj-arre nahin baba...bas aise hi bol raha tha'.vaise ye to maine ussi din soch liya tha jab tumne ghar jaane ki baat ki thi'.

Naina-to mujhse bataya kyun nahin??????

Raj-surprize naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai na????

Naina smiled at this and kissed his neck'

Raj[whispering in her ear]-tumhein kya laga tha main tumhein itni asaani se apne se jaane doonga???????

Naina blushed and hugged him even tighter'

raj-vaise ek aur vajah bhi thi'

naina[now facing him]-vo kya?????

Raj[running his hand through her hair]-main chahta tha ki maa baba yaahan aayen'main jaanta hun unhein vahan tumhaare liye bhut fikar hoti hogi'kitne sawaal uthte honge unke mann mein yahaan ko lekar'iss liye main chahta tha ki vo yahan khud aakar dekhen ki tum theek ho taaki vo vahan araam se reh sake..

Naina now had tears in her eyes'how could someone be soo nice????soo loving??????what did she ever do to get a husband like him????and most importantly why does he love her so much???and how????how can someone love like that????sooo pure'.such divine love????is it really possible in today's world'.well for naina it was possible'she can see the immense love in his eyes for her'.naina surely was god's favourite'

Naina kissed him lightly on his lips'.but raj could see the tears in her eyes'and that was certainly not allowed according to his love rule book'

Raj[to cheer her up]-aur pata hai maa baba ke yahan aane se mera hi fayada hai'

Naina[still crying]-vo kaise.???

Raj-mujhe support karne ke liye koi to hoga ab'

Naina-kya matlab??????

Raj-matlab maa to ab tumhaari side pe hain'to jab tumhaare maa baba dekhenge ki main tumhaare nakhre kaise haske jhelta hun'to koi to hoga na meri side lene ke liye'.

Naina[loudly]-kya???????????main nakhre karti hun??????main????

Raj[murmured]-mission accomplished'

Naina-bolooo'

Raj-ahh naina chillaao mat nahin to maa baba kya sochenge ki kaisi beti hai unki???pati par chillaa rahi hai???????

Naina[getting off him]-I hate youu sooo much'.hamesha mujhe aise hi bolte rehte ho aap'aur fir aise behave karte ho jaise kuch hua hi nahin'

Raj-naina thodi der ke liye to apni baat par tikaa karo'abhi thodi der pehle to I love u I love u ki ratt lagaayi hui thi aur 5 min mein I hate u pe aa gayi ho?????

Naina-vo to main emotional ho gayi thi..lekin ab main theek hun'aur I hate u hi aapko suit karta hai'.huh'byyeee main maa ke paas ja rahi hun'

she turned to leave but raj hugged her from behind'.

Raj[kissing her shoulder]-tum maa ke paas chali jaaogi to mere paas kaun rahega???

Naina-abhi batati hun'.

She picked up his laptop and handed him that'

Naina-ye lo'aap ka pehla pyaar'.dekho kahin ro na de aapke bina'huh..

Saying this she left the room and raj stood there watching the laptop his hands'.then he smiled remembering his "nakhre waali " wife's face'.how easy it was to irritate her'..she actually was a unique piece'.a good combi of maturity and innocence'..he really couldn't have enough of her "nakhras"..he loved that too about her'.

End of this part

link to previous part

part 34-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1402544/all-for-your-smile-2-rn-fic-part-37-pg57-24-11-11?pn=33



Edited by rajeev fann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
THIS IS FOR THE COMPLETION OF 2 LONG YEARS OF THIS FIC😛:-
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesooome..
superb.
fab..
wonderful.
rocking...
terrific upd.
loved it to the core...

hearty congrats for completing 2 yrs ...
thanx for the pm...
take care...
Edited by mayadika11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
and congrats for two years of your fic
but it was long awaited update and this short... now that's not fair... we need a long update...
Raj-Naina scenes were awesome
update soon

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