ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11] - Page 16

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i m really busy with all my tests and assignments...but i have started writing...soo most probably in this week...
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pls try to make it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Please try and update soon.
Its been a month
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Hi Dear

How r u???
Congratulations on second thread..As a writer u were brilliant n your story made us crave for more..👏
This part was one of the best in this story..😃👏 ..How do u manage to write like dis all the time..??😃
Saree scene was just too sweet..Raj is really naughty n this time Naina is specchlees..She really don't know wat to say..😆😆😉
Raj was wanting to take another step in this relationship but only if Naina was ready..I really wish that all the girls get hubby like Raj..He is just so understanding n sweet..I 'll rather say perfect😍
But Naina was bit hesitant due to her past n Raj completely understood her position..
Naina was really guity but her husband is one in a million..he took her to have ice-cream ..Naina was astonished at this..She told him abt her fear n he cud feel her pain..
She should thank God for giving her such a understanding husband.😊
This time Naina took the initiative n den there was no looking back..Only love spoke..Finally Raj n Naina r one..😛😊😃
Why u always say that ur part is not gud..It was not gud it was very very gud..
n u dont need to explain all the scenes..It is quite understood n way u described them was beautiful..vey subtle n cute..really loved it..
Pls continue soon
Bye


love you ayesha 😳

Edited by Fizzylicious - 15 years ago
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Hey please udate soon...week toh pura bhi ho gaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am so excite ur next update
i am waiting
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[note-hey guys.......i am sooooo sorrryy for not replying to ur comments...i tried my best to reply but there is some problem with my net conection today....its working veryy slow....soo i decided to update first.....i'll reply to all ur comments as soon as i can...please forgive me for the delay😭]
recap-naina missing her mother....raj upset over her crying...

part 33

naina woke up first the next day...well all thanks to the sunrays for disturbing her peaceful sleep...she tried to move a bit to the other side but was not able to..she slowly opened her one eye and a pleasant smile came to her face....raj was still sleeping???yes it was a sunday but he missed his morning jog too???now that should be the headline of today....atleast it was for naina....

naina blushed remembering the last night....

last night

naina was sleeping peacefully when suddenly she felt cold...it was january and delhi was freezing...she tried to find herself one more blanket but couldn't..

raj[in sleepy voice]-kya hua??????

naina[holding the blanket tight]-i need one more blanket...mujhe bhut thand lag rahi hai...

raj-then share it with me...

naina-noo....mujhe ek aur blanket chahiye...dhoond ke deejiye na please...

raj-naina room mein aur blanket nahin hai...neeche store room mein hoga kahin...subah maa se bol dena vo nikaal dengi...abhi ke liye hum in do blanket ko mila lete hain...

naina[childishly]-noooo mujhe poora blanket chahiye hota hai...i don't like sharing my blanket....u know that na....

raj-ya i have recently found that out...pehle to tumhein koi problem nahin thi....

naina- hamesha se thi....par pehle maine kuch kaha nahin tha ......par aap kyun pehle ki baat leke baithe ho...blanket laaaakar dooooo plzzzzzzzzz...

raj[irritated]-uff...ek kaam karo..ye dono blankets tum le lo...i can manage without one...

naina[slowly]-nahin..aapko thand lag jaayegi...

raj[sarcastically]-wowww..u realize that??????

naina-haan...ok main ek raat ke liye manage kar lungi...

saying this they joined the two blankets together as one and snuggled closer...

raj[rubbing her arm to keep her warm]-tumhein kisi ne bataya nahin ki shaadi ke baad apne pati se har cheez share karni padti hai????most importantly blanket..hmm????

naina-pata hai…par main kya karoon?aadat hai....i never shared my blanket with anyone aur fir mujhe face cover karke sona hota hai...

raj-u should not do that...saans kaise aayegi??? its a bad habit...

naina-uff aap fir se raj se rajveer sir ban gaye???lemme sleep...

raj[grinned]-ok no problem...main fir se raj ban jaata hooon...

and he kissed her hard making a loud sound....naina had her eyes wide open in shock..

raj enjoyed her expression thoroughly and then pretended to be sleepy by yawning wide...

naina[smacked him hard]-ye kya tha????

raj[acting innocent]-tumhi ne to kaha tha raj ban jaaun..

naina-haan par...i didn't mean this....

raj-ohhh i am soo sorry...u want more? well i have no problem with that....

and before naina could protest raj was already on top of her kissing her neck...his kisses had soo much love in them that naina couldn't help but feel it...she could feel his hand roaming on her body aimlessly creating a need, a desire inside her...desire which was there in him too...

she fainting remember him sliding the straps of her night gown off her shoulder and kissing her passionately there....she also remembers his words coming in between his kisses.."i want u naina, i love u "...she could still feel him touching her bare body with all the love and respect he had for her.....

she blushed once again seeing the red marks on his shoulder which were the proof of her passion, her love for him...she covered her bare form with the shawl lying on the side table and moved towards the bathroom .......

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after sometime..

naina emerged from the bathroom fully dressed in a simple jeans and a shirt...she looked at raj who was still sleeping....she opened the cupboard to put her shawl back when suddenly raj hugged her from behind....

naina-hmm...to sone ka sab natak tha...

raj-na i was waiting for u to wake me up which u didn't....

naina[smiled]-fir to kabhi nahin uthaaungi aapko...kam se kam aap subah subah gayab to nahin hoge na...

raj-point....ahh vaise mera yahan aane ka ek aur kaaran bhi hai..

naina-vo kya????

raj-abhi main nahaane jaa raha hun..tum do minute yahin khado sab pata chal jaayega..

naina[sounding impatient]-kya pata chal jaayega????

raj-surprize gift hai wait.........

saying this he picked up his clothes from the cupboard and headed towards the bathroom door...he stopped at the door itself and said...

raj-cupboard ke sabse neeche waale shelf mein dekho...u'll have your answer..byeeeeeeee..

and he closed the door

naina immediately started searching for her gift and shouted in the loudest voice possible...

"I HATE UUUUU"

coz there lying on the shelf were the neatly folded blankets.....

raj knew that if he stepped out of the locked bathroom door he'll be brutly murdered...soo he chose to take his sweet time in the shower...it'll also give naina some time to calm down as her temper is very short lived...

after about half an hour raj emerged from the bathroom...by then naina was not in the room...raj knew that now everything was under control and he won't have to run for his life....

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breakfast table...

maa-aaj tujhe kahan jaana hai????

raj-maa kuch kaam hai...shaam ko bas ek do ghante...

maa-ek sunday ke din bhi tu ghar nahin reh sakta??phir pata nahin teri posting kab aur kahan ho jaaye...

naina stopped eating at this which didn't go unnoticed

by raj.....

raj[to assure naina]-nahin maa abhi itni jaldi meri posting change nahin hogi.....abhi join kiye 3 mahine bhi to nahin hue...khair bhut zaroori kaam hai varna nahin jaata...plzzz try n understand..

maa[dramatically]-haan beta bachpan se tujhe understand hi karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon...

aryan-hahahahahaa...par dadi fail ho gayi....hahahahahaha..

all three had a good laugh at this except raj who preferred to eat his breakfast...

aryan-chachu..kal mere school mein parents meet hai....

raj-i know aur ye bhi pata hai har baar ki tarah sabhi teachers ne aapki complaints ki ek list banake rakhi hogi...

naina smiled at this...

aryan-no...iss baar maine bilkul masti nahin ki...

raj[with a raised eyebrow]-ek bhi nahin???

aryan-no...mmmm one no 3 times masti ki thi...

raj-aur kya kiya tha vo bhi bataaiye...isse pehle ki aapki teachers bataayen..

aryan[innocently]-zyada kuch nahin kiya maine...bas ek teacher ke book mein cockroach rakha tha...2nd time apne seat partner ko seat se neeche push kiya tha aur 3rd time class mein ek boy ki shirt pe drawing kiya tha......

naina and maa laughed their heart out at his not so good deeds whereas raj was watching him unblinkingly...

raj-isse aap bas kehte ho????i am not going with you tommorrow...

aryan[clapping]-ok....thankyou...aap mat aana...kyunki agar aap nahin aaoge to aapko 4th mistake ke baare mein pata nahin chalega...aur aapko pata nahin chalega to mujhe gussa bhi nahin karoge aap...

raj-what?????ek aur bhi hai????

aryan- yes.....par aapko nahin bataaunga...

raj[taking a deep breath]-bataao kya kia aapne....i promise main gussa nahin karunga....

aryan-no....

raj-aryan........

aryan-pehle kaho god promise....

raj-ok god promise...

aryan-maine na jab aap "moon" par gaye the na to class mein apni pant mein susu kiya tha.....

raj and naina-what???????????????????

raj[shouted]-what rubbish???????aisa kyun kiya aapne????

aryan[cutely]-main kya karta maine teacher se bola bhi tha ki mujhe zorrrr se lagi hai par vo kehne lagi ki main jhooth bol raha hun....to mujhe dikhaana padaa ki main jhooth nahin bol raha tha...

naina started having pain in her stomach due to laughing soo much that too while having breakfast...

maa-haaye mera bacha..kaisi teacher hai....dikhaana mujhe main uski akal thikaane lagaungi...

raj-bas bigaado aap sab milke isse....and u [pointing to aryan] did i teach u this????

aryan-no....aapne mujhe susu karna nahin sikhaaya dadi ne sikhaaya tha....

naina and maa-hahahahahahahahahhahahahhahaha...

and raj slapped his forehead really hard this time...it was indeed useless to argue with a child....especially such a naughty one...

aryan-mujhe pata hai aap mere saath aana hi nahin chahte....aapko meri teacher se darr lagta hai...

raj-mujhe aapki teacher se darr kyun lagega???

aryan[casually]-kyunki vo aapko stare karti hai....

raj coughed really hard at this...

raj[not looking at naina]-ahh voo....its not like that...

aryan-to phir chaloge????????

raj[left with no option]-yes...

aryan-yeeeeeeeee....aur aapko pata hai ek new miss bhi aayi hain unse bhi milaaunga....

raj[muttered]-ek kaafi nahin thi??????

aryan-what?????

raj-nothing...

aryan[excitedly]-chachi aap bhi chalna hamaare saath..

raj[immediately]-nooooooo...

naina gave him a glare...something's fishy hmmmmm...

raj-i...i mean naina wahan kya karegi????

naina-jo aap karoge....aryan main zaroor aaungi....

raj[in his mind]-i'll be dead tomorrow....

naina[in her mind]-i'll kill that b****

maa[in her mind]-bhagwaan mere raj ki raksha karna...hahaha..

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in the evening...

raj has gone out for his important work...naina and maa are sitting in maa's room talking about goa...

maa-bore to nahin kiya na raj ne tujhe??????

naina[smiled]-maa vo itne bhi bure nahin hain..

maa-haan jaanti hun...par usse time time pe dose ki zaroorat padti hai.....

naina[laughed]-trust me maa ab se nahin padegi....

maa[smiled]-jaanti hoon...jab se tu aayi hai tab se apne raj mein badlaav dekh rahi hoon...bhut khush rehne laga hai....thankyou beta..

naina-maa thanks to mujhe aapka karna chahiye na...aap mujhse itna pyar karte ho...maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki main ek naye ghar mein..naye logon ke beech itni jaldi adjust ho paaungi...par aapne mere liye sab kuch itna aasaan kar diya....

maa[in the serial mode]-dhat...ab rulaayegi kya mujhe???bahu se aur umeed bhi kya ki ja sakti hai????

naina[laughed]-maa....u r sooooooo sweet..[saying this she hugged maa]

maa-pata hai....accha bata ye gifts tune pasand kiye na mere liye??????

naina nodded

maa-bhut acche hain....abhi mujhe the most peedit saas ki post chodni padegi...hey raam....

naina-oh ye to maine socha hi nahin......koi baat nahin aap ye gifts ke baare mein apni friends ko mat bataana...

maa-haan...ye theek rahega....mujhe meri post nahin chodni.....

naina[slowly]-maa aapse ek baat poochun??

maa-haan kyun nahin...

naina-aapne kabhi mujhe ya unse hamari shaadi ko leke koi sawaal kyun nahin kiya?????ki humne aapko bina bataye shaadi............

maa[smiled]-kyun kar li...yahi na???????

naina-hmmmm

maa[running her hand lovingly on her head]-bhut acche se jaanti hun main apne bete ko...usne aaj tak kabhi bhi mujhe bina bataye koi kaam nahin kiya aur maine bhi hamesha uske har faisle mein uska saath diya hai...to jab usne mujhe phone pe bataya tha ki usne shaadi kar li hai tabhi main samjh gayi thi ki zaroor koi bhut badi vajah rahi hogi...par maine usse poocha nahin kyunki mujhe pata jab usko sahi lagega vo khud aakar mujhe batayega....mere liye bas ek cheez zaroori hai...aur vo uski khushi hai...vo tere saath khush hai to bas mujhe koi sawaal jawaab nahin karna.......

naina-lekin maa aapko kabhi koi to sawaal pareshaan karta hoga na?????

maa[smiled]-mujhe mere sabse bade sawaal ka jawaab bhut pehle hi mil gaya tha........jis din maine tujhe pehli baar dekha tha.....

naina[confused]-matlab??

maa-jab raj kma se vaapis aaya tha tab teri tasveer dekhi thi maine uske kamre mein..........

naina looked confused at this...

naina-tasveer??????

maa-teri, raj ki aur uske guzre hue dost ki photo.....naveen ki photo.....

the end

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Gosh Aryan is just tooooo much...I was laughing like a mad female...!!!!!😆😆😆

Now Naina has to understand...handsome bf's/hubbys come in a package....!!!!😉😆
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Hiii.... I think this is the first time i am posting a reply here...but i have been a silent reader for the last few updates....and though i have not read the complete fic...and i will try to catch up wid it as soon as possible....but there is one thing which i want to say and that is....
U R ABSOLUTELY FANTABULOOOOUSSSS......i love the way u write swt heart....and this update was sooooooooooooooooo amazing....wow....
And i really hope wen i have a kid....then he's a replica of Aryan...hahaha....meri life kabhi boring nahi hogi...hehehehe
Love U loads...
Rajita
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update 👏👏👏
Raj became so naughty.......... Blanket scene was awesome........😉😉😉
Aryan is naughty as well.....He was counting his mischief and irritating Raj at the same time very cutely.....😆😆😆
Raj-Naina will go to Aryan's school together. Bada maza aayega........😆😆😆
awesome part
update soon

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