ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11]

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Hi Dear

Brilliant update...👏👏👏

i think one of the plus point of your fiction is that u write so naturally..The characters r all so diferent form the one shown in LRL but yet that difference make it more enjoyable..

Naina is missing her parents so much but her mom-in-law made her smile..she is just so sweet..😊

Raj is so shocked to see Naina watching saas bahu soaps..He cant handle his mom then how on earth is he going to handle his wife😆😆😉???

but again Raj's mom made him shut his mouth...

Sometimes Raj really forget that he is not in the academy😆😆

Raj was not happy when he comes to know dat Naina is missing her parents n she was crying too..He was upset because she didn't told him abt this..

How can Raj stay angry with Naina...???? She has already wrapped her husband around her finger..😉😉

She easily manages him..😃

Pls continue soon

Bye

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

wonderful update dear !!!

pata hi nahi chala ki kab start kiya aur jab khatam hua toh aise laga......itni jaldi !!!!

put up the next part real soon !!!😃

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

Superb part as always.

You write so well that a simple days events in your story also become most interesting and entertaining....with Naina's childishness, Raj's mock anger and irritation and His mom funny nature.

I have always wondered how naina's parents would react on meeting Raj's mom...what would happen when naina's friends would meet her again and so on....waiting to see all such moments in RN's life.

Coming to the update...

Naina is missing her parents very much but her mother stops her to come and meet them.😭

Just like Raj, even his mom cannot see Naina crying and so who jaldi se Naina ke apne ghar jana ke liye permission de deti hai. And naina cannot help but lover her mom-in-law even more.😊

Raj's reaction when he sees naina watching tv serial was too funny. 😆

Raj feels hurt to know that naina had been crying and so even though he does not want her to go to her parents house he agrees to it.😕

Naina's ko pata hai ki raj usse naraz hai aur iss liye who raj ko bade pyaar se mana leti hai.😉

Par Raj bhi apni pyaari wife ko sirf 3 days jane ki permission deta hai...and how could his wife refuse as she would also miss him very much.😳

please continue soon....don't make us wait for soooooo long.

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

hey dear that was awesome
plz continue soon

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Lovely part...as usual...Gosh..I now realise yeh fic maine kitni miss ki.,....!!!! thanks for liking it sooo much dear😊😊

Maa ka mazak, Raj ka irritate hona....Naina ki childishness...loved everything...!!!! Now you better put up the next part real soon....!!!! i m glad that liked every scene...thanks for commenting dear...keeep reading😊😊

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bakula_gandhi

@bakula_gandhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

awesone update...too good

please continue soon

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362035

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

awesooome....

wonderful........

fabulous upd.
loved it.........
thanx for the pm........

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#138

it was a cute episode. raj ki mummy kamaal hai. bahut jaldi naina bhi aisi hiho jayegi lagta hai. bechara raj!!

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poojabi

@poojabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#139

thank u for this lovely soooooooooo sweeeeeeeet update.mera to jee khush ho gaya.bt pls thoda jaldi jaldi update karo.intezzar karte karte thak jati hun.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#140

Part 30......It was such a brilliant part ki main kya kahu!!! Lets start from....the starting....hehe. Raj and Naina's sweet sleeping (!) session.....that was sooooo lovely.....I was cheered up right then....no that my mood was bad....yet I became soooo happy just after reading that....and then bed-sheet lekar khincha taani.....wah......wat a scene....lolz.

Then Raj ka kehna ki wo khud se kyun sharma raha hai.....hehe....ohh how much I loved all these yaar....then the mirror breaking scene....lovely again!!

Returning home....we got to see Raj's evergreen mom....wid the puja ki thali of course....those dialogues rught then were very nice and entertaining.....but I burst out laughing when I read....'sharma gaya'......that was just hillarious yaar....too gud!!

Then Raj-Aryan scene was also nice....when Naina was teasing Raj specially....and then she made it all easy for Raj....how sweet na!!! I just soooooooooooooo loved it all dear.....fantastic job.....gr8!!!!

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