ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11]

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swati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

awesomeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggg for next asap.

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

aryan is so naughty...............awesome update............plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Yay....main kitni lucky hu.....maine bas kal hi socha iss fic me aake 'pls UD' ka comment chhorungi....I was getting more n more eager for a part from u....and see....here u are....wid such a beautiful part....as usual!! 😳😃😛😃😳

The very first scene was beautiful....Raj n Naina raat ko kitnaaaa baat karte hai yaar.....😆😆.....Naina to raat me bhi baccho jaisi zidd karti hai.....and Raj manages her in sleep as well...😆😆.....I loved it yaar!!! Very very sweet.....and again the morning scene....when Raj got her that blanket.....and actually hid himself in the bathroom.....😆😆.......how cute!!

And now...Aryan....ye baccha Mashallah.....itnaaaaaa badmash hai....😆 I loved his ans to Raj's "Did I teach u all this?"....🤣...and again wo teacher wali baat....😆😳....I am actually w8ing for that scene desperately....hope u can manage to UD soon....and yeah....loved their 'mind talks'...😳😆😆😉

now....Raj's mom....she is sooo sweet....and am glad Naina started this convo wid her.....am eager to read more dear.....plssss try and UD soon. 😛

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Purnima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

hi 😃😃..................yippie an update ................after long time....... 😛😛.........never mind 😛😛......
the part was cute , romantic , funny .........👏👏👏👏....& as usual lovely & enjoyable to read 👏

loved the beginning 😳😳😳............. good to see this side of rajveer 😳😳😳.......... hhe lied to naina......😆😆😆............

aaaawww naina---wanna ask her do really hate Raj 😛😛😛............ how can u 😆😆😆😆...........

aryan cutie made appearence after long time 😊😊............... seems to be naughty kiddo 😆😆😆😆......(i can be he teacher.........will get to meet RK in PTM 😍...........

waiting to see what happens in PTM.......... it gonna be really enjoyable experience 4 RK 😆😆😆........

loved mom & naina convo 👏👏👏..................she is such a sweet saas 😃😃................wats up with naina's photo in Raj's room 😛😛😛.............some secret 😉😉😉

expecting next update much sooner than this time 😃😃😃😃.........
continue soon 😃😃😃

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amrutha,akhila

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

i could not control my laughter while i was reading it

i was reading it in my office agar kise ne mujhe dekha hota to zarroor jake complaint karde ki isko kuch hua hai

thank god i was alone in the cabin

awesome

amazing

excellent

marvellous

extra ordinary

still am in loss of words to comment on it.

cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

amazing part. loved it.
arya is too cute and naughty. loved raj and aryan conversation.
raj's mother is too nice .
continue soon.

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Prerna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

that was so sweet update
loved it completely
plz continue soon

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poojabi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

this is soooooooooooooooo romantic and sweet.tumhara update to humesha aisa hi hota hai.aur mai ab nxt part ke lye boht betaab hu.kisika murder jo hone wala and i love suspense.confused?are wo aryan ke teacher sahiba wo to naina ke haatho gayee uski himmat kaise huyee raj pe najaar dene ki.

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Suhana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Hi Dear

Update was really gud n very romantic..

Raj is now in the habbit of teasing Naina..Blanket share karte karte woh romance bhi karne laga..😉😉 😛

Raj n Naina both make a beautiful pair n I love the cuteness of their relationship..😃

Aryan is indeed very naughty just the exact opposite of Raj..Kitni shaitani karta hai..Raj was so shocked to hear all this n specially the last mistake..I was laughing so much after reading it😆😆😆 Thse kids r no less.

I think Naina will definetely go to Aryan's school along with Raj afterall she has to kill those teachers who stare at her dear hubby😉😉😆😆

Raj's mom is really very understanding n easy going..She accepts things as they r..She is happy coz her son is happy with Naina😊

Pls update soon