ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11]

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Part...umm 31 likhu ya 32??? Coz as ur recap says.....part 30 ke baad to ye part 32 hi ata hai....hehe. Anyways....main ye betuki baatein chhorke kuch kaam ki baat karti hu.....I loved the scene when Raj shouts seeing Naina watching serials....bechara.....sach me ek aur serial watcher bardasht nahi kar sakta na....hehe.

And then the kitchen scene was nice as well....where his mom took Naina's side immediately so that she doesnt feel upset.....that was really sweet!!! And now I definitely knw where Raj has inherited his sweetness from.....

And the dinner discussion was nice as well....when Raj blurts out abt Naina being in his room most of the tym.....that portion was highly entertaining and tooooooooo gud!!! Loved it.....

But then Raj became angry when he heard abt naina crying for her parents.....yet how cud Raj remain angry wid his Naina....nah.....never possible.....so the last scene went out to be extremely beautiful.....veryyyyyyyyyyy nice!!!

Now I knw that u knw I hav been busy all these days....and so I dont really need to explain abt my delay......coz I knw u understand.....so owing to that understanding of urs.....I'm signing off right here.....take care....and continue soon dear.....we love to hav more n more of this fic....

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Nidhi Chandrakar

@MeetPremeer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

hey

nice ff

great going

plz continue soon

and can you please add me to your pm list

eagerly waiting for the next update

Nidhi

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strawberrychip

@strawberrychip

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

very nice update...

fantastic..

keep on the good work..

continue soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

G8 part yaar.
I think now a days all the writers are updating their fics after a long time ( in which mai bhi ek hoon).
But so sweet.
Naina is missing her parents that's natural , any gal would do that. Her mom called her and after hearing her voice after a long time her tears started flowing that's obvious.
Raj's mom entered at wrong timing, unhone dekh liya ki Naina ro rahi hai and the way she handled Naina was really nice. They really share a nice bonding which doesn't seem to be saas bahoo bonding. It looks like more mother and daughter bonding.
i knew that she will speak about it to raj and he will not get leave now because he had already taken many leaves. Raj couldn't imagine Naina watching saas bahoo type serials.
That's y he objected but in response the dialogue Raj's mom said about Naina and her nains was really funny. Raj is really surprised to see the gang formation of his mom n Naina.
Raj is right that Naina doesn't know cooking but she can learn na, what was the need to make fun of her. Good dhamki ki desi ghee laga dengi maa in Rajs' parathas.
The dinning table scene was funny n cute too when Raj said that half of the her time Naina use to pass in his room. But when he came to know that Naina cried he didn't like at all and that's y he was angry with her. Naina knew that Raj would not like that ever.
What a funny way, Naina ne kitne cutely Raj ko manaya jab vo us se baat hi nahi kar raha tha. Than Naina realized that he is really angry with her. Now he doesn't want to go her more than three days, hiiiiiiiii.
He can not live without her. Niana too.
sweet update yaar, continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

updt was marvellous!!!!!!!!!!👏👏

njoyed d way it started wid naina and her mom comvo and den her's and raj's mom convo was simply awesome...👏
also d dialogues wer too good....😆
den raj and his mom and naina part was yet again very nice.....👏

but loved d way raj and naina part in d end was der.. ..it was gr8...loved both of dem....😳😳😳😳

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375400

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

hiii hows u dear?
superbbbbbbbbbbbbb
mindblowingggggggggg
fantasticccccccccccc
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
amazinggggggggg ud
sorry for late commenting hope u understand
anyways loved each and every scene
and specially RN ones
rocking update tha
this is for u👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
waiting for the next part eagarly

love
Deepa

Edited by Deepanwita - 14 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

lovely Ud...

naina apne parents ko miss karr rahi hai...jo ki obvious hai...!!! par raj k mom ka kahna mujhe jyada achha laga ki' main janti hun ki tu mujhe se baht pyar karti hai...par is ka matlab yeh nahi hai ki tu apne parents ko bhul jaye..." he he he...!!! aisi saas badi mushkil se milte honge...

raj ka wapas aane par naina ko apne maa k sath baith kar serial dekhne dekh kar shocked hona...ha ha ha...!!! ab maa se itni impressed hai toh kuch na kuch toh asar padega hi na...

naina ka kitchen scene bhi mast tha...!!! maa apne bete ko kamm aur bahu ko jyada support karr rahi hai...

raj ko jab pata chala ki naina ro rahi thi...toh raj ka naraz hona sahi hai...!!! voh kitna khyal rakhta hai naina ka...par jab use aisa kuch pata chalta hai toh...use bura toh lagega hi na...!!! par naina ne apna kaam karr diya n raj ko mana bhi liya...!!! par naina ko raj condition k mutabik jana padega...sahi bhi hai...ab raj bhi toh naina ko chod k nahi rah sakta na...

par anth bhala toh sab bhala...naina ne akhir me raj ko mana liya...aur is ud ki ending ek beautiful kiss k sath khatam hua...

chalo ab khatam kar hi diya hai is ud ko toh naya ud jaldi se post karo...

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Update was Lovely ,Awesome dear

Love the scenes between Sasu mom n naina

The scenes between Raj n naina r so cute..Raj bechara kitna shocked haina when he saw naina watching serials 😆😆😆😆😆

The kitchen scene is awesome..sasu mom is really so sweet..raj ko bura laga when he came to know that Naina cried ...lekin naina bhi usse jaldi hi manaliya..finally raj gave her 3 days permission to go n visit her parents

waiting for the next part eagerly

plz update soon