MayUr OneShots (6) -Maybe-final(pg 43)- 11/09/11

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: -Jess-
OMG Deeps, what was that???
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Amazing OS... it was like a mini SS... starting with a lost and found friendship, cute pecks on the cheeks.,.. hidden feelings... unconfesed love... best friends moments together.. teasing, nautiness, coffee, maggi... and then the confession... everything is wririten fabulously...

And then came to romantic moments... first kiss.. blushing.. second kiss... passion... hot hot hot....

Loved the update...

thanks for the dedication... this was a surprise....loved it....🤗

p.s. I do not like kids lying to their parents to meet the friends or sleepovers at boyfriend's.... these kind of things further breaks parent's trust.... sorry for my sincere opinion....

<div>Love ya Deeps.....🤗

thanku di.... 😳

🤗 i wanted to dedicate something to my prestigious friend and guide.... love ya 😃

and plz i didn't accused or or anything. i really felt good that u pionted out that./ i personally felt that turn to be wrong but it was a os and i had to use a shortest path to get them stay together ..lol...
i rally appreciate any kind or criticism .... please please please... CRITICISM IS MORE WELCOMED THEN APPRECIATION>>> only true viewer tell the down points and am so glad to have u 🤗

even n future i will rely on u for honest comments.... 😊

thanku so much di... love u ... btw i love ur signature pics 😊

*deeps*

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: sonam961986
I don't have words to describe this one .... it was just so awesome!!!! simply too good!!! 😳

thanku so much sonam... it feels gr8 to have my fellow friends praise our effort... i love ur written stuff!!!

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glossyglassy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#223

Hi!

Thanks for the PM.

It was a very well-written OS though i agree wid someone(sory forgot who it was!) who said it seemed like a mini SS.

I read your 1st OS of this gallery and simply loved it.

Do write more...

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: ..pebo..
deepika !!!!
this was the bestes os i read !!
so mayur were best freind and mayu loves here
it was just sooo ... even the dictinary wont have perfect words to describe this os !!
wonderful gob sweety !@!
do write more
pebz😳

awww.... that was the best compliment i got😳 thanku

i'll definitely write more and pm u..... coz i'll be anticipated to read ur comments 😊

thanku so much

🤗

deepika

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
OMG
What was that hun?

It was heavenly beautiful OS

Absolute loved it

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thanku zoah 🤗

thanku so much

ur comments really mean a lot 😊

deepika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#226

^^Your most welcome hun

So any hope of getting new OS?

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#227

^^ ahhh... not yet di, but i'll definitely write if a idea struck me... as for now i am totally blank ....

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#228

^^I'll be waiting for sure

Honestly, you write so beautifully :)

God bless you hun

x x

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Jassi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#229

Hi!
Sorry i couldn't reply earlier
I've been inactive for a week
Because of my stupid internet problems
The OS was too good like ur previous OSs
I really enjoyed it
Did i tell u ur my fav OS writer
I love all ur OSs!
This one was sooo excellent
It was amazing
The concept was great
and the OS was really well planned
It must have taken you such a long time
I can never write long parts like that
PleasePleasePlease write another one soon
I ReallyReallyReally want u to write a FF
Please think about it and PM when u write anything!
I'm a fan of ur writing!
LoveYou!
-Jassi

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#230

relax buddy... agar jhoot bhalayi ke liye bola hain toh achcha hain... if its real or fictional... i m very much against even the slightest lie told... but, chalta hain... we know u r naughty enuf.. and nautanki mein its ok... 😉

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