MayUr OneShots (6) -Maybe-final(pg 43)- 11/09/11 - Page 24

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

omg that was an OutStanding OS.............
i just could imagine each and every part of it as if it was happening infront of my eyes
i loved each and every part of it
the first hug, the first cute peck.......
his cute way of refering her to a cutie teddy with chuppy cake cheeks.......ohh..... that was really fabulous.......... and i liked his teasing her for being caught of watching the passionate moment of lovers....
and then the 2min maggii description by nupur was amazing......
his sincere truthfull confession.......... her silent acceptence
and the first passionate moment in their lives
and he being romantic and she being stubborn to leave..........
the way he said 'how romantic, i want to leave' was awesome
and her night stay 'borrowed clothes' lol that was superb
and the hot hot kiss was romantic
and the morning was well described
hatsoff and thanks for giving us the best os on mayur

Originally posted by: Alini.

Awesome one.............

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

*reserved*

just came online!

*edited*

awww.....it touched me so much that u dedicated it to me also...thank u sooooo much.....really love you...

i completely agree that women are more open in virtual world....100% true....

aawwwwww....i loved the way he said she was exception....so beautiful...

she fooled her mother? lol...so nupurish....i agree....sometimes parents dictate a lot...thankfully my parents have no objection in allowing me to go anywhere....but i am an exception....i don't like going anywhere....too shy....and i have no such frd who is a boy...

parents trust their children.....but they dont trust the ones whom u r with...i think like this only....

Aww….he even kissed her on her cheeks…how sweet….i loved how he said that she was so cute…but I know how much it pains when someone pulls your cheeks *oww*

So she did felt something different…that's great….i love this Nupur yaar….modern yet conservative…I don't like touching…

Urgh! I so hate the shameless couples…agar pyaar hai toh itna show kyun karte ho? Yuk! Bechari Nupur…usne dekha bhi nahi aur uska naam bhi lag gaya!

She can never mind his kiss…she loves him na,…but he is so damn impossible…why not tell her or show that he too felt something?

By the way, I am having Maggie right now…and its really yummmm….i so love Maggie….it makes my mouth water…and I too finish it so fast…

Aawwww……so he loved her since that day? I wonder when will people start confessing without being afraid of anything!

She couldn't see all those things earlier becoz she never considered them ever….like I said in my "Kaisa Woh Pyaar Tha?" that she never understood his love becoz she never think that he cud love her….

She accepted him! He kissed her! Wow! I didn't expected this so soon…he wanted to hear…comeon…..when would girls learn to say those words ever?

Vaise…to be really truthful…I really love this shyness…

But it really pains when your frds or anyone pinches you right the moment when you pout….it really feels like ouch! I have to handle this torture everyday in my coaching….my frds so pull my cheeks and say the words "how cute" or "so sweet"…like these words are going to ease the pain! *pouts*

She lied again! And that too stayed up at Mayank's house? she is too much!

Oh man! He is so mischievous…I obviously didn't expected him to pull her and make her fall beneath him….he and his antics!

Lol….kissing needs air? I don't know about that…but ya, as much as I have read some stories…breathless they become…but here it made me laugh…

They shared the bed? Seems super fast….but then in love, you never know what you do…and I simply LOVED this oneshot…

The feelings were so beautifully described…..starting from the apartment to the confession and to the togetherness….

I loved how you described each and every emotion…..that's the thing I love the most in your oneshots….i told you that you a fab writer and I love your work….literally I loved this oneshot….

I must tell you that after so long….i have read something so beautiful….it was really a treat to my tired eyes…literally loved it….

THANK YOU sooooooooo much for writing this as well as dedicating it to me……really love you a LOT……literally…..i LOVE you a lot…

Too pretty and superbly written that I don't actually know what more to say…..

Keep writing such oneshots and do fill up my inbox with these pms…..i would love to check them out…

Loads of love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

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even i agree... i became this shameless here only...lol... in real i m too shy and reserved types but virtual world made me explore my inner self openly 😊 same with me......i too can write everything but can do nothing!

same pinch!!... 😆 even my parents don't stop from anything but i m a so home-ridden that i just lie on my bed/study-table/computer table...LOL same pinch!

yes, it truly hurts when someone pulls ur cheeks...*ouch*... really hurts! yup! my frds somehow have done phd in pulling my cheeks though! they say "how sweet" "how cute" and pull my cheeks! it so hurts but somehow i love that....

@when would girls learn to say those words ever?
since i am the one who is playing with so called characters 😆 i m so conservative regarding touching or saying obvious words openly that u'll notice in my every stuff this type of female...😆 mine too....u can see that every nupur i wrote abt, is so shy and quiet type of character. she toh never does anything except blushing.....my frds tell me that i can do phd in blushing....without a reason, i can blush!

actually that all apprehension thing was all abt me... told ya i m so shy😳 aww....how cute...*pulls ur cheeks*

@ I must tell you that after so long'.i have read something so beautiful'.it was really a treat to my tired eyes'literally loved it'.
awww... this was the best thing i ever read for me... thank you sooo much 🤗 mind it, that i am being utmost honest and truthful....my pleasure....

loves u back... but a little more than you 😉 no u cant love me more than i love you! *pouts*

deepika Mahak

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

brilliant OS dear!

i loved it to the core

thnx for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Deepu....That was so Damn Amazing

Loved it to bitsss.......

It was Cute Lovely Sweet Passionate Beautiful one shot

I had a big smile reading it...

Keep writing more....

Love
Nidzy

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Deepika 🤗

It's absolutely brilliant. You write beautifully. this was such an awesome OS. Totally loved it. It was sweet, romantic and passionate.

Please do write more. i would love to read more of your work.

This was just beautiful..😍☺️

-Daania

hey its an amazing os

hey deepika.....i've no words...its jst amazin.......wonderfully written...n unusual from other oss.......very nice👏...i loved it... thanks for d pm.🤗.

Deeps (hope i can call u that)...this was a mini SS...Wow!! it had all the elements in it, trust, humour, romance, friendship, love n lot more