MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 13 years ago

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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Anila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

😲😲😲 🥳🥳 😍😍😍

Thank u sooo very much SIS...🤗🤗

OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can i give u a TIGHTTT HUG for dis update...😳

as if m gonna listen to ur denial...😎

i love u sooo sooo sooo very much for writing dis part...🤗🤗🤗

dis is my most awaited update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can't say enough thanks to u for writing it n dat too dis way...

MashALLAH...MashALLAH...MashALLAH...SIS...🤗🤗🤗

U MAKE ME SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!😍😍😍

I LOVE U LODSSS FOR DIS...🤗🤗🤗

uff!!!!!!!! hw can anyone write sooo well...😍

wen i was reading abt der past i was feeling such an contentment in my heart u wont blv...

u write it sooo Beautifully...

Everything in dis part n in dis ff was jst tooo amazing n enchanting ...

wen i was reading d past i was crying n n was Thanking u for writing it like dis n i was grinning dat its pretty long bt wen it ended i was like...WHY it ended!!!

i know SIS u r too busy...yet m grateful to u dat u r still writing it...😳

Thank U...Thank U...Thank U a looottt...

my heartiest regard for dis update...

i wish u were infront of me now coz i badly wanna gv u hug for writing dis update...🤗🤗🤗

loved it to BITS...😍❤️😍

waiting for d next part...😳

hoping Everything will b fine...inshALLAH...😍

Dey BOTH love Eachother way more dan to leave Without Eachother...

will b waiting EAGERLY wid Dying Eagerness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it lot more dan a lottt...

love U SIS...*n i mean it*🤗🤗🤗

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

I have lost the track .Now I have to read again in order to remember the plot.😕Thnx for update and pm.😊

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#735

How do you manage to write so precise n clear every single time Akki...⭐️

Well I cud understand each part of Mayank and Nupur's pain and what they were going through...and the double minds they were in amidst all the emotional and revolting parts of their's...

Well, maybe Mayank shudn't have blamed her and she would have been alright...how even in her dreams she cud have done that..the thing he was accusing her of...

She cud just have taken care of herself n not gone ahead wid her work but that doesn't make her a murderer...they both are blaming her for wrong reason...

and Mayank needs an emotional drain too...and it could have only been Nupur...

glad to know that all will fall into place soon😃 Update soon😳

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: mayurlove
I have lost the track .Now I have to read again in order to remember the plot.😕Thnx for update and pm.😊

Yeah, I'm really sorry about that. But thanks for hanging on. :)

Edited by You-Know-Who - 13 years ago

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

At first wanna give u a BIG BIG 'THANK U' for this update...U know how eagerly i wait for ur updates and this is one of my most fav ff...
It dosnt matter how long u take to update, i'll always wait for it and be there till the end...

Everytime i read any of ur update, i repeat the same line that I LOVE UR WRITING STYLE...Its so descriptive that u can totally relate with the story and the characters...
This time also u let me involved with the whole circumstances...
But one thing i totally disliked that u made me cry buckets with this update...jking dear...but really u wrote their past so beautifully that it felt the whole scene is flashing before my sight...
At first when mayank placed his hand over nupur to console i think things will get bit better but later i shuddered to see his icy cold behavior...and after that i ws continuously wiping off my tears...
And the way Mayank accused her for no reason gave me utter pain...Why and how cant he understand that it ws an accident and certainly not nupur's fault...I really cant call him a perfect husband when he cant support his wife in her miseries..

Anyhow i loved these lines..

"He could've done something. Like tell her to stop and go to bed with him. Like tell her that they'd be fine and she didn't have to leave him, or tell her that all he really wanted was to sleep in her lap at the moment and she had no business denying his right. Maybe he could tell her how angry she made him and that he didn't like her one bit, or he could tell her that she was an idiot. She was an idiot if she thought she could live away from him. Mayank could've definitely told Nupur that he would, in no way, allow her to leave, even if they had to die trying to be with each other.He could've, but he didn't.'

And this part broke my heart in million pieces...'The headache that was knocking the doors of her head didn't bother her as much as knowing the fact that he hadn't tried once, to stop her. But if Nupur had checked, she would see that it wasn't any baby's photo that Mayank was holding onto when he had fallen asleep in the nursery bedroom. It was hers; albeit it was only magnified by the tears that had belonged to him.'

I've read this part 3 times and every time it had the same impact on me..My heart just cudnt bear the harshness of mayank and right now i have my eyes all red...thanks to u...😆...But anyhow i loved it..Otherwise i wudnt bother to read it 3 times..😆

Beautifully written..U r spectacular..If only u cud get more readers...I've seen so many childish writings have 150 or more likes and comments..U truly deserve way more complements for ur brilliant skillz. 👏👏

Thanks so much for updating such a LONG part..Will eagerly wait for the next part..🤗
God bless u dear...😳

Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago

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tasnim.

@tasnim.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

What can i say abt this abt.It was totally a painful& heart wrenching part.Cant how much i felt sad 4 them.U brought tears in my eyes.Fantastic part.

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#739

there was a huge sigh that escaped my mouth ...

its so many emotions tht it make u feel yet its so hard to tell them in words...
beautifully written dear