MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 32

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooome..
superb...
wonderful ud......
thanx for the pm......

Originally posted by: rads14

awesome update..!!
i was waiting for your update..
its superb..amazing..
really loved it..
cont soon

Originally posted by: Senny

Akansha that was very beautifully written. The way you went and described the emotions so intricately was wonderful. Mayank has to be careful oh boy hehe. I am really glad that now the progress would be on a gradual basis, it makes the whole realisation process much more impactful. Great job done keep it up!

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Well update was mixed

Happy n senti

Happy beacuse Mayu realised his feellings that he Loves her n jus want her n is ready to strt a new life

Senti because Nups heard half thg n took it all wrong

In anger she hurted Mayu as hell

Lets c wat happens aage

Liked MM for making Mayu realise his feelings for her

Hop Mayu keeps trying n says his true feellings to her rather than being angry on wat she said to him

Originally posted by: cool_shwets

Updating after a loooooog time dear...awesome part....i'm glad mayankr ealised his felings for nupur.....continue soon

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht

This part was freaking awesum(I know doesn't make any sense)

simply loved it

I just love all ur ff's

do cont soon

sariska

Originally posted by: achoose

i feel like banging mayur's head and say- arrey yaar u both r madly in love with each other...awesome update dear...........

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

hi
i had been a silent reader of your ff
your ff is really awesome
plz add me to your pm list
and do cont soon

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

😭.😭.😭.😭.😭😭😭.😭.😭.👏.👏.👏.👏👏👏.👏

wat is it yaar........😭

not fair.........

mayyu ko pataa chal gya ki he luvs nupurrrrrrrrrr👏

but then these misunderstandings😡

nupur nupur nupur humeshaa galat baatein sunti hai and jab mayank ne confess kiya tab wo nhi suna.................😡

and that kiss was just😳

in the lift😆

yeh kya ho rha hai😭😭😭 Pari...calm down buddy!!! Things will be fine!!!

plz inhe unite kar doooooooooooooooooooooooooooo🤢 Ho jaayenge..jald hi...aur agar inhone jyada naatak kiya toh main inhe force kar dungi..😆

awesome part

thnx for the pm

continue soon Thank you! And will continue asap!

love ya Love ya too! Akki!

pari😛

Originally posted by: Mari-ARtian

Awesum update
loved it...
continue it s0000n....