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Hi Akansha.Hey!
Wow yaar, what an intense part. It was actually heart-breaking, i was close to tears by the end of this update, no lie.. it was written so bfully... with so much detail of every emotion. Very well done. 👏 Thank you hun!!! But i didnt want you to cry though!I can't believe all this is happening due to a lack of communication.. but its so realistic, which is very commendable on ur part. 👍🏼 Yes...lack of communication..I have seen this happen to many..!!! In fact when you dun have the "sit-down-and-talk" time..it becomes very difficult!!!!And u know that second paragraph about cobwebs had me in awe, the way u used that as a metaphor, i was really impressed by it. Thanks for mentioning hun!! I am glad it could make an impact!!!And i can imagine Nupur must have felt her world come crashing down when she heard Mayank say he doesn't love her, something which she has been trying hard not to accept, i just wish she would have waited a couple more minutes. But i guess the story can't go on without it so.. 😆 Yeah!!! The story cant go without it...It wouldn't have helped if nupur would have listened..They would ignore the "working out their relationship" part..n then after some time..they'd be back to square one!!!Mayank's confession in the car was very sweet, shame it had to go unheard or rather thought of as a dream by Nupur. Poor guy, it must have taken a lot for him to say all that and it had no effect.... accept on himself, lol well i guess practice makes perfect and next time his speech can be even more sincere and heartfelt. 😆 and next time he would say it looking in her eyes..Ok and then the part in the car where he didn't want to wake her up but then he didn't want to carry her into the lift.. ROFL is all i have to say... he is a very practical kinda guy. 😆 oh yes! very practical a guy! Only then can he make me fall in love with him..Aww man, poor Nupur now, confused at his behaviour, confused whether she saw a dream, basically just all round confused. Yes, confusion!! loads of confusion.!!!LOL!Wow so they kissed, but Nupur, tut tut why did she blame Mayank when she wasn't exactly pushing him away? It takes two to tango so why shift all the blame onto him? But i guess she is still pretty shaken by his earlier words.. so it is justified but still... man, these two just need to sit down and talk and things will gradually sort themselves out... i feel very depressed after reading this heartbreaking update Akansha. I know it's the plot of the story but if u can then add some smiles in the next update.. continue soon. 😃 Ahan! i am sorry about it Fahi..really sorry!!! Smiles will bethere..But maybe they'd take some time.Thank you hun! for the comment!!! Love ya!.
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