MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 34

akshi really nice part mix emotions and i really like the way maynk's mom handle this

k.. akansha...

wow..man..

gosh..

chp..2 ws good..

chp.. 3 ws fantastic..

aww.. akansha..

Phir se ek aisi update ki i am speechless sach me

Thanks for the mail.
See i ve already read all the parts of with or without you!!!

I so love the way u write. Wheter its nupur or mayank their perspectives are
described beautifully.

Part 1
Mayank and nupur want divorce..that amazed me.
felt so sad for shilpa aunty.
Brillant start.

Part2
Loved shilpa aunty....that 3months plan was a smart move.
And thanks for the research on divorce......never knew this 1year rule.
8tw i wish MJHT CV's spend time on research...they make fool of them selves
with making a law student into an engineer.

Part 3
Those flashback memories were the best...that classroom kiss and that pillow
story was so adorable.
I knew shilpa aunty could convince them.

Part 4
That wz so romantic.......
I wish nupur heard Mayank's confession.....
Mayank is throwing hints and was trying hard to make nupur
understand that he wants to make new start.
I just hope he is not 2 dishearted after nups outbrust.

Anywzs I got 2 continue reading ur other FF...and one shot.
Pls continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

akshi really nice part mix emotions and i really like the way maynk's mom handle this

Thank you so much di!! I like mayu's mum too=)

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Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

k.. akansha...

by mistakely u hav sent u hav sent d pm 4 chp.4 & since i'm d new reader...wud lyk 2 read it frm startin & comment on each part seperately...

i hope... i'm not buggin u...

luv ya..🤗

-supriya

Oh no! you are not bugging me! Its always nice to have new readers!😉

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Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

wow..man..

d preface ws just awesumm...

just luvd it...

-supriya

gosh..

just read d chp...1

man... Mayur..gettin divorced...& shilpa aunty's health... dis is so scary.....

cant wait 4 d next part...

rush 2 read it...

luv ya...

chp..2 ws good..

since my shilpa aunty's health ws 5n now...

aww... thnk god.... shilpa aunty kept d clause of 3 months...

yup... even i know... 4 mutual divorce... d couple need 2 stay seperately 4 1 yr... as per Indian laws...

terrific writin..

luv ya...

-supriya

chp.. 3 ws fantastic..

luvd mayur memories...& deir convos...

oh... my shilpa aunty... totally takin inspiratns frm hindi tv serials...i just luv her so much...

just luvd it 2 d core...

luv ya..

-supriya

aww.. akansha..

chp 4 ws oustanding...

oh... i luvd it soooooooo much...

aww... my mayu tried all possible ways 2 manofy nups...

but cant c my MAYUR.. so sad...

pls continue asap..diein 2 read d next update..

thnx 4 d pm..& pls add me 2 ur pm list..

luv u loads...

-supriya

Ahan! Thank you so much hun for those lovely comments! I am glad you are liking the way the story's moving! I'll continue asap!!! Love ya back!