MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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@-SMay31-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#261

OMG awesum upd..loved 2 da core...awww jst love kiss part :D m glad finally Mayank realised tht he Love Nupz nd will alwys love his gal..upd soon :D

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#262

omg
Akansha
wow
just totally wow
it was such an adorable part
touched my heart so much

thanks for the pm

pooja

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#263

awesome, fantastic, amazing, fabulas!!! both are right at their own place. but then, somewhere both are wrong.

"what mattered was her never-used-pillow and what mattered were the smiling eyes that adorned their wedding picture and what mattered was their love. only their love.".....this part really touched my heart. the whole update is very touching.

and this part clearly justifies the title...'with or without you'. they cant live with each other..and they cant live without each other. simply awesome!!

why did you have to end this part here??? plz plz plz continue ASAP.

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Shivani

@SHINKI

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Wow Akansha

mindblowing

superb

fantastic

yaa it was really a long part

and wow a very nice part

so thanks for that

and do conti..soon

aise he bade bade update karna

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#265

wow just loved the ff
read all 4 chps together just simply loved it
thanks so much for the pm
just superb part
keep up the fab work

👏

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#266

AK 🤗

It was a beautiful update. WOW! All the tension, the longing, Mayank finally giving in and realizing that he loves her and always will.☺️

The elevator scene was absolutely wonderful. More tension, awkwardness between the two. And then the kiss...😍😍😍😍

Everything was perfect and then Nupur broke out. Oh, man, this is going to be something.

AK you are an awesome writer. Simply brilliant. You are one of the best writers I have come across. Marvellous.

Great Job. Loved it.

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#267

awesoooome..
superb...
wonderful ud......
thanx for the pm......

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#268

awesome update..!!
i was waiting for your update..
its superb..amazing..
really loved it..
cont soon

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#269

Akansha that was very beautifully written. The way you went and described the emotions so intricately was wonderful. Mayank has to be careful oh boy hehe. I am really glad that now the progress would be on a gradual basis, it makes the whole realisation process much more impactful. Great job done keep it up!